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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharneel




haath jo uthe duaaon me tere
har khushi Woh likkhe falak pe tere
mere haalat pe na aahen bhare
khaak bhi nahi naseeb me mere


sorry...bhookh lagi to khana khaane chale gaye 😊 You're right..humain bhi arsa hogaya qaifiya milate hue. koi aisa mila bhi to nahi na...ab aap hai to saath dijiye. hum bhi dekhe kahan tak hum aapko samajh paate hai aur khud ko samjha paate hai

sorry to quote you guys..but after seeing ur comment i could not help so something from my side for Nupur's Love for Mayank
baharain dekhte hain aur tum se pyaar kerte hain
dukhon ko jhelte hain aur tum se pyaar kerte hain
shab-e-ghaam aj kal hum log tanhai ke lamhoon main
muhabbat sekhte hain aur tum se pyaar kerte hain
bhala ansoo kahan hain ab meri veeran ankhon main?
sitare tairte hain aur tum se pyaar kerte hain
hum apni zindagi ko be aman hone nahi dete
sandese bhejte hain aur tum se pyaar kerte hain
hum aise sada dil waqif kahan hain ulfat se
ke jaan se khelte hain aur tum se pyaar kerte hain
Love cant be change,it can be forget,a person whom u love u cant forget him,no one can take his place in ur heart..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha-ArTiLover

sorry to quote you guys..but after seeing ur comment i could not help so something from my side for Nupur's Love for Mayank
baharain dekhte hain aur tum se pyaar kerte hain
dukhon ko jhelte hain aur tum se pyaar kerte hain
shab-e-ghaam aj kal hum log tanhai ke lamhoon main
muhabbat sekhte hain aur tum se pyaar kerte hain
bhala ansoo kahan hain ab meri veeran ankhon main?
sitare tairte hain aur tum se pyaar kerte hain
hum apni zindagi ko be aman hone nahi dete
sandese bhejte hain aur tum se pyaar kerte hain
hum aise sada dil waqif kahan hain ulfat se
ke jaan se khelte hain aur tum se pyaar kerte hain
Love cant be change,it can be forget,a person whom u love u cant forget him,no one can take his place in ur heart..



aha..to janaab yeh khoobi bhi rakhte hai. bohat accha likha..👏 Fiza to ghayeb hogayi warna hum to kaafi tayyari karke baithe the. kya pata...kal ki subhah na jaane hawa ko kis rukh pe morr de
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharneel



@red and I hope my response will apply to the entire comment of yours. Why the difference? Because as per my concept, this is Nupur's story. Not Mayank's or Tanmay's. Mayank's existence is as much as Nupur can see. So far he is nothing but a figment of her imagination. There are readers who think he may not be Mayank at all. But Nupur believes he is...and so he is. Nupur believed he loved her just as much as she did, so he did. But he hid some facts about his life which if revealed at an earlier stage of their relationship, may have taken their feelings to a different path. At least, despite knowing all the facts up front, if Nupur still decided to go ahead with the relationship, she had a choice. But by hiding something as crucial as this as long as he could seriously puts a question mark on Mayank's character (again from Nupur's perspective). Is Mayank feeling any pain? How am I supposed to know? I am Nupur!!! And someone who has lied and put me in a state where I cannot decide from right to wrong, who shook my belief and faith in love, why on earth should I think that he is in pain? What was he thinking? Truth would have eventually been revealed...what was he expecting...?? Nupur will laugh about it and move on with him? And why didn't it come from him? What was stopping him? The cards were being distributed across the globe, what was he waiting for? So me as Nupur can't think like that? I agree with you...when you love someone you do become blind and don't question them but loving someone unconditionally like that and in return you see that person hurting you, you cannot sustain the same feeling. Nupur is going through her share of disbelief now...its not the end, its a phase. And she is following her heart! bewkuf ladki agar thoda sa bhi aqal lagati to usse poochti! but she blindly fell for him and now blindly hating him and stupidly hurting herself! But this is who she is Nisha and there are people like her...many many people like her. They fall in love and they lose common sense but then again thats what love does to you. I agree with Roshnee here. A mature person can never fall in love.

Same goes to Tanmay...he is what Nupur can see. And his character is clear. He is helpful, protective and supportive. Nupur can see him...his behaviour, can feel his warmth. But Nupur is so blind in her love and hatred and confusion and what to believe and what not, she can't see Tanmay's feelings. She only sees a friend...And if Nupur can't see his love...I can't see either. Hence my question...shall I make her take that blindfold off of her eyes so that she can clearly see and think! meri Nupur bewkuf sahi per jazbati hai. I just want her to make the right decision. Mayank has dug his own grave by hiding from her...now its up to her. If she can pull herself together to face any answer that he may give, either in her favour or not, then fine! But do you as a reader think she should take that risk? Why are you guys assuming your Mayank is an angel? You don't know anything about him...those words could be a lie!! who can vouch for them? Nupur??? LOL..but his marriage with Simran is a fact..the whole world knows that. So yeah...choose!

I am not biased dear...I am just Nupur! You can be a reader and place your comments which you rightfully have..so done 😊 Don't know where the confusion is then? Because some people ARE thinking like Nupur...both parties are right but I believe those who are placing them in Nupur's moments now will make a better decision for her than the others. Laiba, Jiya, Fiza, Mahak, Naz, Tashu I am yet to hear from them 😊 They are my Nupurs in Intikhaab. I wish I could call upon Maria, Nivi, the Divis, Aru and my Jaana ...but I lost them somehow ..*sigh*.

