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Part:- 36

Prasanta house.10.p.mk.

Prasant , Aadhi, Arjun r doing dinner.

Arjun:- such me prasant khana bahut accha hai , aapki maaji ne bahut accha banaya. buhut dinonke baad isa khana khaya maine.

Aadi:- haa,.. prasant really yummy yaar tum bahut lucky ho.

Geet:- isa nahi hai sir ye aapki badappan hai.

Arjun:- nahi mam,such kahrahahu hum bahut accha banaya aapne .

arjuns cell ring he took it and answered it

" haa ..jiju;

Maan:- Arjun;kahaho tum? kaha tak agaya aaplogonka kaam?

Arjun:- bus, hum karrahe jiju, lagtha hai puri raat lagega.

Maan:- aur dinner ko kya karega? kahi baahar jayenge?

Arjun:- nahi jiju, hamara dinner abhi abhi hua hai prasant ka ghar me,unki maaki haath ka khana, such me jiju bahut yammi hai.

Maan:- Geet... geet ..hai waha?

Arjun:- [thinking that jiju calling mam by her name] haa,.. jiju wo banaya khana bahut tasty hai.

Maan:- tum ye baar, baar kyu kahraha hai?

Arjun:- yuhi.. kuch nahi.

Geet:- koun hai?aapka boss maanji hai phone pe?

[ maan heard her voice, unknown joy entrers in his heart, he smiled]

Arjun:- haa,. aur jiju kaha hai aap is wakth?

Maan:- bus meeting se waapas araha hu ghar ki rasthe me hu.

Geet:- unhe bhi dinner keliye bulana prasant, lagtha hai ise raasthe per hai.

prasant looked her puzziled,arpitha also.

Aarjun heard this and immeadiately told maan to come prasants house. jiju prasant ka maaji aapkobhi deinner keliye bularahe hai.

Maan;- [ he wanted to go in his heart,but hesitated to say yes thinking that wat others will think] and he said no to him.

Prasant took the phone and invited him requestingly, sir, please bura math maniye aap ayiyena dinner keliye.

Maan:- nahi, prasant ye achha nahi hoga.

Prasant:- aap maa se baath kijiye, he gave phone to geet.

Geet wondered by prasants act took it and

" wo.. aap dinner karke jayiyena ghar, i promise khana bilkul thika nahi hai, per indian hai chalegana?

Maan smiling in himself ' thik hai aatha hu.

and he told kaka to take turn to prasants house.

After sometime he reached prasants house. he entered into the house ,dishu came running and jumped on him'DOST' aap aagaya? he also took her in his arms and kissed her asking her how is she now, bukar kaise hai?

Dishu:- mai bilkul thik hu.

Maan fished his pockets and bring out chacklets and gavet o dishu. dishu looked at geet, geet shooked her head then she took them saying thank.u. dost.

Geet:- namasthe...

Maan:- namasthe.. kaise ho aap?

Geet:- ji.. mai thik hu.ayiye bahut late ho raha hai dinner kariye pehle.

Maan:- kahatak agaya tum log? aur kitna kaam baaki hai?

Prasant:- pehle aap dinner kijiye sir phir hum baath kerthe hai.

Maan:- ummm,.. [prasant showed him wash room to get fresh up and gave towel] and he led him to the dinner table,

Maan sat at the table and arpitha started to serve him ,the trio settled in hall to do work. maan started to have dinner. the food is really tasty and less spicy as he liked.

'really tasty banaya tumne arpitha. bahut baccha hai.

Arpitha:- ji ye sab mujhe se nahi hoga. maa banathi hai bahut accha khana . she is the best cook.

dishu came and sit near him and said 'dost meri nani is the best in every thing har roj wo meri pasand ka khana banathi hai.

maan looked at geet who is at kitchen platfarm and doing something.

Dishu:- dost aap mere birthday pr aavogena?

Maan:- o; tumhara birthday kab?

Dishu:- next month. aap avogena?

Maan:- jarur, mera dost ka birth day aur mai nahi avoo? isa kaisa hosaktha hai?

he again looked at geet thinking wat happend to her, she is not in her usual self.

Geetis thinking to say sorry to him

Precap:- GEET SAYS SORRY TO MAAN.

Part:- 37...

After completing dinner maan came out to hall and sit with trio.

Geet came out with desert. she gave all of them and stood there to say something .Maan took the bowl fr. her and said khana accha hai. he looked at her keenly to find out the matter. Geet:- wo...wo...Iam sorry maanji, jo usdin mai ne kuch jaada boldiya office me.

prasant and arjun looked at her surprized.

Adi:- tho aap uskeliye bhi sorry boliye jo aap aaj bhi kuch kaha...[ he murmered bur maan heard]

Maan:- aaj kya kaha unhone?

prasant@ Arjun looked aadi with murderous look.

