My first fanfic (Part two)

Hey thanx for the comments. Was kinda scared about writin my fanfic.

Previous Parts

Part 1: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=318640

Scene 4

Prem's show practice venue

Prem: Everyone, this Namritha. She is gonna be our lead dancer.

Namritha: Hello everyone.

Prem: So lets see you dance.

Namritha starts dancing to Dhoom machale from the movie and everyone is impressed. Prem has a huge smile on his face.

After he dance, Namritha: So what do you think?

Prem (excited): Good. So why don't you start practicing with others. If you need any help just come to me.

Namritha (happily): Alrite. Thank you so much sir.

Prem: Its okay. And just call me Prem.

And he continues to flirt with Namritha.

Mukti who is silently watching all this feel bad. Background Kabhi na sukhoon is playing and she is thinking about the time they danced together during valentines day.

Prem: MUKTI, (Mukti comes next to him), Basanti, you have to assist Namritha with everything since she is new. Help with her costumes and get her acquainted with others.

Mukti: Okay UD.

Prem leaves.

Namritha: Why do you call him UD? And why does he call you Basanti?

Mukti: He got names for everyone. Very soon you will also get one. And he is called both UD and Prem. Come I will take you to our designer; he can take your measurements.

Scene 5

Mukti is going through some papers. And she keeps watching Prem in between who is watching Namritha dancing.

Prem: Namritha, babe that's not how you do that step. Do it again.

Namritha tries again.

Prem: No you are doing it wrong again.

Prem goes to her, holds her and start dancing with her. Poor Mukti sees all this and feels bad.

Scene 6

Prem continues to flirt with Namritha all day. Mukti feels miserable. She keeps thinking about valentines day, when they went to the temple and when Prem gave statement against her in court.

Namritha: Hey Mukti.

Mukti: Hey Namritha. Howz your day comin along?

Namritha: Very nice. I am so happy. Prem is so nice. (Mukti face changes when Namritha mentions Prem's name.) You both might be great friends since you are neighbors and you are like a daughter to his parents.

Mukti: Prem and I are not friends. We just work together that's all. There is nothing more. And please don't talk about Prem to me. He is nobody to me.

Prem who was standing behind Mukti hears this as he had come again to flirt with Namritha. He feels hurt and angry when Mukti said he is nobody to her.

Prem: Oh really Basanti? I am nobody to you. This is not what you told me when we were in Panchameshwar.

Mukti: A lot happened after that UD. I changed. Things changed. Feelings changed. I have moved on. You are the only one that hasn't changed or moved on.

Prem: So you think I haven't changed? If I haven't changed then I might be the same person you fell in love with right?

Mukti: I thought you were someone else then UD. I thought you were Prem. But I know now that you can only be UD. You can never be Prem. You can never be Choti ma's Prem.

After saying this Mukti's eyes fill with tears. When Prem sees her eyes filled with tears he feels bad. And Mukti walks off. After she leaves a very angry Prem also walks away leaving a shocked Namritha.

Namritha thinks to herself: Mukti is a nice girl. I don't want her hurt. I should do something to help her. I know Prem feels something towards her otherwise he wouldn't feel bad when she cries, and he kept looking at Mukti whenever she was looking elsewhere. I should do something to help them but for that I want to what happened between them, I know they won't tell me. I think I should ask Sneha. After all who else knows the pain of loosing someone you love, more than me?

Prem outside near his car thinking to himself: Why do I always feel bad whenever I see Mukti in pain or when she cries. I know she didn't deserve what all happened in her life. But I was willing to marry her but then she rejected me and hurt my feelings and insulted me in front of everyone. After all that I still feel hurt when I see her hurt.

Mukti in the rest room talking to herself: Why do I still love him??? Why? Why?

By the way I can't think of an appropriate name. So if you people find some name appropriate for this story do let me know. And please do comment.

Part 3: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=319518

that was really good go on plzzz

this is cool yaar thanks for updating it

that was superb!! really good!! so take care n cont. soon!! as mukti n prem both are confused about their feelings for each other, u can call this fanfic : hum apke hai kaun! i know not very original but what to do,i can't come up wid something else rite now! newayz do cont. soon

Begining of Love i dont know something like that for this really good fan-fic! 👏 👏 👏 keep up the good work and update sooN! 👏

wow that was great plz continue soon

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plz continue yaar!!

hey i have written the part three also..... my first fanfic(part three).... pls read it also......... thank you so much for ur comments...... i really appreciate it. 😊

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good work!!!keep it up!!! 👏 👏