'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103)

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tehzeeb25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

gr888

it was soooo sweeeeeeet

cute

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sehrish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

hey neela
ab tumhari kya tareef karu yrrr
lajawab likhti ho tum to yrrr
is haseen likhai k hum to deewane hai
mahazarat hai k hum thora late comment karhe hai
kyu k hum examz me bussy hai na ji
par ap ke dono part buhat khub they
dil ko choogaye
mayank aur nupr ki takrar to kya kahe. 👏👏👏
bus jaldi kahani agey barhaye
intezar nhe hota ab humse
jaldi kijyeee gai
hum intezaar karenge😉

luv sehr

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anju011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

awesome update neela.
aww the mayu nupur scenes were really cute. such adorable kids.
loved it.
continue soon.

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Mahima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

part 1-

awwww

so cute

awesome

fantastic

gr8 job

mayu loving nupur at such a small age

luv

mahima

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Mahima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

part 2-

maar daaala

hayye

kitna cute update hai

wow

awesome

gr8

update soon

luv

mahima

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Divya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Thank u neela for the compliment in ur reply, but then that makes my job tougher hmm 😆.

I wont miss any of ur stories, I m a little hard pressed for time, hence the comments are sometimes skewed or smaller that desired :)

Abt this one, the argument that Mr Bhushan and Mr Sharma had was very interesting and yes its all perspective so I love it :)

Abt our young Mayank and Nupur...kids :) Kids have such innocence they fight forget and move on,..i loved the way u brought out those small elements of jealousy possessiveness and other complexities at such an age, that makes it interesting.. and Mayank 's reactions are intriguing me.. Nupur is still a kid so its understandable!! :)

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Mahak

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Hey! I did read your reply.....i always look forward to replies 😆...coz i myself i never have the time to give them....😳 And regarding being critical, don't worry, i am always am honest. I would [don't mind] be the one to point out where i felt something lacking and where i felt happy.

Yeah, i did read "Qayenaat"...it took me 3 hours to read it and then 15 hours to come out of the reverie...i just only tired my brain by asking thousands of questions...the only reason i didn't comment was, i was left speechless...itna kuch tha usmein...itna ehsaas tha usmein ki main samajh hi nahi paai ki comment kya karoon...but, don't worry, i wud pm you regarding that for sure.

O-o you mean status difference? Oh no! Lol, they always have fun. But i liked the argument. Mr Bhushan and Mr Sharma had both different opinions. And i love it.

Awww....I loved when mayank fought with abhi....oh God! i mean, kya yaar.....itne cute bache hain. I loved the way you brought security , assurance and jealousy with fight in those kids...how cute! Chote bache kitni jaldi baatein bhool bhi jaate hain. That's what i love the most in them. And its "Puchi" not "pappoo" [Me being a all time kid]😆

Kida always bounce back together! I love this part. I loved the way you brought out the change in their behavior with growing age. Strange bonds haan? And really nice shayari. Allah meherbaan hai aap par joh itni shiddat se aapko is tohfe se nawaza hai. [Ok, hope it was right coz i wanna learn urdu]. Beautiful update.

Do continue soon.....

Love,
Mahak

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556195

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

ok neela ji😆
ek waqt tha jab aap jaldi update kiya karti thin
par ab ap itni late update kyun karti hain
aisa kyun bhala😲

pls update soon
mujhe iss ff ke update se jyada kisi aur ff ke update ka intezar nahi rehta
aur aap hain ki apko humari intezar ki parwahi nahi😭

now update soon

love
tashu

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Sania

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Posted: 14 years ago

#59

Gustaakhi Maaf Neela Ji!

parhai ki waja se humain waqt hi nahin mila

par woh kehte hai na ''der aaye durust aaye''

naam se shuruwaat karte hain

''INTIKHAAB''

kya khubsurat lafz hai! is naam ka is kahaani se koi na koi naata to zaroor ha ga......

aik aur baat humain aap ka likhne ka ye naya andaaz behad pasand aaya hai

Mayank ki maasum khwaahishen 😆

Mayank aur Nupur ki laraai humain pasand nahin hai 😔 par khushi aur gham to zindagi ka hisa hai na

''Un ke Maa Baap ne to Un ki Kismat Ka Faisla Kar Diya Hai''

Ab na jaane yehi un ki kismat hai ya kuch aur.......

Ye to aage chal kar hi pata chale ga

plz agli update zara jaldi kijiye ga

tc,Sania 😊

Edited by Favouriteofall - 14 years ago

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.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#60

Neela kab update karon ghi... Jaldi karna..

Jiss tarha phool, khusboo ke bina adhhure hai, jaise chandni chand ke bina adhuri hai waise he Hum Intikhaab ke bina adhure hai...

Sorry... Tv par ek promo chal raha hai kisi serial ka usse qoute kiya hai...😛😳 lekin yehi haal hue gha na agara tum update nahi akroon ghi...