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Posted: 11 years ago
part 127 n 128

prasant aur arpita ne maan aur geet ko puja karte dekh liya...
prashant ne arpita ko kuch kehne ka mouka nahi diya...
dono soch rahe hai ki pooja ke kapdo me maan aur geet kitne sundar lag rahe hai...
NT aur usski jealousy 😡
its geet that geet stand up for herself...
nt 😡😡

nice banner suhi 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
happy that geet's children r understanding her
n geet give good back answer to nt
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesum...plz next update jaldi se...plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 1

awesome update di
wow what a serene view
well i love prasahnt's view he knew how o deal with situations
and according to me there is no harm if geet will remarry she too need someone inher old age

part 2

naintara is an idiot
and is everytime proved it but today she made herself a chudail'
she was saying abusive to geet but kabhi khud aaiyna nahi dekha usna

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Posted: 11 years ago

MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd-9/part-129/pg 61/23/4/2014





Part:-129

When Maan rushed in and hold Naintaras hand preventing the slap on Geet shouting,... " Naintara",.. spitting fire fr. his eyes," how dare u? how dare u to slap Geet? tumhari itni himmat kaise hue? maine mana kiyatha na tumhe ki Geet ki aass pass ghumnese? tho phir kyu ayi yaha? aur ye kya anaptionaap bolerahi ho thum geet se? itni himmat kaise agayi tumhe? kya samajrahi ho tum? ye meri patni hai,... meri pyaar aur meri zindagi hai ye samjhi thu? aaj tak mai thumhari har harkat per nazar andaaj ki , saari galathi per nazar andaaz ki ,. ye jaanthe hue bhi ,.. ki thum Geet ke saath kya kya kiya, sab kuch sab kuch mai jaantha hu tum ne geet per humla karwaaya , unhe maar na chahthi ho tum? sab jaantha hu mai ,.. saara proofs hai mera pass phir bhi mai tumhe kuch nahi karpaayaa ye sochkar ki tum meri bhai ka patni ho ,.. kuch nahi karpaaya ,.. tumhe rok nahi paaya mai dev ki muh dekh kar chup hui mai,... kuch nahi karpaaya ,.. warna,...
Dev entered raise listening that N.T. attempted murder on geet,,,,,," Shaayad aap nahi karpaaya bro ,.. per mai karsaktha huna,... " he came in making all shocked,.. he rosed to Naintara and gave her tight slaps on her face, " thumhari itni himmat?maine mana kiyathana thumhe meri bro ki zindagi me dakhal andaaj karnese? phir kyu ayi yaha bhabhi ke ghar? kya karna chahthi ho thum? aur ye kya kya bolerahi ho bhabhi ko? Bitch,.. s**t,... wh**e,.. bachhalan aurat,... phoohad aurat?he gave another slap to her,.. ye saare galiya tumhe suit karthe hai , bhabhi ko nahi.Paison keliye tum kya kya karthe ho, kitna neeche tak girthi ho ,. wo mujhese behtar aur koun jaantha? isahi karke hi thum mujhe phasaya, aur har aurat thumhare jaise dikhthe hai thumhe kyunki thum khud ek girihue ho? ,... another slap,...napak aurat ho thum ,.. ek vaishya ho thum,... " meri zindagi barbaad karke thum sugun nahi mila meri bro ki zindagi barbaad karne chaliayi? meri bro chahiye thumhe? ye bhulgayi mere bro tumhe kya lagtha hai ? uchh neech ki koi parwaa hai tumhe? another slap ,... ye meri galathi hai is kheechad ko mai is ghar ki ander anediya ,. khurana khandaan ki bahu banadiya ,.. andha bangaya hu me uswakth ,.. pyaar me pagal bangaya hu mai ,.. us wakth mai tumhari sachhayi nahi dekhpaaya , aur iska unzaam abhi tak bhugath raha hu mai,..
Geet and Maan stood rooted by Devs entry and the action taken by him,.. Geet moved to Dev to stop him ,.. nahi ,.. Dev isa nahi karthe,... Maan pulled back her stopping her to go between them.
Dev:_" lekin ab aur nahi ,.. nahi bardaash karunga mai tumhe,.. Mai aaj ki aaj talak dedunga thumhe,... aur khan khole kar suno thumhe is khaandaan ki ek penny bhi nahi milnewaali,.. bhabhi thik kahrahi hai ,.. ye saari property bro ka hai ,. isme thumhe ek penny bhi nahi milegi aur talak bhi mujhe aasaani se milega kyunki mai wo proofs court me produce kartha hu, isse mujhe thumse divorce asaani se milega.