Adi gulping his saliva wo...kuch nahi..KHADUA,,SADU,he muttered.

Maan:- tho aap aaj mujhe.. KHADUS,SADU,kaha?

geet shocked and gulpingly ..ji ..wo.. mai ne wo isliye kahaki aap ko ghar pe kaam karna pasand nahi haina.. isliye...I am sorry. she said quickly.

Maan:- Geetji;; aap mujhe aur kitna naamonse pukarthe ho? Geet:- sory...sorry... really sorry...i didnt mean it she said feeling very guilty.

Prasant:- please sir maa ko aap bura math maniye.

Geet;- sorry.. soryy .. maanji..

Maan:- its o.k. geetji he said eating his desert and said waise itna acha khana keliye hum aap ko maaf karsakthe.

Trio laughed and geet bend her head and smiled and went inside.

The trio and Maan started to work again.

Geet went out and called kaka to dinner. kaka told nahi mam mai ghar jake karunga. but she convinced him saying its already late aur ghar janeki aur wakth lagegi, so aake khana khayiye.kaka went inside and stood before maan. maan looked at him wat?kaka said about the matter, geet said i called him as it getting late maan shook his head to have dinner and kaka went to have dinner. geet served him.

Maan is feeling incomfortable in sitting in couch by keeping his laptap on his lap. he felt to strech his legs and sit comfortable and do work. he is looking for some thing to keep his legs.

Geet came and pushed centre table towards him to keep his legs on that. she moved back of the couch to shut the window door rods as they may hit maan, if he strech his hands to the back of couch. Maan is looking her in awe, as without saying anything she understood his inconvinience and tried to comfort him. How better she understand him he thought. she went inside and bring a soft pillow and gave it to him and said him to arrange it as back rest. he took it and kept it on back side of him. Now he is feeling more comfortable. He thanked her. she smiled and went inside. Maan felt for the first time homely . he ever went to anyothers house,,and dinner is bahut door ki baath hai. per here in prasants house he didnt feel any incomfort, he felt homely and relaxed. doing work he is thinking that only.

Maans s.t:- How I came here and even dinner? i didnt do such things never in my life.

even to my close reletives i dont want to stay there and dinner noway?but wat happened to me now?

how i changed without my knowledge?

this geet will make me things to do which i never want to do. she started to understand me. my necessaries which i even not mention. how could she understands me?

wat is going? i could not understand?

and they continued their work till 1.o. clock. dishu and arpitha slept.

Geet bring tea for the trio and black coffe to maan

TRIO;- thank u.

Maan:- thank.u. aap abhi tak soya nahi?

Geet:- nahi,, mai sochrahithi ki agar aapko kuch chahiye tho?

Maan:- hume ab kuch aur nahi chahiye ab jake sojayiye, mai chaltha hu ab, with that maan and arjun started to mansion prasant told aadi to take rest bin their house morning he may go.

Precap;- Maan gets irritated by Nainatata.

