'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103)

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sariska sujaini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#261

Part 9:

amazing

loved it

sorry for d late comments

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#262

Part 10:

I simply loved d Urdu u used

it's such a beautiful language

lovely update

cont soon

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sariska sujaini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#263

Part 11:

amazing

simply loved it

loved tanmay-nupur's bond

n waiting for d next part

Cont soon

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: sharneel

LOL...yeah you're right. This time its all about Nupur....her thoughts had to be very clearly reflected. I guess I am trying to show the flow of her feelings and thoughts as she falls in love...or shall I say she realises her love for her childhood but long lost best friend. I will not allow the readers to see Tanmay or Mayank's side that much simply because this story is from Nups's POV and readers will be as oblivious as Nupur will be throughout the story. Only then you will be where I want you to be to help me end this story. English kuch zyada hogaya Fiza ki comment me! LOL...aaj na jaane kyun Urdu pe ghussa aaraha hai...kya kare *sigh*.

p.s. scrap for you...

-Neela

GHUSTAKI MAAF .....zayada english hogai😆 kya kera.....is maya se zindagi ny is zaban se bhi door kerdiya hai...hmm woh tu hum dkh hi rahy hain k humain sirf nupur k POV dekh raha hai is ff mein...jo k ek tarha se is ko aur dilchasp bana raha hai....is se aur jhoor ra ha hai..... ps ap k lyan bhi scrap hai janab

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: sharneel

@red Faria..Tashu never spoke in Bengali with me neither did she ever express in anyway that she can understand our convi in the language. How was I supposed to know yaar! aag bariye kauke keno jiggesh korbo..bhai tumi kothai thako! In UK, this can easily be classified as discrimination which occasionally leads to racism. amader school e eishob jinish shekhano hoy...not to ask personal questions like these rather get to know the person. Tashu'r shathe ami oneeek bokbok kori but this never came across whereas Tumpa k ami prothomei chine niyechilam coz of her thread on 21st Feb. I only know ppl from what they express upfront, I don't ask questions.

But interesting though...bangla practise hocchilona. got a chance now..😃 Good nite and sweet dreams Fari and Tashu

hmmmmmmm thanx for ur explanation
i think u r angry on me- any way its better to stop here
btw if i hurt u then i m sorry.....
take care

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jiya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#266

Hi Neela...

I must say your FF is too good...

I read all the parts in one go...

and I'd really like to be in your pm list...

Thanks tasfi for the pm and letting me know about this wonderful story

~jiya~

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.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#267

Reserved...

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MUjhe yakeen nahi araha Neela yeh aapne likha hai?

Kya waqai main Nupur Mayank se muhabbat karti haI? 😲 Mujhe laga Muhabbat ki dushman itni jaldi izhar nahi karwaiy ghi...Itni jaldi bata diya Nupur ki dil ki baat. Anyways Nupur apne aap say baat karti hai toh aisa lagta hai usski ulljan kam nahi lekin barh gaiy hai. Kher jab waqt aye gha toh sab uljha door ho he jaye ghi...

Nupur ka khat bohat accha laga, na jane kyun pichle part say yeh part humein ziada pasand aya...

Rahi baat Nupur ki khatr ki, I loved the way she tells about herself in an unusal way bata bhi rahi aur nahi bhi, aisa lagta hai jaise indirectly Mayank ko bhula rahi hai. Kash usski yeh awaaz Mayank tak pahunch jaye...Khat bohat khub likha, hum toh kho gaye they iss main...😳

Tanmay-Nupur ki choti choti larai parh kar bohat maza atha, in a short period of time they seemed to be very good friends.

Ek baat Nupur ki bohat acchi lagi, naiy cheezein try karne main darrti nahi hai lekin woh traditonal, orginal cheezein kabhi bhulti nahin aur pasand bho wahi karti hai.. Apne chote say shehr main rehte hue bhi uss naye bahar wali duniya ke liye darwazey khole hue hai... Par phir bhi khush hai apni is choti si, pyari si duniya main. You potrayed that very sweetly, Nupurs connction to everyone and everything around her..

The convo. between them was sweet as long as it lasted, bechari Nupur agar chatting par itni nervous ho ghi toh jab samne aye gha tab kya kare ghi...😆 Kher tab tak shayad kuch preperations kiye hongey...

Completly silent? Kehte hain Lambi khamoshi ke baad ek toofan ka inteezaar hota hai... Lekin dekhte hai aage kya hota hai...

And we reach the end... The one thing i don't like about your writing... Lekin agle update ka intezaat rahe gha...

-Laiba

Ps. Sorry for the long comment, maine socha agar lamba update hai toh lamba comment bhi hona chahiye... 😳

Edited by princez_94 - 14 years ago

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Wings-of-Fire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#268

started reading it today.its interesting.pls add me to your pm list.

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dhano_Tejank

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Posted: 14 years ago

#269

hey ...its an AUSUM ff...

read d whole story 2 dae....

its good...so pls PM me nxt tym U UPDATE.......

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 14 years ago

#270

How sweet.....Nupur as usual is so lost in her own thoughts....who would have thought that she can even talk with herself?

But then, the most beautiful way to find answers is to talk with your own self...

Aww......i so love Nupur's words...she is so traditional..maybe that's why i can relate to her in more than one way....

So she invited him for a tour? Oh.....aa bhi ja......aa bhi ja.....ae Mayank, aa bhi ja....Lol.

God...that girl.....always over-analyzing everything....i just seem to love this habit...cause it feels great to analyze every action before doing something....

Neelu...(hope i can call u that)..na jaane kyun...par....aapki Nupur mein ham har pal apna aks paate hain.....

Hmm...so her relationship with Mayank and Tanmay is increasing...cool....

Why do i get this feeling ki shayad mayank hi tanmay hai?? I often feel this......i know ki it's irrational....but i do feel....dunno why....

Hmmm......so aakhir kaar mayank use online mil hi gaya.....par Nupur bhi na...apni nervousness mein usne baat bhi nahi ki....

And true yaar....why don't we knw our own destination....

Pata nahi kyun.....par aisa lagta hai jaise ham mehez ek katputli hai...aur us upar waale ke haath mein hi sab kuch hai...

Awesome update......i wish to see more mayur interaction...kyun itna short update?

WE WANT MORE UPDATES.....AND LONGER ONES.....this is my new andolan from now onwards...

And my favorite part remains the same...those four lines....

Kya kahein ham? har baar un panktiyon se aap hamara dil jeet leti hain....fabulous lines.....and na jaane kyun unmein itni gehrai hoti hai....jitni kisi cheez mein nahi hai....

Update soon...

P.S.- Please PM me the link to your earlier stories.....i wanna read them.....

-Mahi

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