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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
poor geet
very painful past
nice update
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Maan ne kya dhana dhan lecture diya Pammi ko...

naintara is so cunning...she is filling Pammi's ears against Maan and Geet...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...
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MGFF- ESSENCE OF LOVE-THD-6/part-78/30/06/2013





Part:- 78
Two days passed.
Geet is at home taking rest. She is thinking about Maan and badly wanting to talk to him. He didnt come to her house in these two days as he is busy in arranging things,but he phoned to prasant to enquire about her health.
Maan went and talked to the minister regarding the case and made him to agree to marry that girl to his son Jatin, who is also a second mujrim. He made arrangements to transfer the property which was on vickys name to the girl. He went and met that girls parents and requested them to this marriage. They were really happy that their daughters life will be settled by this marriage. He came to that boy "Jatin" and asked him to marry that girl.But he refused to do that, saying why should i , why not ur brother? Maan said my brother is a married and had children,and i am not going to leave him he will be jailed if u not agree to this u, also will be jailed for life long , u choose ur self.
Maan asked the I.g. of police to give these two their third degree treatment until he agrees for this marriage and give him the councelling that he has to behave like a good husband also. if not he will be treated again like that.I.g. obeyed his orders and asked about vicky, let him be in jail ,he said and moved out.
Next the important and most difficult task is ahead. That is the girl. The girls condition is very critical. She has become a mental patient. She lost all her confidence and fearing for everything. She dont want to talk to anybody, she dont allow any body near her. She became a psycho patient. Fully afraid of every thing. Maan talked to dr. They suggested him to psychiatric treatement and councillings to her. It is a complicated case and needs time. Needs a perfect councillor to give councillings to her. Maan take her to the psychiatrist and admitted her in clinic.
Maan came to geets house, all tired and worn out. Geet felt bad seeing his condition. Her voice chocked to talk to him, how much pain he beared, kitna pareshaan hua hoga inhe?
Maan:- how r you?how is ur b.p.?
Geet:- mai thik hu, per aap ko kya hua? looking so much tired and worn out? thik se khaya, peeya nahi?
Maan:- umm,.. do din se bahut busy hu, aapse waada kiya thana, sab kuch thik karneka, bus uski tayaari me hu.
Mai ne us minister se baath karke use manaliya ki uski beta ki shaadi us ladki ke saath karwaane ka.Vicky ka saari property which i decided to give him mai ne wo saari ab us ladki naam pe transfer kiya. Vicky jail me hi rahega, use mai nahi chudwaunga, kabhi nahi, use ye saja bhugatnahi padega.Aur us ladki baari hai, mujhe aapki jarurat hai use solve karne me.
Geet looked at him in awe.and said
Geet:_ sirf shaadi karke kya hotha maanji;,.. agar wo dilse use apna nahi banayatho, shaadi karke kya fhayidaa?Aur property se hum kuch nahi bharpaayenge, jo usne khodiya.
Maan:- haa,.. geet aap thik kaha, per jo kuch hua use hum waapas nahi dilasakthe geet per use kuch tho karna padegana, this loss ko bharneka. mai ye karna chahtha hu. Aur us ladki ka condition bahut naajuk bangaya hai. use psychiatric ki jarurat hai, mai ne use clinic mai join kiya. per mai jaantha hu tum use accha councelling de sakthi ho. tho mai chahtha hu ki aap use milkar use baath kariye, use zindagi per viswaas dilayiye, confidance digiye ki wo doshi nahi hai. Mai jaantha hu geet aap ye kaam karsakthe hai. please geet aap meri help karogena?
Geet:- Agar aap ko mujhe per itna viswaas ho tho, ki mai ye kaam kar sakthi hu, tho mai jarur karthi hu maanji. mai us ladki se milungi aur use baath karungi.
Maan:- thank.u. geet and he now relaxed. geet went inside and bring some snacks and juice to hm .He ate calmly,he looked at juice and asked her"juice'?
Geet:- Is wakth aapki juice ki jarurat hai, naahi b.c. ka aap bahut week lagrahiho, do din se thik se khaya, peeya hoga?
Maan:- haa,.. geet ab mai thik hu, completely relaxed hu. kya hum chalthe us ladki ke pass? Geet:- haa,. mai ready hoke aathi hu.
With that geet started to meet that girl along with maan. That girl became a psychic patient, she is fearing for every thing,not allowing anybody near her especially fr, males she shouting and screamin and behaving wildly seeing them .She behaved like that by seing maan ,so maan staid back out of her room and geet went inside consoling her talking to her nicely like her mother. she pampered her like her mother .At great afford she adjusted to geets presence near her. Geet showed her pure love and care towards her. With great vaffort geet some how managed to bring her little bit normal condition dr. said it takes about 6 months to her complete recovery ,so maan and geet first married them and asked that jatin to help in the treatment.Every day maan and geet went to that girl ,geet giving her counceling maan always had an eye on jatin how he is taking care of his wife Maan thanked geet for her advise and help.
