MG FF ESSENCE OF LOVE- THREAD-4/ PART-45-59 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part:-59
Next morning, Maan got ready early for office. He today wanted to leave early as he wanted to drop rahul by himself,is bahaane se ek baar geet ko dekhsaku. one day full i missed her he thought and hurried rahul to get ready.
Pammi:- Itna jaldi kaha jaaraheho beta? aur Rahul ko kaha lekar jaaraheho?
Maan:- maa,.. mujhe thoda kaam hai aur raasthe me rahul ko unki mam ka ghar drop karne le jaarahahu.
Pammi:- roj,roj ise waha bhejna kya jarurat hai maan? ye thik nahi hoga ghar me humsab hai humare saath khelega.kya pata waha safe hai ya nahi,roj roj hum sunrahehaina,bachheko kidnaap ka baathe? ye log kuch bhi karsakthe hai kuch paison keliye and she is conti...
Maan:- stop it maa,.. aap kehna kya chahthe ho? rahul ko mai kuch honedunga? aur aap ye kya kahrahiho geet ke baare me? aap kya jaanthe hai iske baareme? mai sab kuch jaanthi hu aap kiski kahne per isa baath karrahi ho? ek baath dhyaan rakhiye maa mai jobhi kartha hu bahut soch ,samajkar kartha hu. aur kisiki kahneper nahi. mai jaantha hu kya sahi aur kya galat,kisiko dakhal andaaj karneka jaruri nahi. pammi shocked for his reply.
H e then started to geets house with rahul.Geet welcomed them inside and asked him to sit. Aap kal kyu nahi aaya hamari ghar ? asked rahul.

