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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part:-41

Maan came to mansion.Pammi, naina tara annie and rahul r there in the hall. Annie is helping rahul in homework.

Naintara came to know about maan, his disappearence, cancelling meetings and then his visit to geets house. her detectives informed her every thing.

Naintaras.s.t.:- why today also he went to that bludy bitch house? that too cancelling meetings. wat is going on? she wanted to corner him before pammi.

Pammi:- ayaya beta aap?

Maan:- ji,. maa, aap kaise ho? he asked sitting near her.

Nainatara:- kaha hai aap maan ji? abhitak? sunahai, kab ka chalagaya office aapne? saare meetings bhi cancell karwaya... kahathi aap abtak?

Maan gritted his teeth and fisted his palm.

Naibnatara:- chaliye mai aap keliye b. coffee lekar aathi hu.

and she started to move.

Maan:- tum pna pathi aur bacce ka parwakaro, meri parwa karneki koijarurat nahi hai.Meri liye kuch karneki,meri parwakarneki aur jyaada log hai. tum apna kaam me dhyaando. Hesaid in a raised voice and went to his room with big big steps.

Annie stunned seeing him insuch a raised voice and anger. He never raised voice in house.wat happened to him?

Annie:- bhai...bhai...she called him but he didnt give any head to her.

She went to his room. Maan stood throwing his hair back with one hand and another hand on his waist.looking disgusted and restlessness.

Annie:- bhai... kya hua/aap koi pareshan me hai/

Maan:- Annie, please leave me alone for sometime.

Annie:- magar bhai bathayiyena ..kya hua? kuch hai kya?

Maan:- Annie ,.. kuch nahi hai. mai thik hu. tum jao.

Annie:- o.k. mai aapkeliye coffee, nastha lekar aathi hu.

Maan:- nahi.. mera coffe aur nastha ho chuki hai. ab mujhe kuch nahi chahiye.

Annie:- magar kaha kiya aap? maan didnt give reply.

he stood numb dont want to give reply.

Annie:-thik,hai mai chaltha hu. she left thinking to ask arjun.

Pammi:_kya hua naina tara? kuch hua hai office me? tum kuch galat tho nahi kiya?

Nainatara:-office mesab thik hai mammiji. lagtha hai bahar hi kuch daal pak raha hai. aap phikar math ki jiye mai huna, sab thik karwadunga.

Pammi:- jobhi karnahai, zaraa dhyaanse kjaro, varna mera saare kiye per paani phenkna hoga.

Nainatara:- aap phikarv math kijiye mammiji.ye sab kya horaha hai, hum patakarenge faaron.

Pammi:- aur ye,Dev ke baareme kya baath karrahe hai?

Kya hua use?

Nainatara:- unhe kya hosaktha hai mammiji, ye yuhi ise baath kar rahe hai.

Pammi:- thik,hai, per jara dhyaan rakhna dev ka bhi.

Naina:- ji mammiji.[ dev ka dhyaan rakhu?my foot. Koun chahtha hai usko? Ek baar maan meri haath me phasgayatho,.. tab dikhunga sab ko ki naintara kya cheez hai?

Annies room

Annie:- Arjun, aaj kuch hua office me?

Arjun:- Annie tum kyu ofiice ka bare me puch rahi ho?

Annie;- nahi arjun, bhai bahut gusseme hai unhone naintara bhabhi per chilly, mai kabhi nahi dekha use isa ghar me unchi awaaz me baath karna, jarur kuch hua hoga. Dinner keliyebhi wo neech nahi aya. Kya baath hai arjun/ jarur aapko pata hoga.

Arjun:_ mujhe patabhi tho kya karu? Hum kya karsakthe annie,bekaar me pashaan hone ki jarutat nahi. Wo itna bada baath nahi kit um itna sochneki. Aur haitho wo khud bathayega tumse. Mere khayaal se tum wait karna chahiye,jab tak wo apne aap baath karne nahi chahtha.