Here Pammi got hell anger fr. maans behaviour, but she could not do any thing against maan. She tried in every possible way to bring vicky but invain in all attempts.
Now she was thinking how to get Maan back to her cluches. She now agreed to Nainatara and ready to do anything to send geet out.
She told naina" hume is geet ko kuch karna hi hoga, ise humari raasthonse hatana ho"
So Naina planned to send geet fr, the school first then fr. delhi.She went to geets school and met with pricipal and gave complaint against geet saying she is trying to traap rich people and their children. she taking them to her house and going to their houses etc...etc..all crap to her and if she will not restigate her she will withdraw rahuls admission fr. the school. The pricipal listened her patiently and told her calmly "ur the first person complaining against geet mam during these long yrs of her service. U know for whom ur talking about? Geet is working here almost fr,the begining of the school.and she gave her complete self to develop the school She is the main contribution of this school development she did many things to the all round development of children. She teaches with her full heart, not to the job sake. Children r her passion. She loves them very much and children r also loves her.So many of parents comes to school and praises her for her comitment and affort towards their children. U r the first one who gave complaint against her, i dont know wat is ur problem, but i am sorry we will not bend to ur demands. not only rahul like that so many rich peoples children r studying here. We wont bother if u withdraw ur admition fr, our school any way that is rahuls parents decision who r u to take decission?U please go away, she showed the door. Naina tapped her foot on floor and went away. The staff in the room ,who listened the whole topic scold naina by saying ,how dare u to complain on geet mam,and they accused her for that. Principal said them to be quite and ordered them to not to tell this to geet.
Then pricipal made a call to Maan.
Maan:- hellow,...
Prin:- hellow sir, this is rahuls school principal.
Maan:- ho;,,. kahiye mam kaise phone kiya? kuch kaam tha?
Prin:- explained everything to him about nainas arrival and her demand to send geet out of school.
Sir, we dont know wat is her pblm, but we r not ready to loose geet jaisa accha teacher. We can not find like her any where. She gave her 100% to this school. She is the main contribution to this school development. Her afforts made our school this famous for whole delhi. We wont loose her, we need her in our school. Children likes her very much She loves them ,she is very hard working. Sir, i want to clarify this to u before some one says u something else.
Maan:- U r right madam and thanks .u for informing me . I will look into the matter. U please dont tell this to geet madam and dont send her out of ur school.Its my humble request.
Prin:- no,.. sir..we dont want to loose her , we dont say anything to her. thank.u.sir.
Maan:- thank.u. and he kept the pho.
He looked at Arjun, whois looking understandingly.
Maan called naina to his cabin. she came saying maanji ;,,aap ne hume bulaya?
Maan:- tum geet ke school gayithi? complaint likhwaane?"
Naina:- ji,.. mai chahthiki,...
Maan:- tum kya chahthithi ye mai acchi tarah jaantha hu. ab tum jaano gi ki wo kabhi nahi hoga jaisa tum chahthi ho.
" Aur tumhari himmat kaise huiyi ki geet ke baare me kuch anaaptionaap bolneka?Kya bigada geet ne tumhara?tum aapni neeche harkathonse nahi hataogi tho pascthavogi.
Ab tak mai tumhe nazar andaaz kiya ab aur nahi,.. Tum geet se takrane se pehle ye sochogi ki tum Maan Singh Khura se takra rahi ho?mai acchi tarah se jaanthi hu ki tum ek girthi hue aurat ho per mai tumhe isliye choda ki tum mera bhai ka patni ho. Agar phir se tum geet ko dukh pahuncha tho mai bhul jaaunga ki tum mera bhai ki patni ho. Tum apni aukat dekh kar raho. Apni hadme raho warna iska anzaam kya hoga wo mai nahi batha saktha.jab tak mai hu, geet ke saath tum kya,.. saakhsaath bhagwaan bhi kuch nahi kar sakthe.samjhe tum? Ab jao yaha se, he showed her the door. she felt insult by maans words before Arjun and Aadi and Prasant[ who entered the cabin just now]
Prasant:- sir,.. wat happened kya kiya in hoine maa ke saath? he feared sensing something wrong.
Aarjun explained him
Prasant:- lekin sir,ye sab kyu kiya sir, maa ne kya bigada ise?Arjun:-nahi,.. nahi,.. prasant Di ne kuch nahi kiya lekin ye log yahi samaj raha hai ki mam ki waje se hi jiju vicky ko jail bhijwaya.
Prasant:-lekin maa ne kuch galat nahi kaha, wo jo bhi kaha wo such hai
Maan:- haa,,.prasant geet kabhi galat nahi kahegi, aur tum chintha math karo, mai hu na mai geet ko kuch hone nahi dunga.
Arjun:- haa,.. prasant,tum chintha math karo hum sab haina aur tum di ko kuch math kahna
Prasant:- ji,.. sir...[ but he is fearing inside]


