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Alamelu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

aah...so finally we have maan starting to feel something towards loneliness and a need for a partner in his life...awww...no one seems to care for him like a partner would...his so called mom/sinlaw are all snatchers...only his sis annie and binlaw arjun are good...and ofcourse sweeto rahul...

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Dona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

part 48-49

awesome updates

maan feeling restless...

waiting for more..

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anuradha.nandam

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part:-49

Geets monolog.

After Maan left geet felt bad about wat she told to him. She recalled wat happened and then it striked her that she actually rejected Maan singh khuranas job offer. And she spatted on him also. she raised her voice on him.Ab kya hoga?Unhe kitna bura laga hoga?

Geet:- Tumhe kya jarurat thi, itna kuch sunaneka? kahi wo bura maanjayetho?Meri kiye ki saza Prasant ki job me ho tho?Prasant kya soche ga?pehlesi maine itna kuch sunaya use, wo kaafi nahitha kya? Bhavno me behkar itna sunaya tumhe? Hey babaji; ab mai kya karu?Kaise ise sudharu? phirse use sorry bolna padega. sorry tho tab boldu, jab wo dubara yaha aajayega. wo kal ayegena?Agar nahi ayega tho kya karu?

Arpitha looked at geet who is pacing up and down talking to herself.

Arpitha:- kya hua maa aap itni pareshan kyu ho rahi hai?

Geet:-Arpi, mujhe lagtha hai ki maine galat kiya. mujhe isa baath karni nahi chahiye maanji se?

Arpitha:- nahi maa, aap koi galat nahi kiya aapne wo kaha jo aapki man me hai.

Geet:- Magar iska asar Prasant me hojaye tho?

Arpitha:- isa kuch nahi hoga maa. Maan sir bahut acchi, aur samajdaar bhi hai. Agar isa ho tho bhi koi pblm nahi hume aapki khushi ke alawa kuch nahi badkar hai.

Geet:- nahi Arpi; hume isa nahi karni chahiye, wo humareliye kitna kuch kiya. Tour me mujhe kitna accha khayaal rakha aur kal tho ankithaki case me bhi kitna help kiya geet looked worried and restless.

Prasant came inside and looked the tension on their faces asked, kya hua?

Arpitha:- explained every thing to him.

Prasant:_ yetho bahut accha huana, The Maan singh khurana khud job offer kiya maa ko? isme chitha kis baath ki?

Arpitha:- per maa ne mana kiya?

Prasant:- kyu?

Arpitha told wat geet said.

Prasant:- maa, aapne jokiya thik kiya, isme chintha karneki koi baath nahi. mai sir ko samjhaunga. aap pareshan math hojayiye.

Geet:- lekin beta,mujhe isanahi karna chahiye tha.

Prasant:- nahi, thik,kiya aapne, waise maa aap isa kya kamal ka suggestions diya sir ko?

Arpitha explained every thing to him.

Prasant:- wauaav... maa.. aapne such me kamal kardiya,hum sab hai meeting me lekin hume isa kuch nahi suja. such mai aapki ideas wonderful hai, tabhit ho sir ne bahut impress hua khud aapko job offer kiya.

Geet didnt gave any reply, she was full of remorse now.

Aakash called prasant , and prasant explained every thing to him.

Aaksh:- really bhai... maaki jawaab nahi hai. per use job accept karni chahiyena, kitna accha offertha..Aur maa deserves it.

Prasant:- nahi aakash hume is tarah unpe dabav nahi dalna chahiye. let her do wat she felt happy.

Aakash:- o.k. bhai i hope sir will understand.

Prasant:- koi pblm nahi hai aakash mai dekhlunga sab with that he kept the phone thinking how to say sorry to Maan.

Precap:-uski;,, itni himmat?

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anuradha.nandam

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part:-50

Next morning Maan wake up very late. All surprised to see that Maan is sleeping till 8'o' clock. Annie came to him and looked at him. He is sleeping like a small boy. Ye kya hogaya bhaiko? itni der tak soraha hai? But she dont want to wake him up. He woke up. The first thing after he wake up is he remembered that aaj Dishu ka birth day hai.He wanted to wish her.He called Prasant . prasant took his phone ,answered fearing wat to hear fr. him.

