Humko tumse pyar hai ~Rajveer Naina~ *completed* Last part on page 51

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amber saleem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

hahahaha very very nice update 😆 kya zabardast larte hen dono dono hi takar k hain😆 or ye aalekh ki jasusi khatam e nhi hoti kuch garbar hai kuch garbar hai bs yehi kye jaraha😉 ab kya karega raj naina ki shamat ayegi ya raj khud hi phasega??????? cont soon plzzz

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nilusoni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Gr8 part

Thanks for pm

Plz pm me for next part

Continue soon

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rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

thanks every one for liking and commenting on part 3... i will post part 4 after an hour... keep smiling always... thanx again

chandni
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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Great part. 👏 👏 👏

Naina replied Nair very smartly and I like Raj supporting her specially.👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 All he said to Nair was just perfect.👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 One more time Nair got the perfect reply.😆 😆 😆 I think now he is used to it so it doesn't affect him.😛 😛 😛

I like specially the concentration game which Raj won.😉 😉 😉 Naveen poor guy he can't tell everyone that Naina is his sis but Alekh now has doubt over him and Naina.😉 😉 😉

Update soon.

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arpita25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Hey nice FF!!!!!!!! 👏 Just read all it's parts.😊 Awesome work.
Do update soon n pm me.

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rkchandni

@rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

***RN-Humko Tumse Pyar hai***
Part - 4

naveen:- what are u doing naina...??

naina:- ab maine kya kiya...

naveen:- oh my dear sis tum itani bholi to nahi ho... aur tum barbar raj se panga kyun le rahi ho... aur wo major nair usne janbujhkar...

naina:- oh bhaiya... common... chill dont worry... aur mujhe us nair se koi fark nahi padta... aur jahan tak baat hai raj ki to panga main usse nahi wo mujhse le raha hai... pata nahi... apne aap ko samajhta kya hai... bhaiya... u know na... i m here just to enjoy my life like you... wo bhi with out any support... isliye main nahi chahti ki kisi ko bhi yeh pata chale ki main aapki behen hun... so chill bhaiya... stop being over protective... kuchh nahi hoga mujhey...

naveen:- to tu nahi manegi...

naina:- nooo

naveen:- theek hai... par plzzz mere dost ko baksh de tu jaisa samajhti hai... raj waisa nahi hai... meri nazar se dekhegi to raj is duniya ka best insaan hai... ( naina looking at naveen like stop it bhaiya..) ok ok... achha sun ma baba se baat ki... ( naina nods in no..) ohk... aaj kar lena... aaj saturday night hai... sabhi ko rat me bhi permission hoti hai ghar bat karne ki...

naina:- ohk kar lungi... ab main jaaun... waise bhaiya... ek baat bolun... yahan hai sabhi ek no. k namune... ( naina is laughing )

naveen:- chupp... ( naina ran away ) pagal...

aur naveen bhi wahan se chala jata hai... par koi tha jo in dono ki hi baat ko sunn raha tha...

aalekh:- oh to yeh baat hai... naina singh... naveen ki chhoti behen hai... achha hai bahut achha hai... ( now he smiling wide )

in mess...

raj is talking to her mother at home...

raj:- hi my lovely mumma... hows u... dad... ayaan... and tai...??

veena:- sab bahut acchey hai... kal hi tere dad tujhe pooch rahe they... sunn beta is baar leave milte hi ghar aajana samjh... ayaan tujhse bahut naraaz hai... tujhey bahut miss karta hai... (raj is smiling... ki ayaan snatched phone from veena )

ayaan:- hi bhaiya... main aapse bahut naraz hu,... ( making a gussa wala face )

raj:- oh no... my kiddo is angry with me... waise kaisa hai mera bachha...

ayaan:- main to bilkul theek hu... par aap bahut bure ho... aapne promise kiya tha ki aap mujhse milne aaoge par aap nahi aye...

raj:- oh... i m really sorry my baby...( tabhi naina enters and just shocked to hear such words ) i promise u my jaan this time we will definieatly have a great time... hum khub sari masti kareinge... ghumne jayeine... aur nacheinge... gayeinge... aish kareinge aur kya... aur is baar tu mujhey jyada miss na kare hum sath me soeinge... ok... ( naina is like what the hell) ok love u... give my love to all... byeee

ayan:- byee bhaiya jaldi aana...

