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Scene 53
Bajaj Residence
Rajeev, Prem, Mukti and Sneha r sittin in the hall, Suddenly some1 rings the bell. Sneha goes to open the door.
She sees a handsome guy standin there(Its Shabbir Ahluwalia).
When he sees her:Oh my!!!
Sneha: Sorry?
He:Hi!!
Sneha kinda gets irritated:Wht do u want?
He: I came here for my brother, but now I don't mind u!!!
Sneha shocked:Wht?!
He smiles: Hello........I am Rajveer Agarwal.Rajeev's brother. But u can call me Veer.
Sneha still irritated: Oh come in.
Rajveer still stands there: Whts ur name?
Suddenly Prem calls out: Who is it Sneha?
Rajveer: Sneha??? Nice name........was hopin for a Zaara, as in Veer-Zaara.
Sneha: Come.(And she walks off)
Rajveer follows her in. When Rajeev sees Rajveer he gets up. Even Prem and Mukti also gets up.
Rajeev: Rajveer?Prem, Mukti this is my brother Rajveer and Rajveer this is Prem and Mukti.
Mukti and Prem: HI!!
Rajveer doesn't look all tht interested, he keeps lookin at Sneha, who was goin to her room.When Prem realise tht Rajveer was lookin at Sneha, he slightly coughs. Rajveer turns and sees Prem glarin at him.
Rajveer: Nice to meet u.
They all sit down.
Rajveer:Rajeev who was tht?
Rajeev: Sneha, Prem's sister.
Rajveer: She is pretty.
Rajeev kinda gets uncomfortable: huh.........yeah I guess.
Rajveer: She is hot!!!
All this while Prem is glarin at Rajveer.
Prem: Dude, She is my sister.
Rajveer:Yeah, he just told me tht.
Prem: Stop droolin after her!!!
Rajveer: Sorry.(He turns to Rajeev)Where is Namritha?
Rajeev: She is in her room.
Mukti: Do u want me to call her?
Rajveer:No its okay. I will meet her after sometime.
Rajeev: U came here to meet her ri8?
Rajveer: Yeah, but will wait for sometime..... So howz the case?
Rajeev: Nope tryin to solve, we still not sure, whether Sharath died or whether this case is framed.
Suddenly, Namritha comes there.
Namritha: Rajveer???When did u come?
Rajveer just ignores her.
Namritha: So u r also not goin to talk to me.
Rajveer just looks at her.
Namritha: I am sorry.
Rajveer: Just 'coz u say sorry, whtever u did will be undone?
Namritha: I did the right thing.
Rajveer: U did wht u thought was ri8!!!
Mukti notices Rajeev nodin tht time.
Namritha's eyes starts fillin with tears.Rajveer gets up and goes to her.
And she hugs him.
Rajveer: Namritha, y did u do all this? U acted as if our parents were some evil people, they r not bad, they r very nice, its just tht they just cudn't adjust to the fact tht he wanted to marry u........... u keep sayin tht I am ur brother and u just left without even tellin us. Do u know how worried we were?I have never seen my brother so upset in my life.
Namritha: I am sorry(she burst into tears).
Rajveer and Namritha walkin outside.
Rajveer excitedly to Namritha: Guess wht?
Namritha: Wht?
Rajveer: I think I am in love!!!
Namritha: Wht??? I don't believe this!!! Do I know her?
Rajveer: Yeah I guess.
Namritha:Oh my God!!!Who is it?
Rajveer: Sneha!!!
Namritha shocked:Sneha, as in Prem's sister Sneha?
Rajveer: Yup!!!
Namritha: But u just met her.
Rajveer: It just takes Agarwals one look to know whether she is their soul mate.
Namritha: But....Rajveer, Sneha is married.
Rajveer shocked and hurt:Wht?
Namritha: Yeah!!! Actually the case is, Mukti is accused of killin Sneha's husband. And Jeev thinks tht actually Sharath is alive.
Rajveer looks devastated: First time in my life I fall in love with some1 and she......................... can u tell me more abt her.
Namritha tells him abt Prem-Mukti-Sneha and Sharath.
Inside Mukti is sittin on Prem's lap , and kinda dozin off.
Prem: Baby, u feelin sleepy?
Mukti: Kinda.
Prem: Y don't u sleep then?
Mukti: If I sleep now, then I won't be able to sleep at night.
Prem: No love, u will sleep like a baby at night also, its due to ur pregnancy.
Mukti: How do u know so much abt pregnancy.
Prem: I saw it in some book.
Mukti suspiciously: Wht was the book's name?
Prem kinda embarrised: Soon to be mother.
Rajeev burst out laughin.
Mukti smiles: I think it is kinda cute.(And she kisses Prem).
Prem : I love u!!!
Mukti: I love u too!!!
Rajeev: Since mornin, I think this is the 97th time, u guys sayin I love you-s!!!
Prem: U r just jealous tht u can't say I love u to Namritha.
Rajeev sarcastically: Yeah ri8!!!
Mukti: For how long r u goin to be pissed with her.
Rajeev: As long as it takes me to forget the fact tht she left me.
Prem: Jaan, don't u think I am a better lover!!!
Mukti: U r the best!!!
Prem: Okay, come I will put u to sleep.
Mukti: I don't want to sleep now. Choti Ma will come now, I want to tell her tht we got engaged.
Prem: Okay we will do 1 thin, u go to sleep now, we will have lunch with Ma and every1, then we will tell her together. I will wake u up, when we r goin to have lunch, I promise.
Mutki: Okay.
Prem and Mukti goes up to Mukti's room. Mukti is lyin on her bed.
