My First Fanfic(Part Eight)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Previous parts for those who haven't read it.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318640/my-first-fanfic

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318884/my-first-fanfic-part-two

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/319518/my-first-fanfic-part-three

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/332225/my-first-fanfic-part-four

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/334344/my-first-fanfic-part-five

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/335966/my-first-fanfic-part-six

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/337292/my-first-fanfic-part-seven

Scene 21

In the hospital

Mukti: What? I am pregnant?

Doctor: Yes Mukti, you are two months pregnant. I will give u some medicines just take those regularly, u can go home today itself.

After the doctor leaves, Namritha goes next to Mukti who is very shocked.

Namritha: Mukti, what are u goin to do now?

Mukti starts crying: I have no idea. I don't know wht to do.

Namritha trys consoling Mukti: It's okay Mukti. You know whatever u decide we will be there with u. U know your choti ma, your father, Sneha, sir all of them will stand with u. Don't worry Mukti, everything will be fine.

Mukti: Namritha, I want you to promise me something.

Namritha: Anything Mukti.

Mukti: You won't tell anyone about this baby.

Namritha: I promise.

Mukti: Thanx.

Scene 22

At night, Bajaj residence.

Prem is getting ready to go out and he hears a knock on his door. He opens the door and sees Mukti.

Prem: Mukti? What are you doing here at this time.

Mukti: I want to talk to you…..it's urgent……Please.

Prem realizes that Mukti is really tensed.

Prem: Come in.

Mukti walks and Prem closes the door. Mukti starts walking around the room and Prem patiently waits for her to start talking.

Prem: Why don't you sit?

Mukti sits on Prem's bed.

Mukti: Prem….. I……..I……….Prem……I am ……. I Prem

Prem: What is it Mukti?

Mukti (takes a deep breath): Prem, I am pregnant.

Prem: What????

Mukti: Yes. I just found out today…..I am two months pregnant.

Prem: Oh god!!!! What are you going to do now?

Mukti: I don't know….. I need your help.

Prem: What help?

Mukti: I want you to come with me to the Doctor, and take a DNA test.

Then only Prem realized the fact that it could be his baby. His heart starts beating and he starts getting tensed and a little scared.

Mukti: Don't worry. Even if this baby is yours I won't ask you to marry me. I just want to know. Prem, I know you well and I know if this is your baby, you would never refuse him his rights, whether we are married or not……It's just that I want to know.

Prem: It's not that….. Sure we will go tomorrow itself…….We will go in the morning, I will pick you up.

Mukti: Thanx….. And please don't tell anyone about this.

Prem: Okay.

Mukti leaves and Prem couldn't sleep the rest of the night because he wasn't sure he is scared him is that it cud be his baby or the possibility it could be Sharad's baby. What bothered him the most was that somewhere deep down he wanted it to be his baby and he didn't even know why.

Scene 23

Prem and Mukti in the car, leaving the hospital.

Prem: When will we get the results?

Mukti: Today evening.

Prem: You decided on having this baby?

Mukti: No I haven't.

Prem: If you haven't decided on that, then why did you take the test?

Mukti: If it is your baby Prem, I will have this baby. Then this baby will be born out of love….. (after a pause) at least for me. But if it's Sharad's baby…… then I don't know.

Prem: But Mukti, this is also your baby.

Mukti: Yeah I know but when I think of Sneha……… if it is Sharad's baby, how will she be able to bare it that I am having her husband's baby when she lost her baby. I know it will kill her……… I don't know what will I do if it is Sharad's baby

Mukti starts crying. Prem pulls her into his arms and tries to console her by patting on her shoulders.

Prem: Can I tell you something?

Mukti: What?

Prem: If it is Sharad's baby (and he hated saying that….. and didn't know why) and you decide to have this baby, then if you want you can tell everyone it is my baby.

Mukti looks into Prem's eyes: Thanx.

They hug again. Mukti thinks: I thought I couldn't love him more than I did, but I was wrong. I love him even more…… oh god…..please let it be Prem's baby.

Part 9: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/341900/my-first-fanfic-part-nine
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey people, pls comment and i don't know how long the dna test takes so i just made it one day....if it is a blunder pls forgive me. 😳
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yaar ur so prompt weith the updates im loving this
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very nice, thanx a lot
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its reallyy goood im loving how she acutally told him not like in these nataks where there always hiding it from the father and hes always the lastt personnn to find out ... at least premm knowss i hope its his baby to
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow - it is beautyfull. Keep writeing

Krishi
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey I just read the whole fanfic and its really good!
Plz cont asap!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its sooo good!.. continue soon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks a lot Kuku. after a long time able 2 know abt the serial only for u. but i missed many previour parts.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice going, m luvin it, thanks!

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