MGFF- ESSENCE OF LOVE-THD-5/PART-60/14-6-2013 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91


wonderful part...

sabse achcha laga when dev took Maan side and told Naintara clearly that he will not tolerate any insulting words about his brother...

and Maan pushed Sameera out of room...but I am afraid Sameera is very dangerous and above all she has permission to cross any limits to get Maan from Pammi...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
stupid sameera
nice update
than for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
grrr naina pammi and sameera...

loved dev here, wish he would change and take class of naina good...

interesting precap...wonder if geet is injured or troubled by pammi and hence this statement by maan waiting eagerly
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
part 78
awesome update 👏
heheheh I missed maan in his dd avatar😳 sooo much so thank u for bringing the msk back 😳😆
yes maan ne toh Vicky ki band Baja di (hi five) 😆now I want to see Vicky sitting in jail and pising chakki 😆
plsss let naintara and pammi accompany him yaar 😡😆
feeling so bad for that girl😭 but I will not pity her😃 becoz I know girls are way stronger than boys when it comes to deal with emotion I will just pray to god to give her that strength to fight her fears and live her life peacefully hope that scars soon disappears😃 .loved maaneet so much they are doing great job
wohoo geet already missing maan and taking care of him😳 (good geet partice makes man perfect are don't give me that look geet hi toh maan ki future wife and life hai righ😳t )
maan kept his promise yaar 😳👏
plsss I want them to beg for their death anu make them live in hell plzzz its a sincere req😡
god I hate this nainatara sooo much 😆😡😡😡(u cant calculate my hatred its beyond measures😆 )
she had guts to visit geets school and insult her 😡😡
loved the way the principal supported geet lest she knew that maan to phele se hi geet ki team me hai😳😆
hahahah maan lashed out naina brilliantly good !!!! keep it up maan 😳👏
a warning to the badmash company !!!!!😡😡
listen good for not morons !!!! better watch ur way becoz it will soon lead to ur much awaited doom
and yes geet ko harm karna is next to impossible 😆
so plzzz forget her and if possible ur evil dirty plans too(take tips from aamir plzzz are he acted in ghajni naa that's why)😆
commenting for 79 tooo 😃
love aanya 😃
Edited by aanya84 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
part 79 as usual awesome part👏
😃dev love u thank u so much for telling all this about maan but u r wasting energy becoz ur wife doesn't have brains to understand ur gratitude 😆😡
anu from this update I rediscovered maan
elegance and attitude is something that maan was born with 😉
maan babu sab hai then get a wife too 😉
naintara just buzz off plzzz 😡😡
are yaar magnet sam back!!!!😆
she is so annoying 😡
buaji ki bachi plzzz don't eye maan he is already someone 😳😆(mera )
yuck I hope she never succeeds in her plans 😡
pammi yaar this women will never let maan live in peace
how can maan call her as his mom
she deteriorates the position of a mother😡
plsss maan don't call a witch in disguise of a women ur mother 😡
heehhe loved the way maan shooed away that chipku😡
arghhh geet come fast to the rescue 😆😃
waiting waiting plsss update soon 😃
waiting for maaneet talk and the precap
thank u so much for the pm😃
love aanya 😃
p.s I know u must be thinking where I vanished all of a sudden actually my exams are starting from 19 july . and my schedule is very hectic but worry not though I will be thoda late to comment but will defo read ur story as I am addicted to it
I will comment also
and I know part 77 ka comment was pending so commented on pg 12 tooo
Edited by aanya84 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
nice update
ye sameera grrr
good that maan replied her...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

