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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: princez_94

Reserved...iss baar jaldi unres. Kar dhun ghi.. 😳

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Kya kahein itna accha update parh kar...
Beginning fromthe title from "friendship to love". Confusing title as its no clear yet who you're talking about.
meri woh choti si pyari si Nupur ab bohat bari hogayi hai.. 😳
Mayank ki e-mail thori si confusing, but i assume he meant it in a friendly way, still it so sweet...No wonder she was shying like that after reading.
arch enemy ... Nupur is so adorable, lekin bechari ka dushman ussay chipk gaya..🤣Mayank aur Nupur ke beech usska dushman a khara hua hai...😆
Waise shukriya Neela je... pehle aap ke updates humein rulate thy aap hasatey hain...😳
Tanmay-Nupur friendship si growing, it was sweet of her to show him around... The waterfall reminded me of Qayeenat... Jaise woh wahan gaye thy aur uss jagah ki dastan ka pata chala tha...unlike Qayeenat iss jagah naye ek acchi yaad chorri... Nupur ko Mayank ki yaad arahi hai... aur pyaar ka ehsaas abhi say he... That was unexpected, pehle mayank ka e-mail aur ab Nupur ke khayal...
Looking forward to the update... sorry for this behka, behka comment lekin aapke update naye confuse kar diya..
-Laiba
- You like pink better than black & red?
I thought it was time for a change... You don't like it?
Aap chali gaye aur sab rang le gaye...



Laiba..you know how happy I am to see your instant comments 😊 comments waqai me behka behka tha per aap ne usska bhi ilzaam hum per daal diya. to humain shikayet karne ka koi haq bhi nahi. It may get a bit confusing moving forward...just don't try to predict or forecast anything. Its all there...but it will not make any sense for a while.

And by the way, honestly speaking, I never liked the bright pink :) I am not into bright colors..I am more into dark or pale colors. Black is default or standard and red, again is too bright for me.

-Neela


p.s. aapko mauka diya tha apna woh ek line edit karne ki...ab jab edit nahi kiya to jawab bhi sun lijiye. hamare hone se ya na hone se kahi bhi kisiko bhi koi farq nahi parta...rangon ki baat to bohat door ki hai. phir bhi aap ne kaha...khush naseebi. humnain suna woh bhi befikri se..

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharneel



Laiba..you know how happy I am to see your instant comments 😊 comments waqai me behka behka tha per aap ne usska bhi ilzaam hum per daal diya. to humain shikayet karne ka koi haq bhi nahi. It may get a bit confusing moving forward...just don't try to predict or forecast anything. Its all there...but it will not make any sense for a while.

And by the way, honestly speaking, I never liked the bright pink :) I am not into bright colors..I am more into dark or pale colors. Black is default or standard and red, again is too bright for me.

-Neela


p.s. aapko mauka diya tha apna woh ek line edit karne ki...ab jab edit nahi kiya to jawab bhi sun lijiye. hamare hone se ya na hone se kahi bhi kisiko bhi koi farq nahi parta...rangon ki baat to bohat door ki hai. phir bhi aap ne kaha...khush naseebi. humnain suna woh bhi befikri se..

Well sorry for that, agli baar ek clear comment dene ki koshish karein gaye... Its all there but "who" your talking about is confusin, lekin hum is sab main nahi parhtey sab agle updates aye gaye toh dekh layn gaye...😊
I always had something for pink... Lekin i use it but kahin, kahin... I like black & white lekin yahan white nazar nahi aata... So I went for black-red my second choice... Embarrassed
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-Laiba
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

aadab

mayank k khat..was soo sweet an awesum.....so as nupurs new frnd......
yeah tu teeno hi itny pyary hain.....ab kis k hisay mein kya aay ga..yeah jany ki bari bekarai hai hamain.....
lovly to cya back soo soon....
PS ap k jawab parh k tu aur daar lag raha hai......per phir bhi hum por umeed hain....
tc