Precap:- " mera bhai ke baare me kuch math kahna, ye mai bilkul bardaash nahi karunga"

[guys here i gave the solution according to my opinion u may have better idea than me , i think i did well this is my personal solution hope u like it]
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Lovely dear solution toh achcha tha lekin kuch log kya karte haina ki woh log shaadi toh karte hai aise ladki se apne gunaahon ko chupaane ke liye lekin yeh bhi karte hai ki woh ghut ghut kar mare ander hi ander...they give her torture to the girl to die herself or suicide herself..if she's the strong girl then she will stand against them or else she'll kill herself notable to tolerate their tortures but loved ur solution too dear!Loved how maan did to that girl & geet helped her.This naina never gonna change & pammi also..let's see what happens next!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update dear
poor her
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update
nice solution bt kahi shadi k baad usse torture na kare

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Posted: 12 years ago
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ab to update ho chuka...shaadi ho chuki hai Jatin and uss ladki ki...but I think pehle uss ladki ke theek hone ke baad usse pooch kar decision lete to theek tha...shaadi is not any solution from my POV...I think this is just insult of a girl to get her married to same man who is so low life...she deserve much better than that ba****ds...Maan transfer property in her name that is best then treatment of her psychic problem is very good then after she get her senses back then ask her what she wants...may be she may have wanted to do something for girls like her...so Maan-Geet could have helped her in that then in some course of time she could have met a nice person and get marry according to her own choice...

abhi yeh kiya jaa sakta hai...that after girl getting her senses back she will divorce him...and then open rehabilitation center for girls victims of abuse from the money she get from Vicky's property...

agar nahin to abhi koi baat nahin hai...u just concentrate on Maan-Geet story...as now already 78 parts are over I want to see Maan-Geet getting close...

Naina went to school to make Geet rusticated...kya cheap plan hai...iss cheapness ke saath woh Maan ko kabze mein karne ke sapne dekh rahi hai...she didn't understand that if school rusticate Geet then Maan will surely come to know the reason and person who is behind this...and tab kya hota isska...but Maan did good by giving her threat...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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MGFF- ESSENCE OF LOVE-THD-6/part-79/1/07/2013




