MGFF- ESSENCE OF LOVE-THD-5/PART-60/14-6-2013 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part:- 70
And that is the bigining of new life of Geet. Archana showed some work first at a mall as a sales girl. But then she really find it not a safe place for geet as she is beautiful and innocent. Again she tried to join her in some offices but her qualification is not sufficient to their requirement. She tried in many places but most of the places r not at all safe for geet, as this world is filled with , jackals, masked the face with males,who r always in quench , and thirst for female flesh to eat them. Archana find really it difficult to secure geet fr. this cruel, mean world. At one time she decided to keep geet at home not send her out of house, but it is not right, geet didnt agreed to it . sitting in her house , and depending complete family on Archana is not at all preferred. Manchanda is also dont like that idea, how long she will be like that she has fight, she has to learn her daughters to live in this mean world, she has to stand up on her feet. then only she can be a moral to her daughters. we should not simply sit in house fearing to the world, we should learn to give answers to the society,and the people, if we fear this society will make us more cowards,' hume use palatkar jawaab dena chahiye".
Then one day a woman in bar council of Archana, who is also owned a school is telling in the meeting that she is looking a baby sitter cum teacher to preschool classes. Then Archana reffered her geet.
She took geet to the principal of the school and recommended her for the post. The principal took interview of geet and she was fully impressed by the innocence of geet and her hard working nature,and appointed her as a pre school teacher at reasonable wage. She also permitted her 2 kids to admit them in pre school.
Fr. then Geet worked really hard in the school with her full heart. The management quite impressed by her performance. They even ready to promote her to higher classes if she get any teachers training. But geet didnt done that. T.T. They need that cirtificate as per the rules of school committee.
Then Archana suggested her to do T.T. training in evening classes. Geet got worried by this. How could I study now? i have stopped long before,she backed the idea.
But Archana said, it is not that much difficult as she is the topper of school. U may study saturday and sundays, and attend classes in the evenings after school. She insisted geet , so geet joined in T.T.
2 yrs she worked hard. At mornings get up and complete all the house hold work, cooking food, got ready her daughters to school,prepare lunch and b.f. for all the memberes, then goes to school with her daughters. And after the school fr.4,o,clock she goes to T.T. classes and return to home at 10,o,clock. Evening to night Arpitha will take of her sister. She took the responsibility of her sister fr, her mother on her small, smaal shoulders. Haa,.. yes she became second mother to Ankitha. She perfectly manages her sister gets her ready for school, make her eat food,makes her sleep, everything, as a mother to her.Like 2 yrs geet worked very hard. After getting cirtificate the manage ment made her parminent and her pay has been hiked to a higher level. Till then they lived in Archanas house.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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anu i am here only didnt u get my pm look in ur inbox i sent a reply to your pm and yes i am defo giving u a long comment 😉 .i was not able to comment becoz as a groupbie at a time i am allowed to post only 20 comments within 24 hrs and the day when i got ur pm they were not allowing me to post cooment on ur thread thats why this delay but worry not i will do compensation of this very soon
Edited by aanya84 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: anuradha.nandam

yaar those who simply hit like buttons, my humble request to commt long yaar it will give more encouragement to me, and please point out if i spell any thing irrelevent so that i may correct my self, yaar all r not perfect, haina?

anu u r an excellent writer will defo give u long comments and will always encourage u ur story truly has an extraordinary-rare essence which attracts me the most
Edited by aanya84 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😡😆 so finally i can comment .omg anu as earlier said by me u r awesome👏 and thank u for writing such wonderful story 😃
now about the update.opps updates they were terrific 👏
never in my wildest of dreams i thought that "the geet" who smiles and spread happiness all around has such bitter past attached to her life😭 . chii i hate vikram😡😡😡 and all such men who things women are just😡
a speck of dirt arghh i really wnt to kill vikram😆(vikram tu jaha bhi ajj main tujhe nahi chodungi😡) .how can a father be so cruel with his own children .i thnk vikram seriously needed HELP!!!!!! (somebody call a doc plsss)that time .i seriously hate such men who think they have this stupid good for nothing brithright to rule over women😡 and treat them acc to their wish how ironic is this these poor souls doesnt realise that the one who gave them birth was a girl too .i pity these men. though they have brains but they are used less by them😆 .(i get very angry when i here such facts i call these incidents facts becoz they the living realities of our life😡 ),thank u anu for expressing ur thoughts via geets anger (but bechara maan phasgaya😆)
geets past was so painfull i cried so much yaar .but she gave me a wonderful message that in whatever condition u r always keep smiling .salute to such a brave lady👏 .hats off to her courage and will power .
but i really hated geet when she thought children need fathers love yes this is true but not when a father is a monster in disguise 😡😡😡😡😡
i loved archanaa yaar she is truly an angel a big hug to her🤗
aww arpitha is so cute she truly loves her sister
though geet had to struggle a lot in past but i think looking at such cute angels she must have forgotten all her triedness and worries . i wish maan was their with geet but destiny had its own plan for them and they had to meet in their buddhapa not jaawani 😆
waiting waiting and waiting 😃
thank u so much for pm
love aanya 😃
p.s -why dont u send vikram to me .ek din main agar usko uski nani yaad na dila di toh mera naam bhi aanya nahi
hope u will like this compensation
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful updates...

