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Posted: 11 years ago

MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd-9/part-130/pg.63/28/4/2014






Part:-130,
Here in Arpithas house ,
Prasant and Arpitha went home all silent. They completed their puja and vrat all silent. None spoke . Later they sat to dinner. Arpitha is not in mood to have dinner,she eat nothing staid like that all lost herself. Dishu kept disturbing her and she snapped on her . Dishu felt hurt and looked at her with tearfull eyes .Prasant observed arpithas state of mind and calmly took dishu to the bedroom.

Dishu:- papa,.. kya hua mama ko? nani ne mama ko daata?
Prasant:- nahi ,.. mera bachha,.. mama ko aaj bahut kaam hai aur wo aaj upwaas bhi rakhi hai tho,.. wo bahut thak gayi ,. tum aja main tumhe sulatha hu,.. and he made her to sleep.
After some time Arpitha came to bedroom after completing her kitchen cores.
She went to her side calmly and laid there keeping her hand on her eyes crossing. Both better know that they r not sleeping, but didnt dare to speak in their own turmoil and confusion.
Prasants s.t.:-jaantha hu Arpitha,. thumhare ander kya chalraha hai?I know its a big shock to u. Mujhe samaj nahi araha hai ki main kya karu? Shall i console u or convince u? wat would i do? mai nahi jaantha hoon ki thum kya chahthe ho? thum kya sochthe ho? ye itni choti baath nahi hai ki jhad se decision lene kaa,.. hume bahut kuch sochna padtha hai ,.. bahut saaraa issues hai isme solve kaerneka ,.. per kuch bhi sochne se pehle ,.. Kuch bhi karne se pehle main thumhari rai jaanna chatha hu ,.. hum jaldbaaz mein kuch nahi karsakthe ,.. kuch nahi kahsakthe ,.. ye bahut sencitive bath hai ,..isse solve karna itni aasan nahi hai ,..thum ise chup rahe tho main kuch nahi karsaktha,..thumhe baath karna hoga,.. mujhe se open up arpitha ,.. ise ander ander ghut ne se pblm nahi solve hogi ,.. and he tried to call her ,.. Arpitha,...Arpitha... she didnt answer him as she is not in a mood to talk to him ,... right,.. actually she didnt want as she is still in her turmoil r to say correctly in a shock.
Arpithas s.t.:-
Kya hai ye sab? kya horaha hai? kya ye such hai jo maine dekha aur suna maa,.. Maan sir se pyarr karthe hai ? aur shaadi bhi karni chahthi hai? mine jo kuch suna aur dekha kya wo such hai? agar such hai tho itne din se hume kyu nahi pata chala? haa,... jaanthi hu kuch dino se maa ki bartaav kuch azeeb lagraha hai ,.. lekin iska matlab ye hai ? ye hume kyu nahi pata chala? Maan sir ko leke maa bahut pareshaan hothi hai jab se unka accident hua ,.. ye sab isliye hua hai ki wo Maan sir se pyaar karthe hai,.. aur hume is baath ka ehsaas bhi nahi hua. humne pehle isa kyu nahi socha? kabhi hume ye jaane ki khoshish bhi nahi ki maa kya chahti hai? unki man mein kya hai? wo maa se pehle,... wo ek aurat hai,.. unki bhi kai ichha hogi ,.. kai armaan hogi jo wo humse shaayad kah nahi paathi ,.. ye humari galathi hai ki kabhi hum isa nahi socha nahi paaae ,...bus unki jimmedaari leliya aur uss jimmedaari ki chakkar mein hum unhe ek chakre me baandliya,.. prasant thilk kaha uss din. prasant bilkul thik tha .