Aadab Fiza...ab aap bhi kya unn logon me shaamil hogaye jinhe hum per akser shakk rehta hai k hum na jaane kya kar baithe aap logon ki MaYur k saath 😊 per humain aap per bharosa hai...Qayenaat me aap hi the jissne Mahek ka saath diya uss waqt jab har koi ya to Mayank ko ghalat samajh raha tha ya phir Nupur ki interzar kar raha tha aur aakhir tak aap ne apna woh maqam barqarar rakkha. sach kaha aap ne...kisko kya hasil hoga ab yeh to muqaddar ki baat hai. aur muqaddar iss baar hamare haathon nahi, aap logo k haathon me hai 😊 humain apna vaada yaad hai ji aur ab phir se aapko yaad dilaker jaate hai 😊

-Neela
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vampire_girl

hey neela..!!🤗
itna fast fast update...neela wapas agayi lagta hai😆
coming to the update

it was mindblowing...loved the way nupur fight with the tecnology🤣
mayank's letter was so so nice..aisa lagra tha jaise mere liye ho😳😍

specially when he said..
.meri woh choti si pyari si Nupur ab bohat bari hogayi hai.
aur uo wala to bas kuch aur hi tha...
yeh alag baat hai k unn raahon me humsafar agar saath ho to shayed safar aur bhi dilchasb bann jaaye.

it was really really awesome❤️
tanmay..uff..!! aisa kyun laga hai yea mayank hai..ya mayank se connected hai..i mean he's sweet lekin mysterious hai😆
specially when he said..
beautiful'jitna socha tha isse bhi zyada hasseen hai yeh jagah..kya hai yea...pata nahi..par lagta hai kuch aur hi hai😳

Tanmay is staring at Nupur's face who seems to be lost in some other thought...why is he staring..OMG..what if he falls for her...nahiii..aisa na karo pls😭..bechare ka dill toot jayega😳..kyun ki nupur sirf mayank ki hai
and those last lines....mindblowing...loved them as usual❤️
ok mayank is feeling the same thing right?😕..cause if he isnt..then nupur is going to have a heart break🥺..oh god no..its hurts na..if you love someone and he doesnt love you back..god..nooo!! neela aisa kuch kiya na to dekhlena😈
continue soon pls😊

love
tasfia



Tashuuuu...I just absolutely love your comments! Bestest comment of the year 😃 Sometimes you guys take me by surprise. yaar itna dehaan deke FF parhte ho? itna parhayi agar school me karoge to mashallah! 😆 per humain samajh nahi lagi...isske pehle ki comment me kaha k Tanmay se tumhari shaadi kara de (which was actually not a bad idea) aur ab keh rahi ho Mayank ka email feels like more for you 😆 😆 Thank God tum Nupur nahi ho warna dono side se hi batting karne lag jaati 😆 😆

Anyways...to summarise in one line, I would say..."sahi jaa rahe ho baap...lage raho" 😉

-Neela
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Faria-



Neela ji apka udate bahutttttttttttt he accha tha
mayak ki letter padke dil khush hogayi
specially when he said- ..tumhari email se lagta hai meri woh choti si pyari si Nupur ab bohat bari hogayi hai. hamesha kya aise hi suljhakar baatein karti ho?

i mean i wanna emphasize on word - "Meri"
hayeeeeeeeee kitna accha letter-

Oye hoye nups was blushing - hahahaa loved my sweet, innocent nups
hehehehe the way she was looking around her- lagta hai ki koi chodi pakdi gayi.lol
loved nups and tanmay frship

btw nups is falling for mayank- but whats abt maynk ??
i hope he also love nups-

hey hey why tanmay was tarring at nupur- kahi ise bhi tou kuch kuch nehi ho rahe hai na
hmmmmm lets c- whats waiting for us.


good update Neela
simply awesome
keep it up




ei tomar hothat kore ki hoyeche? hindi/urdu/english diye to gulaye felle shob. abar bangla ekta shobdo o dekhlamna. noboborshe notun resolution niyecho naki je banglay kotha bolbena? 😊😆 😆 Glad you liked the update. ami jani...jotokkhon ei mishti mishti byapargulo thakbe totokhon tomake pacchi...ektu tragedy kortei tumi bheu bheu kore kede palabe r tarpor tomar tikitao dekha jabena 😆 😆 ki j kori bolo...ami holam tragedy queen...sharakkhon hashi hashi marka golpo likhte ki kostotai na pacchi..so shigghri ami amar ager form e ashchi...ki bolo? 😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Mahak...

oooohhhh....mayank wants a hamsafar?? Nupur, where art thou? :D

Lol.....nupur is so confused, Just like my frd, whom i had to literally teach typing even!

