MGFF- ESSENCE OF LOVE-THD-5/PART-60/14-6-2013 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
geet's past over..
so painful...kitna kuchh saha ussne...
now maan wants to do justice with the victim...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
past of geet is painful
how much she tries to forget it it comes in front in some way
maan promised geet he will punish the criminal even though if it is his brother
n give justice to the girl
he is going 2 search geets hb n punish him..
precap interesting..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
feeling bad for geet
nice update
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
😆😆Phewww I finally read ur updates . As usual they were awesome Anu
Part 75👏
Omg geet ki beti to Maan. PE Chali gayi 😆she is so stubborn but somewhere I think situation made her this . Becozzz of that monster😡 vicky Arpitha had to grow fast but I know she is a coconut though she portrays herself as tough and rude girl but somewhere inside a bubbly girl is hidden whom she doesn't want to be out . Prashant ki tho full band Bajayi Arpitha ne but yaar her fears are justified .a little girl who sees her mother being abused by her own father, must have lost the capability to trust people around her.😡fortunately madam shaadi Karen ke liye maan gayi.😃 So true bis ones have to take all responsibility ( like my younger sister does something and I get caught always 😭)
Her condition reminded me of contract marriage (agar Asia kiya to main Phirr shaadi karoongi warna BHul mayo mujhe 😆)
Geet ki chutki ne to trouble hi nahi jiya apne Dulhe ko khud le aayi 😆
Part 76👏
Again wonderful
Thank god geet is alright
Prashant is so true geet's past never leaves her yaar it comes infront of her in some way or the other( vicky ko hell me send karooo plzzz it's a req)😆
Haha ne evil yes ab vicky ko finally Nani nana MA pa ( Joh Bhi hai us gadhe ke pass)sab ki yaad dillayga Maan ( ab to god Bhi use Danav Maan se bacha nahi sakte ) 😆
"Meri geet " good Maan u r on track
Precap is interesting
Waiting waiting waiting
Thank u for the pm 😃
Love aanya
😃

Edited by aanya84 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75



wonderful update...

Maan ko Geet ne sahi raasta dikha diya...

hope Maan will get to know his mother and Naintara's real face...they both have planned so much against Maan...his mother even never let him marry anybody...waise dekha jaaye to humare liye achcha hua...if he would have been already married then how can we dream of his wedding with Geet...

but his mother should be exposed in front of him so that he will now realize that they always played with him...and then he will clearly think about what he wants from his life...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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MGFF- ESSENCE OF LOVE-THD-6/part-77/29/6/-2013





