My First Fanfic(Part Fourteen)

Previous Parts

Part 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318640/my-first-fanfic

Part 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318884/my-first-fanfic-part-two

Part 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/319518/my-first-fanfic-part-three

Part 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/332225/my-first-fanfic-part-four

Part 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/334344/my-first-fanfic-part-five

Part 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/335966/my-first-fanfic-part-six

Part 7: /forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/337292/my-first-fanfic-part-seven

Part 8: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/340575/my-first-fanfic-part-eight

Part 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/341900/my-first-fanfic-part-nine

Part 10:https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=343 324

Part 11:/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/354228/my-first-fanfic-part-eleven

Part 12:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/355250/my-first-fanfic-part-twelve

Part 13:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/356562/my-first-fanfic-part-thirteen

Scene 35

Next day in the rehearsal hall.

Mukti is sitting and going through some papers when one man comes next to her.
Mukti: Yes?
Man: Flowers for you ma'm.
He gives her beautiful red roses and walks off.
Mukti looks at the flowers and sees a card in it.She opens the card.
To my love, Mukti
-Prem

After 15 mins another guy comes and gives her red flowers and walks off.
She opens the card in it.
Beautiful flowers for an even more beautiful lady.
Love you,
Prem
Mukti turns and looks at Prem and he winks at her, she gets angry and throws the flowers away.Prem feels bad but he just shrugs and walk off.

Again she gets flowers it was written
I love you Mukti
Yours
Prem.
Again she gets flowers
You are the one I live for
and you are the one I die for
always your
Prem.
Mukti walks upto Prem
Mukti: What the hell is this Prem?
Prem: Flowers Mukti.
Mukti: I know these r flowers, but why r u sendin all this?
Prem: Becuase I love you.
Mukti: No Prem you don't love me....you just think you love me.
Prem: No Mukti, I know I love you.
Mukti: Can't you just leave me alone?
Prem(Sadly): No Mukti I can't.... now I know how much you mean to me and how much I love you, its difficult for me to live without you and how can I live without you Mukti? You have taught me wht love is, wht life is? and if u r not there in my life, my life is not worth livin, Mukti. Just give me one last chance to prove myself Mukti.
Mukti: I can't Prem.... I am sorry.
She turns to walk off and suddenly stops
Mukti: Don't send flowers again.
When Prem doesn't reply she turn and looks at Prem and was shocked to realise tht his eyes had filled with tears.
Mukti walks off.
Namritha who was watchin all this goes to Prem.
Namritha: You alrite.
Prem: Yeah I am fine......(He smiles at her) How u manage to be there at the ri8 time when somethin happens between us?
Namritha: Because I am smart............. So wht is ur next step since she stopped u from sendin her things?
Prem: No she just asked me to stop sendin her flowers.

Later one man walks in and gives Mukti a parcel. She opens it. There was a cute doll in it.
Not for you for our baby.
-Prem
P.S: I want a baby girl who looks like you, talks like you, orders me around like you do.
Mukti eyes starts fillin and she didn't know whether to keep the doll or throw it away.
Suddenly someone else comes and gives her another parcel and she opens it.
She finds chocolates in it.
For baby Prerna.
-Prem
After seeing that Mukti realised that somethin in Prem has changed.... but she didn't know whether she cud really trust him again.


Part 15:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/368671/my-first-fanfic-part-fifteen

Sorry for the late update guys.... was kinda upset with Prem after leap....since Mukti is back was inspired to write again.Pls do comment.

thanxs 4 updatin n continue soon

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww so sweet 😛

arey aik tou inney arsey baad ki aur inni chunni ki 😳

Yay you named the baby Prerna!!!!! Thank you thank you thank you! It'd be soooooo cute if Prem started calling the baby "mini Mother India ji"!!! What do you think?

thanks, its so nice, continue soon. 👏

👏 yaar ur a gr8 writter keep it up 👏 👏 👏

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆 😆 that is so sweet!!!!! 😃 and broken heart that would be funny if he starts calling his daughter mini mother india ji!! 😆 😆

awwwww its so good n sweet 😳