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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update...
sweet cute maaneet moments...
maaneet's first karwachouth...
nt 😡
oh no arpitha will be shocked...hope prashant will understand geet n maan...

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Posted: 11 years ago

MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd-9/part-127/pg57/17/4/2014




Part-127:-

Geet and Maan completed puja. At that time the moon has been shown. Geet brought the thali and seive containing aarthi, paani ki pot some flowers kumkum and some chawal as akshit.She led Maan to the backyard of her house covering her head with her pallu made Maan stand there started performing puja. She put some kumkum onMaans fore head and began to give aarthi to him,...when Prasant entered the house wondering why the door kept open and where is maa,.. he came to backyard in search of geet and stood rooted seeing wat is going right infront of him.
,... Geet doing aarthi to Maan. He immeadiately jerked to some place to hide himself not making them aware of his presence and stood there observing them.
Prasant s.t.:- Ye kya horaha hai? Maa aur Maan sir doing karwachout? kya Arjun sir aur Dev sir thik kahrahe?ye sab dekh ke kuch isa hi lagrahe. Maa aur Maan sir ek dusere keliye karwachout manarahe? kya ye such hai wo dono ek dusere ko chahthe hai? pyaar karthe hai ek dusere ko?aur ye baath unhe kaise patachala,.. aur hume kyu ye ehsaas nahi hua abhi tak?ab hum kya karna hai? kaise is baath ko samalenge hum?

Here geet complited aarthi to Maan and took seve to look the moon first and then to Maan through it when Arpitha came inside searching for both geet and prasant ,.. seeing Prasant ,asking ," aap yaha kya karraheho? ,. when prasant pulled her keeping hand on her mouth stopping her talking and pulling her aside.
Arpitha:- Ye aap kya karrahe ho? kyu mera muh band karrahe ho? ,.. she stopped when her sight fallowed Prasants where he is looking.
"She stood rooted not understanding wat is going there r to say a big blost on her. Not comprehending wat is going right infront of her,.. not know how to react r to say the scene before her just blocked all her scences completely . she felt the earth under her feet is shuddering making her to fall in its deep pit. She lost her all grasping power,.."All lost complitely lost"Prasant kept a hand on her shoulder t,.. but she didnt budge an inch . he tapped on her shoulder to get her , she looked at him as if she is in trance.
Here Geet completed the riyual seeing Maan through the seive and bend down to his feet to seek his aashirwaad. He lifted her up and hugged her and took the paani pot and made her drink water. Geet also made him drink water. Later they fed sweet to each other. Then Maan led her to inside.
Prasant and Arpitha stood there hiding fr. them and observing everything. Later Geet started to serve dinner,and Maan started to feed her,.. and they r having dinner feeding eachother.
Here Arpitha cannot bear the shock . its a big bang to her. and she sunked on the bench loosing all her energy. She kept fast full day and this shock take away all her strength. She cannot fanthom wat is going on . Full of confusion,.. is it true r its her helusination? not even a single chance is there in her veiw about her mother,... This is far away for her imagination. Not that she felt bad about her mother,.. but it is something else like never thought before. She was in deep shock dont know wat to ask? whom to ask? wat is going on? She looked at Prasant all lost not understanding the situation and a lot of hesitation dont know wat Prasant feels?
Arpitha:- Ye,... ye ,.. kya ..horaha hai? ye sab ,... ye sab kya hai? Maa,...maa,.. isa kyu?,... Prasant stopped her keeping his hand on her mouth" hum ye sab baad me baath karenge, abhi nahi.
Arpi:- per kyu?
Prasant:- kahana ,..? hum baad me baath karenge abhi nahi,. mai nahi chahtha pura such jaanke bina kuch na kuch anzaam tak pahunchna. isiliye kahraha hu hum abhi inki baare me baat nahi karthe.
Arpi:- pura such? matlab ,.. aap pehlehi jaanthe the? aap ko ye sab maalum hai? usdin ,... usdin,.. aap isliye mujhese isa baath ki aapne?
Prasant:- didnt said anything.
Arpitha:- aap chup kyu ho? matlab aap pehle se hi sab kuch jaanthe haina? pehle jaankar bhi aap mujhe kuch nahi bathaya? kyu nahi bathaya aap? she shooked him holding his shirt.
Prasant:- kyun ki mai nahi chahtha ki tume pareshaan hojao usse jyaada mujhe maa ki fikar hai. mai nahi chahtha ki maa ko iski baare me puch ke unhe sharminda kare. Agar hum puche tho wo bahut emberass hogi , guilty mehsoos hogi hum se nazar nahi mila paayegi, ye bahut sencitive baath hai arpitha ,.. ise hume bahut soch samajkar deal karna chahiye. Ayr thum bhi mujhe waada karog ki tum iski baare me maa se kuch nahi puchogi,.. unhe ye mehsoos bhi nahi honedogi ki tum sab kuch jaanthi ho. kabhi nahi,.. waada karo mujhe se.
Arpitha:- nahi ,... mai isa kaise chup rahsakthi hu ,.. itna badi baath mai kaise chupa sakthi hu. Prasant hume kuch karna hoga maa se puchna hoga .
Prasant:-nahi,.. hum isa kuch nahi karsakthe., jiski waje se wo emberass hogi, wo hume face nahi karpayegi , unhe apne aap hum se baath karna hoga, agar wo such mai yahi chahthe hai ,.. unhe ye step leni hogi, humse baath karni hogi. tab tak hum usse kuch nahi puchenge,. kuch nahi baath karenge thik hai.
Arpitha:- mujhe kuch nahi samajme araha hai, mere sir ghum rahe she kept her head in her both hands and staid there .
Prasant went inside hiding to see wat is happening, weather it is safe to come out of their hide out,
There in side hall Maan and Geet completed their dinner and geet is giving him some pawn. He is taking it in to his mouth fr. her fingers romantically looking in to her eyes and biting her fingers.
Geet:- looked at him saying ouch;,... and pouting.
Maan:- ab mai chalu?
Geet didnt answer him still pouting like she dont want him to go .Arpitha came to prasant and stood looking at them leaning on prasant as she didnt have any energy.

