'Intikhaab' A MaYur FF -Completed (Epilogue pg103)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#321

yayayaya...neela is back to herself..🥳regular updates..yuppie
ok now coming to the update😊
it was the best part so far🤗
just loved mayank's reply😍...aisa reply se to kisi ko bhi pyar hojaye😳
that was fab..!! ..mayank also loves her kya?😕..samajh nahi araha...concept to kuch aur hi kehta hai..aur us ka email kuch aur keh raha hai..hmm...well lagta hai tension abhi baki hai😆
tanmay aur mayank ka koi na koi connection to jarur hai...i am sure about it
jab bhi..jab bhi nupur mayank ke bare me soch rahi hoti hai ya kuch uljhan hoti hai to tanamay kyun ajata hai use solve karne me..aur mayank ne bhi kaha ki use khayal tanmya se miltein hain...i am sure about it...tanmay aur mayank ka koi na koi connection to jarur hai🤔

and today's last four lines..was awesome and wowest ...that was really mindblowing...neela apni ek book publish kar dijiye...wada raha sabse pehle grahak hum honge😊

will wait for next part...when nupur and mayank will talk directly😍
cant wait...pls continue soon😳

love
tasfia

Edited by vampire_girl - 14 years ago

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Ayesha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#322

it was beautifull..I'm in your pm list..:)))

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Posted: 14 years ago

#323

wao I am Your 100 th Reader Thats Great

Thanks for replay dear And Yes i wanna read More so Plz add me in your Pm list

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Posted: 14 years ago

#324

its awesome dear lovely ⭐️
plz cont soon 😃

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.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#325

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Okay ab iss post ka bhi raaz khol dete hain...

Usually I become very sad when an update ends... Par is baar nahi, i read the update aur phir woh 4 lines parhi... aur aisa laga ke update bhool gaye...

When the first time I read your writing i adored your ff mainly because you were the first writer i knew at that time who wrote in urdu and that to very beautifully. And when I continued reading one of the things that made me love your work was the shayari at the end. It was like this extra update each time... And that was why Qayeenat was so special, it was very different from other ffs. It was unique, the story, the shayari aur your way of writing... this and much more just makes you the most amazing writer I ever seen. The shayari I remember the most is many from Qayeenat, you've written a lot of amazing poems in Intikhaab too but this one was just amazing...

'You might remember I told you this was not the best update of urs, and I still agree but this poem did. Iread it many times, I still can't get over it. I started reading it and I forgot the update I just read that has to mean something right... But this was truly one of the best poem you have written & I've read.. You might write even better than this, but this one stays forever in my heart.

Bohat ala likhti hai aap, yeh kahin logon naye aap se kaha hoga. Par is bhaar sach main aap naye dil chu liya...

-Laiba

Issliye 2 post reserve ki thi, aap ka inteezar khatm hua... 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

#326

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- will edit tonight... 😳

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Starting with the title, it seemed so romantic... Moonlit Night. 😳

Okay starting with the update...

"itni choti si baat k liye tumne khudko humse 2 din door rakkha..." Aww that was shoo cute... it took a while to move on from this line... I want to hug you writing this... 🤗

I liked the letter; you portrayed Mayank's feeling in this two days through the email very well.

Nupur's reaction was very sweet, its like she got the gift she wanted for her birthday. She was so excited just like a kid. The relation between her mother and Nupur is very sweet, especially like it was in the start. So innocent...

aur poochi bhi? I repeat this is the "Cutest" ff I've ever read... 😳

she is in no hesitation whatsoever that not only does she want to take it forward but she actually wants her life to end in his arms too...

If you keep writing these kind of thing I might not be able to comment... 😍 She's so deeply in love, khawb saja rahi hai apne aane wale kal ke... i hope yeh khawb kahin tooth na jaye...

I loved Nupur's answer simple but straight forward aur dil say... 😳

Ab toh hum bhi iss online mulaqat ka besabri say intezaar kare gaye...

Tanmay-Nupur friendship is nice, he often solves her confusion helps her even though he's unknown to many things. A true friend indeed.

Lovelyy update Neela, bohat he pyari se cute se update... I adored it to bits 🤗

-Laiba

Ps. one thing Mayank ki email ki pehli line main woh kehta hai... tumhari dost ne bilkul sahi kaha hai...

He's saying "Tumhari" he's reffering to a female friend here right? Because he's saying "Tumhari" so is he expecting that she's talking about a she? or what?

Toh yeh aise he likha yah isske peeche bhi koi "raaz" hai?

