'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103) - Page 29

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Posted: 14 years ago
outstanding neela.........

khub e sundor hoise but plz ekta req tomar onno ff gulor moto eta k sad turn dio na.

loving dis
n tx for coming back wid regular update :))))))))
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Posted: 14 years ago
YEAH KAHNI KIS TARAF JA RAHI HAI HUM NHI SAMHJ PA RAHY
ek taraaf tu hum tamay aur nupur mein bulkul kho jatay hain....tab hi ap humain yaad dila tayti hain k mayank aur nupur ki khani hai.... BY GOD hum tu confuse hogay....Allah jany hum koi fasal ker bhi paay gay ya nhi.....
bahar hall....ap apni her tahreer per faukhar ker sakti hain....bina kis hijkejahat k....
humainy tammy ke baatein buhat achi lagi,,,,sahi kaha us ny,,,agar mayank waqi ek hi baar mein nupur se baat na keray,...tu yeah thik nhi....kam as kam us k mooda tu jan lyata.......
dua keraty hai k woh smhj jay.....
ap ki mosaalsal updates dekh ker buhat khushi horahi hai,...
lov ya
tc
aur ap ki kaata ....as usal rocking...devan nikalna chaiya app ka...sach mein ....ek aur request....hum se khabhi un bhi aa meray samny ...kahin pc mein kho gai hai...kya humain doobar mil sakti hai
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Posted: 14 years ago
Bhagwan ke liye kabhi yeh mat kehna ki tum ek mashhoor writer nahi ho...you are just too good...and please, kabhi bhi yeh mat kehna ki i am more famous than you...coz trust me, i love your work...

Umm...mujhe nahi lagta ki maine "Kuch Ankahe Jazbaat" ya phir "Aashna" padha hai...so plz send me those links...

Jab tak aap apne dil ki baatein khul kar nahi kaheingi...tab tak chahe aap 4 lines likhe ya poori kitab, saamne waale ko kabhi samajh nahi aayegi...

Hmm...pehle toh nervous ho gai...aur ab pachta rahi hai..jst like Nupur...

And then...bechara Tanmay...he had to make her come back to this world...

So Nupur can dance on classical songs...and i kinda liked the entire Tanmay-Nupur episode..

Mujhe bilkul bhi kuch nahi samajh mein aa raha hai...and i am totally confused...

Is this MN story or TN??? hamein dono hi pasand aa rahe hain...

Hamein darr hai ki kahin Mayank ke aate aate...ham Nupur and Tanmay mein na kho jaayein...

I am just confused and lost this time...

Awesome update...and still confused hun main...

Update sooner...

-Mahi
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
superbbb !!!!!!!!!
i am the latest fan of ur writting :)
loved it
n waiting fr the time jan aap mayur ko
shabdo ki dunya se bahar nikal kar amne samne layengi :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Really s o amazing Ff Plz cont soon
and add me in your Pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
sory for late reply jee,,,😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: princez_94

Reserved..

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Pehle sab say dedication ke liye shukriya...🤗
Coming to the update, I would say this was one of the many awesome updates. You potrayed things ever so beautifully, the hidden talent of Nupur you brought it up very elegantly. And the concer Tanmay holds for Nupur... Aur ahar main Nupur ki e-mail...
Waise toh Mayank-Nupur bachpan ke dost hai ek dusre ke baarein mein bohat kuch jante hain, ek dusre ko samjhte hain. Lekin ab aisa lagta hai ke in guzre hue saloon mein doori aur barh gaiy hai.
Aur ab toh Nupur ko ek aur dost mil gaya hai. Tanmay, jho kuch bhi kar sakta hai ussko wapis laane ke liye, apni dost ke liye. Mujhe lagta hai ab jaise Tanmay Nupur ko ziada acchi tarha se samjhta hai, Mayank bhi hai lekin woh jho ek dosti thi woh ab nahi rahi...
Aur mujhe toh aisa lagta hai jho ek muhabbat ka ehsaas utha tha woh nafrat main badal jayega.
I clould be ever so wrong, lekin pata nahin kyun ek darr hamesha sa tha.. Ab toh Mayank ka jawab ka muntazir hoon, pata nahi kya jawab de gha...
sorry if this was not the comment you expected, lekin abhi dil aur dimagh main ek he cheez hai.. Ke Mayank ka Jawab kya hoga..
-Laiba



aap ne bilkul ghalat kaha hai...I was actually expecting exactly similar kind of feedback from my readers. You have portrayed your feelings quite well in response to this update. All the things you stated above reflect the facts. Mayank-Nupur-Tanmay all 3 are friends...whats the difference here? Mayank-Nupur have been friends since childhood but the 10 years of gap has created a vaccum between the two..now the question is can distance and being "out of sight" really have a significant impact? Then there is Nupur-Tanmay, only been friends for few days but have become very close and they do care for each other. So can we say that Tanmay has actually filled a vaccum in Nupur's heart that was created by Mayank's absence simply by being so close to her? Is it possible that distance can define destiny sometimes? Think about it and perhaps your confusion will take a turn to a little more clarity.

Any ways..aap ki dil aur dimagh me jo uljhan chal rahi hai usska jawab to agle update me hi mil jayega 😊 Thank you..

-Neela
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jiya_angel

reserved!!

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hello neela, thank you for the dedication...
and I must say you are an amazing writer, the way you portrayed the progress between Tanmany and Nupur, is beautiful...
kahin na kahin mujhe bura nahi lagega agar Nupur ko Tanmay se pyaar ho jaaye, kyunki dus saal mein bahut kuch badal jaata hai...

waiting for the next update

thnx a lot for the pm

~jiya~




Thank you Jiya. Your comments mean a lot to me...shows you are already in the FF BIG time 😊 But the most amazing thing about your comment (which stands you out of all the others) is that you don't mind seeing T-N together. That puts you way ahead in the game (and you will know why..soon enough).

Thanks again for your compliments. Please keep commenting so that I understand my readers' thoughts.

-Neela
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: valiyah27

OUTSTANDING ...U should not be proud of this particular update...U should actually be proud of ALL ur FF's ...!!!



Thank you Valiyah. I am really touched. I saw one of your comment in Fiza's work..you mentioned my name 😳 Didn't know you admired my work so much...means a lot to me. Thanks and I hope you are doing well. Feel free to talk to me if you ever want to..I am here 😊

-Neela

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