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Edited by anuradha.nandam - 12 years ago
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awesome update love maaneet . plzz update soon me already waiting and thanks a lot for the pm😃
Edited by aanya84 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome updates. geet invited maan also for dinner and even told him sorry for calling in different names. maan feeling homely at prashant's house because geet is there. soon he will realise his feelings I guess.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part:- 38
While returning to mansion maan again thinking about geet, how she take of every ones need and even for kaka, and he remembered their fights and smiled in himself.
Arjun:- thinking about geet mam jiju?
maan looked him surprized ' why do u think like that?Naturally,jiju; after the delicious dinner and hospitality showed by geet mam how can we forget her. Annie such kahraha hai,inke baareme,bahut achhe hai
Later next day at k.c,, Nainatara got another shock of her life as the incometax officer gave clean cirtificate to k.c.
she puzzled how they have corrected all files and where?
She enquired to her detectives.
He said that accounts r done in prasanrts house.
Prasants house?nainatara
And that woman is also there who has given tender in office, she is prasants saasu maa hai, and maan sir is also at there lost night. he had his dinner at prasants house
Nainatara:- wat nonsence? wat is going on? maanji had gone to prasants house? and had dinner at there? something is fishy; u find it andt ell me .she ordered him and disconnected the phone.
Nainatrarass.t.:- Maan.. how can he go to his staffs house, and having dinner/?how is it possible? i have to find out wat is the need of maan going there it is the work of his staff, no need to go there phirbhi he went, something is behind it . i have to find out,for that i have to moov more closely with him. i will not let him go anywhere without me.As a joint m.d. i too have rights to attend all meetings . And she began to attend the meetings eventhough no body informed her. She enters meeting places ans sit very close to Maan giving wrong thoughts to the clients and tries to interfere in the matters. It is becoming more emberaasing and irritating to maan. He went out saying Arjun to handle the meeting.
Maan went to his cabin in rage,he throw his hair back in disgust.
He paced in his cabin to and fro. dont know wat to do?How he get thriugh out of this mess?
Arjun came to his cabin finishing meeting looked maan disturbed mood.
Maan:- Arjun; wat this nainatara's behaviour indicates? wat she wants to proov?
Arjun:- cool jiju,.. we will find out the solution.
Maan:- but how? i cannot even tell this to maa, wat she thinks if she knows it? wat happens if Dev knows this? pehle hum donoki beech me kuch thik nahi hai. aur ye nainatara tries to make it an advantage to her.
arjun:_ dont get panic jiju... we will think over it, actually i have a temporary solution for this.
Maan:- wat is it?
Arjun:- send her to noidawaala branch as m.d. there.
Maan:- no arjun hoe can i handle a complete branch to her knowing how greedy is she.
Arjun:- but jiju if we can keep her here she will damage our reputation like this. this roumor she is spreading will deffinitly effect our entire k.c., so that i think it is better for now.
Maan:- i will thinkover it.My mood was not good i want to go home.cancell all my meetings. He said and taking his laptop he started to go home.He went to his car, kaka came and started the car. kaka asked where to?
maan said to home.while driving the car kaka stopped at the signal,and he saw geet is coming out fr. a hospital with another girl.
Kaka:-chote babu; Geet mam... he pointed towards geet.
Maan:- kaha? Hearing geets name he felt some unknown happiness in his heart.
he looked at that side where kaka pointing.
There geet and Ankitha r coming fr. hospital to the road and they r looking for auto.
Maan:- go to them kaka.
kaka took the car there and stopped.
Maan felt happy to see her, all his irritation and disgust caused by nainatara was vanished by a mere sight of geet. his heart felt some peace seeing her but worried to see her coming fr. hospital. he got down the car and went to them.
Maan:-Kya hua?aap hospital se kyu aarahe hai?kya hua aapko? he questioned her inone go.
geet startled by his sudden voice and turned to him looked him and said aap?yahaa?
Maan:- kya hua hospital se kyu arahi ho?
Geet:- mujhe kuch nahi hua, mai ankitha ko leke aayi thi.
Maan:- Ankitha... then only he observed ankitha.
Geet looked at ankitha who is looking maan with puzzle face
Ankitha...ye, Maanji hai.. prasant jiju ka boss, aur inhone mujhe bachaya tour me.
Ankitha:- hoo,.. namasthe sir, aapne humari maa ko bachayasir, aapko bahut bahut sukriya sir.
Maan:- its allright ankitha,mai kuch nahi kiya, sirf mai nahi ,saari tourists thumhari maaki dua karthethi, as she is a superwoman hai na.

Geet:-- kya bolraheho aap?kyu humesah aap mujhe chedthe ho?
Maan:- bus,bus ab chalo mai drop kardethahu.
Geet pouting her lips said' nahi hum auto lethe hai.
Maan:- chalo Ankitha; ye isahi kahthi hyai..
Ankitha:- smiled at their fight and said chalo maa.
Geet moved to the car murmering something in her.kaka wished her she also wished him, they get into the car and kaka started the car.
Precap:- Maan in Geets house for the firsst time.
Edited by anuradha.nandam - 12 years ago
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yipee me first awesome update .i hate naintara😡 bechara maan had to jhellofy her 😆. i hope maan now understands why he feels so happy after looking at geet . precap is so intresting😃 i had a doubt yaar is maan married or not?plzzz update soon me waiting and thanks a lot for pm😃
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Part:-39

In car.
Maan:-Ankitha;tumbhi job kartheho na?
Ankitha:- haa,, sir, mai xyz bank me kaam karthi hu.
Geet;- Inki husband softwear engineer hai.
Maan:- umm,.. kya hua ankitha ko?
Geet and Ankitha looked each other.
Geet:- kuch ladies ka pblm hai. ankitha again became gloomy and looked out of window.
Maan looked both through the mirror to find out the matter, but he didnt get anything.Aap school nahi gayi aaj?

