Humko tumse pyar hai ~Rajveer Naina~ *completed* Last part on page 51 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: arjun_riya

Amazing story... Plz cont soon and pm me when u update...



thakx alot dear

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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Sanjana4Rajeev

Amazing updates dear!!

I really loved the way how the story is progressing Chandni!!..
Uff Yeh Naina..pataa nahin yeh kab samjhegi ki Raj bohot hi shareef ladka hai..
Chandramukhi scenes were too good!!
Loved how the cadets is getting along with each other
Please do update soon!!



thanks a ton sweetie

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Posted: 10 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: naujoker

Wow double dhamaka!!!
Two updates!!!!
And alekh and huda's scene were amazing!!
Naina and raj were awesome.
Loved the way jab raj pareshaan hua aur usne sazaa bhi bhukti and sab qabool bhi kiya that was nicely portrayed.
Raj ne aur baki sab hairan the aur raj ne use jhoor daar thappad bhi mara.
Naina ne kyaa kar diya ab agar raj ko pata chala toh woh kya karega?
The up was fabulous!!
Thanks for the pm!!!



thnkyou so much dear

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Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: meenuraj97

how sweet of raj
jase he naina faint hue usni uski help ki or saja bhi jhel li
naina ne toh raj ki lanka laga di iske ghr phone kr ke ye kah diya ki wo uske bache ki maa bane wali h o.m.g
ab raj ka kya hoga
alekh bechara huda ka shikar ban gaya kiss bhi kiya toh lip pe hehehe...
naveen ne toh liye telecast ke pure maze liye hass hass kr pagal ho gaya
bechara raj saja pure kr ke aaya toh naina ne halchal tak nhi pucha very bad naina
huda ne video sabko show kr di alekh ki izzat Ki toh vhat laga di
raj ne huda ko kas kr ek thapa mara par kyu mara ye abhi suspense h
very bad chandni itne achi time pe break laga diya tumne
anyways very gud part
update next part soon



thanks alot naina... dont worry i will post next part soon...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: ambersaleem

pehle part 5 pe aate hen raj ko aisa nhi krna chahye tha naina k sath uske marks bhi cut gaye punishment bhi mili 🥱 very bad raj pr naina ne bhi sudharna nhi hai kitna larti hai raj ne pehle saza dilwadi ab behosh hui to bhag k bhi sb se pehle aaya bs gussa ka e tez raj dil ka bohat saaf 😊😊 nice update👏



thankyou so muchhh amber...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: ambersaleem

hmm part 6 to raj ne maj nair ko such such btadya or khud saza bhugti how sweet of him ❤️ pr jb raj ne apni galti man li thi to naina ko bhi use maaf krdena chahye tha pr ye kya krdya naina ne apni bewaqufi se raj k ghr walo ko bhi pareshan krdya uff naina 😡😡😡 or ye huda ab iska kya hoga aalekh ne to mar mar k bura haaal krdya pr raj ne q mara????? m confused😕 xont soon very very nice update 🤗👏👏




next part me pata chala jayega amber tab tak keep guessing😆😆😆

btw...

wish u a veryyy veryyy happy returns of the day... happy birthday...❤️👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Wonderful part loved it

Raj is really amazing
Haha bechara alekh huda is really funny
Omg naina and her stunt
Excited when raj come to know about naina's stunt
Excited for next part
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon



thanks alot nilu keep reading sweetie

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Posted: 10 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi
the up is really good
so finally huda win his task
and naina is really wondered y raj helped and confessed his guilt
plz cont soon and pm me



thanks ria i do...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: arpita25

Nice parts.👏
Raj and Naina are made for fighting only but their sweet nok jhok is nice.😉 Update soon.



thanks arpita... and yes
Raj and Naina are made for fighting 😆😆😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Just finished reading part 4 & 5 right now and will read and comment over part 6 later.

Lovely updates 👏 👏 👏 so Raj is paired with Naina and because of incomplete info about Raj's telephone call she thinks he is a jerk which he is not obviously.😛 😛 😛 Naveen is really very smart how he made a smart plan by sending Naina in Fresher's Ball with Raj as she will be safe with him.😉 😉 😉 Alekh k saath Huda is not happy but let's see will he be able to complete his task which his seniors gave him.😛 😛 😛Naveen knew she can't stand in sun shine and now see what happens when she got fainted in her punishment.



thankyou so much vartika... i m very much glad that u r liking my fic... bcz u r a fabulous writer... 👏👏👏 thankx again

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