'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103) - Page 52

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hum naraaz hai ji sahi parha aapne hum behad naraaz hai...nahi na aapse na aapke kirdar se...hum khud se naraaz hai...kya karein aapne hi to kaha hai ke hum aapke Nupur ki jagah khud ko rakh kar yeh FF parhe to isiliye hum Nupur se nahi balki khud se naraaz hai...!!!

Nupur ne pyar kiya deewangi ki hadh paar ki par kya bharosa bhi utna hi kiya apne pyar par...hum maante hai aise haalaat mein dil ka yun tootna laazmi hai jo ki uska toota hai...hume bhi behad takleef huyi uske haalat par aisa laga ki in haalaaton se woh nahi hum guzar rahein hai...bohat mushkil hojata hai khud par kaaboo pana...dil aur dimaag ke iss kashmakash mein zindagi ulajh kar rah jati hai...phir samajh nahi aata ki kya sahi hai aur kya galat...lekin jaisa ki aapne kaha ki dil kabhi galat nahi hota tou yaha Nupur dimag ko kyun haavi hone de rahi hai...pyar tou dil se kiya thaa na...isiliye tou itne saal alag hone ke bawajood bhi unpar aitbaar raha dekha jaye tou apne pyar par aitbaar raha...tou ab ek jhatke mein woh aitbaar kahan gayab hogaya ki ek mauka bhi na de unhe apne baat kehne ka...pyar kisi shart par nahi hota...bas hojata hai...tou phir yeh khud ko khatm karne ki shart ya phir yun kahen ki zidd kyun...!!!

Diya bohat acchi dost hai usne jis tarah Nupur ka saath diya kabiley tareef hai...lekin kabhi kabhi halaat aisey hojatey hai ke saara aalam saath ho tou bhi hum khud ko tanha patey hai...aaj Nupur ki halat kuch aisey hi hai...Nupur ka khud se yun sawaal karna bilkul jayaz hai...lekin dekha jayey tou yeh zindagi sawaal bankar tab saamne aati hai jab hum bharosa kho baithtey hai...aaj Nupur ka pyar to qayam dikha par bharosa nahi...isiliye yeh saarey sawaal aur jawab ka silsila shuru hua...Nupur ka yun bimaar parna zindagi se muh modna aisey mauke par bohat aam hai...par woh shayad yeh bhool gayi ke uske ehsaas aam nahi...aakhir itne saalon ka rishta itne dooriyon ke bawajood iss muqaam tak aaya to koi tou khaas baat hogi...!!!

Mayank ka yun call aana aur halaat ka jaiza lena yeh dekhata hai ki usey fikr hai...Nupur ka yun sawaal karna uska haq hai soo usne bilkul sahi kiya...lekin yahan bhi woh yeh bhool gayi ke zindagi ke kai sawaalon ke jawab sirf han ya naa mein nahi diya jaata...kuch sawaal sirf hai ya naa ke beech sulajhne ke jagah ulajh jati ai...aur Nupur ne yeh galati ki...zindagi ke itne aham sawaalon ke jawab han ya naa mein mangey...koi bhi faisla le par ek baar saamne wale ko mauqa tou de apni safai mein kuch kehne ka...hum apne dard mein itna kho jatey hai ki saamne walon ko nazar andaaz kar dete hai...aisa bhi tou ho sakta hai ki unko bhi usi ehsaas aur takleef se guzarna padh raha ho jinse hum guzar rahe hai...!!!

Ab aayi Mayank ki bari...hume nahi maloom ki unke dil aur dimaag mein kya chal raha hai na hi yeh keh sakte hai ki unhone aisa kyun kiya...bas itna keh saktey hai ki kisi bhi halaat mein hume dusron ke jazbaaton ki qadar karni chahiye...!!!

Nupur ko chahiye ke Mayank ko ek mauqa de aur Mayank ko chahiye ki woh Nupur ke saamne puri sachayi laye...!!!

