'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103) - Page 4

Nice nice nice 😃...LOL its cute actually to imagine mn as kids...really small kids awww and a sealed destiny...interesting, lets see what u have in store for us :)

beautiful update neela.
lovely starting,.
continue soon.

Aww neela

tht was such a sweet upd8

mayu wants 2 b with her 24*7

so sweet

loed mayu

their parents already decided their future

let's see whts cumin next

beautiful update

hey do cont soon!

very gud..wah wah...ek Os per like k button na dabaya tu hamay pm list se hi bahar nikal diya😡..By GOD kya zamana agaya hai.😆..

Nilaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

it was sooooooooooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, mindblowing update
awwwwwwwwwwww i loved little mayank very much



nilaaaaaaaaaaa i'll commnet in details after exam-okkkkkkk
but i really loved ur update janu.

just one request plz try to give happy ending.
Tragedy queen now u should do something new.
tumhara ye title mujhe kuch jaida pasand nehi hai.

ok baad main baat karungi. now gotta to go
bye
take care

~~~~~ Thank You Note ~~~~~

@mayur_my_jaan (Shruti)

Congrats for being 1^st to comment on the very 1^st chapter of Intikhaab 😊. I thought whilst you're celebrating, why don't I join as well. I am glad you loved the update and there's one line I loved about your comment "loved the part where mayank involves nupur in everything he does n forces her to accompany him everywhere" You're right. That was the essence of this part which I wanted to highlight. Thanks again and enjoy reading.

@tasfia123 (Tashu)

Oh Tashu'I am sooo glad to be back coz I get to see you commenting again. Accha! To zyada comments aajkal kahan kar rahi hai aap? Hamare thread pe to nahi hosakta. Huzoor zara idhaar bhi nazre karam farmaye 😉 ok enough bakwas'lovely comments as usual and I think you are one of the few readers who noticed the shayeri at the end. Bas'dil kiya to likh diya. I will try to add a few lines like these in each of my parts wherever possible. So keep commenting!

@tellycrazy (Nithya)

Wow'1^st ever comment from you! I am sure I have seen you pushing that LIKE button on my other work as well but you never commented. But I loved your short but very sweet comment. Nothing more needs saying after that. Thanks!

@maizis (Maira)

Hi my new reader 😊 Thanks for commenting and enjoy reading

@maria-soniarti (Maria)

You can't imagine how glad I am to see you reading this one 😊 I have just one request to you'read it if you like it not because we are friends. Our friendship should not oblige you to do these kinda things. Hope you catch my drift 😉

@princez_94 (Laiba)

uffff'..I know you are always the first to reserve and last to edit per sach kaha aapne'jab bhi aate ho dair aur dheer aate ho magar durust aate ho. And I always look forward to your comments more than you wait for my updates. So this one is 'RES' from me until you edit

@.Divya (Divya)

ahemmm'kya kahe aap se janab! Aap ko to ander aur bahar dono ki khabar hai ;) shayeri ki tareef k liye kya kahe!doston ko shukriya nahi kaha jaata per khush nassebi hai hamari k aap jaise readers hai hum jaise writers k liye. I will quote you on your promise for the lengthy comments on my longer updates. Love ya..

@mjhtnupurmayank (Pooja)

your comments are also very unique Pooja. And don't worry, tumhe apni jasoosi dikhane ka mauka iss kahani pe bhi milega. Lets see if you get it right this time'😊

@achoose (Aswathy)

Thanks dear. I am glad you felt those childish acts to be genuine. I had to do some research to make them as real as possible so that readers can identify with these scenes. Keep reading and commenting..

@zarfishan1983 (Zarfishan)

Thanks hun'keep reading

@madhupriyaguru (Madhu)

Hey..you are reading? Great!! Welcome on board

@shabnoor (Fatima)

Thank you 😊 You loved the baby talk? LOL. Aur shayeri ke liye'you know 😳

@myownarea (Divya)

aaahhh Divyaaaa! Your relatively slow response on the concept did put me down a bit when I assumed that you will probably not read this one. Per ab jaake jaan me jaan aayi'phewww! You are the Lead Analyst in my reader group and without your comment, I wouldn't know where to focus on my next parts. So resign mat karna plz :d

@anjus_kp

Thank you!

@sariska_mnarti (Sariska)

Thank you for reading and commenting. Yeah..Mayu was cute na 😳 Hard to imagine him like that. Watch out for the next part.

@love.mayurarti

Thanks sweety'keep reading

@nikitasharma (Nikita)

Welcome on board dear. Glad you liked the concept and the 1^st part. Hope you will continue this journey with me till the end. Will pm you when I update

@tehzeeb25 ( Tehzeeb)

Same to you Tehzeeb. Wonder where you heard about this FF or sis you just stumble across this?

@drfizaahmed (Fiza)

haila'itna bara ilzaam!! Actually I took the pmlist from the LIKE list and you were not there but I didn't close the list na! hamari itni majaal kahan k aap ke baghair hi yeh safar shuru kar de..aakhir himmat afzaayee to aap hi ne ki thee hamari'humain yaad jo dilaya k hum waqai me hai kaun'as I said earlier ..I owe you Intikhaab 😊

@mahaklovesmayur (Mahak)

what the'!!! I sent you a PM! Along with everyone else. In fact I was kinda looking forward to your comment as you being a popular writer and its whole different ball game when it comes to getting feedback from another writer. Please be as critical as you wish'no issues. Now about the comment'what if?? Lets see that'I don't think the question is about what if they fall for someone else, the question is do they know what they have begun and can they sustain that within themselves? You read Qayenaat?? Already!!!! Why didn't you comment then? Didn't you like it? PM me if you want'per kuch to comment karo!

@fariaa70 (Faria)

oh I am so glad to see your comment Fari. Thought you're busy with exams n all. Er moddhe o shomoy ber kore porecho!! Uff ami kintu moha khushi! Tumi 1 ba 2 line likhe comment korleo cholbe, ami opekkha korbo jokhon tumi free hobe. Thank you so much '.

~~~~ Neela~~~~