'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103)

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Shruti_0505

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

reserved

me first

yay

coming to the update

it was a fabulous update

amazing

mayank already wants to be with nupur 24*7

aur unke parents ne bhi decide kar liya ki mayur ki shaadi hogi

the relationship shared by mayur is so sweet n cute n unique

loved the part where mayank involves nupur in everything he does n forces her to accompany him everywhere

he wanted to pick her feed her chocolates play with her go to school with her

n the way he pestered his mom to take nupur with them

i guess one day mayank will take nupur with him forever

all in all another beautiful update

n thanx for the pm

lovely update

luv

shruti

Edited by mayur_my_jaan - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

hey neela! ! !🤗
i am second not bad aaj kal mai kuch jyada hi jaldi comment karne lagi hun😆
ok no more bakwaas

coming to the update
it was super cute 😊
"hum nupur ko ghar le jayen"... god that was really very sweet
acha hai hum bhi yahi chahten ki tum nupur ko humesha ke liye apne ghar le jao🤣
lovely update
and those last lines were awesome...like always👏
great update
do update next part soon

love
tashu

Edited by tasfia123 - 14 years ago

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Nithya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

'Beautiful' is the word that comes to my mind after I read the chapter😊 Loved the little Mayur😃 Do continue soon.

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maria

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

heyy Neela🤗

welcome back...glad to see u back..😃

Awesom update

do continue soon

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.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

res... 😳

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Ek bohat he khobsurat shuruwat. Itni pyari shuruwat hai toh aage kya hoga...

Mayanks is so adorable, itna masoom sa sawal... Bohat jaldi hai Nupur ko apne ghar le janey ki...And he's so stubborn, apni baat maanva ke he rehta hai... This might not prove well in the future....🤔

It's the sweetest update i've ever read. Chota sa pyara sa, bohat he cute chapter...

-Laiba

Edited by princez_94 - 14 years ago

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Divya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Neelu... I so loved Mayank line.. maa hum Nupur ko apne ghar le jaayein..

That was so full of innocence and truth..

Very nice update... and mere comments ke length bhi teri updates ke saath badhte jaayenge..

And the overall update, Too Good.... aur aapki shayari ka.. kya kehna..

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ShwePoo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

WOW..... Fabulous update.....

Your stories are always very very unique and this one tops the list.....!!!
Awesome part....

Waiting eagerly 2 know wat happens further,,,,]

Continue soon....!!

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

my GOD....the starting was fab dear,...................mayu asking nupur to play along wid her and mom's answer...everything was so genuine...and the last line of maa made me shocked...hmm.. lets see..what is in store 4 our mayur as they r destined to be together forever..............

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zarfishanzahid

@zarfishanzahid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

nice start neela amazing

thx alot for the pm

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Escapist

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

Wow ! that was a nice update....
loved it to the core...especially the part where you showed the mayu's baby talk at different stages !

And the shayeri at the end was super nice :)

Take care.

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