Part:- 77
Pammi:-Ye Maan ko kya hogaya? ph. kyu nahi utha rahi ho?kaha hai wo ab tak ghar kyu nahi aaya? Inhe kya hogaya ab tak wo wahi kiya jo maine kaha. Phire kya hau wo meri baath kyu nahi maanrahe? Vicky ko abhi tak police custody se baahar nahi nikala. Kya karu mai?
Naina:- Mammiji;,.. ye sab us geet ki wajase horaha hai. Mai
aapko pehlehi bathayi ki maan ji ki bartav ke baare me ,lekin aap meri nahi sunliya. Ab aaphi dekhna uski anjaam? ye jarur us manhoose aurat ki waja se horaha hai, mammiji ab tho hume kuch karnahi padega warna maanji humari haath se nikal jayenge.
Pammi:- Naina jo hoga wom sirf aur sirf meri marzi se hi hoga. Maan mera baath kabhi nahi talega,chahe wo, koun,.. haa,.. geet kounsi chaal chalayega, magar baazi tho merahi hoga. Dekho tum kya hoga, Maan ko aanedo , mai kaise isse meri baath manwalethi hu, tum dekhna.
They stopped talking hearing foot steps. Maan entered and started to go straight to his room without giving any head to pammi.
Pammi:- Maan beta,. kaha hai aap? mai kab se aapki ph. try karrahihu. aap ph. switch off kyu rakha?aur itni der tak kaha hai aap?
Maan:- Maa,.. mai bahut thag gaya hu, hum kal baath karlenge.
Pammi:- lekin beta tum abhi tak vicky ko kyu nahi chudwaya custody se?
Maan:- Maa,.. mai ne kaha hum kal baath karenge.
Pammi:- Nahi,.. Maan aap ko mera sawaal ka jawaab denahi hoga, waha mera beta police custody me hai, aur tum araam karneka soch rahi ho? tumhe tumhari bhai ka jarasabhi phikar nahi?
Thats it ,...with that his patience broked and he blasted on her.
Maan:- haa,.. wo mera bhai hai, isliye aaj mera sir sharam se chuk rahe hai inki waja se. Kya kaha aapne mjhe phikar nahi hai? kyu phikar honachahiye mujhe? Aapko malum hai,aapki beta kitna badipaap kiya hai? kitna badi crime kiya hai?wo ek ladki ki zindagi barbaad kiya . Pata hai uski umar kya hai? 17 saalki,.. aapki pothi, dev ki beti,.. minnu ka umar hai uska. Isa maasoom ladki ke saath unhone jo kiya wo sabya samaaj aapni sir chukna padtha hai. Mera sir sharm se chuk rahahai. Jaanthe ho aap? Aap bhi ek aurat haina? aapko samaj me ana chahiye, ek aurat ko uski izzat kya maine rakhthe hai. wo apni jaan de sakthi hai ,lekin izzat nahi khona chahthi hai. Uski izzat cheen liya aapki beta. Pata hai maa, wo kis haalat me hai? jao,jake dekho use, moth se ladrahe hai wo?Kya beethe ga unki maa,baap per. kitne saare sapne dekha hoga use leke wo? Kya aap isa hi mujrim ko chodeneko kahegi agar wo aapki pothke saath isa kiya tho?bathayiye maa, wo bhi kisi maa ki beti hai.kisi nani ki pothi hai. Sraap lagegi maa hume iska. Har baar aap khurana khaandan ki baare me baath karthe ho na, khandan per bahut naaz hai na aapko, per kyu nahi sutharaya aapki beta ko? Itna khudgarz kaise bangaya aap?Kya insaaf dilayenge aap us ladki ko? pehle aap ye bathayiye, baad me sochunga vicky ko chudwaaneka. bathayiye? chup kyu aap? bathayiye?jawaab nahi hai aapke pass. jawaab deneki pehle aap ek aurat hona padega, ek aurat bankar us ladki ki sthaan per khada hoke sochiye? kya lagtha hai aapko? kya kahraha hai aapki dil?mujrim ko chode neka kahraha hai?Agar isa sadma aapki pothi ke saath hothi tho, kyaa isa hi kuch paise leke mujrim ko chodthe aap?Kyu? chup kyu aap? bathayiye?jawaab hai aap ka pass?
Ab mera faisla suniye,.. Mai vicky ko kabhi nahi jail se chudwaunga, wo jail mehi baaki din bithana hoga,yahihai uski saja, uski paap keliye mai use kabhi nahi maaf karsaktha hu. kayi baar,.. kayi baar maine iski galathionko nazar andaz kiya,use police custody se chudwaliya, per is baar nahi, kyuniki ye galathi nahi hai ye paap hai bada crime hai jiskeliye maafi nahi milegi .Mai use jail se kabhi nahi chuwaunga, use uski paap keliye saja bhugathna hoga.wo jail me hi rahna hoga, jobhi saja mile use bhugatna hoga.Ab is baath per koi mujhe se behaz nahi karega,its final. mai aur kuch nahi sunna chahtha hu.
With that he went to his room and locked his door.
Pammi stood numb, shocked by maans lecture, she never in her dreams thought that maan can reject her like this. Shock is a small word to explain her state of mind. She stood like a statue trying to understand each and every word of Maan.
Naina:- Shooked pammi by her shoulders calling her,..mammiji,..
she looked at her confused and dazzled state, no worlds in her mouth. Naina tried to get back her to her original state. She sat in the couch in sulked state.
Naina tried to console her by saying that we will find a solution to this pblm and again blaming geet for this.
Pammi:- I never thought that Maan will reject me like this. Wat happened to him? Is this all effect of that geet?Viky ko mai kaise bahaar laungi?Kya hoga ab?Itna badlawaa maan me kaise aagaya?Kha galat ki maine?Maan such me mera haath se nikalrahe hai?Naina mai ye kabhi nahi socha isa ? Maan kitna kuch sunaya mujhe?kya hua ise? pehle humeha wo wahi kiya jo maine kaha. per an kya hua maan ko? ye sab such me us geet ki waja se horaha hai? Naina hume pata lagana hoga, agar ye sab uski waja se hai tho hume jaldi kuch karna hoga, is filth ko maan se durr karna hoga, agar jarurat padi tho use is dunia se ise hata na hoga. Jaldi pata lagao. Mai aur intezaar nahi karungi. Mujhe aur tarika bhi dhundna hoga vicky ko bahar lane keliye.

