MGFF- ESSENCE OF LOVE-THD-5/PART-60/14-6-2013 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update 👏glad that now ur my official friend 😃
yes now annie and arjun will try to fix maaneet together😳
me eagerly waiting for that (fingers crossed )
aww geet is missing maan keep going geet good luck
what happened to maan😲 is he ok he was so worn out is the
badmassh company the reason😡 (sam pammi and yes the witch naintara)
now what will happen next me waiting,precap is shocking what happened to geet ?
waiting waiting and waiting😃
thank u for the pm
love aanya 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
awesum update jus loved it plz update soon waitin
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 62 n 63
nice updatesye pammi n company kabhi maan ko shanti nahi denge
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part:- 64
After some time Maan wokeup fr. his sleep. He slowly tried to recognise where he is. He looked around for Geet. He sat on couch, then only he noticed that his shoes were removed fr. his feet. He checked himself and find his tie and shirt buttons r loosened. He assumed that it could be done by geet. He searched for her, she was in kitchen preparing dinner. Prasant came and wished him,asking how do u feel now sir? Iam o.k. said maan looking for geet.
Prasant asked him to fresh up and have dinner.He silently fallowed wat he told Geet served him dinner. they started to have it silently. Through out dinner Maan observed that geet is very silent, not in usual sence. Her eyes looked swollen like she cried. his heart sunk seeing her in that condition, not know wat happened.
After dinner Maan again sat on couch. H e searched for his pho Kaka came and gave it to him. He looked at it and find so many missed calls fr. pammi. He looked at kaka. Kaka told I kept in silent,chotebabu as u didnt take rest fr. yesterday, i thought u need food and rest so i did it. Maan didnt say anything.
Prasant:- Sir, I talked to I.G. again in the evening. He said he will see wat he can do,trust me sir by tomorrow everything will be alright sir. I will manage opposition also.
Geet , who is standing at the kitchen door and hearing this asked,
"And what about that girl"
Maan and Prasant looked at her.
She came near to prasant and asked him again," tell me prasant, how r u going to compensate her"?
Prasant"- Maa,.. aap chup rahiye, sab thik hojaye ga.
Geet:- Sab thik hojayega? magar kaise? kaise prasant?kaise tum sab thik karoge? kaise tum uss maasoom 17yrs girl ko compensate karoge?ye koi ghareli cheez nahi hai jaisa, paise, yaa gahne, jo usne khogayi, ye apni zindagi khogayi prasant;,..aur aap log use kaise compensate karoge? kaise karoge bathayiye mujhe?
She is now in full aggressive mood tensed, her past ,her miserable life she led by her husbands abuse about 5 yrs, her pain all came in to her mind making her more repulsive, her pain full past once again make her loose her control and she blasted on Maan like a volcano.
Kahiye Maanji, kaise aap compensate karoge? kitna saha hoga wo, kitna dard, kitna insult, kitna dukh use pahuncha hoga? ek aurat keliye uski izzat kitni maine rakhthe hai aap jaantheho? wo apni jaan desakthi magar izzat khoneka tayaar nahi hothi hai? kisne diya use ye adhikaar ki uski zindagi barbaad karneka?use kitna dukh pahuncha hoga? kitna pain, wo pain sirf sharir keliye nahi maanji bulki uski dil keliye hothi hai, uski aatma keliye hotha hai, kitna thej pahuncha hoga uski aatmasammaan ko? uski aatma viswaas ko, wo sirf izzat nahi, unki zindagi khogayi maanji.. aap use kaise compensate karsakthe hai? 17 saal ka maasoom bacchi hai, kitna kwaab dekha hoga zindagi ko leke, kitne saare plans hoga uski dil me zindagi ko leke. uski maa baap ne kitna sapne dekha hoga uski bhavishya keliye. Ab wo saarew sapne mitti me mila hoga. kitna thej pahuncha hoga uski dil ko. kya isa ek sadma aapki beti ya behan ke saath hua tho, aap isahi kuch paise leke chup hojathi? isahi chode the mujrim ko? ek baar,.. sirf ek baar aap us ladki ke sthaan per khade hokar sochiye Maanji