-Neela

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharneel



aha..to janaab yeh khoobi bhi rakhte hai. bohat accha likha..👏 Fiza to ghayeb hogayi warna hum to kaafi tayyari karke baithe the. kya pata...kal ki subhah na jaane hawa ko kis rukh pe morr de

Thora bohat likh leti hoon as i like poetry n reads many poetry books..
Thankss for appreciation😳😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

I read some comments here on the latest update... And the lifetime decision... Mayank OR Tanmay...

But this is not about Mayank or Tanmay... This is Nupur, what she thinks, what she wants and what she does...
There is one common thought ... Mayank should get a chance, he might be innocent...
& I completly agree... he might be innocent...
Toh?
Kya woh harr ansoo Nupur ki aankhon say nikla hua usse lauta sakta hai, apne jaan say barh kar bharosa kiya uss parr woh bharosa usse lauta sakta hai...Woh raatein jab woh soo nahi paiy,jab usske khayal usse sone na de sake kya woh raatein Mayank wapis le aye gha... Woh harr pal jho marr rahi hai usski woh khushi woh muskurahat wapis le aye gha... Ek ek ansoo ki kimat chuka paye gha woh...
Ab mujhe koi farq nahi parhta woh masoom ho, yah gunehgaar... Usski woh majboori kya thi... Kyunke uss ne gunah kar liya... Ek khilte phool say usski mehak cheen liy, usske ugnhe ki umeed le liy... uss masoom say phool ko murjha diya...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharneel




haath jo uthe duaaon me tere
har khushi Woh likkhe falak pe tere
mere haalat pe na aahen bhare
khaak bhi nahi naseeb me mere


sorry...bhookh lagi to khana khaane chale gaye 😊 You're right..humain bhi arsa hogaya qaifiya milate hue. koi aisa mila bhi to nahi na...ab aap hai to saath dijiye. hum bhi dekhe kahan tak hum aapko samajh paate hai aur khud ko samjha paate hai

han tu humain neend agai thi aur hum chaly gay...ab office mein hoon...ghar aker jawab do gi
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: princez_94

I read some comments here on the latest update... And the lifetime decision... Mayank OR Tanmay...

But this is not about Mayank or Tanmay... This is Nupur, what she thinks, what she wants and what she does...
There is one common thought ... Mayank should get a chance, he might be innocent...
& I completly agree... he might be innocent...
Toh?
Kya woh harr ansoo Nupur ki aankhon say nikla hua usse lauta sakta hai, apne jaan say barh kar bharosa kiya uss parr woh bharosa usse lauta sakta hai...Woh raatein jab woh soo nahi paiy,jab usske khayal usse sone na de sake kya woh raatein Mayank wapis le aye gha... Woh harr pal jho marr rahi hai usski woh khushi woh muskurahat wapis le aye gha... Ek ek ansoo ki kimat chuka paye gha woh...
Ab mujhe koi farq nahi parhta woh masoom ho, yah gunehgaar... Usski woh majboori kya thi... Kyunke uss ne gunah kar liya... Ek khilte phool say usski mehak cheen liy, usske ugnhe ki umeed le liy... uss masoom say phool ko murjha diya...
...

sorry to quote you..😊
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i really dont understand what u want to say..all the people r here who gave her comments and Pov..they all tries to think like Nupur.they all r tried to give her opinion according to Nupur's thought..not Mayank,Tanmay..they all r talking about Nupur decision...if u r not agree with them then what we can do..but
exactly we all r tried to think if we r on Nupur place..what will we do..a person whom i love,he hid truth ,he hurt me..
has i courage to give him chance?
besides all the blames,besides all the negative thought..can i think to give him chance?
he hurt me but why?
he purposed me..he said he loves me but why he hid truth?
should i ask him?
i cried for him,i lost myself for a person whom i love but i know him from my childhood days..should i trust him?
he is going to get married?but how?we love eachother..how he can do this?should i give him chance to explain?
he said he wanted to tell me truth..should i listen him?
these questions probably came in my mind..if i was on place of Nupur...
here is i m talking about Nupur..not Mayank n Tanmay..
Mayank is her love while Tanmay is her friend..
so i choose my Love...
@bold 2
simple answer of ur all questions..."yes"
"Love can fill all the wounds of your heart"
Mayank's love,his true love can fill Nupur's heart wound..may it takes little time but he can get her trust again..its not possible..
"woh kete hain na ke waqt sab se bara marham hai.jo insane ke her zakham ko bhar deta hai"
its very difficult to forgive a person..whom u dont love or dont like or hate..
but its easy to forgive a person whom u love truly..
here is i m talking about Nupur...😊
Edited by Nisha-ArTiLover - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharneel




haath jo uthe duaaon me tere
har khushi Woh likkhe falak pe tere
mere haalat pe na aahen bhare
khaak bhi nahi naseeb me mere


sorry...bhookh lagi to khana khaane chale gaye 😊 You're right..humain bhi arsa hogaya qaifiya milate hue. koi aisa mila bhi to nahi na...ab aap hai to saath dijiye. hum bhi dekhe kahan tak hum aapko samajh paate hai aur khud ko samjha paate hai

HUM KO MALOOM HAI APNI DUAO KI HAQEET BHI

HATH MEIN RETH K SIVA AUR KUCH BHI NHI

PHIR BHI TAHRY HUM GALIB K ASEER

SO DIL K BEHLNY KO HI SAHI, KAYAL TU ACHA HAI

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Posted: 14 years ago
RESSS
P.S. - Ise 'unreserve' karne mein kaafi time lagega...coz hamne update padh liya hai...aur sabhi ke comments bhi... So, khud ko sambhalne mein bhi time lagega... Ho sake, toh zyada waqt lene ke liye hamein maaf kar dijiyega...
- Mahak
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Posted: 14 years ago
reserved neela in night iwill think in depth and will comment 😉

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