My First Fanfic (Part Twelve)

Previous Parts

Part 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318640/my-first-fanfic

Part 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318884/my-first-fanfic-part-two

Part 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/319518/my-first-fanfic-part-three

Part 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/332225/my-first-fanfic-part-four

Part 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/334344/my-first-fanfic-part-five

Part 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/335966/my-first-fanfic-part-six

Part 7: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/337292/my-first-fanfic-part-seven

Part 8: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/340575/my-first-fanfic-part-eight

Part 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/341900/my-first-fanfic-part-nine

Part 10:https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=343324

Part 11:https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=354228

Scene 33

In Mukti's office.

Mukti is gets call and she picks up. Its Prerna.
Mukti: Hello Choti Ma.
Prerna: Mukti I want to talk to you. I am waiting outside your office can you come out?
Mukti: Okay I will come now.
Mukti comes out and sees Prerna.
Mukti: Kya hua Choti Ma?
Prerna: Mukti beta, I wanted to talk to you about Prem.
Mukti: What about Prem?
Prerna: Mukti........ Prem really loves you.
Mukti: No Choti Ma, he doesn't love me. All he wants is his baby.
Prerna: No Mukti. Its true that he loves his baby but he loves you too.
Mukti: Yesterday night he told me he doesn't love me and today morning he tells me he loves me. I don't think he means it.
Prerna: Mukti thats not true. I know how much he loves you. He has changed alot.
Mukti (feels really helpless): I don't know. I want to trust him but I am just too scared to do that.
Prerna: Mukti, you think about it and make a decision. We will all be with you in whatever decision you make.
Mukti: Thank you Choti Ma.
She hugs Prerna.
Prerna: You know what beta?
Mukti: What Choti Ma?
Prerna: Prem calls me Ma now.
Mukti's eyes starts filling with tears.
Mukti: Really.
Prerna: Yes beta, you have changed him. Your loves has changed him.
Mukti hugs her again. After Mukti leaves Prerna goes to the rehearsal and meets Prem and Namritha there.
Prerna: Prem, I talked to Mukti about you.
Prem (gets tensed): What did she say Ma?
Prerna: She is scared to trust you again.
Prem(feels depressed): I can't blame her, I have always let her down. I always broke her heart.(Looks at Prerna)What will I do now?
Namritha: There is only one thing you can do now.
Prem and Prerna looks at her with hope.
Prem: What?
Namritha smiles and looks at Prem: Woo her.

Pls comment.


Part 13:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/356562/my-first-fanfic-part-thirteen

wow, that was gud!continue sn!!

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neways gud work update soon 😛

awesome yaar i love reading this fanfic its organised as well u put past links in ur post as well

awesome yaar i love reading this fanfic its organised as well u put past links in ur post as well

yep its lovely iam loving it
plz carry on 😳

thank you so much guys for the comments. will be writin the 13th part tonight itself. 😊 When i started writin the fanfic i thought it will get over in some 5 parts, never thought it will go on for so long😳.didn't think u all will like it also. thanx for readin it guys.

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