MGFF- ESSENCE OF LOVE-THD-6/ part-80/2-7-2013





Part:- 80
Next morning Maan got ready and came to b.f. table. He saw Sameera there waiting for him,he felt disgusted to see her . He moved to office without taking b.f.
He pissed off by Sameera as she tried to come very close to him while he was doing his workouts, wearing more revealing dress and doing her workouts in a provoking manner and trying to seduce him. He stopped his workout in the middle and went out. He went to his office with Arjun as they have a meeting. He went directly to the meeting.
Here Geet sat in her house as today is second saturday no school to her. Dishu went to her dadi ka ghar along with Prasant and Arpitha. So she was alone. Her thoughts slowly went towards Maan. "kitna accha insaan hai wo,kitni achhi tarike se wo itna bada baath ko samhala,humesha apna waada nibhaneki khoshish karthe hai,meri waja se unhe kitna pareshaani utthna pada, apni pariwaar ko kaise samjha hoga?Mai ne aaj tak kisi ko nahi dekha isa siva, Manchanda uncle,Prasant, aur Aakash. Sab log mujhe gandhi nazar se dekhthe hai,humesha mera akelapan, mera mujboorise fhyida utthaneki khoshish karthe, per unhone mujhe kabhi isi nazar se dekha nahi, kabhi mera akelapan, majboori se fhyida utthane ka khoshish nahi ki.Ye pehla mard hai, jisne mujhe ek aurat nahi ek insaan ki nazar se dekha. Mera feelings ko kadar ki. Kabhi nahi pucha mera pati ke baare me, ye jaan kar bhi ki mai akeli rahthi hu. Kabhi nahi mujhe galat tarikonse peshaya. mera saari baath maanlethe hai, bahut acchese mujhe samajthe hai. Itni dinose saath,saath chalthe hai hum per ek baar bhi use mera saath batthameez nahi kiya,bulki mai unke saath hotho bahut secure feel karthi hu.Bahut care karthe hai mujhe. Haa,.. thoda attitude hai,...per itna bada businessman hai awaard winner hai, unhe bantha hai . Har ek aurat ko isa pati miletho kitna accha hoga,kitna khush hothe unki zindagi? Per unhone shaadi kyu nahi kiya abhi tak?mai ne kabhi nahi pucha iski baare me. Geet,.. tum pagal hogayi ho? tumhe kya farak padtha hai, ki ye shaadi kare ya na kare,usne kabhi pucha tumhari baareme? ki tumhara pati koun hai? kaha hai? kyu nahi hai tumhara saath? Agar wo pucha tho kya jawaab doge tum?tum chup rahna. tumhe koi haq nahi hai uske baare me isa sochneki.tum bhul gayi ho, ki tumhari aukat? had me rahna warna bahut bura hojayegi,she warned to herself. chal tu apna kaam kar lunch ka time horha hai kuch bana ke khalo.
And geet prepared a lavish lunch thinking about him , all Maans favt. without thinking why she is preparing them as he never comes to lunch.After preparing lunch she sat thinking why i prepared all his favts. he wont come to lunch, ab mai kya karu? Her coleague Shantha called her for shopping to xyz shopping mall. Geet said o.k. to her and started to get ready, when she remembered that k.c. is on the way to the mall. So she packed all lunch in hot pack and started on her scooty. She parked her scooty in front of k.c. and went to give the carriage to Maan. She went to the reception and asked for Maan.The r,g. said that he is in the meeting. So geet asked the r.g. to give the carriage to Maan after the meeting. The r,g. asked who send madam, geet sadi fr. home and went out.
Maan and Arjun came out after meeting. Sameera came and hugged him saying 'Maan"
Maan:- tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? he asked her irritatingly.releasing her harshly.
Sameera:_ mai tumhe lunch keliye lene ayithi, chalo Maan hum kahi baahar jayenge lunch keliye.
Meanwhile r.g. came and gave him the carriage saying ,sir,..aapka lunch".
Maan surprized "lunch"?Arjun also looked confused, as they never get lunch fr.home because they always have lunch meetings and dont know where willbe.
Maan:- who bring this?
R.G.:_Ek aurat aayithi sir, scooty me she said lunch fr. home i didnt ask her name.
Aurat on scooty se Maan ko pata chala ye koun hai.he looked at arjun smilingly. Arjun understand who is it.
Maan:- took the carriage and said to sameera, mera lunch tho agaya, ab tum kisi our ko dhundna lunch keliye. with that he went insid to have lunch.,as he is famished since morning he had nothing.
Maan:-" pata nahi ise kaise pata chal jatha ki mai bhuki hu". he murmered.but Arjun heared it,
Arjun:- isse pyaar kah tha hai jiju.
Maan looked at Arjun saying, Arjun;,..
Arjun:- o.k.,..o.k.,.. i dont say anything , mai nahi chahtha itna lavish lunch miss karu.
Maan:- laughed and sat on couch to open the carriage, all his favts.
Arjun:_ wah,.. wah,.. sab aapki favts, kya baath hai jiju, aaj kuch khaas hai kya? waise aaj "Di" ko itni araam kaise mili?
Maan:- Aaj inko chutti hai, se.saturday.
Arjun:- wo,.. tho ye baath hai and they started to have.
Sameera left fr. there frustrated , i will never ;leave that filth, mera saara plans uski waje se hi flap hogaya. kitna plan kiya tha mai ne maan ke saath lunch karneka, kisne kaha use lunch bhejneka? and she went out thinking wat to do to geet.
After lunch Maan called geet.
Maan:- thanks for the lavish lunch, tumhe kaisa pata chala ki mai bhuki hu.
Geet:_ lunch kiya aapne? kyu bhuki aap, b.f. nahi kiya?
Maan:_ wo ,.. mai thoda jaldi me ana pada meeting keliye isliye mai nahi kiya. Agar mujhe patachaltha ki itni lavish khana miljayegi tho mai roj b.f. skip karke aavunga office.
Geet:- aap chahe tho roj khana bijvaunga iskeliye tho aap b.f. skip karneki jarurat nahi aap ki tabiyat kharaab ho jayegi.Alot of sound in that mall
Maan:- kya hai wo shore sharaba? kaha hai aap?
Geet:- mai ek mall me hu colegue ke saath aayithi.
Maan senced something danger will be happen to her. he dont know why he was feeling like that,he feared thinking something.
Maan:_ aap...aap...kyu akeli aaya ho? kya jarurat thi aapko akeli mall aneka?
Geet:- confused by his question and said mai tho hamesha akeli hi jaathi hu. per aap kyu itna ghabara rahi ho?Maan:- controlling himself and said nahi mera matlab aap waha rukiye mai araha hu mai aapko ghar choddetha hu.
Geet:- lekin mera scooty hai, use kya karu? aap aap ki kaam chode yaha aaneki kya jarury hai, dekiye aap itni pareshaan honeki jarurat nahi hai, mai chyala jaungi ghar.
Maan:- geet,.. chup chaap meri baath suno,.. haa, aap wahi rukiye, akeli nahi logonke beech, mai abhi araha hu.
Geet loked confused" inhe ab kya hogaya?" she send her coleague by saying that she has to wait for some one. so shantha went away.
Maan rushed to the parking and get in to the car, and said xyz mall. kaka started the car, maan said fast, kaka looked at him confused , he was looking very tensed,kya hua chote babu?
Maan:- geet hai waha kaka akeli hai, hume jaldi jana hoga, mujhe lagtha hai kuch honewaala hai uske saath.
Hearing geet name kaka speed up the car breaking all the traphic rules. As soon as they reached Maan looked at geet who is standing out of mall looking for him. A truck is coming very fast towards geet. Maan looked at this and ran to her and pulled her by her hand towards himself. She landed directly on his chest. the truck went fastly..
Maan hold her very tightly as if he was holding a very precious thing in the world, it would be vanish if he leave it. Geet came to sence and found herself in maans embrass and hugged by him. she felt so secure in his arms. She slowly released herself fr,his hold calling" Maanji"
Maan came to sence and asked her in fearful and worried voice"tum thik tho ho na? tumhe kuch hua tho nahi na?
Geet said him mai thik hu ,mujhe kuch nahi hua. Aap ghabarayiye math,mai thik hu.
She consoled him by giving assurance to him that she is fine by holding his face, mai thik hu she said again. Maan took her hand and said mai darr gayahu, wo truck bilkul tumhari taraf araha hai.
Geet again cupped his face and tell him mai thik hu.
Maan:-"Agar tumhe kuch hojatha tho, mai zinda..." he wanted to say something but geet stopped him by saying kuch nahi hu mai bilkul thik hu, aap itna kyu darr rahihi?
Maan didnt say anything he dont want to say her about naintara, more over he wanted to confirm that it is a murder attempt done by nainatara.
Kaka bring car to him and stopped and came out of the car Maan looked at him meaningfully, and kaka shooked his head. Maan opened the door and asked geet to sit in passenger seat.
He went and took seat behind the wheels. Kaka asked the key of scooty. Maan droved the car silently. His face is still full of tension and his jaw muscles have been become tight in anger. His eyes spitting fire. His every muscle of body still in tension. He looked very restless. Geet noticed that she felt his tension and worry still in him. She kept her hand on his hand and told him i am fine, aap tension math lo.mai bilkul thik hu, mujhe kuch nahi hua. He said looking her worriedly "Geet". She assured him by blinking her eyes.