So nupur asked for his help? zaroorat padne par gadhe ko bhi baap banana padta hai...so true....

Interesting story of that jharna....although aisi places ke peeche selfless love hi hota hai!

beautiful story......nupur started feeling for mayank....

awesome update.....liked it much.....but wanna read mayur more...

but yeah, i loved the poetic four lines....as always, they seem to make me fall in love with them...

continue soon...

-Mahi



lol..Mahi where art thou..great line 👍🏼 . You know the best part of your comment is...zaroorat padne per gadhe ko bhi baap banana padta hai 😆 yeah that was exactly what Nupur was thinking when she asked for that favour. I am glad that you have begun to relate with her so soon...I'd need that a lot soon from all my readers.

Thanks for the compliment on the 4 lines. Actually those 4 lines are the only part which comes purely from my heart and they portray my feelings like a reflection on a crystal mirror

Enjoy reading...next update coming up 😊

-Neela
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Posted: 14 years ago

~~~~~~~Part 11: Lost in Words~~~~~~

In her bedroom balcony, Nupur is as usual gazing at the night sky. She is recalling..or shall we say analysing each and every word that Mayank wrote…but in her own way.

"Mayank ki humsafar! woh kiski baat kar raha tha? kahi hamare taraf hi to ishara nahi kar raha tha na! kya woh humse kuch poochna chah raha hai? shayed kuch batana chah raha ho. nahi yaar…aisa kahan likkha hai…shayed bas yun hi in general likkha ho. per woh humain Europe kyun bula raha hai? kya woh waqai me chahta hai hum usske saath rahe..usske paas rahe? kya woh bhi wohi soch raha hai jo hum soch rahe hai…kya woh bhi aisa hi mehsoos kar raha hai jaise hum?"


She smiles at herself as she walks back into her room and picks that printed email from her table.

"kyun Mayank Sharma…kya chal raha aap ke dimagh me? hum aapse khul ke to tab hi baat kar payenge jab aap kuch khul ke kahe.."

She takes her chair and starts replying..

hum soch rahe hai k 10 saal k baad koi apne dost ko dhoondh ke nikaala aur usse paate hi hairaan hoke kaha..itni bari hogayi ho? (she smiles as she writes). waqt apne raftar se apne salikhe se guzarta hai..usse kisika rok tok nahi. waqt ke lehron me behta hua zindagi ki daur me agar aap kisiko dhoondhenge to woh aapko kahi nahi milne wale. agar dhoondhna hai to usski dil ko..usske jazbon ko dhoondhiye..shayed koi jaana pehchaana chehra aap ke saamne aajaye.

Humain Europe nahi tour karna. humain apne iss chote se sheher se itna pyaar hai k isske daairay k bahar koi aur duniya bhi hai iss khayal se bhi humain aitraaz hai. hum jahan pe hai khush hai..yeh bari bari shehre aur yeh aap ka "fast-food generation" aap hi ko mubarak. humain baksh dijiye.

aap ne hamare baare me poocha…ilzaam lagaya k hum "closed" hai. ilzaam ghalat hai janab. batane layek kuch hai nahi khud ke baare me. hum aap jaise nahi hai jisse apne manzil ki… apni raah ka saaf saaf pata hai… jisse aur bhi oonche maqam paane ki hasrat hai. hamari zindagi bas aaj ki aur usski pal ki hai. kal se na humain koi ummeed hai aur na usski intezar. aayi to kismet… na aayi to gham nahi koi kyunki humnain apne aaj me hi apni poori zindagi jee liya. hamari zindagi kaafi saada si hai..graduation ki 1st year me hai ab. parhayi me itne kammal ki nahi k koi noble prize jeet ley per itne bure bhi nahi k maa baba ko sharmindagi ho. hum aasani se logo se dosti kar lete hai iss liye doston ki kami nahi. per hamari sabse pyari dost (maa k baad) hum khud hai. ermm…aur kya? saari baatein khaton k zariye hi pata karna hai kya? aap k Europe tour me hum bhale hi na aa sakay per aap to apne poorane sheher me jahan pe aap paida hue wahan aasakte hai na? hum vaada karte hai hum khud aapko apne hi iss sheher se naye sirhe se pehchaan karayenge.