Ab geet neared Maan without knowing wat she is doing, in her rage and tension,she hold maans shirt by her two hands and shooked him and asked him those questions.her eyes r continuously raining down pour.she didnt even noticed it.
Kya aap isahi chode detha mujim ko? bathayiye maan?ek hadsaa use zinda laash banadethi maanji,.. wo apni aatma viswaas khojaygi, kissise baath karne ko bhi darthi hai,jindagi bhar kisi aur per viswaas nahi karthi,sabse darthi hai, kissise nahi milna chahthi,. aur ise ladki se koun shaadi karthe? koun apnayenge use? zindagi bhar wo isahi rehna padega, koi aur ka paap keliye wo zindagi bhar bhugatna padega. kisi aur ka dosh ka saja unhe milthi hai maanji,.. bathayiye kaise compensate karoge aap?aur agar is paap ki waja se wo pregnant ho jaye tho? tho us baccha ko kya hoga? koun hai iska baap? tumhari bhai, yaa uski dost? bathayiye maanji;,,koun lega uski jimmadaari? ya use unki kok me hi kahthal kare? wo massom jaan ko khatal kare? paap kiska aur saja kise milraha hai? boliye maanji mai jaanna chahthi hu ki aap kaise compensate karoge? bathayi chup kyu hai aap?
She shooked him by holding him on his collor, she is not that geet wat he knew before, that sweet, innocent, down to earth, polite geet nahi hai wo ab. wo ek naari hai, jo anyaay and adharm ko apni trishul se hi dand dene waali Durga hai ab wo. uski beautiful eyes which spills love , care, effection ., kindness, now full red spitting fire, tears r flowing like river.
He looked at her all shocked by her behaviour and in awe. He never thought of this kind of behaviour. He stunned by her aggressive behaviour, spitting fire through her eyes, ready to smash those culprits, If those culprits r infront of her dont know wat she will do?
Prasant:- tried to stop her saying maa,.. aap shant hojayiye aapki tabiyat kharaab hojayegi, sab thik hojayega, sir sab thik karthe.
aap itna tention math lo.
But she is not ready to leave this matter, kahiye maanji ab aap kya karoge? aap ko aapki bhai ka chintha horahi haina? aapki maa ki chintha hai na? aapki maa chahthe hai ki uski beta sahi salaamath ghar loutaaye.
lekin wo bhi ek aurat haina? unhe pata haina ki unki beta kitna bada paap kiya? wo bacchi bhi kisi maaki beti hai, aur wo chahthe hai ki mujrim ko saja mile. jisne unki beti ki ye haalat kiya unhe phasi mile. wo aapko sraap degi maanji,.. aur wo sraap aapko lagega, aapki khaandaan ki naam dekh ke aap ko naaj hotha hai na ,per isa beta paakar kyu nahi sharminda horahi hai aapki maa. usko uski beta sahi salaamath ghar ana hai, aur aap ye jarur karthe.ek baar,.. ek baar aapki haath aapki dil me rakh ke sochiye kya aap sahi karrahe ho? ek baar sochye maanji kya galathi hai us bacchi ka. kyu use saja milrahahai? kyu use ye bhugatna padthi hai ye sab ,jabki unki koi galathi nahi hai.kya hoga uski zindagi? kisne diya tumhari bhai ko uski zindagi barbaad karne ka haq?
Kya sochethe ho mard aurat ke baare me? kyu hamesha mard aurat ko ek khilona samajthe hai? kyu uski zindagi se khel the ho? khel unka hoga aur uski unjaam aurat kohi bhugathna padthi hai? kis,.. kis.. se bachayenge hum? kis..kis se? kabhi pati ka naam se, kabhi dost ka naam se kabhi lover ka naam se, kabhi, teachers, outers shopkeepers kabhi drivers kabhi milk boys, paperboys aur bahut dukh ki baath ye hai kabhi unki sagi bhai se, sagi baap se kis,..kis..se apne aap ko bachayenge maanji?
Kya aap jaanthe hai? ki aurat ko bahar kis,..kis,. ko jawaab dena padtha hai? humesha logonka ungli uski taraf hotha hai.
Bathayiye Maan,..bathyiye.. mujhe aapki jawaab chahiye? bathayiye... she shooked him up vigouously and she get hiper tension and over stressed, with that her b.p. shoot up and she lost her concious. she began to fall down. Maan hold hertcalling geet...she fainted in his arms.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow. Awesome
Love geet.. She right
