Humko tumse pyar hai ~Rajveer Naina~ *completed* Last part on page 51

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Hey Chandani dear Vartika here, u remember me on FB!!!!!! 🤗🤗🤗

Just one correction as I told u on FB that Naveen's name is Sameer not Manish!!!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆

Rest is all fine and part 1 is nice!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏

Raj's imagination is lovely!!!!!

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amber saleem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

hehehei very intresting part 😃😃 kya freindship hai tino me ek ko saza mili baqi do bhi pohanch gaye 😆😉 zabardast update 👏👏 kahan to raj ko naveen ki behan me ieni buraiyan dikh rahin thin abhi aate hi uski ankhon me khogaya hahaha😆😆 hats off cont soon👏

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desaiprachi07

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Hey nice FF..

Do continue soon.

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Nice part is second one!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏

Raj is lost to see Naina kuch to spark hai dono me!!!!!! 😉 😉 😉

Naina is really smart kya bewkuff banaya us ne Huda ko!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆

Sameera's entry is nice but Raj to patne se raha us se!!!!!! 😛 😛 😛

Update soon!!!!!!!!!!

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naujoker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Very beautiful part!!!!
Finally naina and raj met, but why she said naina ah singh.
Eagerly waiting for the next update!!!
Thanks for the pm

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rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha
Hey Chandani dear Vartika here, u remember me on FB!!!!!! 🤗🤗🤗

Just one correction as I told u on FB that Naveen's name is Sameer not Manish!!!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆

Rest is all fine and part 1 is nice!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏

Raj's imagination is lovely!!!!!

yes vartika... thankx for correcting me... i m glad that u r liking my fic as u r also a wonderful writer...

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ria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

hi
the up is really good
so naveen is saying his friend about his naughty sister
alekh nveen and raj they are real friends
the convo btw major nair and raj is really funny
so finally heroine made her entry and landed over the hero
i really like the way she entered the academy
hahaha lets see what happens next
plz cont soon and pm me

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rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

thankyou so muchh my all readers for liking part 2 and commenting on it thanx a ton

Chandni

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rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

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***RN-Humko Tumse Pyar hai***
Part - 3

girl:- cadet naina ah singh first year...

raj:- cadet naina ah... singh ajeeb naam hai... ( naina looks at naveen ) aur tum dekh k nahi chal sakti kya... mujhe gira diya...

naina;- oh hellow... galti tumhari thi samjhe... tum girls hostel me kya kar rahe ho... warden ko bulau...

raj:- ja ja bula le... main yahan pichhle 2 saal se hu... aur tum sirf aaj ayi ho... meri 1 complain se tu is academy se bahar... samjhi... kyuki itani rat ko academy me entry karna... rules todna hai... aur pehle hi din rules todne pe muchhad kya saja dega yeh abhi tujhe pata nahi

naveen:-are meri baaat

raj:-chup... tu mera dost hai ya iska...

naina:- oye tameez se bat karo... yeh kya tu tu laga rakha hai... ek to mujhse takra kar mujhe gira diya... upar se sorry bolne ki bajaye attitude dikha rahe ho teri to... mujhse

naveen;- bus... dekh raj tu chal yahan se... aur naina tumhe koi kuchh nahi kahega tum bhi jao...

raj:- tujhe iski badi fikra hai... waise mujhe kya karna... ( to naina ) bach k rehna tum mujhse... ( to naveen ) tu aa raha hai ya main jaun...

naveen:- raj tu ja main wo bas... wo...

raj:- i m going... jab fursat mile to aa jana... ( raj left from there )

naveen:-naina... where the hell r u... aur raj se aise kyun lad rahi thi...

naina:- wo meri bus late ho gayi main kya karti... aur ha aapne kisi ko bataya to nahi na ki aapki behen hu... aur jahan tak sawal hai ladne ka to wo sadu mujhse lad raha tha... hnnn

naveen:- nahin bataya meri maa... warna tu mujhe kha jati... yahan tak ki raj ko bhi nahi bataya...

naina;- raj...

naveen:- wahi jo abhi yahan se gaya... mera best frnd...jisse tu billi ki tarah lad rahi thi

naina:- ohhh... yeh tha aapka raj...

naveen:- sunn tune apna nam kya bataya raj ko naina ah singh

naina;- are wo main pahle naina alhuwalia bolne wali thi... phir mujhe laga ki agar main aisa bol dungi ki mera naam naina singh alhuwalia hai... to sabko saq ho jayega ki mera aapse koi relation hai... jo main nahi chahti,... isliye sab mujhe cadet alhuwalia nahi cadet singh kaheinge...

