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rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

hey!! RN lovers this is fresh fanfiction of RN i.e. our own very beautiful couple, Rajveer - Naina, ye kma ( kanchan janga military academy , Ambala ) se related jarur hai but its a sweeettt love story no extra war, and not related with LRL story, par thoda bahut dhisum dhisum hoga bcz kma hai

***Humko Tumse Pyar hai ~Rajveer Naina~***

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so here is the character sketch of my first fanfiction on Rajveer & Naina -Humko Tumse Pyar hai.

BC(54 years):- head of kma , very strict person about rules & desplin but also very kind hearted .

Maj. nair(47 years):-he is vice pinciple of kma, ek number ka khadoos insaan hai, he hates all the girls cadets mostly.

cadet Naveen singh aluwalia,24 years (sameer sharma ):- he is 3rd year cadet , very brave & bright cadet,he is room mate & best frind of rajveer, and a very big flirt.

Cadet Rajveer singh shekhawat,23 years ( Rajeev khandelwal ):- he is 3rd year cadet , very brave & bright cadet,he is room mate & best frind of naveev , biggest competitor of naveen, very handsome,any girl can fall for him easily but he never pay any attention to them ,he is full of attitude,but only his true frirnds know him very well that how sweet , simple, down to earth person he is.

cadet Aalekh sharma ,23 years(Arjun bijlani ):- he is 3rd year cadet & like a tapori but best frnd of Rajveer & Naveen, kam bolta hai but observe jyada karta hai, jise apna maanta hai uske liye iski jaan hazir hai.

cadet Salini singhal,23 years(Aparna tilak ):- she is also a 3rd year cadet at kma ,v beutiful, love of Naveen , very good frnd of Rajveer & Aalekh.

Subedaar suri ji ,49 years:- mess incharge at kma very jolly & loving person.

cadet Naina singh aluhwalia ,20 years ( Priyanka bassi):- 1st year cadet , very beautiful, any boy can fall for her , but she is very arrogant and naughty girl, she is younger sister of naveen.

cadet Amardeep huda , 21 years ( vikash mankatla ):- 1st year cadet , biggest flirt, totaly hariyanviii.apni mummy ji ko bahut manta hai unse shart hari thi usne isliye kma aaya hai. is desh ka jawaan ban kar apni bharat maa ki raksha k liye, iska nara hai ''Jai Jawaan te Jai Kishaan"

(plzz ignore the name written on pic)

cadet Sameera rastogi 20 years ( zenifer winget ):-1st year cadet, very beautiful ,room mate & best frnd of naina .

Neelu chandok 20 years ( nupur of mile jab hum tum ):- she is bc's brother's daughter & a civillian & have a crush on aalekh aalekh also like hers but never told her.

mr Vikash singh shekhawat 49 years ( Ram kapoor ):- Rajveers's dad , very big business man in delhi. loved his family alot & specially proud on his son.

mrs Veena singh shekhawat 46 years( gautami kapoor ):- Rajveer's sweet lovely mother, house wife, loves her son alot , she lives only for her family's happiness.

Santa tai 53 year:-Rajveers & Ayaan's grany, and made of the house , loves rajveer as his own son.

Ayaan singh shekhawat 10 years:-Rajveer's couzin brother, he lost his mom dad in a car accident , he is son of Rajveer's chachu, now Rajveer's takes care of him, & vikash & veena adopted him too.

mr Harshad singh aluhwalia 50 years ( kiran karmarkar ):- Naveen's & Naina's father very kind hearted person , loves her princess alot.&
mrs Maya singh aluhwalia 48 years ( shakshi tanwar ) :- Naveen's & Naina's mother, a sweet lady, loves her family.

if need more characters, will introduce them further...

plzzz do comment...
with love Chandni...
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nilusoni

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Posted: 10 years ago

Very nice cs

Thanks for pm

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Vishaka Sanjana

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice Character sketch..

Please update soon!!

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Arti Gupta

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Posted: 10 years ago

continue soon dear we r waiting n excited...

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naujoker

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Posted: 10 years ago

Beautiful character sketch!!
Plz continue soon!!
Eagerly waiting for update!!
Thanks for the pm!

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rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

thanks for liking... characters i will post part 1 very soonnn

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ria

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Posted: 10 years ago

hi
the character sketch is really nice
alekh paried with nupur great
looking forward
plz cont soon and pm me

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rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

***RN-Humko Tumse Pyar hai***
Part - 1

Aaj ka suraj na jaane kya lekar aaya tha Rajveer aur Naina ki zindagi mein , yeh to unhe khud bhi pata nahi tha ki sayad wo aaj apne pyar se milne wale hai ya apne sabse bade dusman se.

aaj sabhi 2nd year cadets pass out hokar 3rd year me pravesh kar rahe hai to wahin kuchh naye 1st year cadet bhi inki life aur KMA ko jahannum banane ya sawarne k liye aa rahe hai. sabhi 3rd year cadets ka aaj pehla din hai aur sath hi 1st year cadets ka arrival bhi, 3rd year cadets ragging karne k liye bilkul taiyyar hai to wahin 1st year cadets bachne ko.

subah k 4 baj rahe hai...raj & naveen's room...
Raj aaram se apne bed par so raha hai, uske chehre pe 1 pyari si smile hai sayad wo koi sapna dekh raha hai... wahi naveen room me yahan se wahan left right left kar raha hai means ki room ka chakkar laga raha hai, sayad kisi tension me hai.tabhi uski nazar raj par padi aur wo raj ke pass gaya aur use hilate hue bola...