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-SharNeela-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: jiya_angel
hey neela... it's really late, so i'll comment tom morn

*edited*

Neela, that was again a beautiful chapter... I had already read it last night, but as I said, it was quite late, so I couldn't comment...

About the update... mmm... I loved the way you described the situation, Nupur's feelins and her reaction to the letter... I loved Mayank's letter, anyone would have fallen in love with it... but yeah... its a letter at the end of the day... I may be sounding a little harsh, but... she fell in love with the words because she believes that those words reflect the person writing them... and for this, she's overlooking the love which is right in front of her eyes... is it right??

This is the reason why I had said earlier that I won't mind if Nupur was with Tanmay...

and yeah, I have read Qayenaat also, and I loved it

loads of love

~jiya~

Jiya...wow! This is the most unique comment I have ever come across in Intikhaab. You seem to be a very practical person and your thoughts reflect so as well. And dare I say that you are the only person perhaps who doesn't mind Tanmay with Nupur simply because it makes sense. You are absolutely right...The storyline is comparing reality with mere words and it makes sense that reality wins. I agree with you...she has fallen in love with words that appear on a computer screen. Then again, is it so wrong of her to think that the words reflect the person as well? Wouldn't you agree that behind the screen you are much more open and honest about your feelings than in face to face? (excluding all the perverts out there who are willingly hunting for their victims of course). Nupur knows Mayank since her childhood and the words from letters to emails have evolved from beginning till now...they were not random lovey dovey words. I guess what I am trying to say is I have seen ppl who are very comfortable in expressing their feelings in writing simply because they are not so good in verbally expressing themselves. Does it mean they still don't hold the same feeling for us? Its a matter of a convenient medium..thats all.

Thanks for your comments. I look forward to many more such comments moving ahead.

-Neela

p.s. You read Qayenaat! 😲 Who told you about that? Glad you liked it though! Please feel free to comment on the thread of Qayenaat ..I'd appreciate it a lot.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: -Faria-
Neela -it was wonderful update
u dont know how much i love this update
It was the best part of this FF...

Gosh loved mayank's answer...and i m really very happy for my dear NUps

cant wait for next part
do update next part soon

Thanks Faria. I am sooo glad that at least you liked this part. It was written to compensate for readers like you who were hurt by Qayenaat. I think you will also like the next couple of chapters as well but after that...hmmm

I will warn you well within time.

-Neela

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Posted: 14 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur
wonderful update neela...

kintu nupurer khusi dekhe voi lagse

kahi is khushi ko kisiki nazar na lag jaye...

tomar ager ff gulo eto dukher j eta porte voi lage...kokhon ba nupurer sathe sathe amro dil venge jai :'(

dis update was gr8
just loved it
keep it up

Kheya..tomar bhoy kintu omulok na. Every story has its ups and downs. amar kahini o ekhon urdhogaami obosthay ache..shob kichu shundor shobkichu anonder. btw, tumi amar ager FF gulo porecho? kon konta porle? koi kono comment to korlena 😔

-Neela

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jiya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#330

Originally posted by: sharneel

Jiya...wow! This is the most unique comment I have ever come across in Intikhaab. You seem to be a very practical person and your thoughts reflect so as well. And dare I say that you are the only person perhaps who doesn't mind Tanmay with Nupur simply because it makes sense. You are absolutely right...The storyline is comparing reality with mere words and it makes sense that reality wins. I agree with you...she has fallen in love with words that appear on a computer screen. Then again, is it so wrong of her to think that the words reflect the person as well? Wouldn't you agree that behind the screen you are much more open and honest about your feelings than in face to face? (excluding all the perverts out there who are willingly hunting for their victims of course). Nupur knows Mayank since her childhood and the words from letters to emails have evolved from beginning till now...they were not random lovey dovey words. I guess what I am trying to say is I have seen ppl who are very comfortable in expressing their feelings in writing simply because they are not so good in verbally expressing themselves. Does it mean they still don't hold the same feeling for us? Its a matter of a convenient medium..thats all.

Thanks for your comments. I look forward to many more such comments moving ahead.

-Neela

p.s. You read Qayenaat! 😲 Who told you about that? Glad you liked it though! Please feel free to comment on the thread of Qayenaat ..I'd appreciate it a lot.

Dear Neela

Well I agree that people are more comfortable behind the screen, and a biggest example is me myself... I don't talk as much as I can write... but you know, practicality matters... I am not saying Mayank is wrong... ofcourse, Nupur knows him since childhood, she is bound to believe that he is the same person till now... I am just being a little practical, because I will not want Tanmay to get hurt also... I hope you understand my point...

~jiya~

P.S... nobody told me about Qayenaat, I just found it and read it all at once because I simply loved it...😳