MGFF- ESSENCE OF LOVE-THD-5/PART-60/14-6-2013

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Dona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

awesome update

geet's past is so painful

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anuradha.nandam

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Posted: 12 years ago

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yaar those who simply hit like buttons, my humble request to commt long yaar it will give more encouragement to me, and please point out if i spell any thing irrelevent so that i may correct my self, yaar all r not perfect, haina?

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Part:-66

Geets past continues.

Marriage is over,now geet is wife of a spoilt brat Vikram.

Vikram abuses her every day making her life hell. She tried many ways to change him but failed. One year passed and now she is a mother to a girl Arpitha. Now Vikrams habbites become more vigorous due to his dirty habbites he lost his job and remained workless.

Geet manages to do some work as working maid, cooking , preparing house hold goods like papads, soaps, phenols etc..She tried every possible things to protect her daughter and run the house. Vikram became a monster to her life.He even took the money ,geet earn and drink with that, he beats geet for that.

Geet lost her all beauty by the miserable life she faced every day. With that condition she again become pregnant and had another girl called Ankitha. Now Vikram got another reason to torture geet, two daughters , as it is the fault of her only, he beats her for that also.

Like that she managed to live about 3 yrs, now Arpitha is 4yrs, and Ankitha 3yrs.

One day a man came to geet when she was sleeping keeping her daughters beside her in the night.He came and started to misbehave with her. She shouted at him and thrown him out, calling vikram. The man laughed at her saying none will come to save her, ur husband sold you to me tonight. I gave money to him so ur mine now., u should obey me, he told .He also continued that he sold her two daughters also to somebody , they will take them to redl ight area in mumbai,there they will brought them up and and will do the business with them

Geet gets shock of her life," how can a husband can sell his own wife to somebody, and how can a father sell his own daughters? Then, right then Geet took a decision of her life and to save her two daughters fr. the clutches of these goons, she bend down and take a stone nearby and hit the man with her full force, strongly on his head. The man cried, and fell down holding his head, and loose his conscious.

Edited by anuradha.nandam - 12 years ago

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Part:-67

Geets past continues,

Geet reacted immeadiately, she gathered some clothes and her citificates in small bag and took her two daughtersin her hands and ran away fr. the house before any one notices it. She didnt think it is right or wrong, she actually killed a man, as there is no other way to save herself and her daughters.She ran and ran with her daughters to the railway station and climbed a goods train which is ready to leave the station. She placed her daughters in it and then she climbed in it. She looked out peeping wether any body r fallowing them.

The railway staff came and locked the wagon.

Then only she seen that it is coal wagon travelling to some where. And it take two days to reach to the destination. For 2 days they there without food and water.

Arpitha, even thou she is too small at her age, she is clever enough like geet. She is as intelligent as geet. She understand her mother something went wrong so only she is taking them to some where. She didnt ask her mother anything. She helps her mother in every thing. She even tries to console his little sister.

After 2 days the wagon door opened to get down the coal. They slowly came out of the wagon sneaking out of it. They moved out , they became all black with the suit of coal. All looked at them disgustingly. Geet read the name of the station"Delhi North"

She gasped reading that 'Delhi" She opened her bag and bring out a paper on it a phone no... is there

Archana---------no.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

nice parts

maan restless n kaka dropped him in geets house

geets out burst was awesome

well written

a thrashed girls pov

her feelings

well potrayed

her past..

chi..kaise step mother hai wo..

i want to kill her

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vrinda22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

vikram

cheap creature

for money he sold his own wife n daughter

acha hua geet ran away from there,,

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vrinda22

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Posted: 12 years ago

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update ur next parts too in this thread

dont open new thread

till this thread cross 140 to 150..pg

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Dona

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Posted: 12 years ago

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cheap vickram

how can a man sell his daughter n wife!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part:-68

Archana is her classmate and neighbour. They r best buddies during school and college She knows every thing about geet and her miserable life given by her s. mother. Archanas father mr. Manchanda was a retired military man. After his retirement ,they shifted to Delhi.

Archana continued her friendship with geet even thou they parted. She writes letters to geet and asked her how about, often she called geet to the neighbours phone. She invites Geet to come to delhi leaving his drunkered husband, come and stay with her, assuring that she will take care of her and her daughters. But geet refused that thinking that a father is necessary to bring up her daughters.

But now the situation becomes worse and she has to save her daughters fr. the so called father.So now she has no other way than to seek help fr. her friend Archana. Geet called Archana by a pco.

Archana received the call

Archana:- Hello;,..