u see u updated in same thread in which I commented so I got this update alert...when u change ur thread then also u can update in ur thread about the link to next thread...this way we will get alert about new thread also...

Geet's past was so horrible...that 🤬 Vikram...I am shocked how can a father sell off his own daughters to red light area...I have read many times about selling wives but daughters also is horrible...but that action of his has given courage to Geet to fight for her daughters...leave that low life and come out of that hell...that is why their life is better now...

waiting for next parts...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6




wonderful updates...

u see u updated in same thread in which I commented so I got this update alert...when u change ur thread then also u can update in ur thread about the link to next thread...this way we will get alert about new thread also...

Geet's past was so horrible...that 🤬 Vikram...I am shocked how can a father sell off his own daughters to red light area...I have read many times about selling wives but daughters also is horrible...but that action of his has given courage to Geet to fight for her daughters...leave that low life and come out of that hell...that is why their life is better now...

waiting for next parts...


u can have a look i have posted the index
Edited by aanya84 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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guys here is the index for those who wish to read the full story

Essence of love

Character sketch:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3523345/essence-of-love

Part 1:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3524545/mg-ff-essence-of-love-thd-1-part-1-pg-no-3-7-04-20

Part 2:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3524551/mg-ff-essence-of-love-thd-1-part-2-pg-no-5-7-04-20

Part 3:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3524563/mg-ff-essence-of-love-thd-1-part-3-pg-no-7-7-04-20

Part4 to 6:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3526934/mgff-essence-of-love-thd-1-prpt-4-5-6-pg-6-78-8-0

Part 7:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3526979/mgff-essence-of-love-thd-1-pt-7-9-04-2013

Part8 to 14:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3526992/mgff-essence-of-love-thd-1-prts8-9

Part 15:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3526992/mgff-essence-of-love-thd-1-prts8-9?pn=2

Part16 to 20:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3543332/mg-ff-essence-of-love-tread-2-part-16pgno-18-04-2

Part 21 to 24:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3543332/mg-ff-essence-of-love-tread-2-part-16pgno-18-04-2?pn=2

Part25to28:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3543332/mg-ff-essence-of-love-tread-2-part-16pgno-18-04-2

Part29:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3543332/mg-ff-essence-of-love-tread-2-part-16pgno-18-04-2

Part30 to 44:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3597294/essence-of-love-thread-3-part-30-page-32-22-5-2013

Part45 to 59:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3603955/mg-ff-essence-of-love-thread-4-part-45-59

Part 60to till date:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3627433/mgff-essence-of-love-thd-5-part-60-14-6-2013

Edited by aanya84 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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poor geet!!
she had to face so much..
bt she proved herslf to b a fighter, surving all odds!!

as for u.. u re doin a grt job..
many i tyms i read on mobile so difficult to comment..
dont mind plz

waiting for the next updt!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 67-70
awesome updates
poor geet
truly she is a fighter...
n abt likes my net is nearly dead so like is not working properly😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Brilliant updates...thanks a lot...
Poor geet she faced so much growing up and then bringing up her daughters. Thanks to her friend archana and her dad for giving them shelter, support, and family support. That was so sweet of arpita to take care of ankita...

I seriously hate vicky and pammi and nt...really being women how can they let their son treat other girs/women like that...do they have no shame at all...

I want maan to teach them a lesson - dont care if they are his family, high time he realizes what kind of family he has

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