Precap:-"Isa muh math banayiye, mai tumhe khajaunga".

Edited by anuradha.nandam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Yippee me first 😃
Omg what a dhammaka update Anu 👏
I am still recovering from the shock😲
God this sammera will never change yuck she is so gross I hate her😡
And will never get tried of saying women take a break yaar just 😡
Becoz u want to settle with Maan u can't cross ur limit 😡
Waise Bhi I think I am waiting my time explaining her who has already donated her 😆
Good for nothing brains long before 😆
Arghhh Maan had to stop his workout regime for this magnet 😡
Sammera plzzz consult a doctor u desperately need that 😆
Arjun good going yaar hope u help Maan and geet in their complicated love story 😳
Woohoo geet made lunch for Maan and was thinking about him too great going geet keep it up 😳
Hahaha Sam KA plan flop yes 😆oye hello dare u call our geet filth just look at ur self u will soon come to 😡
Know how disgusting u r 😡. It's so true Beauty lies within and geet is the perfect eg for this 😃
I hope god just give some brains to Sam 😡
Omg Maan is relishing all his fav food Anu not fair yaar even I want to eat
Thank god Maan saved geet 😉
Aww he cares for her so much 😃
Hope he was in her life before only then she would not have faced such prob😃
True yaar for girls life is so tough I sometimes really feel to just question god once that why life is so unfair with us safety is something that a girl cherishes at home only ( that too in rare cases becoz sometimes homes are also prone to danger) I just hope to see one day when a girl can enjoy her freedom to the fullest .😃
Geet's life in danger don't tell me that monster is back 😲
If he is warning to him😡
Listen u pig headed moron plzzz stay out of geet's life if u want to live for some days more but if u ever try to cross her way then u will defo meet a wall named " msk"😉
Precap is interesting 😉
Waiting waiting waiting 😃
Thank u so much for the pm
Love aanya 😃
Edited by aanya84 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Haayee loved this part sooo much.Geet thought abt maan's behaviour & prepared all his favourite & she sent it into his office too.Haayee maan is so happy eating all geet's dishes & sameera fumed in anger.Now maan got scare feeling geet alone & he saw that truck gonna hit her & saved her...loved it..& precap is sooo hot!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update hope they confess to each other soon.

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