Prasant:- hallo,sir... sir wo sorry jo maane aapse kaha...he wanted to say some thing,but

Maan:- its o.k. prasant mai isliye phone kiya ki mai dishuko wish karna chahtha hu.

Prasant:- sure sir, mai dishu ko bulathi hu. he called dishu and told her that maan sir ka phone hai tumhare liye.

Dishu took the phone ,dost; she called him excitedly.

Maan:- hello dost;.. wish u happy birthday.

Dishu:-thank.u.dost. aap party ko arahahaina?

Maan:- umm, jarur aur enjoy ur b.d. o.k.

Dishu:- thank.u. dost.

Later in k.c.

Maan and Arjun sat in Maans cabin.

Arjun:- kya hua jiju? aap kal se kuch pareshan dikh rahe ho? kya aap such me is com. ki waje se itni pareshan ho rahahai. itna hichhichaneki kya jarurathai? aap ko pasand nahi tho hum ye deal drop karenge?

Maan:- me ye deal ki wajese pareshan nahi hu arjun, infact hum is com. lerahahai. and got all solutions for the com. loss.

Arjun:- wat? raatho,raath aapko solutions kahase mili?

kya sochahai aapne, kya mai jaansaktha hu?

Maan:- kyu nahi,.. tho sun and he told all geets ideas.

Arjun:-wah..wah..jiju aapka kaajawaab hai.tabhitho aap itnisaare business akeli handlekarsatha hai aur pichle 20 saal se The Best Business Man award jeeth rahe ho.

Maan:- ye saare ideas mera nahi hai arjun;.. kisi aur ka hai.

Arjun:- what? per kiska hai?

Maan:- Geet ka hai. prasant ki maaji.

Arjun:- what? kya ye saare suggestions unka hai? aap kab usse baath karliya jiju?

Maan:- explained everything to him and continued pata hai Arjun? pehli baar, Maan singh khurana was rejected by a woman,...as u said The great buseness manaward ka winner was himself offered her M.D. post to that tourism com. and was rejected by her.

Arjun:- ye kya hua jiju/ aap?...aap?...khud unhe jib offer ki? aur usne manakiya? uski itni himmat?

Maan:- baath himmat ki nahi hai arjun baath sincerityki hai. uski loyalty towards her school management, and mujhe ye baath ka jarasabhi bura nahi laga, bulki me khush hu, kyunki me khud chahtha hu mere emlpoyes mai isa sincerity and loyalty. per ek baath ka bura laga ki, humari com. lost annemploy like her. mai bahut khush hu uskeliye izzat aur badgaya mere dil me.

[while he is saying this a different glow and happyness on his face. Arjun observed that keenly]

Arjun:- but aap chahe tho prasant ke saath mai baath kartha hu,mai geet mam ko mananekieliye.

[ he said that observing maan very keenly]

M aan:- nahi,.. iska jarurat nahi hai. unki bache ye kabhi nahi chahthe hai wo isa kuch kare jo unke marji ki khilaaf.

Arjun tum ek kaam ker, prasant se kaho ki is deal ka papers ready karna. hum kal ye deal sign karthe hai.

Arjun:- ji;.. jiju, waise prasant abhitak nahi aaya wo 1 hr permission leliya.

Maan:- haa, i know uski beti ka b.d. hai aaj.

Prasant just came and knocked the door.

come in said maan

prasant came in and wished them.

Maan:- prasant ,tum arjun,aadhi, aaj is project me baitho deal papers ready karlo, hum kal ye deal sign karthe hai.

Prasant:- ji,.. sir..wo sir...

Maan:- kya hai prasant.

Prasant:- ji...wo..sir maaki taraf se mi sorry bolraha hu sir.