Annie:- thik hai, lekin mujhe e bhai ka ye haalath dekhna nahi jaata.

Arjun:- tum chintha math karo, abtak wo thik ho gayi hogi. Tum unke liye khana lekar jao, aur saath me rahul ko bhi lekar jana, unhe dekh kar wok hush hojayegi.

Precap:- Maans confession about geet to annie.

Edited by anuradha.nandam - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part:- 42

Annie entered in to Maans room with dinner.

Annie:- bhai, mai ander asakti hu?

Maan:- Annie, avona tum kyu ander aane keliye permission puch rahi ho?

Annie:- kuch nahi bhai,.. mai aapleliye khana lekar aayi hu.

Maan:- umm,.. and he took rahul in his lap and started to talk with him.

Annie:- bhai, khana khayiye na.

Maan:- umm,,.. he started to eat.

Annie:- bhai,.. ab aap thik tho haina? mai bahut dar gayi thi aapko isa dekh ke...

Maan:- mai thik hu.

Annie:- bhai. aap kabhi isa math kijiye, mujhe achha nahi lagtha aapko pareshan me dekh kar mujhe bahut dard ho raha hai.

Maan:- no annie mujhe kuch nahi hua,wo mai office ki baath ko leke thoda upset hu, isliye...

i am sorry,aage se isa nahi hoga. i promise.

Annie;- keeping her hand on his shoulder, bhai bus mujhe aapki khushi chahiye, hamesha aapko muskurathe huye dekhna chahthi hu.

Maan:- isahi hoga, magar tum hamesha meri chintha chode kar jara Arjun pe bhi dhyaan do. bechara kitna pyaar kartha hai tumse,aur tum taking him granted.umm..?

Annie:- isa nahi hai bhai. ab unhone khud bheja hai aapke paas

Maan:- isaka matlab ye nahi tum use nazar andaaz karo, haina?

Annie:- nahi bhai wo kabhi nahi hosaktha. i love him very much. wo meri jindagi hai.

Maan:- saare aurat tumhari jaise kyu nahi hothi annie? kuch log paise ke piche kyu padthe?

aur wo uskeliye kitne neeche tak girthi hai pata nahi, kitni girihaue harkat karthe hai,ki use ek aurat kehne par bhi gin athi hai. Ek tho ye hai, hamesha paise, dhan doulat power, ki piche padthi hai, aur dusara taraf wo hai, hamesha inki family ke baareme sochthi hai. Family keliye, unki bhalaayi keliye ye kuch bhi karne ka tayaar hotha hai. unki saari jindagi unki bacche, unki family ki aage peeche ghumthi hai.hamesha duseronki bhalayi keliye soch thi hai. unki khushi keliye ye kuch bhi karneki tayyar hothi hai,chahe iskekiye ye kitna khatra me jana ho , bhale ye kitna mushkil kyu na ho. ek baar bhi nahi sochethi apne baareme.Unki bacche bhi issse bahut pyaar karthe hai. apni maa keliye jaan lagthahai ye. kitna pyaara family hai.ek dusere leliye kitna lagaav hai.

Annie tum ek baar use dekhna hai, tumbhi isa kahoge ki mai kya kah raha hu.

Annie:- haa,,.. hum jarur milthe hai. per wo hai koun? kaha hai? tho aaj aap waha jake aayi thi na aapki coffee aur nastha waha hogaya hoga shayad?

Maan:- umm..

Annie:- tho bathayiyena bhai koun hai wo?koun hai wo aurat jisne mere bhai ko itna impress kiya?bathaona?

Maan:- isa nahi annie, wo bahut respectable hai, bahut nake, nave, innocent hai pyaar ka alawa ise kuch aur nahi jaanthe hai.

Annie:- thab tho hum jarur ise milna hoga bhai hume milado ise.

Maan:- abhi nahi, wakth aane per jarure milaunga tumse isse.