apna khayal rakhiyega. sach kaha aap ne…bohat baatein karni hai. saalon ki baatein aap per udhaar hai hamara aur ab aap hi ko chukana hai. aap se zyada humain intezar hai.

aap ki jawab k muntazir..

-Nupur

She puts the pen down and re-reads the letter and goes to bed feeling a bit nervous.

Next day…as she wakes up and gets ready to go to college, she picks up the letter and on her way to college..she starts mumbling to herself…as usual

N: zyada to nahi likh liya na? kya sochega woh? ……..
N: arre yeh teri wahem hai Nupur. dil me laddoo phoot rahe hai to lagta hai saare duniya ko dikh raha hai. koi nahi..sahi hai sab.
N:kya khaak sahi hai? yeh kya likkha..khud ki dost. woh kya sochega…maa ki tarha woh bhi mujhe paghal samjhega aur bhaag jayega
N: bhaagna hai to bhaag jaaye…meri bala se. huh..usse Nupur ko janna hai to asli Nupur ko hi jaane. jaisi hain hum waise hi hai, ab kisiko accha lage ya na lage..kya farq parta hai!
N: accha? koi farq nahi parega. dekhte hai…


While she is smiling at herself, unknowingly she bumps into Tanmay.

T: subhe subhe takraaney k liye aur koi nahi mila aapko..(he smiles)
N: arre Tanmay kaise ho?
T: fine per tumhe yeh doosre logon se takrane ka beemari hai ya shaukh?
N: matlab? main hamesha logon se takraati rehti hoon?
T: logon ka to pata nahi…per pichle 2 hafte me tum 4 baar mujh ghareeb se takra chuki ho aur har baar nuksaan mera hi hota hai
N: accha? to aisa kya nuksan kar diya humnain? batao..
T: (he indicates towards the ground where there is a plastic cup with spilled coffee..)
N: ohh…I am sorry. pata hi nahi laga. I am so sorry. hum tumhe abhi doosri coffee la dete hai
T: arre laane ki kya zaroorat hai. class me thori dair hai, chalo canteen. but your treat
N: haan bhai pata hai. treat nahi kiya to saari zindagi iss nuksaan k taanay sunne parenge


They head towards the canteen.

As days and weeks pass by, not only the email communication between Mayank and Nupur takes off but also the friendship between Tanmay and Nupur blossoms as well. While Nupur makes no delays in responding to Mayank's emails, she also doesn't hesitate to spend almost all her time with Tanmay especially now that she is getting regular tuition on computing from him. From emailing to chatting to Facebooking to Tweetting…allz been taught over the past few days. Not that Nupur is enjoying all this..she is still eagerly waiting for the day when Mayank returns from his trip and she can get back to her good old style pen and paper mode. Although all these technical interactions between Tanmay and Nupur have brought them closer to each other but they have purely been intended as tutorial as Nupur has not yet revealed anything about Mayank to anyone…not even to Diya. She wasn't exactly sure as to where this was all leading to and hence was not ready to share this information with anyone yet. Although not sure in one hand, in the other hand she was interpreting Mayank's emails in her own way…each and every email she found a new hint where she thought Mayank was trying to confess to her. To this date, she still awaits the clear message when he will propose to her.

One day, when Nupur and Tanmay have come to the lab, they find all computers available. Nupur was over the moon as she could have some privacy in checking her inbox. Tanmay saw that excitement on her face and said..

T: tum apna kaam nipta lo, main chalta hoon
N: arre ruko na…bas emails check karne hai. phir saath me chalte hai
T: thik hai ..phir main bhi apna emails check kar leta hoon. per jaldi se..ok?

Nupur logs in to check her mail. In few seconds, she receives an instant message.
