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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part;- 24
After a week. evening at 3.30 p.m.
Annie called to Maan
Annie;- Bhai, Arjun aapke saath hai? he is not answering call.
Maan;- may bi in meeting me ho, kya hua?
Annie:- nahi bhai rahul ko school se ghar le aana hai me nahi jaasakthi, ghar me guests hai isliye me arjun ko bhejna chahthi hu.
Maan:- ek kaam karthi hu mai is wakth usi raasthe me hu me unhe pick karke ghar drop kartha hu thik hai?
Annie:- o.k. bhai
Maan went to DPS to pick up rahul. Here at school gate, 4.00 p.m.
Geet came out of school with Dishu she went to take her schooty and came out while coming out she saw rahul standing infront of school till then. she stopped her scooty and went to him
Geet:- Rahul, tum abhi tak nahi ghar gayi?
Rahul:- nahi miss, mama nahi aya abhitak.
Geet:- kya hua? ek kaam karthi hu. tum ghar ka number bathao mai phone karthi hu.
Rahul told the no. and geet started to dial the no.
Mean while Maans car reached to school and stopped near rahul
Rahul:- bade mamu... aap?
geet turned to see maan
Geet:- Aap?
seeing geet maan felt unknown happy ness and at same time he felt worry for her . unknown to himself he started to yell at her, thinking that she is not taking care of herself..etc...
Maan:_ tum,, yaha kya karraheho? tumhe aaraam ki jarurat hai na phir tum yaha kya kar raheho?kya jarurat hai itni jaldi school aaneka?
khud ko khayaal rakna aathanahi tum bacchonka khayaal kaise rehsakthe ho?
She got angry on his dominance on her and wanted to retort him, but poor kids get scared by his yelling
Rahul:- bade mamu ye mera geet mam hai maine aap ko bathaya na ye bahut achhi hai.aap kyu dat rahe unhe?
Dishu got scared seeing him and talking with high tone she came near geet and hugged her in fear.
Geet saw two kids immeadiately took them into her embarass and comforted them saying nahi nahi beta ye mujhe dat nahi hai, kya hai na rahul mera tabiyat thik nahi haina,isliye ye mujhe rest lene keliye kehrahahai.koi ise dheerese bolna nahi sikha hai na isliye jorse bolrahahai[ seeing maan with red angry eyes]
Maan:- wo,... mai.. he went to convince her
Geet:- she inched towards him and showing her index finger t old him,"dont talk in loud voice before children' aapne bachheko daradiya,and haa,.. aapko meri phikar karneki koi jarurat nahi, mai bilkul thik hu, mai apna khayaal khud rakh sakthi hu aap apki kaam pe dhyaan digiye and turned to rahul and said, Rahul ,,get in to the car,, rahul went and sat in the car.
Geet turned to leave.
Maan:-came to sences and said aayiye mai aapkon chode detha hu.
Geet looked him and the scooty crossing her hands on her chest.
Maan:-got wat she is indicating,,oh u have ur vehicle, he smilled shipishly.
Ye koun hai? he asked pointing to Dishu.
Rahul:- mamu ye geet mam ki poti dishu hai.meri behan said rahul.
Maan:- bahut pyaari hai.
geet started her scooty and made dishu sit on it and drived it without giving any head to maan
maan came back sat behind the wheels and started the car.
Precap:-Geet and annie meeting.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update
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Part:- 25
two days later Geet and Dishu went to a mall to buy a dress to dishu.
Here Annie and Rahul also went to the same mall to buy a dress for rahul. both geet and annie r busy in looking dresses
Rahul:- Good morning mam,rahul saw them and wished her.
Geet and annie turned to rahul.
Geet:- goodmorning rahul, tum yaha kaise?
Rahul:- mam, ye meri mama hai, mama ye meri geet mam hai.rahul introduced them to each other.
both wished each other " namasthe".
