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: MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd-9/part-128/pg58/17/4/2014




Part-128
Naintara came house all fuming ad immence hatred towards Geet. A big failure to her , a big blow to her. She burned in side with jealous and frustration. She want to trash geet immeadiately , she want to burn her alive ,want to smash every traces of geet. She called to her chamchas to assign them the task. But they denied her saying Maan kept tight security around geet , it is highly impossible to them to kill her right now. It raised her anger to the peek ,she thought a lot and came to a decission without thinking its result may back fire to her.
Next morning;-
Naintara came to Geets house. As soon as she came b.gds of geet informed Maan about her arrival to geets house. Maan asked them to observe her and he started immeadiately to geets house as he senced something danger to geet. He ordered guards to observe her and if they sence any danger to geet took immeadiate necessary action on naintara.
Maan hurriedly took his car and rushed to out. Dev who looked this senced something went wrong and he too fallowed Maan in his car.
Here Geet opened the door by calling bell sound. She got shock looking Naintara at her door.
Geet:-" Aap'?
Naintara:-kyu ? chounk gayi mujhe dekhkar? kyu nahi ?? koi shareef aur maryadawaali aurat kaise asakthe hai tumhara ghar?
Geet:- ji,... aap kya baat karrahi ho?
Nain:- ab ander aanedogi ya yahi baahar khadi hoke baat karni hogi? ya sirf mard kohi tumhari ghar ka darwaaja kholjayegi,.. wo bhi paisowaala...
Geet got hurt by her choice of words , she now senced that N.T. is up to something now." dekhiye aap jara tameej se baat kijiye.
Maan now entered the house , hearing N.T. he want to blast on her when he heard geet.
Naintara:- "tameej? ab mujhe tum jaisa phoohad aurat [ s**t] se tameej sikhana padegi? tum slkhaogi mujhe tameej? u. s**t,.. tum jaisa girihue aurat ko mai kabhi nahi dekhi . koi itna kaise girsakthe hai? tumhari ye lalas puri karne keliye aur tumhari shaaririk jarurat pura karne keliye tum Maanji ko apni jaal me phasaya.unkipaisonkeliye tum unhe puri raat tumhare ghar me rakhliya. bolo ye such haina? kyu rakhliya tum maanji ko kya karrahe ho tum log tumhari ghar me?kya horaha hai tum donoke beech ? bathao kya hua tum dono ke beech ?
Dev came behind Maan and looked him standing out only , he was about to call him when he heard N.T. Maan didnt notice Dev.
Geet now fed up by her acuusations . she know about N.t. wo kaise aurat hai , wo kya chahthe hai sab kuch jaanthi hai geet. Now she better understand why she came there. Now it is the time to stop her.She has to make her understand the things ,..unhe unki aukaat dikhana hoga. she not only insulting her but also to Maan. how can she let it ? isse kisi bhi tarah se rukna hoga ,.. agar aaj hum ye nahi karpaye tho sab barbaad hoga,.. more over its the question of their love,... she has to give respect to their love she has to take some steps towards it. she will not let it go like this ,.. ye Maan ki izzat ki sawaal hai,.. agar ab mai chup rahe tho ye bahut bada apmaan hoga humaari pyaar ko, ye mai harkis nahi hone dungi ,...
N.T:- bathao ,.. chup kyu tum? kya hua tum donoki beech?
Geet:-Wahi,.. jo tum sochrahi ho ,.. jo bahut pehle honi chahiye tha kal raath hua humare beech,... and u. know,.. my Maan is too hot. He is tooo irresistible.And its really wonderful ,amazing.
Maan who got hell anger by the choice of words of n.t. using to acucuse geet now want to blast on her he is about to go and give piece of mind to N.T. when he heart the above words said by geet
He felt the earth is turning him upside down he cannot beleive his ears,.. those open ,bold blunt aprooval of geet.
wat the hell she is talking? why do she agreeing these accusations? kya karna chahthi hai wo?
Geet:- haa,... humare beech sab kuch ,.. sab kuch horaha hai jo ek patni pathi ke beech me hona chahiyetha. sab kuch she uttered the word sab kuch with force. Ab tum kya karsakthe ho? pyaar karthe hai hum ek dusere se,..
N.T.:- tum,.. besharmki aurat,.. itna besharam se kahrahi ho ye sab? itni beshamrse karrahe ho ye neechi harkat? kaise aurat ho tum? jarasa bhi sharam nahi hai tumhe? shaadi shuda ho ,do jawaa beti hai tumhe phir bhi itni gandhi barthav? ye sab tum sirf paison keliye karrahe hona? tho bathao tumhari is pyaar ki kya kimat ha? /kitne paise chahiye tumhe? mai dethi hu tumhe paise?
She opened her bag and bring out a check fr.it and giving it to geet lo ,.. jitna paise chaho utna likho isme,.. aur abhi ki abhi apni puri family ko leke yaha se dafa hojao,humesha keliye. phir kabhi apni shakal hume math dikhana. she gave it to geet.
Geet got shock ,.. seeing it ,.. she wondered ,. isi log bhi hothe hai kya ,. paison se kuch bhi khareed sakthe hai kya? kya samajrahe ho wo mujhe?
ye itni bevkoof hai ki na samajsake maan mere liye kya hai? inhe inki shabdo mehi samjhana hoga,.. itni aasaani se ye nahi maanegi.