naveen:- theek hai... par ek din to sab ko pata chalna hi hai... chal ja apne room me aur plzz kisi se koi panga mat lena ok

naina:- ok bhaiya... i will try... waise... aap yahan girls hostel me kya kar rahe the... ( she raised her eyebrow )

naveen:- ah aa wo aise hi gudiya tu ja and dont worry main kisi ko nahin bataunga ki u r my sister...

naina:- ehasaan nahi kar rahe ho bet hare ho to aapko karna hi padega... khair good night bhaiya...apke love k bare me baad me mujhe pata chal hi hi jayega...

naveen:- are aisa kuchh... ( but naina ran away to her room )

naina's room...

sam:- hi i m sameera rastogi... and u?

naina:- naina singh

sam:- hi naina nice name ... u can call me sam... after all now we r room mates na... and frnds too...

naina:- ya ofcrz

sam:- so tell me what brought u here...?

naina:- a bet

sam:- what...?

naina:- nothing... just patriotism... and what about u?

sam:- i m here to proove my self... that i can do any thing that a boy can do so...

naina:- hmmm nice... great thought... so kaisa raha aaj ka din... i think tum subah hi aa gayi ho... right...?

sam:- ya subah hi aayi... and u know what thank to god aaj hi meri humare seniors se bathui... u can say frndship ho gayi... they all r nice bus wo...

naina:- seniors...?

sam:- ya 3 year... naveen, alekh, shalini, and raj...

naina:- great matalab ragging se bachane ka achha tarika hai...

sam:- nahi yar not bcz of ragging... just bat hui sab ne achhe se bat bhi ki siway uske...

naina:- uske kiske?

sam:- rajveer...

naina:- rajveer?

sam:- ha raj... he is so handsome yar... kya attitude hai usme... ( naina is thinking about her 1 ancounter with raj a few minutes ago )naina kaha kho gayi

naina:- nothing... i m tired ... i think we should sleep...

sam:- ya sure gn... sd ...

naina:- u 2

rajveers room...

raj:- itani der kaha tha...

naveen:- are wo nai... ah i mean aram se walk karte hue aa raha tha... na isliye der ho gayi...

raj:- naveen tu mujhe ullu samjhta hai ya major nair ya bc... ? dekh main pichhle kuchh dino se notice kar raha hu... tu kuchh tense rehta hai... specially jab se 1 year cadets ki arrival ki news aayi hai... kya bat hai... kya chhipa raha hai... aur us ladki ka sath kyun de raha tha... ek no ki jungali ladki hai... i just ... hnnn

naveen:- are nahi raj aisa kuchh nahi hai... main tujhse kabhi kuchh chhipa sakta hu kya... aur aisa mat bol bechari achhey pariwaar li ladki lag rahi thi... chal mujhe bahut neend aa rahi hai gn... and sd of ur dream girl...

next day...

subah me sabhi naye cadets ka swagat major nair ne apne special drill se ki... us drill me 1 year aur 3 year cadets the drill 3 year cadets hi kar rahe the aur 1 year cadets ko unhe observe karna tha...

nair:- so cadets jaisa ki aap sab jante hai ki seniors hi juniors ko achha sheekha sakte hai aaj se humare sath 1 years cadets ne bhi join kiya hai so aaj ka drill or u can say a consentration activity hogi jisme 3 year ka ek cadet 1 year k dusre cadet k sath yeh activity karega then second activity me 3 year k cadet ko target practice kark dikhana hoga... jinhe 1 year cadet observe kareinge... brig sir k special orders hai jisme 1 year cadets ki jo bhi initial activity hongi unme 3 year cadets bhi unhe guide kareinge bcz hum sab faculty ne decide kiya hai ki supervison se kam aur achha hoga... aur 1 year cadets apni rah se bhatkenge bhi nahi...

huda:- ye muchhad itana bolta kyun hai...

sam:- chup kar huda wo sunn lega...

raj;- ise hum hi mile the kya... 2 year cadets ko le lete in bachho ko sikhane ke liye ( naina heard it & makes a face)

shalu:- raj wo bachhe nahi hai... they r just 2 years younger than us... aur waise bhi is nair ka koi bharosha nahi hai...

naina:- sir aap hum bachho ke sath itane buzurg aur experienced logo ko la rahe hai uske liye thankyou u so much sir ( naina looks at raj with wicked smile and raj frowned)

raj;- isaki toh...

naveen:- abe ruk

nair:- step frwrd cadet singh ( naina stepped frwrded ) :- cadet singh tum jaisi ladkiyan... jinka adhe se jyada waqt khud ko sawarne me jata hai... wo kabhi soldiers nahi ban sakti... par kya kare ab aap sab ko le liya hai to hume humare senior cadets kli help to leni padegi na... ( raj smiles aaj pehli bar raj ko nair ki bat pe gussa nahi aaya bcz naina ne raj par jo comment kiya uske bad raj ko naina major nair se jyada buri lag rahi thi...)