Annie:- Tho aap hai, rahul ki geet mam,wo aapki bahut taariff kerthe hai. bahut pasand kerthe hai aapko. such kaho tho mai aapse milna chahthi hu. aapne mere badmash betako bahut change kiya,aapki waje se wo bahut acch bangaya. mera bhai ne ise lad kerke kerke bahutb bigada.bahut pareshan kerthetheye pehle. per ab bilkul thik hogaya. aapne ise bahut accha bachha banadiya.bahut jagadthe the,bahut maarthethe bachheko class me bhi thik se nahi baitthe the, teachers ise bahut sikayat kerthe the, kitni schools change kiya,but ab wo bilkul thik hogaya. mujhe bahut khush ho raha hai. mere betako dekh ker maine socha school aake aapko thank u bolna. this weekend me parents meeting hai na aapko milne waalithi per abhi milgaya.
Geet:- isa kuch nahi hai, mai ne kuch nahi kiya, rahul achha ladka hai bahut pyaara bachha hai, achha padthe hai,ye sab unki achhayi hai.
Annie:- no mam,mai janthi hu, meri beta kitna badmash hai aapne use badaldiya, wo aapko bahut pasand kerthe hai,dinbaar aapki tarif kerthe hai, aapjo kahe wo wahi karega aap unki guru hai. pehle mere bhai use bahut pyaar kethe thi aur unki pyaar ise bahut bigada, aur aapka pyaar ise suthara.
Geet:- aap mujhe bahut tarif kerrahe ho, mai kuch nahi kiya, ye mera furz hai aap ka pyaar jo aapse ise baath kerdethe hai.
Annie:-ye koun hai? kitna pyaari hai, bilkul aapki tarah hai, chota geet mam.
Geet:- ye meri beti ki beti hai mere pothi Dishu,
Rahu:- mama,ya dishu hai mera behan mujhe bhai kehthi hai, school me humdono hamesha khelthe hai.
Annie:- accha tho aapko ek behan bhi hai school me such me bahut pyaari hai mam aap bhi bach pan me isahi hogana mam?
geet smiles shily,nodding her head.
Annie:- aapka shopping hogayi
Geet:- haa, thoda, dishu keliye dress leni hai.
Annie:- ayiye hum dekhthe hai.
Rahul:-dishu,come i will select ur dress and u select mine o.k
Dishu:- o.k. bhaiyya.
and they started to select dress for dishu and rahul. dishu liked wat rahul selected and rahul took wat geet selected .they paid bill and all set to go home.
Annie:- chaliye mam hum thoda coffe pee ke chalthe hai.
Geet:- nahi, der ho jayegi phir kabhi...
Annie:- are, ise kaise bina kuch pilake aapko janedethi? noways aapko anahi padega ye mera treat hai, aapki priya shsya rahuk ke hai, mana math kijiy aur hume is nanhi pari ko bhi ice cream khilana hai.
Geet:-still reluctant to this offer per rahul insisted her saying mam please
geet o.k.
they went to a nearby ice cream shop and annie ordered two coffies and two icecreamsto children
Annie:- looking to dishu kounsi flavour chahiye tumhe?
Dishu:- chocklet.
Annie:- oh chacklet ye tho rahul ko bhi favourite hai wo sab pasand kertha hai jo unki mamu pasand kerthe hai. mera bhai ise bilkul unki jaisa banaya. geet didnt say anything now she remembered who is rahuls mamu, patanahi aur kya kya sikhaya unhone she murmured in herself.
Annie ji aapne kuch kaha? geet nodded her head to no.
dishu beta,tum aavoge mera saath humara ghar, humara ghar bahut bada hai, bahutbsaara khilona hai, ice creams hai swimming pool haisab kuch hai hamare ghar me tum avoge na?
Dishu:-tumhara ghar me nani hai?
Rahul:- haa, mera bhi nani haighar pe
Dishu:- per mera nani is the best i dont come to ur house.