Part:-79
Nainatara came to home with rage and feeling insulted by Maans lecture.She came inside her room and thowed her bag some where in room in anger. It fell on Dev, who was there in the room.
Dev:-Nainatara;,..dekho pehle kuch phanknese. Aur kya hua tum bahut hasrahiho? he mocked at her.
Naina:- Aapko majaak sujraheho? yaha tumhari bhai ne mujhe itna insult kiya aur aapko hasi araha hai?
Dev:- Agar bhai ne tumhe kuch sunadiyatho , jarur tumhe kuch kiya hoga.
Naina:_ haa,.. haa,.. ab aap hi mujhe sunayiye. ki mai hi kuch galat kiya. waha tumhari bhai ne us geet ki deewaana banraha hai,aur aapko apni hi patni pe hasi araha hai.
Dev:_ snapped at her, shouting mere" bhai ke baare me kuch math kahna,mai ye bilkl bardash nahi karunga".
Naina:- wah,..wah,.. bada pyaar araha hai aapki bhai per, kabse?
Dev:- pyaar tho hamesha se hai, tara,.. bus use jatana mujhe nahi aathi.
Naina:- kyu itna pyaar araha hai us per? kya kiya unhone aapkeliye? kam se kam m.d. tak nahi banaya usne aapko.
Dev:- mujhe nahi tho tumhe banaya na, tum tho khush hona chahiye, ki tum jo chaha wahi hua.
Naina:- mai kya chahthi hu wo aap chodiye , pehle ye bathayiye aaj aap is wakth ghar me kaise?
Dev:- kyu mai ghar nahi aasaktha? ye mera bhi ghar hai.
Naina:-Ghar, whar,.. kuch nahi bachega ab tumhara bhai hume kuch nahi denewaala , jaldihume is ghar se baahar nikalenge vicky ki tarah, uski property us parayaladki ki naam kardiya tumhara bhai, hume bhi isa hi hoga.
Dev:- kya galat kiya bhaine? vicky jo ne kiya uski tho yahi saja milnehi chahiye.
Naina:- Dev,.. aap..? aap..? ye kahrahi ho? aap? aap bhi isa kiya itni saalonse aapbhi ek womaniser haina?. tum aur vicky me kya pharak hai?
Dev:- naina, haa,.. mai ek womaniser hu. bahut saare aurat ko maine use kiya , lekin mai kabhi ek maasoom ladki ki zindagi barbaad nahi ki, wo bhi 17 saal ki. jo woman mera saath bithaya wo apni marzi se mere paison keliye mere saath bithaya. aur maine use kiya. lekin vicky ne ek maasoom ladki ko abuse kiya, uski zindagi barbaad ki, wo bhi 17 saal ka,.. mai bhi ek 17 saal ki beti ki baap hu minnu,.. ye mai kabhi nahi bardaash karunga ki koi maasoom bacche ki zindagi barbaad kare. bhai ne jo kiya wo bilkul sahi hai, uski property us ladki ko deke bhai ne us ladki ki sraap se hume bachaya. Aaj tak jo hua so, hua mai ayinda kabhi isa behave nahi karunga, aur mera bhai ko kuch math kahna, wo, jo kahe tum wahi karna office me.with that he went out.
Naina:- shooked her shoulders saying sabhi ko maanji sahi dikhtha hai, lekin aaj mera saath jo kiya mai uski badla loongi, aur us geet ko kabhi nahi chodungi mai, pehle mammiji se baath karunga, us geet ko kya karna hai? and she went to pammi, explained her every thing.
Pammi:- so Maan use chodene ki tayaar nahi hai, wo us geet ki baare me itna sochraha hai tho humebhi kuch karna pada.
Naina:- kya karthe hai maa aap?
Pammi:- wahi,.. kuch dino pehle mai kya socha wahi,.. sameera ko bulaneko.
Naina:-aap phirse maan ji ke shaadi us sameera se karwaane ki soche rahe ho?
Pammi:-Agar maan shaadi karna chahthe ho, wo us geet se nahi, sameera se karna hoga,wo mera bhai ki beti hai,.aur wo kare jo hum kahe.
Naina s.t. ye phirse. ye sameera baare me soch rahi hai. Agar wo ayege tho mera plan kya hoga?Magar maa,.. jo socherahi hai , isa hosaktha hai asalme? itni dinose saath saath rah kar mai nahi karpaayi, wo sameera karsakthe? mujhe nahi lagtha isa ho saktha hai? phir kyu mai mana kardu? thinking that she said o.k. to pammi, mammiji jo aap chahe wahi kare.

