'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103) - Page 46

Well, firstly I would comment on you answer to my last comment. Thank you, I have a tendency to enjoy the story like a typical reader and absorb the facts like a writer :) And you are right, I am never going to loose hope no matter how much downhill the story goes. But i am sure that it won't.

She fell ill? Bukhaar? Hmm...hota hai. When you feel really sad, you tend to fall ill.

Yeh saari friends ek hi tarah ke hote hain! Jhoot impossible!

Poori duniya kuch bhi kahe...friends never leave your side!

To love someone deeply and then coming to know ki woh aapka kabhi nahi ho paayega, hurts like hell.

The lines which Nupur told about him...they were just beautiful...truly spectacular and emotional...

So, Nupur shared everything with Dia...best friends se chupana namumkin hota hai!

WHAT? Mayank was engaged since 6 months? Hell! Yeh toh sach much dhoka hua hai Nupur ke saath mein...even is Mayank truly loves Nupur only, he is cheating on Simran! This is so not fair!

And Nupur fainted again!

Yaar yeh sach much 'Mayur FF" haina?

Main tumse yeh zaroor kehti ki tumne Nupur ka dil torke mujhe bhi hurt kiya hai...shikayat karti tumse...par as a writer, I know ki dard tumhe bhi zaroor hua hoga…apne hi characters ki chot pahuncha kar, hamein khud khushi kabhi nahi milti hai.

And all this is coming from personal experience and all. LOL

Pata hai mujhe….ki dard tumhe bhi hota hoga…aur tum hamein bhi dard dene mein koi kasar nahi chod rahi ho….

Use chot itni lagi hai…itna pyaar kiya tha…ki ab agar bimaar bhi pad gai, toh hamein koi bhi shock nahi laga.

Truly one of the most heart-breaking and emotional part of this FF. Loved this update. Dil ko chu gaya.

Then then those four lines, well, I am speechless. These four lines never cease to hold their meaning. They are the most significant and beautiful part of your stories.

I am now more than desperate for the next part. PLEASE update soon...

-Mahi