Annie:-accha itna pyaar kerthe ho tum tumhari nanise?mam such me aap bahut lucky ho.
geet didnt say anything just carassing dishu head
after finishing their drinksand ice creamthey started to move. annie asked geet to come to her house but geet said next time annie gave her no and took geets no.
Precap:- bass,bass, hum thag gaya, tumhari wo geet gana sun,sun ke.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 22-25
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Part;-26
Later in the evening,rahul showed maan his new dress. Maan saw that and yelled at annie.
Maan:- kya hai ye annie? ye dress kitna brkar lagrahahai? kyu itna saada seedha select kiya rahul keliye?ye Maan singh Khurana ka bhanje hai koi kher nahi hai? kitna low class hai?
Annie:- opho, bhai.. aap phir se shuru math kijiye, pehlehi aap lad karke karke ise bahut bigada,abhi abhi, yesudharja raha hai,phirseaap ise math bigadiye,waise bhi ye dress use khud pasand kiyakyunli ye unki geet mam li pasand ki hai.
Maan:- kya? geet mam ab wo kaha mili aapko?
Rahul:- Geet mam and dishu mall me milithi dishu ko dress lene aayithi,aur maine mama ko introduce kiya.
Maan:- [wo mall me kya kerrahi thi? unki tho aarram kaerni hai.aur mam tho mall ghumne challi gayi hai kya karu is pagalko? use aaram ki jarurat hai.
Annie:- pata hai bhai..wo kitna acchi hai mujhe bahut pasand aya use dekhker. kitne schools change kiya humne rahul keliye?wo kitna pareshan kerthe the, teachers ko, wo kitni sikayat kerthe hai , per yahatho isa kuch bhi nahi hua. sab unki wo geet mam ki wajase. wo humari rahul ko bahut pyaar karthe hai, wo unhe thik karliya.ab mera baccha bilkulaccha boy bangayasab unki wajase hai. wo rahul ko badal diya. pata hai hum accha dosth bangaye, mai use milna chahthi hu,kabhi kabhi,aur unki pothi,dishu,my god kitna pyaara hai unki nani jaise and annie cotinued and cotinued...
Maan:_ bus..bus tumhari ye geet gana sun sun ker mai thug gayi hu.. mai mantha hum kimai tumhari beta ko bigada, aur tumhari wo geet mam ne ise sutharaya o.k.[ he turned his face in anger]
Annie:- aapko itna gussa kyu agaya bhai..maitho thik hi kaha na kuch galat nahi kaha.
Maan:- thik hai meri maa, tum thik ho o.k. ab chodo.
arjun came at that time.
Arjun:- kya hua kuch hot hot lagrahi ho bhai behan ke beechme?
Maan:- tumhari pyaari biwi ne mujhe sikhyat kerrahihai.ki mai rahul ko bigadrahi hu.
Arjun:- wo tho thiki kehrahihaina , wo kabhi jhute nahi bolthi,kyunki wo Maan singh khurana ki behan jo hai.
Maan:- Arjun tumbhina..
arjun chalo chalo yaar mujhe bahut bhuk lagrahi hai
all went to dinner.
later in bed room
Arjun:- kya kehrahi thi tum maan jijuko?
Annie explained every thing that happend in mallmeetin geet etc...etc...
Arjun:- tho wo tumhe bahut pasand aayi?
Annie:- aap mile tho aapbhi pasand kerthe hai.
Arjun:- accha abtho ekbaar use milna padega.
Annie;-mai use ghar bhi bulaya per unhone kaha ki phir kabhi. mai chahthi hu ki use bhai se milayenge.
Arjun:- wo kyu?
Annie:- bus yuhi...
Arjun:- lagthahai tum kuch jyaada senti ho rahahai.
Annie:- nahi, arjun sach me wo bahut accha hai Arjun:- thik hai baba ab sojao.
Precap:- pammi proposing to maan to make nainatara as m.d.