Maan:- nahi prasant, isme sorry bolneka koi baath nahi hai. shaayad geetji right kahthi hai, mai bhi hamari com. me isa sincere and loyal employes ko chahthe hai. haa,, ek bath keliye mujhe bura laga per badme mjhe samajme aaya scholaapki maa keliye kitna important hai.

Prasant:- t.u. sir. kal raath se maa bahut pareshan me thi,ki kahi aapko burana lage.

Maan:- lo,.. ab isko ek aur waja milgayi chintha karnekeliye.

all laughed. Aadhi came inside ans surprised that all r laughing

Aadi:-sir, koi joke?

Arjun said everything.

adhi:- such mai sir,.itnaaccha solutions hai sir aapne achha kiya job offer karke,per bad luck wo nahi chahthi haina?

Maan:- o.k. now aap teeno is deal ka papers prepare karlo.

thik hai sir,sir shaamko dishu ka birth day party,

M aan:- haa, mujhe yaad hai prasant.. mai aunga..

Prasant:- aur aap bhi aayiyana Arjun sir. and aadi sir.haa..haa.. jarur prasant hum jijuke saath ayenge.

Precap:- Geet inviting annie to dishu b.d. party.

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anuradha.nandam

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part:- 51

Geet and Dishu r going to school on scooty,

Dishu:- nani; kya hum Rahul bhai aur aunty ko bhi party me bulasakthe? Wo bahut acche haina?

Geet thinking for sometime, o.k.dishu mai aunty ko phone karke bulathi hu.

Later in lunch break dishu again

Geet:- hallo, kya mai anwesha mam se baath kar sakthi hu? remembered her, and geet made a call to annie.

Annie answered the call.

Annie:- hallo, who is speaking?

Annie:- haa, mai anwesha hu, aap koun hai?

Geet:- ji mai geet hu aapki beta rahul ka teacher hu.

Annie:- oh;,, my god;mam aap..? aap mujhe call karrahi ho?wat a pleasant surprise?

Really feel happy tat u remember me.

Geet:- isa nahi hai aap yaad rahtha hai mujhe.

Annie:- kahiye mam ,kaise yaad kiya aap mujhe?

Geet:- kuch nahi' aaj dishu ka b.d. hai. Hum chahthe hai ki aap, aur rahul bhi hamare party me shaamil hojaye tho accha hai. Isliye call kiya.

Annie:- pleasure is mine mam, aur rahul bhi khush hojayega. Hum definitely ayenge,kitne baje hai party?

Geet:- sham 7,o' clock. Aapko kuch aur kaam tho nahi haina?

Annie:- agar hothobhi hum kaise hamari pari ka b.d. miss karthe? Hum jarur ayenge. Mujhe bhi dishu se milneka man kartha hai.

Geet:- thik hai. Mai aapko hamari ghar ka pata message karthi hu. Mai rakhthi hu.

Annie called to Arjun.

Arjun:- haa,..Annie;..

Annie:- Arjun hum sham ko ek party me jaraha hai, mai aur rahul.

Arjun:- He is very busy in his work so he didn't give any head to annie, haa annie o.k. jaldi waapas ana. He also didn't mention that he is going to dishus b.d. party.

Here in k.c. Naintara got to know that Maan is taking the tourism com. he made necessary arrangements to install in that com.but ofsoos ki baath hai ki unmese ek hi use diye hue advice nahi hai. He didn't want to spend a single penny in publicity.She very much aspected to accept her advice and a lot a lot of money to publicity and she wanted to take the responsibility and want to gain some profit on it.But all her plan was turned upside down. She gathered all information fr. Her chamchas. But to her surprise where fr. Maan get all these suggestions raathon raath.

She went to Maan cabin to butter him up and to manofy him to her wish. She went inside his cabin,without knocking atleast.

Maan was very busy in some work he get angry to her arrival.

AMaan:-Nainntara, atleast learn some manners. U have to knock the door before entering.

Naintara:- wo rule baharki logonka hotha hai maanji, apnokeliye knock karna jaruri nahi hai.