Annie disoppointedly said o.k. ab aap aaraam kijiye. come rahul. she took him with her . with a smile she entered her room.

Arjun:- lagtha hai sab patchup hua.

Annie:- nahi, per maine aaj bhai ki ek aur roop ki ek jhakal dekha.

Arjun;- ab ye kya hai?

Annie:- pehle mujhe ek clarity anedo baad me aapko bathungi.

Arjun:- thik, baba, tum aur tumhari bhai, behan ke beech koun aasaktha hai. abtho mujhe sulado, bahut raath hogayi. ab tho ye bechari pati per daya ayegi?

Annie:- arjun, tumna. she throwed a pillow on him and they laughed hugging.

Precap: Maan taking personal interest in Ankithas case.

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anuradha.nandam

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part:- 43

Here in Geets house.

Geet called prasant and told ev.th. to him ans said about Maan. Prasant:- ye tho accha hau maa,.. wo bahut bada hospital hai with latest technology and equippment. bahut saara logonka ilaaz horahai waha. foreign machinary and foreign returned dr. haai waha. sir, take it as his pride. so i think ankitha ko waha jarur leke jaana hoga. waha accha treatment milega. mai abhi sir se baath kartha hu and he made a call to maan.

Maan is just going to bed he took tha cell and said

Maan:- hallow prasant

Prasant:- sir, t.u. sir. jo aapne ankitha keliye help kiya.

Maan:- nahi , prasant t.u. kehneki koi jarurat nahi hai. ye humara hospital hai aur apnoki kaam nahi ayatho aur kisko ayega. tum ek kaam karo kal tumbhi jana ankitha ke saath, waha jakar mujhe ph. karna agar kisi jarurat hotho. wahaki chief ko tum jaanthe ho na?

Prasant:- ji sir, mai jaanthi ,ise maibhi jaunga unke saath. t.u.sir again goodnight.sir.

and he told ev.tg. to geet and arpitha, maa i will pick u up at 9.o.clock

Aakash came to geets house after his office and geet told him ev.tg. to him

Aakash:- went to Ankita, who stood there still dull and gloomy looking nowhere. tum itna maayuj honeki jarurat nahi ankitha, sab thik hojayega, tumhari saari kwayish puri hojayegi, bahut jald . trust me tum phirse maa banjavogi bahut jald,mai kahrahahuna?

mujhe accha nahi lagtha tumhe isa dekh kar. tumhe himmat rakhna hoga mere liye,he hugged her and patted her on her back.kal hum sir ka hospital jayenge. mai bhi aathi hu tumhare saath. mai bhi suna hai ye hospital ke baare me.i am sure tumhari pblm waha thik ho jayegi. abtho challo mujhe bahut bhuk lagrahahai. khana nahi lagaoge?

Ankitha wiped her tears and went to serve him dinner.

Aakash:- maa; hum kal hospital jayenge. mai bhi avonga shayad mujhe bhi tests karwana padega.

Geet:- thik, hai beta.

Next morning Prasant, Aakash, Geet,Ankitha reached the hospital. chief took them to the gynoecologist dr. mamatha. and told her to treat them as MAAN sir ki family.

While dr. mamatha looking and asking details and going through the reports ,Maan came into hospital.

seeing him chief ran to him and led him to dr. mamtha cabin.

Dr. mamatha stood up seeing him the four also stood seeing him shocked😲. they never expect maan would come personally there.

Maan:- dr. wat about the patient? have u gone through the reports wat is ur openion?

DR.:- sir, reports ki hissab se sab thik hai. per mai kuch aur tests karwana chahthi hu,aur ek baar iski husband ko bhi test karna pada.

Maan:- jo tests aap chahe karlena, bina hich hichahat. bina koi shak. ye mera family hai. jo treatment tum jarurat samajthiho karlena. bus mujhe result positive hona chahiye.aur ye result ab mujhe upto date batana hoga. mujhe kisibhi haalath me sab kuch thik karna hoga. samjhe aap?

dr.;- ji sir, ye tho mamuli pblm hai sir, bahut aasani sehume ise solve kar sakthe hai aur aap dekhna agle teen mahinome aap khush kabari sunthe ho.