Geet took the check,.. when Maan and Dev felt astonished by her act. She took it when they felt the ground under their feet slipped throwing them in to the pit .wat is she doing? why she took it?Maans heart shattered not beleiving this no ,.. she cannot,... cant do this wo isa nahi karsakthe hai ,.. ye galat hai his heart is screaming like this
Dev:- bhabhi ,.. wat r u doing?
N.T.:-smiled in victory as geet took the check ,..I know ur after Maans money ,.. now get out o f here for ever she turned to go when geet called her "Naintara"
she turned to geet.
Geet:- ye jo paise tum diya wo kahase ayi tumhe?ye tumhari khud ka kamaayi ha?ya tumhari pati dev ki kamaayi hai ya tumhari maika se ayi?
N.T.:- jo bi ho tumhe kya farak padtha hai?
Geet:- farak padtha ha imujhe kyunki ye saare paise , dhan ,doulat, property sab kuch,... sab kuch meri Maan ki mehnath ki kamayi hai. ab wo meri hai yani ye dhan doulkat sab kuch,... sab kuch ab meri hai tumhari kuch nahi hai isme. ek penny bhi nahi hai. tum kiska paise kisko derahi ho? meri paise mujhe derahi ho,.. tum mera pyaar ko khareedna chahthi ho wo bhi mere paison se, mera Maan ko khareedna chahthe ho ,jo mera pyaar hai ,.. meri zindagi hai.
N.t:- u.,.. dirty bitch,.. how dare u to say this,...
Geet:- shut up Naintara ,.. mai itni der chup hu ki tum meri maan ki pariwaar ho, aur ab meri pariwaar ki sadasya ho isliye mai chup hu abhi tak. Aaur kya tum isi bartavse maan ji ko haazil kar paoge?Mai achhi tarah se jaanthi hu ki tum kya chahthi ho? lekin isa kabjhi nahi hoga. Ye such jitna jaldi tum samaj paoge utnahi achha hai tumhari zindagi keliye,warna sab barbaad hojayegi.
N.T.:- u,.. bachlan aurat,.. tum koun hothe ho ? ki mujhe ye sab bolneki. mai jaan thi hu kya achhi hai kya bura hai,.. mujhe tumhari koi sugession nahi chahiye. tumhari itni himmat? ki ye saari doulat tumhari kahrahiho? dekhthi hu mai ye kaisa hoga? kitni besharm se kahrahi ho tum maan ji se pyaar karthe ho? aur wo tumhari hai? shaadi shuda aurat ho do jawaan beti ho tumhe phir bhi itni girihue harkat karrahi ho? sharam nahi aathi tumhe? tumhari isi barthav ki wajese hi tumhari pati tumhe chode ke chalagaya hoga.
Geet:- haa,.. mai maantha hu mai shaadi shuda aurat hu ,pati se choda hua aurat hu ,.. per tum kya ho? tum bhi shaadi shuda aurat ho, tumhe bhi jawaan bachhe hai ,,, aur tho thumhari pati abhi tak tumhare saath hai,.. tho thum kyu karrahi ho ye sab? kyu maanji per apne aap ko thoprahe ho?ye jaanthe hue bhi wo tumhari jedji hai, bhai samaan hai ye uchit hai tumhare liye? kyu karrahi ho ye sab? socho ek baar naintara,..kya beethega Dev per agar ye sab unhe pata chalatho? kya hoga tumhhari shaadi shuda zindai ko?
Naintara,.. mai tumhe kahrahi hu abhi bhi wakth hai,... mai tumhe ek mouka dethi hu ,.. mai ye sab kisiko nahi bathaungi ,.. bus tum sudharlo ,.. sudharlo apni zindagi ko ,.. sudharlo apni soch,... badalo apne aapko ,. jaan lo apni pati ki kimat ,.. wo kitne maine rakhthe hai tumhari zindagi me,.. ye sikhlo jo kuch tumhari pass hai usse hi khush raho . tum khush raho aur tumhari pati ko khush raho. isme tumhari bhalayi hai , paise tumhe khush nahi desakthe.
N.t.:- tho thum mujhe dhamki de rahi ho ? tum mujhe kahrahi ho kaise khush rahna hai? u,.. bitch,.. tumhari himmat kaise hue ,... tum,... tum,.. mujhe slkhaoge ,.. she raised her hand to slap Geet.


Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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aj kya baat h di in a gud mood
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Originally posted by: anuradha.nandam




<font color="#0000ff" size="4">With ur kind permission ,.. can i use this ,... sooo much thankfull to u yaar ,.. bahut achhi hai ,.. thanks for ur care ,.. and bina kuch pucha ye tumhari madad mai kabhi nahi bhulungi ,.. and about index its already there i will edit this in previous parts. so that it may easy for u all and thanks for u all to like my story .</font>

haww aap mujhe thanks keh rahi ho

sirf aapke n eol k liye banaya h ye
apko acha laga thts enough
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anuradha.nandam

<font color="#0000ff" size="4">Suhaana ,.. dekho ,.. i included the banner in the post. thank.u dear love u.isa hi humesha mujhe encourage karna aur madat bhi karna and is khushi me ek aur update ,.. do festival. enjoy and do commt. as its more worth ful to me.</font>

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will cmnt frm pc net bailgadi ki speed se aa raha h
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
Geet ne kya karara jawab diya hai NT ko...loved it!
Yeh baat sach hai ki pyaar himmat de hi deta hai!
NT ki bakvas ka Geet ne badi himmat se samna kiya...
NT ki ek ek baat ka Geet ke paas jawab tha aur Maan dekhta reh gaya...
Maan ko bhi Geet ke baato se hairani hoti hai...
NT ne Geet ko marne ke liye haath toh uthaya hai par usse pata nahi hai ki Maan aur Dev dono Geet ko bachane ke liye moujud hai...
Bahut achha update tha ab waqt aa gaya hai ki Dev hi aage aa kar NT ko sabak sikhaye...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

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aj kya baat h di in a gud mood



kyu nahi hothi,... tumne jo itna achha banner create kiya mere E.o.l keliye isiliye mai itna khush hu
Edited by anuradha.nandam - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
now arpita knew their bond hope they not saparate maaneet
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow anu double update
nt to geets house
maan n dev followed her
nt used her pea size brain
n geet gc her gud answers
nt ne haath uttaya
now its dev n maans turn to enter
superb update
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 128 is vry nice
geet show naintara her place
Why naintara is doing dis to get maan
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

di m first to res

will cmnt frm pc net bailgadi ki speed se aa raha h


take ur own time yaar

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