naina:- mujh jaisi ladkiyaan hi soldiers ban sakti hai... sir... aur jahan tak baat rahi sajne sawarne ki... to is male dominet society me agar mard akadna. nahi chhod sakte to hum ladkiyan sawarna kaise chhod de ( shalu smiles and winks at naveen )

naveen in his mind:- yeh naina maregi is muchhad k hantho

raj:- sir kya aaj hum yahan sirf debate karne k liye khade hai ya activity bhi kareinge...

nair:- mujhe kya karna hai kya nahi yeh mujhe aapse jaanne ki koi jarurat nahi hai cadet shekhawat... cadet singh back to ur position... so all of u ...sabhi 3 year cadet aur first year cadets pair me eye contact ki activity kareinge...last jo winners bacheinge we apas me yeh activity karienge...

activity start hoti hai sabhi 1 year cadets har rahe the... siway huda aur naina ke... aur dusri taraf... raj aur naveen bhi jeet rahe the...
jab huda aur naina ki bari aayi to huda kuchh jyada hi smart ban raha tha aur as per his flirty nature he winks at naina... aur wo bahar ho gaya ( naveen observed this aur use huda ko punch karne ka mann kar raha tha... usi k saamne uski behen ko line maar raha tha) ... aur dusri taraf raj aur naveena abhi bhi ek dusre ki akhoin me dekh rahi hai... naina wants his brother to win over raj but unfortunatly raj won... now its time to raj naina... they both r gazing each other... dono hi ek dusre ko dekh rahe hai... ya kaha jaye kho gaye hai...

raj thinks:- wow yar pehli baar koi itani khubsurat ladki dekhi hai,... wo bhi bina kisi make up k pure beauty... kash yeh gungi hoti to jyada achhi lagti... aur isaki aakhien... pehli bar itani khubsurat aankhein dekhi hai...

naina thinks:- not bad jo bhaiya ne bataya tha waisa hi hai... must say most handsome man i have ever seen... aur sabse achhi hai iski aankhien... par ise attitude itana kyun hai... kal aise lad raha tha... jaise main isaki janmo se dushman hun hnnn... humein bachha keh raha tha... jaise khud humara baap ho... khair beta hoga tu senior... par agar tujhe apne aage jhuka na diya to mera naam bhi naina singh alhuwalia nahin...

raj thinks:- raj yeh tu kar kya raha hai... kyun isse aise behave kar raha hai... bhul ja... jo kal isne kiya... bhad me jaye yeh... aur iska pura khandaan

shalu:- oye naveen... yeh naina itani der tak kaise tik gayi... wo bhi apne raj k samne...

naveen:- hmm... dono ek se badh kar ek hai...

aalekh:- kuchh gadbad hai...

huda :- kya...

aalekh:- inke face expressions dekho... aisa lag raha hai ek dusre ko kha jayeinge... jaise kuchh plan bana rahe ho...

huda;- kya baat hai phoolan... senior ko hara rahi hai...

sam:- oye kash main naina ki jagah hoti... raj ke sath mujhe to pyar hi ho jata ( naina heard this and lowered her eyes and raj won)

nair :- so the winner of this drill is cadet rajveer... waise bhi rajveer to sirf ladkiyon se hi jeet sakta hai ( raj and naina both looks at nair and both didnt liked it )

rajveer :- thanks for the compliment sir... kyuki humare shastro me likha hai... ki ladkiyan yani ki aurte... jagat janani hai... unka mukabala aur unki mahanta ka mukabala main kya devta bhi nahi kar paye... aur na jeet paye... to yahan to main jeet gaya sir wo bhi 1 aurat se ( points towards naina) aur jahan tak sawal hai ki ladkiyaan soldier ban sakti hai ya nahi... ya ladko ko hara sakti hai ya nahi... to agar ladki ek soldier ko janm de sakti hai to usi janme ladke ko ya mard ko hara bhi sakti hai... aur usi mard ko peeche chhod kar soldier bhi ban sakti hai... ( all of his frnds, sam huda and naina too looking at him with admiration ) aur sir aap sayad bhul rahe hai ki mukabala barabari walo me hota hai... yahan in 1 year cadets k harne ka aur hum 3 year cadets k jeetane ka sawaal hi nahi uthata... bcz we r trained sir... but they r just a freshers... isliye yeh yahan tak pahuche yahi in sab k liye bahut badi victory hai... aur ha sir aap humesha use hi underestimate karte hai... jo best hota hai... like me... ( smiles )

aalekh:- nair k khilaf raj kisi ka bhi sath de sakta hai na... ?

naveen:- kal tak naina ko bura keh raha tha... aur aaj nair k against baat aayi to naina ki hi side le raha hai...

nair:- be in ur limits cadet... back to ur position... aur ha cadet shekhawat jaise aapne kaha aap trained hai... next activity ki suruaat aap hi karienge target shooting... aap apne juniors ko dikhaiye na ki aap kitana achha shoot karte hai...