M: aaj Khuda se kuch aur bhi maang leta to mil jata. kaisi ho Nupur?


To Nupur's biggest surprise, it was Mayank online!! She is startled!!! Its Mayank!!! Live…there are various kinds of feelings that are running thru her head right now.
" kya karoon! kya karoooonn…" she looks around where Tanmay is busy typing.

With trembling fingers..she types..

N: kaise ho Mayank?
M: accha hoon. tum?
N: haan thik hai hum. kahan se bol rahe ho
M: filhal to kuch bol nahi raha, type kar raha hoon woh bhi apne ungli se. tum kahan se bol rahe ho Nupur..hehhee
N: nahi woh hum pooch rahe the k aap kaise hai
M: woh tum pooch chuki Nupur aur maine jawab bhi dey diya hai.

Nupur stops typing..she is feeling very nervous and doesn't feel like she can face him like that. So she quickly types..

N: humain ghar jaana hai…dair horahi hai. Bye!


and she logs off and almost forcibly drags Tanmay out of the lab and returns home. On their way back, Tanmay notices Nupur being unsually quiet. He cannot help but ask..

T: sab theek to hai na Nupur?
N: (comes out of her lost thoughts) haan…nahi hum theek hai
T: to itni khamosh kyun ho? hamesha to bakbak karke dimagh khaati rehti ho. yeh achanak kya hogaya hai tumhe?
N: Tanmay…ek baat pooche tumse?
T: haan poocho..
N: humain apne zindagi me aanewale morr ka andaza kyun nahi hota?
T: kyah!!
N: (smiles as she notices Tanmay's face) kuch nahi. chalo ab..dair horahi hai.

They walk home together…both lost in their own thoughts, completely silent…completely quiet.


-Neela


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har zakhm ko la-ilaaj kar diya
har aansoo ko bezubaan kar diya
kya khoob nibhaya hai dosti yaara
pal bhar me humain tanha kar diya

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Edited by sharneel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yayayayayya me 1st..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🥳..
i am so happy..!!😃😳

now coming to the update
uff...!!!! what an update😆
amazing update..you know what nupur's confusion is just awesome
it feels so interesting and it brings smile on my face😆

the letter nupur wrote..was so so awesome😃
waah..!!!! kya likha hai...mai hoto to sochti hi reh ajti bas..!!🤣

nupur's bond with tanmay..
aisa kyun kararahi ho..kya dushamani hai apki nupur aur mayank ke saath hone se
hey wait..jan tanmay ne log in kiya to mayank kaise online mila😲
tanmay mayank hai kya?😕..ya phir mayank hai hi nahi...jaise apke pichle ff me nupur nahi thi🤢arey mujhe itna confuse na kiya karo na😭
kitna dimag lagana parta hai apke ff's parte waqt😳.sara dimag ihan hi laga dalti hoon mai🤣
anyways now am sure mayank aur tanmay me koi na koi connection to hai..may be tanmaya has come on mayank's saying..and will end up falling for nupur😲
OMG..!! jaldi pls jaldi update karna😆

love
tasfia

Edited by vampire_girl - 14 years ago
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waooo...
sab se mazay ka tu nupur aur us k dil hai...dil mein ladoo phoot rahy hain....wah...loved.....yeah jo ek anjana se rishta shooro horaha hai ...buhat khubsoorat hai...ap humain janti hain na...islyan kah rahy hain...yeah us saat samdar paar wlay rishty se bhi zyada mazay ka hai....
nupur aur mayank ke chat.....lol.....humain mayank k jawab buhat acha laga.....buhat maza aaya ...nupur k khabrahat aur tamay k reaction....sab buhat acha tha ....bs ap ki akhiri 4 lines...huamin phir se kuch paresha ker gi..
buhat khub as usual
PS...hum per bahroosa rekhny k shukriaya.....hum InshaAllah khoshish keray gay k ap ki umedo per pora utray.....han han is per ap hum sab ko bora bana nay k soch rahi hain😉....
Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey mujhe aisa kun lag raha hai tanmay hi mr mayank sharma hai

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