Geet:- Archana;,.. me Geet hu.

Archana:- Hai;,.. Geet, how r u yaar? After a long time, How r ur two Angels?

Geet:-wo sab thiik hai, mai ab at Delhi north station me hu

Archana:-wow,.. when u came? why dont u call me before u start?Geet:- mai, sab baad me bathathi hu, pehle tum aoge na? hume leke jao apne ghar.

Archana:- haa,..i am coming, wait at the entrance. i am starting to there eh ghanta lagagi aneme. wait karo.

Geet:- o.k. we will wait here only. jaldi avona. And geet waited there , Ankitha is crying badly as she didnt eat anything since 2 days.

Arpitha is also hungry but she dont bother her mother as she is an understanding girl.

Geet searched the bag if there is any money? 10 rs. note milgayi isko. with that she bought some vadapov and gave it to them.

Arpitha took it and fed it to her sister.

Geet hugged Arpitha for the love she showed to her sister.

After a long time Archana came to the station and looking for them. She didnt recognise geet as they r fully covered with suit of coal.

Geet came to Archana and called "Archana";,,

Archana turned and shocked to see geet like that, she cont recognize her. Archana confused and then only recognize geet.

wat happened to u? why this suit on u? tum theek tho hona? where is ur husband? she asaed all this in one go.

Geet smiled at her and all the quets here only hume ghar nahi lechalogi? she asked .

Archana came back and haa,.. haa,.. challo ghar chalthe she told them and lead them to her car.

Geet hesitated to sit in the costly car as it may get spoiled by their suit, but Archana said," geet get in fast'. geet made her children to sit in the car and she also sit in it.

Archana started the car, she senced something wrong by seeing them and didnt have much luggage with them. moreover their worn out appearance , like didnt have food and water since days. She kept quite till they reach their house, the kids r looking awe to the roads.

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IPart:-69

After they reaching the house Archana took them to Manchanda. He welcomed them heartyly, but looking confusingly at their attire. But didnt ask anything. First he asked them to get fresh and have some b.f.

Archana showed them the b.r. and asked them to take baath. She even gave a saree to wear. Geet gave bath to her kids and wear them the towel given by Archana. She washed their cloth and

dried them. She also get baath and wear archanas saree. Now these 3 r looking like fresh roses. Archana send Manchanda to near by shop to bring some dresses for the kids.

They sat at the table to b.f. The kids r too hungry as they grabbed every thing and just thowing it to their stomach. Geet is telling them to eat slowly.

Archanas eyes get moistened seeing this she wiped her tears not showing to geet.

After b.f. geet made them to sleep. She came to Archana.

Archana:- What happened geet?

Geet broke down as soon as archana asked that, she told every thing, even she told that , I killed that bas***d and ran here ,I don't have any other way to get out of this hell. She fell down and caught archanas feet, asking, show me some way to live for my daughters sake. Lead my life to a better path. I want to over come out of my past. I don't want any husband and a father like him to my daughters. I left my house to give a better life to my daughters, show me the way , she asked archana.

[ Archana is junior lawyer she is practicing it in delhi family court, under a senior, she didn't want to marry as her aim to serve the poor and needy woman.]

Archana:- no, geet u should have to punish him. U should fight against him and get him bared. U should not let a monster like him in outer society, as he may spoil more lifes.

Geet:- I dont want to let him know where we r. I don't want even his shadow on my children. I never want back to go to him..I want to live my lifev. Now my aim is to bring my kids up and give them happy life.

Manchnda:- She is right Archana, why u again trouble her in the pursuit of punishing him, wat will happen if u file a case against him, it will take yrs to clear, even then also we may not get justice na?We don't know wat will be the hearing? Till then how she will live? Why would u bother her, let her live with us. She wont go any where, she will live with us. I think that I have 2 daughters and grand children also. I want to give geet better life at least here after.

Archana:- thik hai papa, as u wish. Geet I will try to search job for u. did u bring ur certificates with u?

Geet:_ haa,..

Archana:- o.k. I will search a job for u and I will join the kids in school tomorrow.

Geet:- thank.u. Archana , I know I am giving u lot of trouble, I became a burden to u.

Archana:- don't say that, u r my sister now as papa accepted u as his second daughter. And ur kids as his potis. So we r now one family.

Manchanda:- haa,.. beta, archana sahi kahrahi hai, u r my own daughter now, don't say again u r burden to me. We r one family now and these two angels r my potis, kyu?,.. kids do u love me? will u accept me as ur dadaji?

The kids noded their heads as they think that he has fed them and gave them good clothes.

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