naveen:- raj uth... abe uth ( par raj to lagta hai 2 -3 hazar ghode bech ke so raha tha, jab raj nahi uthta to naveen jor se raj ki kamar pe laat marta hai jisse raaj hadbada kar bed se girta hai aur uth jata hai )

raj:- abe saale... teri to... laat kyun maari be aur itani rat ko kyun jagaya mera sapna tod diya

naveen:- oye maharaj, sunbah k 4 baj chuke hai tujhe rat dikh rahi hai, aur tera sapna gaya tel lene... mujhe bahut tension ho rahi hai, help kar na ( now raj is fully awaked )

raj:- bol kya ho gaya?

naveen:- wo aaj first year cadet aa rahe na to ( tabhi naveen paused & thinks :- nahin- nahin naveen, yeh tu kya kar raha hai, naina tujhe maar dalegi, usne mana kiya tha , kuchh mat bata kisi ko raj ko bhi nahi.)

raj:- abe bolega?

naveen:- wo humein ragging bhi to karni hogi na unki , to yahi soch raha tha ki kya karu unke sath,bas wahii...

raj (wih widen eyes / open mouthed ):- tujhe subah k 4 baje ragging k idea sujh rahe hai aur isliye tune mujhe jagaya ( tabhi some 1 knocks the door) abe itani subah kon marne aa gaya ( naveen goes & opens the door , aalekh enters with rubbing his eyes & yawning )

aalekh:- abe tum dono ko neend nahi aati kya? kitana halla kar rahe ho, bagal k room tak awaz aa rahi hai ( aur aalekh jaa kar raj k bed pe baith jata hai )

raj:- abe mujhe kuchh mat bol (pointing his fingers towards naveen ) is naveen ko bol, saala na khud sota hai , na mujhe sone deta hai, itani rat ko isne mujhey ragging k ideas k liye jagaya hai ( naveen is embarresed ) main to achha bhala itana pyara sa sapna dekh raha tha ( raj said this last line in dreaming tone & aalekh is making a face like in dono ka kuchh nahin ho sakta hai )

naveen:- achha tu bata hi de ki dekh kya raha tha sapne me ... ki itana chhid raha hai.

aalekh:- ha aisa kya dekh raha tha, aur waise bhi 1 ghante bad apun sab ko uthna hi hai.

raj bahut hi pyari si smile k sath apne bed se uthta hai aur window k pass khada ho jata hai, aalekh aur naveen dono hi bus raj ko dekhe jaa rahe hai aur confused hai ki raj ko kya hua hai.

aalekh:- abe bolega

naveen:- lagta hai yeh pagal ho gaya hai, raj tu thik to hai na.

raj :- hmmm, aaj na maine apni Dream Girl ko dekha.

aalekh & naveen :- hmmm,... kyaaa... ( naveen ko bahut zor ki hasi aa rahi thi par usne aalekh k bagal me baithte hue pucha )

naveen:- raj aisa kya dekha tuneee...

raj ( in dreaming tone with closed eyes ):- maine dekha ki charo taraf barf hi barf hai, aur wo off white colour ki saree me thi, uske baal khule hue the aur hawa ki wajah se lehra rahe the, aankhon me kajal, haanthon me bhar bhar k chudiyaan, pairo me payal, mathe pe bindi, uske kaan k jhumke uske kandho ko bade pyar se chum rahe the, aur uske wo gulabi honth jispar 1 pyari si muskaan thi aur wo barf ki chaadar par baithi hui thi, main uski god ( lap) pe sir rakh kar leta hua tha main uski zulfo ko hata kar uska chahra dekhne hi wala tha ki...( now truns towards them with anger )

aalekh:- ki ?

raj :- ki is gadhe ne mujhe lat mari aur mujhe utha diya ( naveen is laughing like hell aur ab alekh bhi has raha tha)

raj:- achha saalo bahut hasi aa rahi hai na

naveen:- raj tu aaj k jamane me aisi ladki ka sapna dekh bhi kaise sakta hai ? tujhe aaj k jamane me aisi ladki kabhi nahi milegi aur ha tujhe na kisi mini skirt waali ladki ka sapna dekhna chahiye samjhaaa...( raj frawns )

aalekh:- abe naveen, mini skirt waali, wo bhi raj... is janam me to imposible hai.

raj:- sach kaha tune aalekh, par na mujhe pura yakeen hai ki wo jarur aayegi, wo chahe is duniyaan ki sabse khubsurat ladki na ho , par mere liye meri sabse khubsurat duniyaan hogi.

naveen aur aalekh dono hi raj ko bahut achhi tarah se jaante hai aur yeh bhi mante hai ki wo ladki is duniyan ki sabse khusnaseeb aur special ladki hogi jise raj chahega, par phir bhi maje lene k liye.

naveen:- achha raj chal thik hai par soch agar teri zindagi me koi Daaku Haseena aa gayi to...

raj ( with naughty smile ) :-oh!! you mean shalu jaisi

aalekkh:- oye khabardaar jo humari salini bhabhi ko kuchh kaha to ( & winks )

naveen:- oye chup karo dono, meri shalu jaisi nahin par agar teri zindagi me meri behen jaisi koi ladki aa gtayi na, to teri zindagi nark samajh.

raj:- abe tu jab dekho apni behen ki burayi karta hai, aur koi aur kuchh keh de to uski samat aa jati hai, akhir kar teri behen hai kya cheez ? ( aalekh is also looking at naveen 4 answer )

naveen :- meri behen ... meri gudiyaaa...

end of part 1
plzzz do comment...
with love chandni...
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naujoker

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Awesome start really superb raj, naveen, alekh conversation 👍🏼
Kya laat mara naveen ne raj ko 🤣
Eagerly waiting for 1st year batch and raj and naina's meeting.
Update sooon!!!!!

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