Kitne sunder lagrahe hai mama un kapdo mein? wo saari aur gahne sir ne diya hoga maa ko. kitna khubsoorat lagrahi hai maa un kapdo mein uss sringaar mein? bilkul ek suhagan ki tarah,.. bus maathe pe sindoor aur gale me mangalsutre ki kami hai. dono bilkul perfect lagraha hai . a perfect couple jaisa ,.. ek dusere keliye bane . Maa kitna khush lagrahi hai sir ke saath? unki aankho mein ye chamak, hoto pe ye muskurahat chahre pe lali,.. kabhi nahi dekha itna khush mamako.,.. 30 saal pehe jo kuch hua isme maa ki kya galathi hai ,.. wo kyu apni zindagi barbaad karni hai ,..kyu isa berang ki zindagi jina hai? aur itni saal thak aisa kabhi nahi socha bus humare liye jirahi hai wo,... aaj tak sab kuch kiya wo humare liye kabhi kuch kaha nahi apneliye kabhi kuch pucha nahi apne liye pehli baar ,... pehli baar wo kuch chahthi hai,.. abtak tho wo humaare liye sab kuch kiya ,... unki khushi ,. unki chahate , unki zindagi baare mein wo kabhi nahi socha ab humari baari hai ,.. unkeliye kuch karneki ,.. agar wo yahi chahthe hai tho mujhe koi eitraaj nahi hai,.. chahe dunia kuch kahe,... samaj kuch kahe ,.. pariwaar kuch kahe,. mai lad sakthi hu puri dunia se,... mama keliye chahe kuch bhi hojaay,... mai mama ko ye khushi dilwaathi hu. maa ko unki pyaar se milwaathi hu,.. undonoko ek karwaathi hu,...
Maan sir bahut achhe aur nake insaan hai ,.. wo maa ki bahut izzat karthe hai wo maa ko khush rakhte hai,. maa unki saath khush rahthi hai
lekin unke gharwaalo? wo log is rishthe ko kabhi nahi maanthe,.. wo maa ko kabhi nahi apnayenge. Maan sir ki maa .. maa se bahut nafrat karthe hai ,..pehli wo bahut galathfami pe hai ,.. kaise kaise anapshnap bolerahi thi wo us din? i am sure wo kabhi nahi chahthi hai ye. kaisa kaisa ilzaam lagarahi thi wo maa per. kitni gandi gandi baathe karthi hai wo? aur wo Nayantara.. wo tho maa ki jaan ki peeche padgayi ,.. maa ko marna chahthi hai wo ,.. maa per hamla karwaayi unhone. ye jaan kar maa ko waha khatra hai ,.. maikaise ye rishte ko maan sakthi hu.mere liye maa ki khushi se badkar unki salamti jyaada important hai jaan buj kar mai unhe waha nahi bhej sakthi. pehlehi unki saath bahut kuch hua wo soch kar mera dil kaap rahe hai. ab phir se mai maa ki zindagi dav per nahi lagasakthi hu
Aur tho mai is baath per Maan sir per bhi bharosa nahi karsathi hu ,.. kyunki wo uss N.T. ko isa hi chode diya kuch nahi kiya , unhe ,.. inki khilaaf kuch bhi action nahi liya unhone ye kah kar ki wo unki bhai ki patni hai,.. isi haalat me mai kaise maan sir per bharosa rakhthi hu.,.. wo ache hai nake hai ,.. maa ko pyaar karthe hai ,.. per unka pariwaar unke jaisa nahi hai, wo hume galat samaj rahe,.. hum sab inki paiso ke peeche padrahe hai isa sochrahe wo ,.. bahut neeche sochrahe humari baare mein,.. maa bahut bholi hai nadaan hai har kisi ko apna samajthe hai ,.. unhe ye tak pata nahihai ki N.T.ne unper hamla karwaaya .Mai kya karu? maa ko kaise mana karu?mujhe unki khushi se badkar unki salamti ki fikar hai ,.. aur ye bharosa mujhe Maan sir se nahi milraha.. unki family ke khilaaf wo kuch nahi kar payega.. agar maa ko kuch ho jata tho?hum ji nahi sakthe,.. wo humari zindagi hai,.. unki khushi kelye hum kuch bhi karsakthe lekin unki zindagi dav per nahi lagasakthe,..mein kya karu ? mai jaanthi hu maa humare khilaaf kuch nahi karengi ,.. agar humne mana kiya tho wo apne pyaar, armaan feelings sab kuch unki ander daba ker rahthi hai ,.. itna pyaar jo karthi hai hume? mujhe kya karna hai? hey,.. bhagwaan ye kaise uljhan me dala aap ne hume? kaise hum isse solve karenge?