Maan:- very good. and he turned to geet

chintha karneki jarurat nahi hai aap suna hai na dr. ne kya kaha. abtho khush rahiye.

Geet:_ ji t.u. sab aapki waje se hua hai.

Maan:-nahi ye sab dr. ki waje se hua hai.

After that they came out of hospital.

Geet introduced Aakash to Maan.

Geet:- Maan ji ye Aakaash hai ankitha ka husband.

Maan:- hello,

Aakash:- hello sir, sir aapko bahut bahut sukriya sir aapne humari maa ko bachaya aur dusere aap ankitha ko help karliya. mujhe nahi pata hai aapko kiaise e haisaan chukana hai hum log

Maan:- ye haisaan, waisaan, ye baath mujhe nahi pasand hai. aaplog humari prasant ka family hai aur k.c. unki staff and their families ko acchi tarah dekhbhal karthi hai. mai abhi wahi kiya. o.k. i will leave now. prasant tum use ghar chode ke office ana.

Prasant:_ nahi sir, Aakash hai na wo leke jayenge mai aapki saath office athahu.

Maan:- thik hai.take care he looked at geet and said that.

Geet shooked her head to yes.said bye

Throughout the return Aakash keep praising Maan.Geet is also talking about him, how good he is,how he helped her in tour and how they visited places and how he saved her .throughout the discussion Aakash observed a weird glow on her face, while talking about him.

Aakash:-per bhai ne kaha ki aap sir ke saath bahut jhagada karthi ho. agar wo itna accha hai tho aap kyu jhagadthe ho sir se?

Geet:- wo hai itni irritating . accha bhi hai, kabhi,kabhi, mujhe bahut irritate kartha hai ki mujhe uske saath jhagadna padtha haqi.

Aakash smiled seeing her behaving like a small child.

Geet:- per abtho thik hua, mai tho sorry bhi bolochuki hu.

Aakash:- chalo thik hai sir bhi itni naraz nahi hai aapse.

precap:- Maan seeing geets another roop.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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awesome update 👏hehe maan ne toh naintara ka band baaja bana diya .naintara is all time reporter of that witch pammi i hate both of them😡 . annie is so cute hope maan annie ko geet se jaldi jaldi mila de arre bhabhi hai na😳 (would be).maan helping ankitha and personally coming to hospital thats so sweet of him .hope everything would be alright in ankitha's life soon .thank u for the triplet

plzzz update soon me already waiting

thank u for the pm

love aanya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awesome story

Where is Geet husband???

Y do I feel maan is geets husband or they have some past connection????

Kick naiantara out from KC

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Posted: 12 years ago

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awesome updates. maan asking tara to take care of her husband and her children first and praising about geet infornt of aniee, and taking the responsibility of ankitha treatment.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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41-43

loved the updates..

maan cares for geet n her family ...

dear edit the title as part 43 nahi to pata nahi chal raha k 43 part update kiya hai tumne...

thread k title me abhi bhi part 30 hi show kar raha hai...so its lill confusing...

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part:- 44

Few days later.

Maan is getting pressure fr. the owner of that tourism com. ,which maan wants to buy. The co. os running loss so that he wants to sell it to maan. Maan is thing wheather to buy it r not, as it under loss.why it is under loss,wat r the reasons for it, why that co. failed to reach the hearts of people. wat r the pros and corns if he take that5 co.. He held a meeting to discuss this and if any suggestions r there to improov the com. the meeting held by arjun,aadhi, prasant and some other his enior employesand ofcourse Nainatara who always wants to tag along with Maan.Maan asked the members why that com. under loss and how shpuld be rectified,wat r the actual pblms in running this , even though he got important information through the tour organisers, hotel manage ment, drivers, guides,etc.. he wany to know why not it gaon trust of people. wat should be done in that direction to reach the hearts of people.