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#16
Part:-27
Khurana mansioon
Pammicame to maans room
Maan:- maa,aap? kuch kehna hai?
Pammi;- haa, mai dev ke baare me ...maan stopped her ,
maa, mai pehlehi baathkerchuki hu, ab iske baare me ab aap phise shuru math kijiye.
Pammi:- nahi beta,mai ye kehne nahi aayithi tum use m.d. banao,balki mai ye kehne aayithitum dev ki jaga, Nainatara ko m.d. banavo,wo dev se behtar hainajimmedari sopaneka?
Maanshocked hearing this. kya? maa, aap ye kaise kehtheho? ghar ke aurat kabhi bahar jake kaam karthi hai humari khandan me? babuji jaaneke baad bhi aap nahi ayathina ab ye kaisa soch hai?
Pammi:- beta ab jamana badalrahehaina, badalthe huye jamaneki mutabik humbhi badalna chahiyena aur hum koi decision nahi lethi tho phir nainatara bhi chalejayegi,meeraki tarah, tab kya hogahumari izzat?ise behtar hum ye jimmedaari usper sopaya.
Maan:- maa.. aaptho jaanthi haina mai is nainatara ko leke kabhi raaji nahi hu. mujhe ye nake nahi dikhthe hai, wo dev se isiliye shaadi ki unki paiso keliye, jyadad keliye and status keliye dev ko phasayainki jaal me. mujhe tho inki koi kaam achha nahi lagthi,aur ek baar use k.c. me entre kardiyatho pata nahi kounsi jal chalatha haiwaha per, aur mai ye kabhi nahi hone dunga.
Pammi:- wo koun hai, kaisa hai,wo ab humari ghar ki bahu hai tumhari bhai ki patni,aur humari aulad ki maa, hai hume use izzat dena chahiye. agar hume isa nahi kiatho inki bacche kya hoga?
Maan:- maa, mainunki bache ke baareme nahi baath karrahi hu, wo mera bhi bachhe hai, mera bhai ke bacche hai aur me kabhi unke saath na insaaf karunga. ye saap bhi jaanthi ho.
Pammi:- pata hai beta,magarinki koi insecurities hothihaina,unki tasalli keliye ye jaruri hai aur is umar mai mai ye sab bardash nahi karsakthe beta, mujhe sirf manki shaanthi chahiya patanahi mera din aur kitna hai.
[pammi facked tears]
Maan felt hurt seeing her tears. he came near her and hold her hand and tell nahi maa, aap isa math sochiye, sab aap jo chahe waisa hi hoga. mujhe aap ki khushi chahiye ise badkar kuch nahi hai. mai wahi karunga jisse aapko khushi mile.
Pammi:- tho mai nainatara ko kal office bheju?
Maan:- haa, maa.jaise aap chahe.
Pammi:- mera chha beta,mujhe pata hai beta aap kabhi apni maa ka baathy tall sakthe hai.mai chalthi hu.
Maan:- ab ye naintara ko office mebhi jhilna pada. patanahi waha aaker kounsi jaal chalathi hai. Arjun se kehna padegaki ispe ek nazar rakhneca dalnekeliye.
pammi came out and went to naina room and told wat maan told.
Naina:- maa,aap such kehrahihoki maan jisuch me mujhe m.d. bananeki kaha?
Pammi:_ haa,, beta ye such hai ab aap kalse maan ke saath office jaanahai.
Dev:- sunke ye baath,kya, naina,,aur m.d. he laughed loudly and said m.d. of k.c. he again laughed.
Naina:- is me itna hasneki kya hai?
Dev:- hassi nahi tho, isa tumme kya dekha hai bro jo tume m.d. banarahi ho?
Naina:-aur kya karogi, tum tho nahi chahthe hai na ye sab?aurnaap dekhiye mai kase ek,ek,ker kaise sab property meri hath may lake dunga, aap dekhthe rahiye hasthe rahiye ek din mai ye sab ki rani banunga.
