Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
hai anu
first of all sorry for not reading ur story on a regular basis... recently i saw the completed heading and i started reading this... i finished reading in 3 days... as this was quite addicting... when i finish reading one update it became hard to stop than jumping to the next one😆
the concept of the story is really unique... i have read many stories in this forum... but ur concept is really hatke as it had a middle aged maan and geet ...and i must say u completely did justice to this ... i understand this concept will be more hard to write than the usual ones... as u r dealing with matured maaneet and also dealing with family and society... but i really liked how u dealt with all...
the best thing i loved in this was the slow process of falling of love which u shown very beautifully... as they are matured people love at first sight and all wont suit ... but u very nicely shown how both saw the others qualities and fell in love...
the two most important things in their love was how their family and society will react and how to handle it... in maans family i really loved was arjun... dev was a surprise element as in the initial parts of the story we find him naalaayak but later transformed for his brother... in geets family my fav is prashant... he handled many situations so maturely and nicely... especially the karwa chaut part and the engagement part... dishu is the other one which i adored... she is really a cutie pie...
geets second daughter and her hubby who were the ones among them who felt maaneet marriage a bit odd in the beginning.. i liked that u included this which really gave a realistic touch to the story...
maaneets love scenes were so romantic and some hot too😉... their depth of love is vast and many scenes clearly shown that... one among them was when geet was admitted to hospital and when she got conscious she shouted for maan... and also when geet openly confessed her love seeing maans turmoil and tensed... 👏
vamps of ur story ... uff kya devilish hain yaar... teeno, pammi-nt-sameera... ek se badkar ek... am not able to decide who among them are more devilish...😆
enjoyed reading a different type of story on our maaneet...
thank you
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