Maan laid on bed after getting fresh, neend tho uski bahut durr kibaath hai, kyunki use baar baar geet ki yaad araha hai, uski pain ful past Maan ko bahut takleef de raha hai."kitna kuch hua meri geet ke saath, wo kaisa saha hoga ye sab? bahut najook, naram dil ki hai wo, kitna takleef hua hoga use?kitna dard hua hoga use us wakth?bahut kuch saha hoga tumhe geet? ab aur nahi geet,.. mai aga ya hu geet, mai tumhe aur takleef me nahi dekh sahtha, mai hu geet tumhare saath, mai tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga geet,.. mai tumhe humesha khush rakhunga geet. mai tumhe apni seene pe laga ke puri zindagi bithaunga geet. ek pal keliye bhi tumhe nahi chodunga geet,.. kisi ki chaya bhi tum per nahi padne dunga. mai tumhe is dunia ki saari khushia dedunga geet mai tumhe kahi durr leke jaunga geet ,waha sirf hum donohi rahthe hai geet.mai tunhari saath puri zindagi bithana chahthahu . tumhari haath thaam kar puri zindagi chalna chahtha hu . tumhe meri baahonki darmiya se kahi nahi hilna dunga. tum meri zindagi me ek bahaar jaisa
aagayi geet, aur mai is bahaar ko kahi nahi janedunga.tumhe mai meri palkon me bithaunga geet kabhi tumhe meri nigahonse dur jane nahi dunga.mai mujhe tumhari ankhome dekhna chahtha hu, tumhari ankhome khona chahtha hu geet.
And thinking like this he closed his eyes to dream about her.
song fr. film' Anwar"." Ankh teri ,, itni hassi,.. ke inke aashik mai ban gaya hu, mujhe ko basale in me tu"

[ meri sab se badi fav song, i want to discribe , but poor in discription so please imagine at ur imagining power r koi suggestions r if any body can discribe welcome to ur co-operation ]
Thank u...link for the song..
Precap:-'Tumhari himmat kaise hue geet ke baare me isa kuch anaptionaap bolneka"
Edited by anuradha.nandam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

omg awesome update anu 👏

loved the way maan blasted that witch pammi 😡
still she doesn't want to mend her ways I hate her and also her good for nothing son 😡
chii how can he stoop so low to harass a 17 year old girl!!!!!!!😡😲
u know what why cant just god punish these people hope maan does something
and naintara god plsss send her the mental asylum😆 not to forget to send her dear mother in law and off course her sweety hubby tooo!!!!!!!😡
loved maan retrospection on his feeling 😳(I think geet needs this too but she is still lost in the darkness of her past )
hope geet recognizes her angel cum life partner soon😉(I know o am going tooo far but cant help it yaar )
I just pray they are together soon
plsss teach some lessen to "the badmash company "😡
they desperately need this'
keep writing
love aanya 😃
p.s I am commenting on 78 and 79 part tooo
Edited by aanya84 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
nice part..
maan blasted on his mother
pammi is shocked to c a changed maan
nt adding fuel..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the update
maan blasted on pammi...n she is shocked to see maan's outburst...
loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dear i suggest u give the convos in english if u r fluent in that if not then give it in pure hindi yeh mixed hindi thodi ajeeb lagti hai padne mein dont take it as offended but do give it in english or hindi..just i wanted to suggest my opinion dear..& yeah loved how maan shouted on pammi & decided to get married to geet..let's see geet is gonna take maan's love as love or pity!😉

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