Pammi:- sapne dekhna ko bahut accha hotha hai lekin tum jaha takjavunge tho bhi tum hame bhul nahi chahiye,samjhe?
Nainatara:-immediately covered her colourand facked respect towards her
nahi nahi mammiji, mai aapko kaise bhul sakthe hu, ye sab pehla aapka hai bad me hi mera hai.
Pammi:- thik hai. ab mai chalthi hu.
Dev:- wah,, wah,, naina kitna jhatse badalthe ho tum apni rang.
Naina:-isatho aapko pataya maine.
Dev:- wahi meri badnaseebhai he murmered
Naina:- kya kaha aapn?
Dev:- kuch nahi he went out.
Precap:- Maan met geet giving lift to her house.



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read all the parts loved the story line.
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Part:-28
Kuch dinonke baad.
Maan is returning fr. a meeting towards his office at 4.30.p.m. He saw geet standing on the side of the road with her scooty. She is trying to start it, but itis not listening her.Maan stopped car and came out of it andwent to her.
Geet:- ye mujhe se nahi ho raha hai,ek kaam karthi hu Prasant ko phone karthi hu she started vto call prasant.
Maan:-Kya hua ise?
Geet startled by his sudden voice,looked at him getting shock.
"Aap" her usual exclaim.
Maan questioned her with his eyes movement.
Geet:- pata nahi suddenly ruk gayi aur start nahi horahahai.
Maan opened his mouth to say something,but before he say something geet said irritated by his presence there,
Geet:- Dekhiye ab isme meri galathi nahi hai, ye apne aap rukgayi, maine kuch nahi kiya,aap mujhe math sunayiyeand so and so...
Maan:- Chup, bilkul chup... kitna bolthi ho aap? thag nahi javogi bolthe bolthe, aur kisne kaha aap ne kuch kiya?
[Geet looked up and started cribbling to babaji ,isebhi abhi bhejna tha aapk?kyu aap mujhe itna pareshan kerrahiho?
Maan:- ab chupchaap gadime baithiye,aur chabi mujhe do.
Geet:- kyu? mera gadi ko kya karoge aap? aur muje aapki madat nahi chahiye, mai khud thik karwathi hu.
Maan:- kisne kaha ki mai aapki madat karnewaali hu?maitho khud ki madat karrahihu.
Geet:- kyaa?
Maan:- haa,.. aur nahi tho kya?.. tum prasant ko phone karnewaali ho,aur ye is wakth ek important meeting mai hai,aap call karetho wo mera karodonka meeting chode ke aapke paas bhag ke ajathahai, aur isme mera karodonka rupayenuksaanhojathahai. mai nahi chahtha,ki tumhari ye stupid gadi ki wajase mere karodonka nuksaan hojaye, isliye tho maiaapko lift dethahu. ab chupchaap gadi me baithiye .
Maan opened the door to her. but she went to sit in back seat.
Maan;- hellow,.. mai aapki driver nahi huki aap shaan se piche baithneki,,aage aake beto.
GEET:- babaji; ye kyu isa behave kerrahehai?, she murmered.
Babaji ko baad me pareshaankarna, ab chabi kakako dijiye aur ghar ka pata bathayiye. ye aapki gadi thik karwake ghar thak pahunchdega. geet chabi ramu kaka ko deke ghar ka pata bataya.
Maan:- ab ,,seat belt pehenlo.
Geet:- babaji,,ye kya horahahaimera saath? aaj mera din hi kharab hai, pehle Dishu thik nahi hai,ab mera gadi repair ho gayi.
Maan:- kya hua dishu ko?
Geet:- aaj subah isko thoda bhukaar hai ghar me arpitha ke saath hai. pata nahi ab kaise hai?
Maan:= dr. ke pass nahi gayi?
Geet:{ Arpitha leke gayi. kuch med.diyehai.