raj:- ok byee ( with wide smile he turns and find naina... but ignore her and left to his room...)

naina thinks:- bhaiya isaki itani taarif karte hai aur yeh to... oh god he is so cheap... sach kaha hai kisi ne... dont judge a book only by its cover... yeh to ek no. ka tharki nikala... aur attitude to dekho jaise koi raj kumar ho... hnnn

phir naina apne ghra bhi call karti hai aur apne parrents apni aur naveen ki bat karti hai...

aaj sun day hai to koi drill ya class nahi thi... isliye raj aur aalekh ne aaj rat ko freshers ki ragging karne ka plan banaya... pahle naveen mana kar raha tha bcz naina bhi wahan hogi par baad me maan gaya...

game room...
sabhi seniors baithe hue hai tabhi kuchh first year cadets k sath naina huda aur sam bhi aate hai... raj ankh band kark leta hua tha... naina ki nazar raj pe padi aur uska dimaag sanak gaya...

aalekh aur naveen ne sabhi ko koi na koi task karaya... now...

naveen:- sam... tumhe major nair ke room me jakar unki uniform me laga batch lekar aana hai...

sam:- what... pagal ho gaye ho kya... wo muchhad mujhey maar dalega... main aisa...

aalekh:- karna padega sweetie... just go u have only 1 hour...

huda:- oye hoye... ki gal hai... aj to apna tapori bhi gentleman language bole raha hai...

raj:- tu uski chinta mat kar huda... apne bare me soch...

huda;- ha ha bolo na ki mujhey kya karna hai...

raj;- tumhe kiss karna hai... ( all are shocked and raj looked at naina... huda is very happy... naina is giving a disgusting look...)

naveen:- raj tu pagal ho gaya hai...

raj:- aalekh ko...

aalekh, naveen, huda:- WHATTT... ( 1 minute k liye naina bhi dar gayi thi par now she is fine )

raj:- ha... tu apne aap ko bahut bada top samajhta hai na to just kiss him any where on his hand, or on his cheeks, or on his forehead, or on his lips...where u want or like to... agar tu kar paya to ok... nahin to phir tujhey yahin task BC k sath karna padega... ( now aalekh and naveen both understand that what raj is up to)

naina thinks:- is huda ka pala bhi bilkul sahi bande se pada hai... huda tu to gaya...

raj:- tere pass time hai... pure 2 din... ka...

huda:- ohk... main try to karunga hi... kyun aalekh bhai itna bura bhi nahi hu main...

aalekh:- sale mujhey chhua bhi na to apun tera dant tod dalega...

huda:- dekhte hai abhi to do din hai...

aalekh:- dekh liyo... waise naveen ab in naina madam ko kya saja di jaye... i mean aisa kya karaya jaye... raj tu hi bata...

raj:- mujhey inme koi interest nahi hai... main chala... isse tum dono hi nipto...

shalu:- are raj ruk to...

naveen:- naina tumhe raj ke sath fresher ball me jana hoga...

raj and naina:- what...

naveen:- ha ab dekho... tum dono ka 36 ka aakda hai aur raj ko tumhey kisi bhi haalat me mana kar fresher ball me uske sath aana hoga...

raj:- agar yeh aisa nahi kar payi to... ?

naina:- to jo tum kahoge wo main karungi...

raj:- ohk... lets see

huda thinks:- oh no... maine to socha tha ki phoolan ke sath main jaunga... but is naveen ki to... hnn

all are left from there... exept naveen and aalekh...

aalekh:- wah kya idea hai boss... naveen achha tarika nikal hai apni behen ko bachane ka... taki wo kisi galat bande k sath na ja paye aur uski galat ragging bhi na ho...

naveen:- yeh tu kya keh raha hai alekh...

aalekh:- tu apun ko aida samajhta hai kya... apun ko pata hai ki naina teri behen hai... aur wo yeh kyun chhipa rahi hai yeh bhi pata hai...

naveen:- plzzz aalekh tujhe meri kasam kisi ko batana mat... raj ko bhi nahi... warna naina mujhe nahin chhodegi... plzzz

aalekh:- theek hai nahin bataunga... waise jaise wo teri behen hai waise apun ki bhi dont worry... aur ha idea waqai achha hai... raj se jyada shareef naina ko koi mil hi nahi sakta tha...