Prem kisses her on her forehead: Sleep tight!!!Sweet dreams!!!
Mukti: Wake me up when Choti Ma comes.
Prem: Okay, love.
Prem goes to his room even Rajeev is there. Some1 knocks on the door.
Prem: Come in!!!
Namritha comes in.
Namritha: Can u wait outside, I need to talk to him alone.
Prem: Namritha,whtever it is u can tell me in front of Rajeev. U shudn't have any secrets from one another.
Namritha: Actually Prem I was talkin to u, not Rajeev.
Prem kinda shocked: Wait a minute, u r askin me to get out of my room and tht too in my house?
Namritha: Yeah......... y don't u go down and give Rajveer company?
Prem:Alrite
He walks towards the door, and turns:All the best Namritha!!!
After Prem, closes the door,Namritha: Pls, Jeev I want to talk to u.
Rajeev: I don't want to hear anythin.
Namrtiha: Pls jeev, I left u, 'coz I loved u so much.
Rajeev: If u loved me so much, u wud have married me, not left me!!!
Namritha: I have lived all my life as an orphan, and I always wanted a mother and a father, who loved me,and u have a very lovin parents, and when I realised u were goin to leave them for me, I just didn't want tht to happen, I always wanted them to accept me. And I know how much u love them, and I know u will regret leavin them, and u won't be happy without them, and I love u so much, and all I want was to u to be happy in life.
Namritha goes to him and hugs him and starts cryin: I am so sorry.
Rajeev also has tears in his eyes: Its okay Namritha, I was so hurt tht u left me.
Namritha: Will u be able to love me again?
Rajeev: I have always loved u Namritha and will always love u.
Downstairs, Rajveer is sittin in the hall and Sneha comes there.
Sneha: Where did every1 go?
Rajveer:Namritha has gone to talk to Rajeev and don't know abt the other lovebirds.
Sneha: Namritha was pretty upset when Rajeev didn't talk to her.
Rajveer: Well she deserves it. But I know, they wud have made up by now. He can't be angry with her for a long time.
Sneha and Rajveer just looks at each other for sometime. Then Sneha turns to go.
Rajveer: Sneha...
She turns back: Yes?
Rajveer : Can we be friends?
Sneha is kinda shocked: Yeah sure.
Rajveer puts his hands out for a shake hand and Sneha takes his hand.
Prem comes down then. And they turn to look at him.
Prem: Don't bother tellin me to leave u guys alone, 'coz I am not goin to.
Rajveer: Wasn't goin to.
Prem: Good.
Sneha: Bye I got some work to do, will see u later.
Rajveer: Alrite bye.
Prem sits down.Rajveer watches Sneha walkin off.
Prem coughs .Rajveer looks at Prem.
Prem: Whts up with u? Y do u keep starin at my sister?
Rajveer sits down.
Rajveer: I think I am in love with ur sister.
Prem: So fast?
Rajveer: Yeah, my family believes in love at first sight.
Prem: Yeah I know, Rajeev told me.
Rajveer: Okay. Right now I just want to be her friend. Take it slowly, one at a time.
Prem: then wht?Marriage?
Rajveer: Yeah, eventually.
Prem: U know, my sister is been thru a lot in her life.
Rajveer: Yeah I know, Namritha just told me............ Don't worry I will never hurt her.
Prem: Don't think, she will agree to get married again.
Rajveer smiles: U don't know me. So don't under estimate me.
Prem just raises his eye brows.
After sometime Namritha and Rajeev comes down,Prem, Rajeev,Rajveer and Namritha r talkin. Later Prerna, Mr Bajaj, Anurag and Sam comes. Rajeev introduces Rajveer to all of them.
Prerna: Beta, wht r u doin?
Rajveer: Right now, I am fallin in love with ur daughter.
Prerna,Mr Bajaj, Anurag and Sam r shocked.
Bajaj:Wht?
Rajveer:But for a livin, I am a doctor, Neuro surgen.
Mr Bajaj gives him a wierd look: Yeah okay.
Sneha also comes out.
Prerna: Okay, lets all have lunch.
Prem: Not now.
Prerna: Why?
Prem: Mutki is sleepin,and I told her we will all eat together.
Prerna: Okay, y don't u go wake her up, I will serve food by then.
Prem: No.
Prerna:Wht no?
Prem: I won't wake her up. She is pregnant, she needs rest.
Sneha: Then we will eat, you both eat together.
Prem: No. She wants all of us to eat together.
Sneha: Is it only me or is he really gettin into all ur nerves by turnin into a concerned lover?
Prem just glares at her.
Much later after every1 were almost starvin to death Mukti wakes up and comes down.
Mukti: Choti Ma? U all came? Prem y didn't u wake me up?
Prem: None of them were hungry, so I thought I will wake u up when they were hungry.
All of them just glares at Prem.
Prem: Come, lets go eat.
After they have lunch. Prem calls all of them to the hall + Jeevan.
Prem: Okay, we got great news.
Prerna: Wht is it?
Prem puts his hand around Mukti: We r enganged.
Rajeev: Yeah u told me in the mornin.
Prerna: Is tht ur excitin news?We got better news.
Prem kinda feels bad tht, Prerna wasn't excited abt his engagement.
Prem:Wht is it?
Prerna smiles: Tht is, u both r gettin married, next sunday.
Prem jumps up:WOW!!!Thts the best news ever!!!
Mukti has tears in her eyes.She goes and hugs Jeevan, then Prerna and all of them start huggin each other.Then Prem goes to Mukti and hugs her and kisses her.
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