MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd-1/part-1/pg no.3/7-04-20

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😲BEFORE I START THE PARTS OF THE STORY I WANT TO GIVE THE DETAILS OF THE TOUR PROGRAMME IN WHICH BOTH Geet and Maan travel.

The tour includes these places :- starts from Delhi 'katra-vaishno Devi 'Sreenagar-Gulmarg- sreenagar-Haridwaar- Rishikesh 'Kadernath- Badrinath-Haridwaar- Delhi ' the tour ends

Part:-1

Delhi-evening 3"o"clock karolbagh

Two busses have been started on tour to katra vaishno devi temple

In one bus Geet is travelling.

Maan is also travelling in another bus as pilgrim as he wanted to buy the travelling comp.which is owned by his friend who offered him partnership .As maan is new in this field as a pakka bussinessman he wanted to know the pros and corns, profit and loss and the problems has to face personally.

Geet alighted the bus and find her seat and settled in it after checking her luggage.The bus started to katra. The tour guide Abhishek aligted the bus and introduced himself through a mike.He also explained the total tour programme to the tourists.Then he asked them to introduce themselves .Now it's the turn of Geet . As bacically a shy type and the problems and the pain faced in her life geet became more reserved .She wondered what to tell about herself after some hesitance she took the mike and told in meek voice that her name is Geet handa working in DPS as a senior teacher and fr. delhi.Has 2 daughters got married and living in delhi it self. No one asked about her husband she also didn't tell.After the introduction part guide wish them a happy journey and enjoy the trip.

It was a overnight journey to katra fr. delhi. At early morning the two buses reached katra and all have boarded in a hotel. After getting ready and b.f. all set to go to maatha vaishnodevi temple which is a 14 kms distance fr katra .All the journey is to top of hill, the route is very narrow and almost steep to climb and with many turnings there is no pakka road .There will be ponyes and dolies to carry people who don't walk. It was a 4 hour ljourney on walk and 2to3 hrs by pony.[here if u want i can add more description of matha devi r i may skip it if u feel it lengthy . ican give more details abot the story of matha r u may goggle it].

After visiting devi all came back to hotel and took rest after having dinner.

[Here I want to introduce Maan and Geet to eachother]but how?

Next morning there bus set to go Sreenagar .In geets bus an old couple say some 75y are travelling.

At 9'o'cl. all ready to sreenagar geet also comig down to her bus in the lift suddenly the old woman felldown as she having high b.p. Nobody is there othe rthan geet so she took her to the hotel launge and made her to lay on couch and went to reception to check if any doctor is there. The old womans husband also stood numb about all sudden incident.As geet is attending the old woman her bus has left leaving her. The doct. came and advised the old couple not to travel so remained there. As geet was involved in this she didn't noticed that her bus left leaving her behind.She came out and found that her bus has gone . She get panic and stood numb not knowing wat to do? At that time her daughter Arpita called her and asked her where is she and what is doing? She explained the whole thing. Arpita got worried about her mother and got panicked she started crying and scolding her mother why she should always thinks about others?what should happen to her now? She was hell worried for her mothers safty and well being. Maan is standing and talking in the cell to someone noticed everything and understand that something is wrong and he came and asked her what is the plb?She explained every thing and said the bus has gone leaving her .He immediately enquired in to it and assured her not to worry and get panic there is another bus which is not yet gone in that we may go and catch her bus she sighed in relief and told arpita. Arpita asked her to give phone to maan she first hesitated and then give it to maan. Maan took the phone and told to arpita not to worry about her mother and he will look into the matter .Arpita told him that her mother is too sesncitive not able to look others pain and load all others plbs on her head and in that she hersely fall in to pblms and she requested him to take care of her. He assured her and returned the phone to geet and said'Aap ko aap ka khayal rakhna chahiyetha'. She smiled weekly.

After some time the second bus came and Maan talked to the guide the plb Abhishek obyed to take her in this bus but he told that there are no empty seats in bus but maan told him that he will give his seat to her. And the bus started to sreenagar.

Precap:-Maan shifted to Geets bus




Part 2:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3524551/mg-ff-essence-of-love-thd-1-part-2-pg-no-5-7-04-20

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update
geet is quite...
thanx for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start, geet helps other and she herself will not take care of her and her daughters love her very much and asked maan to take care of her.

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