Maan:-hum aapko expect kiya
Geet:- ji,.. mujhe anathasram jaana tha isiliye.
Maan:- anathasram aap kabhi bhi jaasakthe hai na?
Geet:- ji,.. wo kal unka aniversary hai mai abhi tak kabhi nahi miss kardiya.
Maan:- thik, hai mai chaltha hu. He started to leave,
Geet:- baithiyena, mai aapko coffee lekar aathi hu.
Maan sat in the couch,even thou he had his coffee, he dont want to miss geet ki haath ki coffee..More over he dont want to miss to observe her while she preparing coffee. he observed the burnt on her hand,not yet cured and still red.
Maan:- Aap ka burnt kaisa hai? ointment apply kiya?
Geet:- ji.. ab thik hai ointment apply kiya.
Maan:-dikhayiye mujhe.
Geet:- Arre,.. mai kahrai hu na, thik hai.
Maan forcefully took her hand and looked at it.dekhiye nahi thik hua, chaliye ab dr. ke pass jaayenge hum.
Geet:- nahi baba..nahi mai thik hu thoda wakth lagega thik honeme,ab wo jal bhi nahi hai, mujhe dard bhi nahi hai.aap chintha math kijiye thik hoja gi.
She gave him coffee,he took it and sipped it every sip enjoying to the fullest.
Maan:- suno,...
Geet:- haa,..
Maan:- aaj kya try karrahiho nasthe me?
Geet:- smiled and asked kya chahiye aapko?
Maan:-italian lasagne, aapsikhaya ye?
Geet:- haa,.. shamko wahi banaunga, agar aap aapayenge tho
Maan:- mai kaise nahi aatha agar mujhe itna accha khana milrahe ho tho?
Geet:- tho aayiye.
Maan:- cooking classes nahi jaana aaj?
Geet:- aaj classes nahi hai.
Maan:- tho thik 6 baje ,i will be here.
Geet:- kyu? aaj koi meeting nahi hai kya?
Maan:- aap hi kaha tha na, khana bilkul time per khani chahiye, isliye mai meeting postphone kiya he said looking her teasingly. geet bent her head in shy and smiling little in herself. Maans heart miss a beat looking her antics "my god" mai paagal hojaunga iski ye ada per he thought himself.
he said bye to her at great difficult, dont want to leave her.
Bye she said and came to gate to send him.
Evening 6'o'clock
Geet and rahul, dishu r playing chess. geet is teaching them how to play.
Maan entered house.
Rahul:- Mamu,.. dekhona? mam ne mujhe haraaya chess me.
Maan:- isa kaisa hosaktha hai? Maan singh khurana ka bhanje ko koi kaise hara saktha hai? mai hu na mai tumhe jitha dunga?
Geet:- tho aap jithayenge rahul ko?
Maan:- haa,.. koi shak?
Geet:- nahi.. mai isa thodi na kaha.. she moked looking at him.
Maan:- kya hua? aap College ki Champion se baath kar rahi ho?
Geet:- accha tho aap college champion the?Maan:- haa,.. koi shak hai tho khel ke dekho?
Geet:- ab tho khelnahi padega.. tho hojaye ek khel?
Maan:- sochlo, tum College ki Champion se panga le rahi ho geet?
Geet:- soch liya,aur aap nahi jaanthe, aap kisse panga le rahi ho.
Maan:_ tho suru kijiye, mera whites.
Geet:- o.k. and she took blacks.
[guys i dont know much about chess, please co-operate with me if i spell anything wrong]
Maan started with a step by moving paun.Geet also started with her another paun.With two steps maan find it that geet is a well player. Later on she is giving him tight compitition. He really feeling it difficult now, as he had not practiced it fr. long. But geet is a regular player as she teaches to students. He really taking long time to move a step. With two more steps geet took his bishup. Maan stunned by this unexpected move.
Maan:- " My god" mera bishup,he exclaimed.
Geet:-moved it infront of his eyes teasing him ' Chaliye Championji aapka bishup tho gaya"
Maan gritting his teeth told "Geet". his phone rings. he took it out to talk.its fr. Arjun.
Arjun:-jiju; aap kaha hai? meeting ka time ho raha hai? kab araha hai aap?
maan:- Arjun; tum aur prasant held the meeting mai nahi asaktha.
Arjun:- nahi asaktha? per kyu? kya hua aapko?kaha hai aap?
but maan disconnected it and swicthed off it.
Geet came with his tiffin;-Chaliye Championji, naastha kijiye sochne keliye thoda energy chahtha haina?
Maan looked at her in the way nothing will be done with her.
Geet:- khayiyena,and he started to eat and playing. In her 8th step she aimed at his horse. his full concentration was now on horse to save it, in that he made a wrong move and she took his minister.
Maan:-' Mera Minister" he exclaimed and tried to snatch it fr. her hands. She kept it in her fist and kept her hand back of her. He leaned on her to pull her hand to take his minister. In that he came very close to her. Her closeness now giving all goosebumps to him. He felt he is losing himself.
Geet is laughing loudly teasing him and not giving any chance to pull her hand. H e lost himself in her laughter. He felt it as a music. a pleasant music.He is seeing her like that for the first time,khulke hasna. He felt a diffrent pleasure in his heart. He wanted to see more and more her lke that.
[Guys u can imagine here" MAAHI' moment. me poor in explanation]
He wanted to move more close to her. he wanted to hold her in his arms and hugg her to himself.
Geet lauged loudly teasing him, isa nahi karthe championji. khel tho rule ki hissab se khelna hoga.Isa nahi kheech the,aapko apki minister per dhyaan rakhna chahiye
Maan:-controlled himself and said ur aimimg at my horsena, so only i concentrated on on my horse,but u took my minister. it is cheating.
Geet:-' Everything is right in war and love"u have to concentrarte on all of ur pauns.
PRECAP:-Maanlijiye; Maanji, aap Haargaya.




Edited by anuradha.nandam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
loved both the parts..
maan had his tummy full
maan played with kids
n his family is astonished hearing it.
ani craving 4 girl child..
hate the both thinking about geet so low
maan again in geets house playing chess..
loved their nok jokes..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey can u post links to ur previous threads? I
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
part 53-59
awesome update
maan realized he is in love
grrr pammi n nt humesha ulta sidha bolte hai...
loved the updates...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Loved all these parts...loved how maan was getting very comfortable with geet and missing her a lot when he does not see her and his eagerness to be with her every sec of the day...poor maan he has it bad doesn't he/

what about geet now??? does she feel anything for maan at all?? or is she scared that she is not allowed to display such care and affection for another man??

wonder what is going to happen and especially with naina and pammi on their backs...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am so sorry for not commenting anu(can I call u that).read all the parts from 45 -59 loved them .aww maaneet are coming closer these days😳 .arghh I just hate badmash company😡 (naintara and pammi) how can they talk like this about a little girl disha who is such a cutie😃. I hope Maan confess his love soon . Loved Annie her character somewhat remind me of Meera in the show😃 .geet actually joined cooking classes for Maan well that's a positive sign waiting eagerly for this story to move forward 😃
Thank u for the pm
Love aanya👏

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