Hope she's ok
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update
geet is so right...
hope she will be fine...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part:-65
Maan immediately took her in his arms and ran to the car. Kaka quickly opened car doors and Maan placed her in back seat. prasant sat next to her. Dishu came running crying, nani,... nani.,.. Maan took her and sit in the passenger seat with her. dishu is crying badly looking geet. Maan made her to calm saying nani thik hai kuch nani hua.. thik ho jayegi.
Prasant tried to get geet back by calling her but she didnt get her concious. he called to Arpitha and told her that geet is fainted. She got panicked, maan told to prasant tell Arpitha to come to xyz hospital. she immediately started to hospital and on the way she informed it to Ankitha.
As soon as they reached hospital , Maan took geet in his arms ,without waiting for streccher he carried her inside shouting for drs. Drs. came out by the shoutings, running. Maan ,...dr.. look ..look geet behosh hogayi,do something, he was hell worried for her condition,he frightened wat if anything happens to her? DR. asked him to lay her on streccher. but he is not ready to leave her, he wants to keep her in his arms thinking that wat will happens to her if he leave her, so he insisted them to treat her like that only. but dr. told him that is not possible and he has to leave her for treatement. Prasant came to him and explained to him the situation, sir, maa thik hai, unhe kuch nahi hoga, agar aap ise nahi chodatho, how will they treat her, it is going late please do wat dr, told. Maan left her with half heartedly, looking again and again her. he sunk in the chair, thinking wat will be happen to her? He paced up and down and throwed his hais in disgust and helplessness,dont know wat to do?fearing if anything happens to her, how can he live?
Arpitha came running and crying for her mother. she asked prasant:- wat happened to her? why she lost her concious? Prasant:- she got hyper tension and over stressed and fainted,dr. r looking her nothing in danger.
Arpitha:- why suddenly she get stressed, shaam tak tho wo thik thi.achanak unhe kya hua,isa kya hua prasant?achanak wo itna stress kyu lene padi?
sir kab aaya?aur wo itni tension me kyu hai?
Prasant:- nothing Aarpitha, isa kuch nahi hai, wo thik hojayegi. tum calm down sab thik ho jayaga.
dishu is still crying and kaka took her out.
Dr.came out.
Maan:- wo thik tho haina? kya hau ise?
Dr.:- haa,.. sir ab wo thik hai,hosh me aneki do ghanta lagegi, bus overstress ki karan unki b.p. badgayi, ab wo thik hai, tabtak hum ward me shift karenge.
Maan:- wo thik haina koi pblm tho nahi hana? bathayiye dr.
DR;-haa,.. sir wo bilkul thik hai, bus do din araam karne hai, hosh me aneki baad aap ghar le jaasakthe, bus thoda b.p. badgayi isliye salt kam lena padthi hai bus .
Maan breathed in relief sitting in chair, closing his shedding eyes.
Ankitha, Aakash came running asking wat happend, arpitha told them every thing,and geets condition now. Ankitha cried for her mothers state. Prasant explained them why she get hiper tension and wat happend.
Sir, aap ghar jayiye. maa ko hosh me aneka do ghante lagega, aap bahut thag gayihoga, hum haina? hum maa ko ghar le jayenge.
Maan:- nahi,.. mai kahi nahi jaunga, jabtak unhe hosh nahi aya, mai yaha se kahi nahi jaaunga, aur prasant, tell me;,.. why she behaved like that? i never seen her losing her control like that.. why she over stressed ? there must be some reason to her behaviour. something is bothering her. wat is it? where is her husband? why donethe lives with her?wat happened in her past?tell me prasant , mai jaan na chahtha hu.bathao mujhe,kya hua iske saath?kyu wo isa hai? kis baath se wo takleef horaha hai?bathao na mujhe?he shooked prasant in his rage and emotion.
Prasant:- sir,..maa ko unki ateeth ke baare me kisi ko batana nahi pasand hai sir. wo mai aapko batha nahi saktha.