She came very close to maan and raised her hand to keep it on maan.

Maan moved back and asked her why u r here?

Naintara took a back and asked ,I came to know u r taking the com.

Maan:- haa, tho kya?

Naintara:- congts but u didn't take my advise on publicity?

Maan:- comp. ka m.d. mai hu. Mai jo , thik sochethi hu wahi karunga. Its not necessary to fallow all advises jo com. Keliye accha hai wahi decision letha hu mai.

Nai:- lekin mera sugession accha hai, aaj kal saare log yahi fallow karthe hai.

Maan:-sab log fallow karthe hai , ye koi policy hai? Ye jaruri nahi hai ki sab kya karthe,maibhi wahi karu? Mujhe meri apni tarika hotha hai.

Naia:- but raathon,raath aapko koun diya ye saari ideas? Kya mai jaan sakthi hu? Maan:- iska jarurat nahi hai. Ye ideads mera hai yaa kisi aur ka hai, ise tumhe kya farakh padtha hai?

Aur tum baar,baar meri cabin me istarah math ana. Agar kuch kaam hotho, mai khud tumhe kabar kartha hu,ab tum jao,mujhe bahut saara kaam hai, he spatted at her. She felt disgust, and left his cabin by tapping her foot on floor.

She came to her cabin and made a call to her detective and ordered him yo know evytg,about the matter. He told her he will give information by tomarrow.

Precap:-Anwesha meeting the woman who called her bhai" Maan singh khurana"as D.D.

Edited by anuradha.nandam - 12 years ago

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anuradha.nandam

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part:-52

Evening at 7'o' clock.party time. Geets house.

Arpitha,geet, ankitha r busy in arranging party. Geet once again checked everything, cake,catering,sitting arrangement and decoration. She took every care in all things. She herself decorated house with full choice of her. The food items also , she selected very selectively. One side she arranged for the party another side of her house she arranged Annadanam to the anaath and roadside beggars. She arranged it on her back side of her house,so that they will not disturb the main party. She went there and observed the arrangements and again came to her house.

Guests started to come. Geet started to dress up Dishu. She made to wear a pink coloured frock to her and combed her hair and arranged all matching accesories to her. Dishu looking very pretty and beautiful like an angel. She put a kala theeka on her back of ear. Arpitha and ankitha came and kissed dishu saying beautiful.

Arpitha:- maa. ab aap ready hojayiye, party ka time horaha hai.

Geet:- bus beta.. thoda decorate karna hai ghar.

Ankitha:- maa. ab bus kijiye chodo ye sab hum karenge decoration. aap humesha isahi karthehai, jab dekho kaam,kaam, kaam ke ilawa aapko kuch nahi sujthe. party ka time horaha hai, guests araha hai, aap kab ready hojayenge? party me isahi rahega kya?

Anwesha called geet to ask address and she explained the route and with that she went to get ready, as usual simple

Ankitha:-maa,.. aap kuch dhankese kapde kyu nahi pehenthe?

Geet:- mujhe isahi pasand hai.

Arpitha:- chodo choti ye kab sunthe hamari, karne do uski marzi.

Anwesha and Rahul arrived geets house. Geet came out and wecomed them and took them inside. She introduced her to Arpitha and Ankitha.Dishu came running saying Rahul bhai and bend down and took blessings fr. Annie.Annie took her into her arms with blessings and lifted her kissed her saying happy birthday to her. She gave gift that she has taken to dishu to Rahul and asked him to give it to dishu. Rahul gave it to her Dishu looked at geet for permission to take,geet shook her head then only she took it. Annie again fall for dishu for her manners.

Bahut accha manners sikhathe aap bacchonko, she said.

Arpitha:- come mam, aap ander ayiye, aur baithiye she led her to the party area.

Ankitha come with juice to both of them.

Anwesha:- tho aap hai dishu ki maa,..,aur aap ki husband?

Arpitha:- wo aaraha hai office se, thodi der me.

Annie:- aap dishu ki chachi... aap ka husband?

