'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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My Dear Friends'

With all my courage and a tinge of hesitance, I dare to come before my readers with a concept for my next FF. Hesitant because I am in complete oblivion of the fact if my readers would accept yet another heavy/serious storyline from me especially after Qayenaat. So despite of many many requests and badgering (you know who you are) I remained confused for quite some time regarding starting a new FF. Then, just one day, it clicked. I felt like writing'exactly the way I like writing and this sudden urge to pen down my thoughts and feelings took over me with such a tight grip that I just had to start! So here I am'

~~~~~~ Concept ~~~~~

In line with my usual style, the story is mainly about feelings and emotions of Mayank and Nupur as they go through the journey of friendship, love unknown and hatred by chance. And as usual, the story line will put forward some questions. Questions that we dare not ask ourselves when we go through similar feelings'questions that we seek answers for all our lives'questions that may remain unanswered as we bury them deep in our hearts.

This story is about Mayank who meets a baby girl named Nupur at the age of 3 on the day she is born. Its about an undefined relationship that they initiate unknowingly, a relationship that grows with them in an isolated manner but does not get the nurture from the other. Yet'it grows, it develops'.they are not aware of it but it exists. And that's where my story starts'questioning the existence of such a feeling'a feeling that is not bound by any promises and none of the parties are guarding it either. All they have is TRUST on each other'then again can trust not be shattered? What if you had to hate the person whom you so firmly believed that you loved? Then again was there love at all? If not, then where did the hatred come from? Isn't love the source of hatred? And what about the testing moments that life throws at you'? Can you be so much in love with the hatred you have for that one person that you are willing to throw away the unconditional love someone else is showering at you? What do you do'? Its about the choice one makes'and this is what "Intikhaab" is all about.

So friends..join me again on this new journey. It may perhaps make you think, make you question matters of the heart and may be, just may be bring tears in your eyes. But one thing I want to promise is that the ending will be exactly the way YOU want. How? Well'at a critical stage of the story, I will ask you to make a choice on behalf of the main character i.e. Nupur. Only those people who wish to participate, please let me know either by PM, or commenting or by pressing LIKE button here, I will contact you in due course of time. Majority will be granted but just in case, its a tie, the casting vote is mine 😊

So please guys, push the LIKE button if you like the concept and want me to progress.

-Neela





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Posted: 14 years ago
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I loved it....kuch kafi alag hai
samhaj nahi aaraha...
how is this one gonna be
unconditional love....that can have many facets
waiting for this one to unfold
I'm really in awe of this concept....
I don't need to say more...do I ??

Take care,
Fatima
Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey welcome back dear

but cant understand your choice category which type of choice
so this time in the end our mayur will reunite .

concept mujhe jyada samajh nahi aaya par story pad kar aa gaega
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ressssssssssss

hey neela
first of all sorry for the late edit

WELCUM BACK to teh forum neela
your ffs are one for which i have waited a lot
hoping every day that u would start another journey

im sure that u r soon gonna take me on a new n mind boggling journey of life
am very excited for this ff n will wait for ur updates eagerly

luv
shruti
Edited by mayur_my_jaan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Neela,
This is a very heavy and deep concept😊. Generally such stories are really taxing to write and I would highly appreciate it if you can continue with it. You definitely have an eager reader here😃
-Nithya
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Posted: 14 years ago
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seems to be an another intense story on the way........will love to retad it further.....pls continue soon dear..............

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Reserved!

Edited...

I was literally jumping in joy! when i saw ur pm... and Sharneel & FF in same line...= 😊

Ur back with another ff... one question should I read it or not? It took ar while to recover from Qayeenat... 😛😊 Im not sure this time... But how to resist...

Anyways the concept seem really deep andt emotional... sounds rlly intresting to read... I can't wait for u to start it... Do start soon..Jaldi shuru karna, ziada intezar mat karwana... 😛😊

And YES I would like to participate... Tumhara koi bharosa nahi, phir se Tradegy Queen ban gaiy toh? 😲😃




So please guys, push the LIKE button if you like the concept and want me to progress.

sorry i can't like it... because i don't LIKE ur concept...


...

I LOVE IT!!!! 😳 Ab jaldi se shuru karo... And DO NOT FORGET TO PM ME...

Waiting impatiently... So continue soon...


And ofcourse i sooo missed ur writing style... Im soo happy ur back... No one in the forum writes like u... I missed u writing style more than you! 😳



-Laiba


(Btw edited my post in ur OS gallery...)

Edited by .SilentPrincess - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowww very nice concept neela plz cont soon and yeah dnt forget to add me in the pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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the concept seems really interesting.
would love to read it ahead.
do continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heyyy neela
very very unique n different concept
do start soon

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