My First Fanfic(Part Ten)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Previous parts

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318640/my-first-fanfic

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318884/my-first-fanfic-part-two

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/319518/my-first-fanfic-part-three

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/332225/my-first-fanfic-part-four

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/334344/my-first-fanfic-part-five

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/335966/my-first-fanfic-part-six

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/337292/my-first-fanfic-part-seven

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/340575/my-first-fanfic-part-eight

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/341900/my-first-fanfic-part-nine

Scene 28

Outside Mukti's house

Prem: Mukti, Will you marry me?

Mukti (shocked): What?

Prem: Will you marry me?

Mukti: Prem what's wrong with you?

Prem: Mukti, I have been thinking since we got back from the hospital, and I think we should get married.

Mukti: No Prem

Prem: Look Mukti…. We are going to have a baby and this is the best option.

Mukti: No Prem, I don't want to marry you.

Prem gets angry and shouts: Why?

Mukti: Because I don't want to marry you…… please don't make a scene and scream you are going to wake up everyone.

Prem starts screaming even more loudly: I just don't care and I am not going to leave till you give me a reason. Before also you rejected me and now also you are rejecting me. You have to give me a reason.

Mukti's eyes fills with tears and she sees Prerna, Mr Bajaj, Sneha, Tushar, Doris and Namritha coming towards them.

Mukti: I can't Prem.

Jeevan: Mukti?

Mukti turns back and sees Jeevan standing there.

Mukti: Nothing Papa. You go in, I will come now.

And she turns towards Prem.

Mukti: Prem, please go now. We will talk later.

Prem: No I am not going till you answer me.

Mukti: Please Prem…..

Prem: Mukti, you gotta understand. Our baby is going to be born as illegitimate. You don't know how it is to live like that. We have t get married. The society is not going to accept you as an unwed mother. You and our baby are going to suffer.

Mukti: I know Prem. But I still can't marry you.

Prem shouts: Why? Give me a reason.

Mukti starts crying: Because you are going to hurt me, I can't trust you with my heart again. You will always hurt me. You are never going to be faithful to me.
You will not be happy with me and when you r not happy, how can I be happy and when we both are not happy, how will our baby be happy and what kind of family will our baby have…..
At least like our baby will have loving and caring father and mother. I know you care about this baby a lot so I think this is best for our baby.

Prem: What makes you think I will hurt you?

Mukti: You will Prem. You always have.

Prem gets angry and walks off. And everyone come towards Mukti except for Namritha who goes behind Prem.

Prerna: Mukti, What is all this?

Mukti hugs Prerna and starts crying: Choti Ma, I am pregnant

And she tells everyone everything.

Prerna: Beta, whatever you decide we will stand by you.

Scene 29

Inside Bajaj residence

Prerna and Mr Bajaj in their room.

Mr Bajaj: Do you think we should force Mukti to marry Prem?

Prerna: No, she should marry him out of her free will and it's Prem, he might have changed his mind by now like last time…. But after listening to Mukti, I think Prem really cares for this baby.

Mr Bajaj: Yeah even I thought. May be he will change now.

Prerna: Even I think. I will talk to Prem and come.

Prerna starts to walk and suddenly turns and looks at Mr Bajaj.

Prerna smiles: We are going to become grandparents.

Mr Bajaj smiles: Yeah let's just hope that the baby doesn't decide to call us granddaddy cool and grandmother India.

Scene 30

In Prem's room

Prerna comes to Prem's room to talk to him and sees Namritha is sitting on Prem's bed and Prem is walking around and screaming. So she stands outside the room and listen to them talk.

Prem: How dare she do this? This is the second time she is rejecting me.

Namritha: Prem, you need to cool down.

Prem: Just because she is going to have my baby I decided to marry her, otherwise I would have never asked her.

Namritha suddenly thinks of a plan.

Namritha: Yeah that's right you shouldn't marry her, she should marry someone else hmm………maybe Munna.

Prem gets even more angry when he thinks about Mukti marrying someone else: If she thinks of marrying someone else then tell her she can forget it…. If she is not marrying me then she is not marrying anyone else.