Next morning Sameera came to mansion.
Sameera:- hai;,,.buaji;,.. kaise aap?
Pammi:- mai thik hu, tum kaise ho?aur kya karthehi aaj kal
Sameera;-bus, yuhi,.. aur abtho aapki bahu bannewali ho tho ,abse aapki seva me busy ho jaungi.
Pammi:-pehle tum maan ko samhalna hoga aur use tumhari saath shaadi karneka manaliye.phir ye sab sochenge .
Sameera mai nahi jaanthi tum kya karoge bus kisibhi tarah maan ko apni jaal me phasao,aur dekhna mai kitna khush hojaunga tum aur kuch karneki jarurat nahi . Bus iskeliye tum kisi bhi had paar karnahoga, mujhe manjoor hai. Tumhe us geet se Maan ko dur karna hoga. kisibhi tarah wo tumhe pasand karne ka plan karo aur use shaadi karlo. samjhe?
Sameera:- maa,.. aap chintha math kijiye mai maan ko jarur meri saath shaadi keliye manaungi aur dekhna mai us geet ko bhi maan se dur karthi hu. maan ko apna neka mai kuch bhi karneka tayaar hu.
Pammi:- bhesh;,.. yahi tho chahtha hu mai. maan aneka wakth araha hai tum tayaar rahna.
Sameera:- ji;,.. maa.
Maan came at 9'o'clock fr. geets house having his dinner at her place. Its almost his daily routine, he and geet went to meet that girl at 6.p.m. and spend sometime with her and again maan drops geet in her house. She prepares dinner for both meanwhile maan plays with dishu till she finishes cooking. Later they ate together with dishu always in his lap fed by him. It looks like a complete family. Maan felt like home here rather than mansion. He wants to spend more time with geet. every day he left to mansion half heartedly. Annie and Arjun used to wait for him for dinner at first but later they understand him and stopped bothering him. Pammi also tried him to stop fr. going to geets house but he didnt paid any head to it. Maan entered mansion and started to go to his room taking rahul with him.
Sameera came saying hai;,,..Maan;,.and hold his hand.
Maan:- oh;,,.sameera ,.. when u came?
He tried to release his hand fr. her hold, but she hold him tight by his shoulder and hugged him saying missing u Maan.
Maan didnt say anything and slowly releaved fr. her hold.
Maan:- why ur here? how is ur career?
Sameera:- no,.. maan it is time to settle in life yaar. no more planing of career, now only planning for marriage.
Maan:- oh;,.. then u might find a guy.
Sameera:- no need to find newly already is there for me.
Pammi:- dont want to talk directly to maan like that so she stopped sameera by saying
o.k. we can talk about that at dinning, come maan let us have dinner.
Maan:- maa,.. i have already done need to take rest with that he started to go to his room.
Sameera:- thats very bad maan,. i am waiting for u and u have completed it atleast give company to me.
Maan:_ no sameera,.. really tired next time and he went away.
Sameerlooked angry.
Pammi:_ dekha sameera ye jarur us geet ki ghar me hi dinner kiya hoga, isliye mai batharahi thi ki tum use jaise bhi tarah tumhari taraf lana hoga.
Naina:_ its not that easy mammiji,. sameera ko jyaada mehnath karna padegi, she mocked at her.
Sameera:_ mai kya karthi hu tum dekhthe rahna with that she left to his room with some snacks and milk with her.
She go inside maans room without knocking the door. Maan is changing his dress to his night suit she came inside and kept the plate on the table. He looked to that side by the sound, sameera
looked at his body fully toned and curved muscles and abs, till this age he is looking smoking hot with his physic, sameera gulped her saliva seeing him half nacked. She started to moove close to him
Maan:- sameera knock the door before enter the room
SAmeera:- kyu? bina knock karke ander aneka permission hai mujhe. mai koi paraya nahi hu mai aapki honewaali,...
she wanted to tell something coming very close to him and keeping her hand on his abs and touching them in sexy manner and proceeding her hand to down
Maan:_ snapped her hand and moved back and said, mai tumhe permission nahi diya, tum ab jao bahar mujhe kaam hai.
Sameera:- looked frustrated and then controlled her and again smiling in a sexy manner. said, pehle tum ye naastha karo phir mai jaungi.
Maan:- maine kaha na ?mai dinner karliya ab mijhe kuch nahi chahiye, tum ye sab leke jao.
Sameera:- at least ye milk tho pio kitna pyaar se laya hu mai tumhare liye. She kept the glass near his mouth.
Maan:- thrown it a side and said, mujhe kuch nahi chahiye tum jao,..abhi;,..he shouted at her.
Sameera tapped her foot on floor in frustration and left the room Naina who, was watching all this fr, the window secretly smiled in herself. mujhe pata hai sameera tum kabhi nahi maan ko haazil karsakthe. ab mujhe chintha karneki koi baath nahi hai ,she left fr, there.

Precap:- "Agar tumhe kuch hojatha tho mai , zinda..."


Edited by anuradha.nandam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Uf yeh sameera kuch zyada hi comfortable honeki koshish kar rahi thi maan ke saath par nahin!😡😉 par maan ne sahi jawaab diya!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice parts
maan did justice
geet helping him
loved school part
when all stood by geet
sam..arghh.maan will insult her..for her deeds

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