Nainatara shocked by the turning of events all against her in a fraction of second. her total plans upside down. Ground under her feet slipped she felt a big rock on her head blasting her. wat happened?,...she cannot able to believe the turning of events. She tried to touch Dev saying ,.. nahi Dev,..
Dev:-no,... dont touch me,.. dont touch me,.. u have lost all ur rights ,u have lost all ur chances,.. u have lost every thing,. now why u stand here get out... he caught her hand and dragged her out of the house.,.. when Geet fallowed him calling Dev,... Dev,...nahi Dev , aap isa nahi karsakthe dev,... she tried to fallow them , when Maan caught her and hugged her not allowing her to go.
Geet:- Maan ,.. Maan,.. rukiyena unhe, ye sahi nahi hai maan,.. unhe ek mouka dena chahiye maan ,.. she hold his shirt and shooked him, mai isa karna nahi chahthi maan ,.. mai unhe rokna chahthi thi,.. mai unhe samjhana chahthi thi ,.. unhe galat raasthonse nikalna chahthi thi ,.. unki galathi ka ehsaas dilana chahthi thi ,.. unhe sudharna chahthi thi maan, she caught him shacking him,.. isa kisika ghar ujhad ke mai apna ghar kaise basa sakthi hu maan? wo bhi humari pariwaar ki sadasya haina ? sab kuch meri wajese horaha hai? mujhe isa baath karna nahi chahiyetha ? mera koi haq nahi hai, mujhese galathi hue she slumped on Maans feet,.. mujhe maaf kardo Maan ,. ye sab meri waje hua hai.mai ,.. mai ,.. dev se kaise baath karu? kya muh dikhungi unhe? aur unki bachhe ,.. unki bachhe ko mai kya jawaab dungi Maan ? ye galat horaha hai,.. ye thik nahi hai rukiye unhe , she cried bitterly not able to grasp the events. She was in deep shock.
Maan too came to ground to her hugging her cocooning her, securing her in his chest, saying nahi ,.. geet iska koi jarurat nahi ,.. tumne kuch galat nahi kiya, thum bilkul sahi kiya,.. aur thume haq hai geet ,... ye jaruri hai geet N.T. ko sabak slkhana jaruri hai ,.. unhe ek aurat ka maryaada ka seema kya hothi hai wo bathana jaruri hai ,.. usse par karna kitna galat hothi hai ye bathana jaruri hai ,.. aur aaj thum usse yahi sikhayi. tum bilkul sahi kiya geet. aur ye tho kabhi na kabhi honi chahiyetha aaj hua bus thum itna guilt math ho apne aap per dosh math thairao. thum sahi hai.
Geet:- nahi maan mai sahi nahi hu ,.. aap keliye mai sahi nahi hu ,..mai badnaseeb hu ,.. dekhliyena meri wajese aap ki ghar me toofan agayi,. ab maaji ko mujhe per naraazgi aur badjaayegi ,. wo kabhi nahi humari shaadi keliye manegi ,.. aur meri waje se aap ki pariwaar ke beech daraar paida hogi maan mujhe isa nahi karna chahiyetha.,. she is no where to stop crying.
Maan take her to bedroom scooping her in his arms and made her lay on bed . He gave her water to drink, later he too laid on her side taking her on to his chest,...
" Geet pehle tum ye maanlo tumhe jo bhi kiya wo galat nahi hai galat tho wo hai ,.. unki soch galat , unki iraade galat hai sab kuch galath hai geet, ye jaanthe hue bhi mai aaj tak mai unhe maaf kiya kyun ki wo mere bhai ki patni hai ,.. per aaj jo kuch hua ,.. wo ek na ek din hona hi tha. Dev ko sab patachalna chahiye aaj hua,... is me humara koi galathi nahi hai. Isa khudgurze , greedy logonke saath isa hi hotha hai geet. Ye unki khud ki kartruthve hai, ye unki sudharne ka ek mouka hai agar wo apne aapo ko badalsake tho unke saath kuch nainsaaf nahi hoga,.. i .promise u.geet mai kuch galat nahi ho nedunga.thik. hai? He lifted her head holding by her chin " ab rona band karo, aur muskurao,.. aaj mai bahut khush hu,.. kyunki aaj meri misty pehli baar khud humari pyaar ki elaan ki sab ke age,.. aaj mai bahut khush hu ,.. ki aaj tum mujhe kitni izzat di ,.. meri sir garv se uncha khada diya tumne geet. humari pyaar ko tum itna respect di,.. aaj thum proove kiya geet ki meri choice kabhi galat nahi hothi,.. mai bilkul sahi kiya ki tumhe mere jeewan saathi chun kar.Ab humari milan ki din jyaada dur nahi hai,.. mai bahut khush hu geet,.. tum meri sab se badi taakat bangayi geet.ab mujhe aur himmat agayi,. mai ab kisi bhi museebat ko bahut asaani se parkar saktha hu, kyun ki mere saath meri taakat hai, har mushkilonko saamna karsaktha hu, tumhari ye aasara se mai ladsaktha hu geet. ye dunia se, logonse, pariwaar se sammaj se ladsaktha