Arpitha and Ankitha r crying still remembering their pain ful past.
Aakash:- sir,.ye sab nahi jaanthe ho acha hai sir. Agar maa, ko patachala ki aap sab kuch jaanthe ho,wo ye bardaash nahi karsakthe.
Maan:- nahi aakash mai unhe kabhi kuch nahi puchunga,use ye tak pata nahi chaladuga ki ye sab mai jaanthi hu. please mujhe bathayiye kya hua inke saath?meri dum ghut rahahai, mujhe
ye jaanna jaruri hai prasant.
Prasant:- sighed and said, its her past sir, She also one of the victim sir, jo pathi ke naam per us per julm kiya. 5 saal thak wo use abuse kiya, aur wo chup chap ye julm sahthi rahi.,iski bachhe keliye.
Maan:- kya?,,,stunned listening this new information.
Prasant:- haa,.. sir, ye maa ki ateeth hai sir, bilkul kuch isahi hai us ladki ki tarah, ye bhi 17 saaki hai sir jab unki shaadi Vikram naam ka ek,. bathammiz, badmash ke saath hua,and he started to tell her past to Maan.

Precap:- Geets past.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Geets past
Geet was born in a lower middle class family. Her father was a building mastri, working under a contractor. Her mother died when she was 5 yrs old due to cancer. As a poor family her father Mohinder was not afford to treat her mother.He married another woman to give a mother to her,but she behaved exactly the same as step mother. She never liked geet and give her mothers love. She has also a daughter and over possessive to her own daughter. She made geets life hell, by doing all house hold works with her. She even wants to stop education of geet. But her father did that only one good thing to her,he never want to stop her study. He even joined her in college after her schooling. She is a topper of the school , where as her step sister is a slow learner
That is the other reason for her step mothers envey, the first reason is geets beauty. She is the epitome of beauty,like her mother,with her milky white skin, doe shaped hazal brown eyes, which speaks volumes and the innocence that oozes fr. her face makes a glow on her face,that attracts every ones attention,her polite nature and kind heart meets every ones heart.
But all that well not go smooth, her fate once again laughed at her as her father got injured and bed ridden by an accident at his working place. Now total control on family goes to her step mothers hands.She made geets life even worse than hell . She stopped geets education.She wanted to getrid of geet by marrying her to her brother,who is a spoilt brat by all bad habbits. He had a bad eye on geet,as she is beautiful. He offered some amount to his sister to get marry to geet. Paisonke lalaj me log kuch bhi karsaktha hai na? and geets step mother decided to spoil geets life. She took money fr. him and arrane marriege with geet. Geet faught and even begged her to avoid this marriege. But she didnt care. Geet tried to escape fr. house. Her s.m. tied her and kept her in room and locked the room. She even told Vikram ,his brother to rape her, then only she will listen to get marry. When vikram tried to do so geet said she will marry him as she thought getting marry is better option than to loose her chastity before marriage. She accepted to marry him. Her father is remained as a mere spectator as he was bed ridden, cont do anything to save his daughters life.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful updates...

I love ur FF Anuradha but the problem is that u keep changing ur threads continuously so it is very difficult to keep tabs and that is why I don't get any alert in my favorite topic list also,...if I bookmark ur this thread then u will update in another thread that is why it is very difficult to read ur updates...

anyway...now coming to updates...

Maan surely loves her and she also but her past as well as her position is not allowing her to express her feelings...

she became angry and stressed because of remembering her past...

kudos to u that through Geet u really expressed the mental,physical and emotional trauma rape victim has to bear...culprits family just bothered to take their son out of cases but they never think that what condition is that girl is in and how much pain and trauma the girl is bearing because of their son...Maan was forced by his mother that is why I am sure he didn't get to think this way...I am pretty sure of he get time to think in this way how Geet made him realize then he will never leave that culprit whether he is his own brother...and I am damn sure after this realization from Geet side he will surely make Vicky pay for his deeds...

Geet's past was also so painful that is why she loves those slum children because she knows their hardship...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...


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beautiful updates
loved it
thanx for the pm dear
a biggg thanx dear for specially pming me without fail
love u alot

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