Maan:- bukaar kisliye?
Geet:- kuch season badalthehuye ki wajase.
Maan:-driving the car and was taking the lane which geet told to kaka,.. but geet said, nahi mujhe prasant ka ghar jana hai, dishu ko dekhna hai.
Maan:- matlab,aap unke saath nahi rahthiho?
Geet:- nahi mai, akeli rahthi hu dishuke saath.
Maan:- isa kyu?.. aapko aapki beti ke saath rahna haina?
Geet:- nahu mujhe accha nahi lagtha unke beech rahna, wo mera betanahi hai daamaad hai, aur wo jawwan bacha hai, mai nahi chahtha hu ki kabaab me haddi banneka
Maan:- per ,, aap ko akeli rahna thik,nahi hai,kisiko aapki saath rahna jaruri hai.
Geet:- nahi mai khud meri khayaal rakhsakthi hu[getting angry]
Maan:- wo mai acchi tarah jaanthi hu ki aap ...
geetgetting angry bon his mocking and said pointing her finger to him
Geet:-dekhiye ab aap phirse suru math kijiye,..
Maan laughed loudly and immeadiarly closed his mouth seeing her red angry eyes
she told him prasant ka ghar ka adress,and he drove the car to ghar.

Precap:- maan dishu dosthi.




Edited by anuradha.nandam - 12 years ago
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Part:-29
Geet;- Thank.u. said geet getting down the car.Maan:- Thank u isahi bolthe hai kamsekam ek cup coffebhi nahipilathe, isehi ghar se baaharse hi bhejhthe hai aap? wo bhi?aapki madat karnekeliye?
Geet:- aap ne kaha aap mere madat nahi karna chahthe hai, aur aapne aapkomadat karrahiho, tho phir mai kyu aapko coffe pilau?
waisebhi mujhe kiski madat udharselene acchi nahi lagthi. so aap under aasakthehai.
Maan:- mai aapki invitation se nahi araha hu, mujhe dishu ko dekhna hai isiliye mai araha hu under.
Geet:- accha tho chaliye under.
they went inside the house.
Nani;;;.. dishu came running seeing geet.
then seeing maan she stopped and hugged geet with fear.
Dishu:- nani;.. ye phir se aapko datne aaya?
Geet:- nahi meripari;;ye aapse milne aaya
Arpitha:- maa;; aap kab aayi?,then looking maan surprisigly and felt strange and said, namasthe sir,aap kab aaya?
Geet:- told wat happened to her gadi maans lift etc etc to her.
Arpitha:- ho;; thank u sir,
Maan:- ab kaise hai dishu?
Arpitha:- thik,hai. ab bukaar nahi hai khelrahi hai pura din aaram nahi lerahi hai isko pakadna bahut mushkil hai sir.
Maan:- bahut active hai pyaara bhi, called dishuto come to him.
dishu shook her head in no.
Maan;- why?
Dishu:- aap bahut bure ho, nani ko dataus din bahut gussa hai aap mujhe dar lagrahahai
Geet:- nahi dishu, maine kahathana us din ye mujhe nahi data, tum javo uske paas.
Dishu:- aap such me gussa nahi hai?mujhe nahi datogena?
Maan:- nahi datungi avo mera paas. [ he was very much wanted to hold her in his arms. he was attracted by her as she is very cute and nave, beautiful blikul choti geet]
Dishu came slowly to maan,
Maan took her in to his arms kaise ho aap? bukaar cahagaya? dishu shook her head to yes.
Arpitha:- aap baithiye sir, mai aapko coffe lekar aathihu.
Geet:- tum rehnedo arpi mai lathi hu coffe, she went inside to bring coffe[dono went to kicthen]
dishu is still in fear of Maan,her eyes scanning maan looking unbelieving him.
Aap such me nahi datogena mujhe? she asked again.
Maan felt very bad for his behaviuor on that day , nahi datungi,,he said.