Namritha: Why?

Prem: Because she is carrying MY baby!!!

Namritha: Oh I thought maybe because you love her.

Prem: Me love her????? No way.

Namritha: Then why do you always get jealous when she mentions other guys.

Prem: I don't get jealous, you are just imagining things.

Namritha: Alrite, tell me this why do you want to marry her?

Prem: I don't want to marry her anymore.

Namritha: Anyway tell me why?

Prem: Because she is having my baby.

Namritha: Can I ask you something?

Prem: What?

Namritha: Tell me the truth…..Would you have proposed to her even if she was carrying Sharad's baby.

Prem thinks for sometime: Yeah I might have.

Namritha: Why?

Prem: Because I was also responsible for Sharad raping her and she is a nice girl, it will be difficult for her to be an unwed mother.

Namritha: Why does it hurt you when she is sad?

Prem: I don't know.

Namritha: May be because you love her.

Prem: I don't. (Prem sits on bed next to her.) She always bring her nose into all my matters, she won't do anything I ask her to but she makes me do things

Namriths sarcastically: Yeah right!!!

Prem: What she made me go to Mandir!

Namritha: Ha ha ha

Prem: Don't laugh, I asked her to lie for me but she didn't do it but she made me go with her……… I don't love her……..We don't even get along, we fight everyday, she always screams at me, she always spoil all my plans, Wherever I turn she will be there to spoil my plans…. You know my life would be perfect without her!! It would be like………. (Prem thinks for sometime) My life won't be nice without her….it will be empty without her. (Suddenly Prem jumps up from the bed and turns and looks at Namritha with a shocked expression) OH MY GOD I AM TRULY MADLY AND DEEPLY IN LOVE WITH MUKTI.

Namritha also jumps up from the bed: Yay finally it got through that brick you call your head.

Prem holds Namritha: I love her!!!

Namritha is laughing: Yes you love her.

Prem sees Prerna standing near the door.

Prem: Mother India!!!

Prerna comes in and she has tears in her eyes. She touches his cheek.

Prerna: Prem.

Prem: I love Mukti. Oh my God I was such a fool I never realized it till now. When I think about it, it's like I have always loved her.

Prerna hugs him.

Prem: I have to tell her. I want to tell the whole world that I love her.

Prerna: No Prem give her sometime. Not today, may be tomorrow, you have to make her understand that you love her and that you will never hurt her.

Prem looks into her eyes and says: You are right.

He looks at Namritha and says: Thanks, Thanx for making me realize it.

Namritha smiles: No problem.

Prerna walks towards Namritha: Thanks beta if it wasn't for you, Prem would have never realized that he loves Mukti.

Namritha: No aunty, don't thank me….. I just did it because I knew how much Mukti loved Prem.

Hearing this Prem smiles: She still loves me.

Namritha: Of course dumbo….. for a very intelligent guy you can be bit silly at times.

Prem smiles.

Prerna: Its late I think you all should sleep now; we will talk in the morning.

Namritha: Okay goodnight aunty, goodnight Prem.

Prem: Goodnight.

Prerna: Goodnight.

Prerna and Namritha starts walking towards the door and Prem keeps looking at Prerna.

Prem: Goodnight Ma.

Prerna turns and is shocked to hear Prem call her Ma.

Prerna: Beta?

Prem smiles: Won't like it if my baby calls me Father India.

Prerna comes back and hug Prem and starts kissing him. Then she starts to go back.

Prem: Thank you Ma.

Prerna turns: For what beta?

Prem: For being there for me.

Part 11:/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/354228/my-first-fanfic-part-eleven


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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 rly like the part wher they say i hope my grandson doesnt call use granddaddy cool and grandmother India 😆 😆
do count cant wait to read on
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Awesome! Can't wait for the next part.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wen r u gonna continue???
countinue soon plzzz.
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so cute pf Prem!!Gr8888 fan-fic but i wanted 2 read more Prem getting jealous of Munna part!!pls continue soon!
Edited by super_girl - 19 years ago

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