raj:- my pleasure sir its my fav job...

raj rifles uthata hai aur shoot karna start karta hai aur kareeb 7 bullets marne ke bad target board me itana bada hole ho jata hai ki dusra side pura visible hai... all 1 year cadets are impressed with raj... aur raj k face pe ek winning smile hai... aur nair as usual chhid raha hai...

nair:- back to ur position cadet... ( raj backed ) so cadets baki 3 year cadets bhi apni shooting practice kark dikhayeinge... aur then fir 1 year cadets bhi kareinge... aur sambhal kar...

phir baki k 3 year cadets bhi shoot kark dikhate hai... then 1 year cadets bhi 1 time shoot practice karte hai... jab sam ki bari aayi t uski bullet target k pass se nikal gayi... huda ne bhi theek thak nishana lagaya... but jab naina ki bari aayi to major ne... use jung lagi rifle de di... jis wajah se uske kandhe pe chot lag gayi...

naveen:- naina... ( naveen aage bada )

nair:- hold it cadet alhuwalia... agar cadet singh ko chot lagi bhi hai to wo infirmary tak khud jayeingi... wo yaha soldir banne aayi hai... so unhe itana dard to sehna hoga...

naina:- yes sir i can manage... thanks... ( naina left to infirmary)

nair:- dismiss...

raj aalekh looking a naveen with questioning look...

naveen:- what...?

aalekh:- kya chhipa raha hai...

naveen:- are... kuchh bhi to...

raj:-chot naina ko lagi... tu itana pareshan kyun ho raha hai...aur waise bhi hum yeh achhi tarah se jante hai ki nair ne phir apna kameena pan dikhaya hai... bata bat kya hai...

naveen:- are nahi yar wo ek ladki hai... aur wo meri... i mean hum sab ki behen ki tarah hai na... ( raj is shocked )

raj:- oye behen hogi teri...

alekh:- kyun raj kya problem hai...

naveen:- ahh... chale ab mess me...

in mess...

shalu:-oye kaha reh gaye the tum sab

raj:- bas ais hi...

all r sitting tabhi naina aati hai...

aalekh:- hey naina... ab tera kandha kaisa hai...?

naina:- i m fine sir...

shalu:- are naina... mana ki hum sab tumhare seniors hai but u can call us with our name...

aalekh:- ha shalu sahi bol rahi hai...

raj:- par iska matalab yeh nahi ki tum sab ragging se bach jaoge...

naina:- ragging... wo bhi tum karoge... ( now raj stands infornt of naina... )

raj:- kyun... tum exeption ho... ? ya phir dar lag raha hai...

naina:- naina singh kisi se nahi darti samjhe aur jahan tak bat hai... ragging ki to yeh to seniors ka haq hai na... so carry on... main bhi dekhun ki tum sab me kitana dam hai..

huda:- teri baat to bilkul sahi hai phoolan... senior ho humare baap nahi...

aalekh: kya bola be... teri toh... ( alekh frwdd to hold his coller )

huda:- huda ko hanth lagana aasan baat nahi hai... jaha tak baat hai hum 1 year cadets ki to ab tak tum logo ka pala hum sab se nahi pada hai... dekhte hai... ki tum kis khet ki mooli ho... phoolan main tere sath hu..

naina:- mujhe tere sath ki koi jarurat nahi hai...huda main akeli hi kafi hoon...

raj:- dekh aalekh... yeh hai inaki dosti... sath tak to 1 dusre ka manzoor nahi chale hai... hume chunauti dene...

sam:- aisa nahi hai raj... main to tum sab k hi side hun... bas wo kya hai na main sabke sath pyar se rehna chahti hu... specially tumhare... ( huda and naina looks at sam)

raj:- kyaa

sam:-i mean... hum sab frndz hai na...

naveen:- abhi nahi ragging k baad sam... aur waise bhi is baar fresher ball me tum chaho to apne kisi bhi senior k sath jaa sakti ho... ( pointing towards raj and naina roles her eyes )

aalekh:- ha kyun nahi...

raj:- ab chale... ( to naina) be ready for tonight ... chal naveen...

naveen wishpers to naina:- i want to talk to u... ( naina nods in yes aalekh observe this)

aalekhin his mind:- kuchh to locha hai... pata karna padega...

its about 6 pm... back side of kma...

naveen is waiting for naina... tabhi naina aati hai...

naveen:- what are u doing naina...??

end of part 3
plzzz do comment...
with love chandni...
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Edited by rkchandni - 10 years ago

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ria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

hi
the up is really good
so seeing raj naina fighting with each other naveen came there and gets shocked to his sister and his best friend fighting
he saved them
anyways the words raj said to major nair is really true
plz cont soon and pm me