Some suggested to minimise tour cost.

Some suggeted that to ofer discounts.

Some suggested that to offer gifts.

Some suggeted that 1 pkus 1 offer,

And Naina tara suggeted to spend a greater amount on publicity, we can give publicity through all communicative media,like t.v.,cable, paper, large hordings, net, e mails and arranging personal agents to go door to door campaign.

None can give Maan satisfacton. He concluded meeting giving tham 2 days time.

Later in the evening he is going to his mansion inhis car he is again thinking about that com. athe same pblm,how he could meet hearts of people. he remembered his every conversation with tour organisers and hotel management etc..etc., suddenly he remembered that Geet is also in that tour.shaayad ye kuch suggestions depaaye as she isalways thinking about others. she may observesome faults and difficulties in that tour. mai ek kaam kartha hu, ek baar uske ghar jake puche thi hu ki saahaayad ye meri kuch madat karpaaye,thinking that he told kaka to take the turn to geets house. kaka smiled in himself and took the diversion.

As soon as the car stopped Maan came out of car and entered in the gate He wondered as the gate kept open. He went to the hall but find none. A light voice of Devi sthothram fr. radior taperecorder is been hearing to his ears. Unknowingly his steps took that directionto the back yaard of the house. There he stoos stunnrd and numb by seeing the beautifull sight ever infront of him.

There Geet,, Arpitha, Dishu standing ina line performing Bharatanatyam to the Devi sthothram''Akhilandeswari...Chamundeswari...Palayamam.. Gouri..."with their beautifull mudraas and perfect bhangimaas.

Geet is performing the dance with full grace and as perfect devotteeto maa DURGA. She wore a suit with her dupatta tied around her waist.Her ligh,light foot taking stepsaccording to the lirics, completingthe meaning of each and eachword of that sthothram. Dishu is also performing like geet twisting her small,small handa and legs and showing her beautiful almond eyes which shows full expression of eachword of that sthothram.Arpitha is also not less than the rest of two.Totally there r 2 mothers and 2 daughters performing at a time on a common stage. That means 3 generations performing at one stage.

A very...very...raresight, one and only among lacks or we can say crores pf people

Maan rooted at his place , he even forgot to blink his eyes and breathing. He dont want to blink as if he will miss the beautiful scene if he winks. Kaka who, came inside to get chai fr. geet also stud numb seeinh this tremendous performance given by trio.

Here the trio r not at inthe sence that somebody r observing them. they t fully involved in their dance with full grace and elegance.

Maan is totally spell bound and flattened by this new face of geet. He is not able to express his amazement and his happiness inwords. His heart miss its beats. An unknown happiness spread in his heart,which he never experienced before.

At last after total 10mtsthe sthothram completed and the triobend down to retreat. As soon as theystopped , they turned by the sound of claps. There stood Maan and kaka clapping their hands in a big aplause. The trio shocked to see them inside the house like that,

Aap? geets regular exclamatory,

Sir..aap kab aayi?Arpitha?

Dost'Dishu jumped inhappy and ran to him.

Maan took her in his arms kissing her saying beautiful dance.

T.U. Dishu, nani teached me.

Maan looked at geet said, beautifuldance, i dont know aap itna accha dance karthe ho..

Geet:- Teacher hu na bacchhonka sikhanahai mujhe.

Maan:- tabhi tho aaphi sikhayahoga, arpitha aur dishu ko..

Geet:- ji.. ander ayiye..

Kaka:- such me bitia,aap bahut accha dance kiya. aapko stage per performance dena chahiyetha.

Maan;-haa, geet kakathik. kahrahahai,aur aaptino milkediyetho kitna naam , fame aur keerthi and...he wants to say something,

Geet:- She spated saying ,.. hume nahi chahiye ye sab. she told in a raised voice.