link for part 131:-https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3668596&PID=105629947&#p105629947








Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
arpita still couldnt get out of the shock n blasting on her daugh
prasanth wants her 2 open up to him
she is in such a turmoil
she knew maan is gud n her mother s happiness lies on him
but his family wont accept it
she still doesnt know what he has done to protect geet
warna woh yese nehi sochegi her moms life will be in danger in maans fam
nice part
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Posted: 11 years ago
arpita is positive but having fear to lose her mother
nice update

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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update. Am so glad Arita got to know her moms feelings also glad she understood her. Once she knows what all maan has done to protect her mom she would feel better
Maan has to now convince arpi tea about all this
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update.
Aripata is in turmoil. She doesn't know wat to do or not.
She is doubt maan protection toward geet. She doesn't know wat maan done 4 geet security till now.
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG!! new story for me...😃...thanks for the link...I have read the update , but didn't understand much...so I will try to read all the previous parts as soon as possible...I have bookmarked it...I just need 1 week to finish all of them ( well I hope so )...
Good bye now & will start reading from tomorrow...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update...
both arpitha n prashant are lost in their thoughts...
prashant wats her to open up to him
she also kknows that maan is very good fer her mother...
she will feel better once she come to know what maan hsd done to keep geet safe...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yeh baat sach hai ki beti jab badi hoti hai toh "MAA" ban jati hai...
Aaj arpita bhi geet ke baarein mein ek maa ki tarha sochti hai...
Aur sab pehlu ko dekhti hai...
Woh apni maa ko thik tarike se pehchanti hai aur sochti hai ki hum mana karenge toh maa bhi mana kar dengi...aur yeh baat batati hai ki woh geet ke kitni karib hai
Woh geet ke liye duniya aur samaj se ladne ke liye bhi taiyaar hai...sach mein woh ek bahadur ladki hai...Arpita ke mann mein kafi sawal bhi hai par woh usske solution bhi nikal legi...
Humare samaj mein Geet jaisi Kai maa hai jinki jindgi mushkilo se bhari hai agar woh sabke paas Arpita jaisi beti ho toh sabki jindgi aasan ho jayegi...
Anu, jis tarha se tumne aaj Arpita ki mansik halat dikhayi hai aur jis tarha se woh Geet ke liye sochti hai...ek bahadur ladki hi aise soch sakti hai...👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago


Geet kept fast for Maan and Maan also...hayee what a love they possess for each other...

their moments together were so beautiful...Arpita and Prashant saw them doing pooja and lovingly fed each other and they also listened how Geet is in turmoil for her children reaction to their love...

Arpita prashant listened and understood that their mother loves Maan and want to move on with him and this is her desire but she is worried for the fact that how will her children react to this...Arpita thinking and realized that her mother has every right to love and be loved...yes she is worried for her mother's safety and dignity so she can confront Maan and talk every fear with him...

the updates I missed from them the most wonderful was when Naintara and her intentions exposed in front of Dev and he took actions...

wonderful updates,...

thanx for pm...
Edited by 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Glad that you dedicated an update to Arpita's dilemma. You described her thought process very well. She is so supportive of her mother. She wants her mother to have all happiness, she believes in Maan too. But she has seen Maan's hostile family, and it is so natural for her to be concerned for her mother. Very well written.

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