Ankitha told wat Aakash does and everything

Annie:- Geet mam bahut acche hai, unhone hamari rahul ko bahut badal diya and she explained how much they suffered by rahuls behaviour, after geets treatment how much he changed. mujhe aapki mamako thank u kahna hai.

Ankitha:- maa, isahi hai, wo kisikobhi badal sakthe hai, aur rahul tho bachha hai, isme kya hai? hum bahut lucky hai ki hume isa maa mile.

Annie:- such kaha aapne, party ki time horaha haina? koi late hai?

Arpitha:- nahi bus hum mera husband and unki boss anewaala hai bus unka intezaar karraha hai.

Here in k.c.

Prasant started to leave office by 5.30.p.m. he went to maans cabin to say this.

Maan:- noticed it and said ,Prasant tum jao mai aur Arjun and Aadi thodi der me nikalthe hai.

Prasant:- ji , sir and he went.

At 7'o'clock the trio started to party in a car.

Maan:- kaka,, gift leni hai koi acchasa gift shop ya toy shop ko leke jao.

Arjun and Aadi stunned to hear this. [Maan singh khurana and shoping].

Maan went to toy shop ,he asked to Arjun and Aadi to select a toy for dishu. they keep their hands on their head ,dont know wat to select.

Maan at last select a big aeroplane toy as she said she liked it.

Arjun:- but jiju,.. dishu is a girl na,take girls stuff.

Maan:- mujhe kya pata hai arjun girls kya psand karthehai? and they decided to ask s.m.

he sugested teddy bear, barbie doll etc...

so they took them too, dont know wat she likes,and went to geets house.

Precap:- party.

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anuradha.nandam

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part:- 53

They reached geets house.Prasant and Aakash came and welcomed them. As soon as Maan enrered the house his eyes roamed in search of Geet.

Aakash:- namashesir,

Maan:- namasthe, kaise ho tum? ankitha kaise hai?

Aakash:- acchi hai sir, he also wished Arjun and Aadimaan introduced him to arjun and aadi.

Maan is still searching for geet. prasant observed this and thought tat he is looking for dishu.

Prasant:- mai dishu ko leke aatha hu.

Aakash made them to sit on couch.Maan and Arjun observed each and every arrangement and decorations.

Maan:- accha sajaya aapne aakash.

Aakash:- ye sab maa dekhthi hai sir, humse ye nahi hotha.

Prasant went inside and informed them that they arrived.

Geet felt something odd to face him. she was actually fearing to face him now. she looked at prasant and he assured her by saying everything is o.k. Then she took dishu and with arpitha and ankiha she came to them., saying namasthe to all.

Maan looked at geet. She wear a simple light worked red coloured saree with simple jewellery, but in that simple attire also she is looking stunning, competing to her daughters. He wondered how she maintain that elegance in that simple dressing. Dishu came running to him saying Dost" and jumped on him.He took her in his arms and lifted her saying u r looking beautiful dost.

Dishu:-- thank.u.dost she kissed him.

Arjun:- happy b.d. sweety.

Aadi:- happy birth day dishu beta.

Maan gave her the gifts. she looked at geet, she shooked her head and signaled dishu to take his blessings, pointing to bend down.

Dishu bend down to his feet and asked his blessings.

Maan stunned by her behaviour. he immeadiately took her to his level and said nahi... nahi.. tumhe isa nahi karni chahiye.

Dishu:- aap bade haina, aaj mera b.d. hai is din mujhe aapki aashiewaad chahiye dost. nani kahthi hai..

Maan:_Tumhari nani avayi kuch bhi bolthi hai, wo saari baath maanneka jarurat nahi hai, he said irritatingly.

Geet got hurt by this, she thought he is really upset with her rejection. she bend down her head in sorry.

[ here maan is irritated by her silence, he want to behave normal in her usual self, but she is really quite unlike her.

Kal raath se bahut bechain horaha tha, bahut man kar raha hai geet ko ekbaar dekhne keliye, usse baath karne keliye, pata nahikyu,.. here she is giving very cold reaction to him , it is irritating him badly, so only he said like that to dishu.]