Geet:- ji,mai halfday leaveliyi thi. and they reached geets house silently.
Car stopped and geet, ankitha came out of it.
Geet:- Ander aayiyena, coffee leke jasakthe;
he cant resist her invite dont know why. just he cant.
Maan:- umm. he get down fr. car
. he came for the first time to geets house.
Her house is slightly isolated fr. the rest of buildings. As he entered in to gate, he was welcomed by the beautiful sight,fully greenary a small lawn, plants with full of flowers,filling the fresh air with their sweet aroma,he felt fresh and homely in that atmosphere. he saw some bird cages and rabbits running here and there.
Dost' dishu ran to him and hugged him. she is playing with some girl
He took her into his arms and kissed her. kaise ho aap? kab aayi?dishu asked him.
Maan:- bus abhi tum kya karrahi ho?
playing with didi. dishu
Then she turned to Ankitha "chachi'she jumped on her.
Ankitha took her and kissed and gave chacklets to her.
Dishu looked at maan and asked' mera chacklets?
Maan made puppy face as he forgot to bring them and said"sorry"
Dishu:- koi baath nahi aaj mai aapko chacklets dunga and she offered her chacklets to him.
Geet:- Ander aayiyena' invited him to inside.she invited kaka also aap bhi aayiyena kuch nastha leke jayiye.kaka looked at maan maan shooked his head to yes.They walked inside. there is a small portico with cane chairs and table to sit and have coffee. Geet led him to the hall. he came inside looking everywhere interestingly. The total house is decorated in the way of simple and elegance. Her choice of decor,curtains, wall colours everything was of his taste.dont know how this happens. He loved the house. It is a small house with 2 bedrooms,1 guest room, hall and kitchen. The aura of that house drive him o peace and somekind of ownness,he felt here. He felt that he belonged to there. There is not a single part of strangeness at there. "MAAN" the man who never want to go anyothers place who never been to anyothers houses other than his mansion , he is feeling homely here.
Precap:- Maan helping in treatment to Ankitha.



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PART:- 40
Geet:- bathiyena,..geet showed him couch.
He sat in couch and dishu settled on his lap. kaka came inside geet showed him a chair.
Ankitha went to fresh up
Geet bring water and gave them.
Maan :- ur house is good aapne achha sajaya, ur taste is good.
Geet:- Thank .u. and she went inside to prepare coffee. Maan talked to dishu.
Geet came with some snacks and black coffee for him and tea to kaka. She gave them snacks plates, snacks includes some less spicy ones.
lijiyena she said to him. he started to take, he took one and gave dishu first. Dishu took it and fed him saying " nani kahthihai guests first khani chahiye', he smiled.
kaka thought " kitna acchi parwarish hai.
Geet sat there all lost in herself.
Maan:- kya baath hai? koi pareshani hai?
Geet:- kuch nahi,.. she hesitated to tell.
Maan:- kya hua ankitha ko? aap kuch pareshani horahahai inke baareme.
Geet:- started hesitatingly thinking how to tell,
Kuch months pehle ankitha ko abortion hua. I mean abortion karnapada. kuch pblm hai, maal formation of faetus.Dr. advised to abortion. so hum abortion karwaya. per ye hadsa ke bad wo bahut badalgayi. Ye sadma wo digest karnahipaaya. Ye bahut gumsum hogayi. chup hogayi. pehle isa nahi hai wo bahut hasthe,khelthethi,per is abortion ki wajese ye bahut dipress hogayi hai. Thik se nahi kharahehai,nahi sorahahai,din raath us bacche ko leke,pereshan horaha hai. bank ko jana bhi chode diya.Dr. kahahai ki unhe jaldise,jaldi dusara baccha ke baare me sochna hai. tho hum uskeliye plan karrahihai. aajbhi usi kaam me hospital gayi hum.
Maan:- kya kaha dr. ne?
Geet:- Aur wakth lagega.
Maan;- Aap ek, kaam kijiye,humara khurana charity hospital hai, Amarinder Singh Khurana charity hospital.mera dadaji hai inka founder, aur hum unki trusties hai. wo bahut accha , bada hospital hai,with well equipped and high technology hai,all types of treatments horahahai waha. mai ek. phone karke waha chief se baath karunga. aap kal ankitha ko waha leke jayiye. i am sure she will get good treatment there.
And he made a call to that hospital and talked to the chief and fixed appoint on ankithas name at 10,o.clock next day.
Aap kal 10'clock ankitha ko leke waha jayiye mai saari tayaari karliya . wo aap ko accha treat ment karenge.
Geet:- looked him in awe, and told t.u.very much. mai Aakash se bhi baath karunga and then tomorrow ankitha ko leke jaunga.
thank.u. ma

anji, aap nahi tho and she wanted to say somthing
Maan:- cut her in the middle , pehle ankitha thik ho jaye bad me kahiye thanks.o.k.
and he said thanks for snakes and coffee and stood to go,even tho he dont want to go.
o.k. mai chaltha hu. he walked out saying goodnight and kissing dishu and promissing her to bring chacklets tomorrow. Geet came along with him to the gate and bid bye to him. she stand there looking in the way he went for long thinking something.
Precap;-Maan spatting Nainatara.


Edited by anuradha.nandam - 12 years ago
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Wow back to back updates.I want to read the full story bt nt able to find previous threads.pls can u give me link of thread 1 and 2.thank u.
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awesome updates. tara started to attend all the meetings with maan and started giving wrong impressions to clients and she even enquired about prashant's house and about geet also. it was nice that maan was feeling like home in geet's house and he arranged treatment for anikitha.
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part 30 -39
nice update
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