Hume nahi maloom Neela aapko humare iss comment par kya feel hua bas itna kahenge ke agar kisi bhi tarah se aapko takleef diye to maazarat chahte hai...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
brilliant update dear...love ur writting style...

do continue soon.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
confusion hi confision hai ...

nice update...😭😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
mayank asa kasay ker sakta hai...woh asa kyun keray ga...abhi bhi kuch hai...kuch tu hai...
yeah buhat ajeeb sa "face off" tha...mayank ny sab kuch jan ker bhi asa kiya...ek taraf us se ghin ati hai tu dosri taraf us ke baat ek baar sunay k dil bhi kerta hai...shayd ab bhi kuch baki hai...pata nhi ...shyad kuch zayada hi atebaar kerliya tha mayank per...
per nupur ny jo kuch us se kaha buhat kam tha...khas ker jab ...k woh abhi yeah baat nhi baata raha tha us ko...wah...yaha thora yaqeen horaha hai k woh asa ker skta hai...agar sacha hota tu aj kam as kam sach bolta...abhi asay baat ker raha hai jasy kuch hoa hi nhi...nupur ko kuch pata hi nhi chlay ga...aur woh us ko bewaquf banata rahy ga...disgusting...
nupur ki is kasam ny shyad us ki taraf sary rasty band kerdiya...shayd sahi hai...per yeah kambakht dil us ki baat ek bar suna chahta hai ab bhi...
very well writen ...is an underestimated word for how u have potrayed there characters..
per yeah jo ek charcter ajcanak se gayab hai..yeah kyu hai
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Posted: 14 years ago
fantastic update
nupur situation was heart wrenching...now waiting fr mayank explanations
loved it...cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautifully written.. humare paas alfaaz nhi hai ki hum kaise bayaan karee... 👏..
really feeling bad for nupz ..so, it is mayyu hw can he betraye her..but i guess it has defenrt side story maybe will hav 2 wait 4 it...

--Summi--
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharneel



Seher..😲 kahan se aa tapki! Gosh...been ages na? ek aap hi ho who can say that "Neela rocks" 😆 maza aagaya BY GOD! iss umer me ek teenager se aisi comment sunna ufff 😃

Seher..ek baat pooche? Why do I have a feeling that you are a great friend! and friendship probably means the world to you..am I right?
Bless you baccha...aur kya kahe aap se? 😊

-Neela



han neela mere liye friendship bht kuch hai
and you absolutely right
jo kehna hai kaho aur isi tarah ff likhte raho

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Posted: 14 years ago
neela
kya kahu is update k bare me mein yrrr
sach me yrrm wordless after this update
and very connfused
pta nhe kya hoga mayank ayega kya kya hoga ab nupur k saath
aur ye simran ki story kya hai
jo bhi hai
is update ko to bht pasand kya mene
esp mayur talks jo hai wo bemisal lajwab hai
jo dard tum ne btaya hai wo seriuosly
i loved it to the core
neela ab jaldi jaldi dusra upate dena
me tmhara update parhene hi IF ati hu yrrr
aur wait mat karwao
aldi update karo
cantt waittt

luv sehr
tc 🤗


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arjun-forever

res for comment on the chap 18!!

edited...
okkk...now with this update i am even more CONFUSED...lolzz...
brilliant update as usual...loved it...
so finally mayank is coming to india...but offcourse he wouldn't dare to meet nupur after hat she said...omg...dunno how things will be sorted out...
EAGERLY WAITING to raed more...
continue sooner...



Thank You Sanchi (hope you don't mind me calling you that). So you are confused AGAIN 😆 Well that is the phase of the story...it will be cleared as the story progresses. So you will have to hold onto your breath till then 😉 You think Mayank will come to India? Despite of Nupur's strictly forbidding him not to??? And if he is not going to meet Nupur then why bother coming to India in the first place?

Watch out for the next part 😊

-Neela
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Posted: 14 years ago
gr8 updt
bt ending is shocking...
cont soon

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