Maan pulled her to him by her waist trying to manafying her," ye tumhari usool haina ,.. jab tak humari shaadi nahi hogi tab tak mai raath ko yaha nahi ruksakthe. tum chahthe hona ki humari is rishthe ko sab ki rajamandi, aur tumhi chahthe hona ki humari pariwaar ,humari bacche hume manna hoga ,.. hume apnana hoga,.. isiliye abhi mujhe jaana hoga .
Geet keeping her hand on maans chest with tearful eyes" kya wo hume maanega maan? hume apnayega wo? kya wo mujhe samajsakthe? ya mere baare me kuch galat socha tho?
Maan:- kept his finger on her lips, kabhi isa math socho geet. wo hume jarur samajsakthe ,.. wo bahut samjdaar hai geet. wo tumse bahut pyaar karthe hai,.. wo tumhe kabhi galat nahi samajthe? mai kal hi unse baath karunga aur unhe manaunga. tum fikar math kar. ab mai chalu?shaayad bachhe agaya tho,mai nahi chahtha hu ki wo hume isa dekho. He moved and geet fallowed him till gate.
Prasant and arpitha looked eachother listening maans words.
Prasant:- Hum back gate se baahar jaake front door se phir ander ayenge jaisa hum abhi abhi araha hai thik. hai?
Arpitha just fallowed him nodding her head,. because she didnt have any energy now , she lost all her thinking ability now and just fallowed prasant.
They waited some more time outside giving geet some time to clear everything. Geet went to her room and got changed in to her normal wear,hiding everything saree and jewlery all the gifts maan gave her. She kept the thali and seive inside hiding every simbol of her vrat,except puja arrangements as they wont be moved till next morning.
Prasant @Arpitha knocked the door.
Geet stopped in the middle startled by the bell thinking wat to tell them.
She composed herself and came to open the door after taking some more time.
Arpitha:- maa,.. kya karrahi ho? itni der kyu hua door open karneme? looking geet fr. top to bottom feeling bad as she changed back to her usual self.[Arpitha:- maa kapde badalgayi,.. kitna acche hai wo puja ki kapde me, bahut sunder lagrahi hai un kapdome, mai kabhi nahi dekhi maa ko isa kapdo me ,.. kitna khubsoorat dikhrahi hai maa us sringaar me]
Prasat bhi isa hi sochrahe, maa kitni achhi dikhrahi hai un puja ki kapdome.
Geet:- kuch nahi beta ,.. bus ,isahi,..
they entered inside.
Geet:- tumhari vrat puri hue?
Arpitha:- nahi maa,..wo ,.wo,.. prasant ko kuch kaam hai isiliye hum yaha aaya . she went to kitchen to keep the basket she brought, when she observed the puja room.
'"Maa aap puja karrahe ho? is din? vrat rakha?
Prasant cleared his throat like warning her .
Arpi:- mera matlab aap kabhi nahi karthe haina karwaachout isiliye puchthi hu.
Prasant:- snapped , ye kaisa sawaal hai arpitha?puja karna koi badi baath hai jaisa puchrahiho? unhe man kiya hoga puja karneka. isme kya baath hai? tum jaldi karo hume jaana hai mujhe bahut bhuk lagrahe hai.he hurried her fearing if they stay there longer arpitha could ask or say something that makes things drastic. He immeadiately took signs fr. geet and started to go dragging Arpitha.


link for part-128:-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3668596&TPN=58


Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res

di please make a index
its really difficult to find parts when want to re read it
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG...OMG...
hope k arpita samje ye baat...
thanx fr the PM..
i agree to suhana...u should make an index..
it would easy for all..
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Posted: 11 years ago
arpita n prasanth found maan n geet doing pooja
prasanth asked arpita to keep mum
both are thinking how geet looked beautiful in pooja dresss
nice part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Prashant aur arpita ne sab dekh liya!!
Maan aur Geet ki baat bhi sun li!!
Achha hua prashant ne arpita ko kuch bolne se rok liya
Dono bachho ko Geet puja ke kapdo mein achhi lagi ...
Yeh bhi ek positiv baat hai...ab aisa lagta hai ki sab se pehle Arpita Maan ko apna legi...
Ab toh nayantara ki baari hai...ussne bhi toh Maaneet ko saath mein dekha hai...
Diya kaha hai? Woh bhi toh apne naye "NANU" ko milke khush ho jayegi...
Ab jaldi naya update de do...
Edited by sheetalvasa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Shuhaana, banner bahut achha hai...
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Posted: 11 years ago


With ur kind permission ,.. can i use this ,... sooo much thankfull to u yaar ,.. bahut achhi hai ,.. thanks for ur care ,.. and bina kuch pucha ye tumhari madad mai kabhi nahi bhulungi ,.. and about index its already there i will edit this in previous parts. so that it may easy for u all and thanks for u all to like my story .
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Posted: 11 years ago
Suhaana ,.. dekho ,.. i included the banner in the post. thank.u dear love u.isa hi humesha mujhe encourage karna aur madat bhi karna and is khushi me ek aur update ,.. do festival. enjoy and do commt. as its more worth ful to me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
First of all am glad Maneet did puja for each other
Second glad arpi and pars did nit take geet badly just felt bad that she did not tell them and Prash felt bad how he did not realize those feelings

Waiting now to see how maan talks to them

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