naveen and aalekh both laugh and left...

thodi der baad sam boys hostel me aati hai aur seedha naveena uar raj k room me knock karti hai... raj uth kar door open karta

raj;- sam tum yahan...? ( sam is looking at raj with dreamingly) sam where r u?

sam:- wo yeh major nair ka batch...

raj:- oh... well done... yeh mujhe do aur jao... gn

sam:- gn raj... ( sam left )

next day...

aaj major nair ne fir se 1 year aur 3 year cadets ki drill rakhi hai... jisme jodi task hai aur kuhh kam alot kiye gaye hai... jinhe first year cadets ko hi karna hai... aur 3 year cadets ko unhe guide karna hai...

jodi:-

naveen - sameera
aalekh - huda
rajveer - naina
shalini - rakesh
etc...

major nair:- so cadets sabse pehle cadet naveen singh alhuwalia aur cadet sameera ko apne map ke acoording jakar is jungle me chhipe weapons ko serch karke lana hai... aur report karna hai... cadet aalekh aur cadet huda ko apne ghayal sipaahi ko dhundhna hai... cadet rajveer aur cadet naina ko handpump ko sudhar kar usme se ek balti pani ka lana hai... cadet salini aur cadet rakesh ko... jugle me plant bombs ko lana hai... is that clear...

all:- yes sir...

major nair:- aur ha yaad rahe... senior cadet sirf guide kareinge... sara kaam 1 year cadets ko hi karna hai...

aalekh:- hnnn ise huda hi mila tha mera partner banane k liye...

raj wishper :- sale ko koi aur nahi mila mere sath jodi banane k liye... ( naina heard this )

naina:- oh hellow mujhe bhi koi sauq nahi hai tumhare sath jodi banane ka...

major nair:- any problem cadet...

naina:- yes sir can i change my partner...

major:- why... cadet shekhawat... do u have any problem...?

raj:- no sir... i dont have...

major:- cadet singh u cant change ur partner and cant leave ur partner... do u get it...

naina:- yes sir...

major:- so ur time starts now...

end of part 4
plzzz do comment...
with love chandni...
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Edited by rkchandni - 10 years ago

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Arti Gupta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

wow great alekh ko pta chal gaya k naina naveen ki bahen h
or ragging toh bohat he solid ki h boss
huda ko alekh ko kiss karna h wowww...
huda ki toh band baj gayi
naina ko raj ke saath freasbers ball me jana h wow
ye toh drea. jasa h raj kr naina ko as a pair dekhna wk bho freshers ball me
ye naveen na bihat chalu h apne bahen ko bachane ke liye use raj ke saathlaga diya
bechara huda uska sapna toh tut gaya hehehe...
ab is task me kta hoga raj ir naina saath h toh kuch toh gadbad jarur kare gay dono
lets see aage kya hota h
waiting for next part...

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Vishaka Sanjana

@Sanjana4Rajeev

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Hey Chandni..

sorry for the late reply..don't worry I didn't forget the update..I've read all the parts.

It's amazing dear..

Loved the whole part..

Naveen is just so smart..he is extremely protective about Naina, so he planned that Raj should go to the freshers ball with Naina, because he knows that Raj is a decent guy , and she'll be in safe hand.I'm sure with the fact that Naveen is going to be the cupid for RN!😳

Alekh found out that Naina is Naveen's younger sister, and he promised that he won't tell this to Raj either.

Huda had to kiss Alekh...🤣🤣🤣

Please do continue soon dear!!

Looking forward to read more!!😳

Edited by Sanjana4Rajeev - 10 years ago

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naujoker

@naujoker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Wow!!! Amazing up
Loved the bonding if naveen and naina.
Aur alekh ko pata chal gaya! Nice
Naveen ka idea bhi achha tha naina ko raj ke saath bhejne ka.
Raj ne kya raaging batayi huda ko ki use alekh ko kiss karna hoga.haa haa haa! Mera toh hass ke peth dukh raha tha. Mindblowing.
Thanks for the pm and aur late comment kar ne keliye sorry.