All got shocked to his statement.

Aadi laughed his signature laugh to lighten the situation.

Prasant party suru karthe yaar late horaha hai.

Prasant:-- haa..haa.. sir please come and he led them to party area.

There Annie was sit in a couch , she looked at that direction in which all coming.

she surprised seeing her bhai, and arjun with geet. she went to him.

Annie:- bhai;... aap yahaa?

Maan also surprised to see annie here.Tum yaha kaise?

Annie:- mai Rahul ke saath dishu ke b.d. party me aayithi. aur aap?

Maan:- hum bhi uski wajase aaya hai.

Annie:- aap dishu, aur geet mam ko kaise jaanthe?

Maan:- tum geet ko jaanthi ho?

Maan:- mai aapse ek baar kehdiyana geet mam ke baare me.

Maan:- umm,...

Anniew:- aur aap kaise jaantheho mam ko?

Geet now getting confused. she is thinking that they know about her and her family, but now it seems all confused.

Arjun, now getting that tho tum phone pe baath karrahib hi ki tum kisi party me janewaalithi wo yahi hai?

Annie:- aur aap nahi kaha ki aap bhui yaha aanewaalatha?

Arjun:- annie,.. mujhe kya pata tum yaha anewaalithi?

Annie:- pehle aap bathayiye, aap geet mam ko jaanthe ho/?aur aap bhai? aap kaise jaanthe ho?

Arjun:- ek minute,,, ek minute annie mai tumhe explain kartha hu, and he explained her how maan met geet etc...etc...

Annie:- matlab bhai,.. aur geet mam pehlesi ek dusereko jaanthe hai?/

Geet:- tum bhi mujhe jaanthi ho annie, yaad hai hum ek baar phone pe baath karliya usdin tumhari bhai ka phone mera pass hai, yaad hai?

Annie:- tho wo aap thi? i am soirry mai pahchana nahi, per aapne abhi tak kyu nahi bathaya?

Geet:- mujhe kya maalum ki tum nahi jaanthi, maime socha tumhe pata hai sab.

Annie:- tho prasant ji hamari office me kaam karthe hai? suddenly she remembered something.

wait...wait.. tho aapthi jo wo mera bhai ko Dust Danav kaha phone pe.

Arjun:- Annie,... ye kya baath kar rahi ho tum?

Annie:- kyu nahi arjun? aur aap ... aapko itni himmat ? ki mera bhai ko D.D.kahnekaa?

Maan called anniiee in worrying tone.

Annie:- aap chup rahiye bhai,... maine kitne dinose wait karrahihu ki ise milneka and ek baar ise dekhne ka , koun hai ye aurat jisne mera bhai ko uski muh me bhi isa kaha.

Geet felt if the ground will split and she will drowned to the core. She now feeling very miserable to be there before them. she opened her mouth to say sorry, but annie...

Annie:- aree... nahi.. nahi.. mam aap galat math samajiye, mai aapse naaraaz nahi hu ,bus mai ye dekhna chahthi hu ki, wo koun hai jiski wajase mera bhai me itna badlawa aaya.

Geet ... hearing this , she looked at maan with puppy face. Maan felt laugh to see her puppy face , but maintained a straight and stern face. she looked at prasant, he shooked his shoulders like he cannot do anything.

Now Aakash felt to ease the situation, so he divertred the topic and said,late horaha hai party suru karthe. bachhe wait karrahe hai.

Maan:- haa,.chale suru karthe, he said to geet chaliye.

Geet bend down her head and walked to the cake.

Precap:- Maan seeing another face of geet.

Edited by anuradha.nandam - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

I read all parts now...

wonderful FF...

Maan offered MD post to Geet and she rejected...nd Maan impressed with her sincerity...Maan is having erotic dreams about Geet and here Geet is feeling sorry to tell him no for his offer...

waiting for their relation to move forward...

thanx for pm...