Aur nani ko bhi nahi datogena?
Maan:- nahi datungi.
Dishu:- Plomish,.. she extended her hand to him.
Maan:-plomish he mocked exactly
Dishu:- nani kehthi hai,,. kisi pe chillana, datna,buri baath hai, hume pyaarse baath karna chahiye.
Maan;- accha ,.tho hum aaj se wahikarenge. thik hai?
Dishu:- haa, aap Rahul bhaiki mamu hai?
Maan:- umm.
Dishu:- aapne diyana bhai ko ye badasa aeroplain ka toy?
wo mujhebahut pasand hai?
Maan:- tumhe pasand hai? chalo, mai tumhe bhi bilkulisa toy leke dedunga kal.
Dishu:-nahi..nahi.. aap mujhe kyu denge toy ? nani kehthi hai isa kisi khai se gifts nahi lethe. nani e mujhe ye toy gift karthe hgai mere birth day per.
Maan:_ mai koi khai nahi hu abhi abhi hum dost bangaya haina, dost se gifts lena galat nahi hai.
Dishu: mai ek baar nani se puch ke bataunga aapko.
geet came with black coffe to him and gave it to him.
he took it fr. her dropping dishu.
he keep looking at geet and slowly sipped the coffe and smiled finding it bilkul inki taste ki
Maan:-Tho aap nahi bulaya mera taste?
maitho socha aap bhulgaya hoga.
Geet:_ maibhi bhulna chahtha tha, lekin babaji ne kuch aur decide kiyana.
Maan:- ab isme babaji kya kiya?
Geet:- pehle babaji ne aapko prasant kiboss banadiya,phir rahul ki mamu., phir anwesha ki bhai, pata nahi aage kya.. kya.. banadega babaji e aap ko?
Maan:- laughed at her irritating and pouted face and said sorry, agar mai aapko itna pareshan kardiya tho.
geetimmeditely gained her sence , as shenever wantto someone feel sorry , she never allow anyone to feel sorry for her.
no,,no,, aapko sorry bolneke jarurat nahi hai aapka koi galat nahi hai actually maine kuch jyaada bolgaya aap tho hamesha mera madat kiya aur maine aapko galat samjhaya.
sorry tho mujhe hi bolna chahiye tha.. sorry.
Maan:- no.. no.. geet sorry mujhe bolna tha...Geet:- no no. maanjimujhe ...
Maan:- nahi mujhe sorry...
Geet:- nahi ..nahi..

mujhe bolnatha...
like tha they started again fighting
mean while prasant came inside and shocked😲 for first his boss at his house and again thair fight...
Prasant:- hello,, sir, aap yaha aur aap phirse sir sejhagada kerahi ho?
Geet:- kya? mai jhagadakerrahi ho? maitho unhe sorry bolnachahthi hu.
Maan:- chodo prasant ye inki sorry bolneka tarika, wo bhi jhagada jaise hothe hai
Geet:- kya..kaha aap? phise kaho..
Arpitha:- maa,, aap please under challo
she took her inside
Prasant:- sorry sir, maa ki taraf se pata nahi ,maa ko kya hogaya, wo ise nahi hai sir, bahut acchahai sir, pata nahi kyu aapse itna jhagadthe hai?
Maan:- sorry bolneki koi jarurat nahi hai,mai ne ise kuch jyaada irritate kiya hai.
Prasant:- kyu?
Maan:- wo sab chode ye batha.. kaise hai aapki meeting?
Prasant;-accha,hai sr, ye deal hume mligayi.. aur aap mere ghar me kaise?
Maan explained every thing to him
Prasat:- thank.u. sir.
Maan:-ab mai chaltha hu.
he said bye to dishu and kissed her. he looked at arpitha and said unse kahiye coffe acchi hai and he left.
Geet didnt come per stand behind the door and listened everything and smiled in herself.
Precap:-Naina taras entry in k.c.


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