hu,.. aaj humaari rishtha aur ek kadam age badgayi geet . aaj tak mai meri pariwaarr keliye sab kuch kiya,.. unhe sab kuch diya,.. lekin ab aur nahi ,.. aaj thum meri family hai aaj mujhe thum jyaada important ho.tum meri zindagi ho ,nahi ji saktha tumhare bina. isa kabhi math kaho ki tumhare wajese ye sab horaha hai ,.. tumhari wajese hi mai ji raha hu ,.. pyaar kya hotha hai , kya maine raktha hai iska zindagi me ye mujhe tumhe sikhaya geet ,.. pariwaar kya hotha hai ,.. risthe kaise nibhathe ye sab mai tumhe aur bachhe ko dekhkar samajgaya. rishthe ko kya maine rakhthe hai ye tum sikhaya mujhe ab thumhi ho meri family sirf thum aur koi nahi,... nahi chahiye aur koi mujhe, thum hothi tho sab kuch hai , nahi ho tho kuch bhi nahi.he took her in to his heart hugging her tightly and kissing on her head. kabhi mujse dur math jao ,.. math chodo mujhe geet,. mai jinahi saktha .
She looked at him wiping her tears seeing him emotional,.".mai bhi nahi ji saktha aap ke bina' she hugged him .
" aap ye kya bolrahe ho? ki N.t. ne mujhe per hamla karwaaya? kya ye such hai?
Maan:- haa,.. geet ye such hai ,.. usdin mall me tumhare uper ek truck anewaali thiina ,.. wo N.T. ne karwaaya tumhe marne keliye.
Geet:- mujhe maarne?/ lekin kyu? aur aap ko ye kaise pata? thik ussi time per aap waha kaise pahuncha?
Maan:- us wakth mujhe ye sab nahi pata,.. per pata nahi achanak mujhe ye mehsoos hone lagi ki tumhare saath kuch galat honewaali hai, isliye mai farun waha chal iaya. Baad me mujhe patachala ye sab N.T. ne karwaaya. aur tab bhi mai usse kuch nahi kapaya siva tumhare age peeche security rakhneki alawa.
Geet got astonished hearing this ," aap ne mere peeche security rakhwaaya?
Maan:- Haa,.. is ghar me security aur thumhare peeche b.gds rakhwaaya,.. aur thum tho itna dumbo aur buddu hona tum uss b.gds ko giraftaar karwaaya unhe child kidnappers samajke.
Geet pouted with his teasing, saying her buddu and dumbo.
Maan smiled seeing her pouting ,.. my god ,.. he wants to eat her then and there.
' aur is baar is dumbo ne ek achha kaam kiya"
Geet looked at him like wat?
" Nahi tho mai simla kaise asaktha hu? aur humari ye khubsoorat Izhaar ,.. pyaar ka kaise hogi? wo do din ,.. meri zindagi me sab se achhe pal hai ,.. wo do din humari zindagi ko badaldiya. hum ek hogaye. mujhe tum mili ,.. zindagi mili,.. he hugged her to his heart tightly kissing on her head, kabhi mujhe akele math chodna geet ,mai ji nahi saktha.
Geet cupped his face looking in to his eyes mai bhi nahi ji saktha aap ke bina Maan ,...bus ab mujhe waada kijiye, chahe jobhi ho ,.. N.T.ne kuch bhi kiye ,. aap unki saath nainsaaf math kijiye ,.. isa waada kijiye mujhe.
He looked at her ,.. neverthless,.. jo bhi ho , she will not let anything happen wrong before her.
He kept his hand on her hand to give peace to her.







link for part-130:-https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3668596&PID=105489965&#p105489965



Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wah! Kya update hai!
NT ki achhi tarha se dhulai ho gayi...
Dev ne NT ko thappad mara...loved it
NT ussike layak thi...
Maan ne bhi NT ko khub sunaya
aur Geet ko samjaya ki ussne NT ko sunake koi galat kaam nahi kiya
NT ko toh sabak mil gaya ab pammi aur sameera ki baari hai...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ary I was waiting for prashant n arpita ka reaction
Par yaha tho kuch aur hi dekne ko mila..😲
Wow kya maara dev ne😆 ...she deserves it!
Waiting for the next!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Di banner nahi lanaya apne
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

Di banner nahi lanaya apne



Woh update de rahi thi aur waha power cut ho gaya...shayad isiliye banner reh gaya hoga
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Originally posted by: suhaaana

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Haa,.. suhaana mai tho lagane waali hu per power cut ,.. aur mera update bhi puri nahi ,.. thoda baaki hai,.. aur tho, tum log itni fast hai ki dekh ke tumhari commts mujhe bahut khush hua ,. baaki update karrahi hu ,.. padke commt do.

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