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***RN-Humko Tumse Pyar hai***
part 21

raj:- ha ha theek hai theek hai...

sabhi milkar shopping karte hai...raj jise shopping se nafarat hai...even use bhi naina ne bahut shopping karayi..aur aaj pehli baar naina ko apne bf ke card se shopping karne ka mauka mila tha...to aisa laga mano naina puri dukaan hi kharid legi...aur aisa hua bhi...huda aur sam se jyada shopping naina ne ki thi...aur raj wo to aise expressions de raha tha mano kal hi bankrupt ho jayega...after lots of fun and masti...sabhi loge dinner kake ghar wapas aa jate hai...aur jakar so jate hai...

next day...before the day of sangeet...

sabhi loge busy the...but now they all are having lunch...

aalekh:- wah aunty kya khana hai...

neelu:- hoga hi...aakhir khana banae ke maamle me hum ladkiyon ka koi jabab nahi...

raj:-oye tujhe kisne kaha ki hum ladke achha khana nahi bana sakte...

shalu:- wo to sabhi ko pata hai ki tum boys sirf guns chala sakte ho khana banae ke mamle me phatuu ho...

raj:- ji nahi aisa kuchh nahi hai...

naina:- aisa hi hai...ab dekho na...yahan panjaab aur hariyaana side ladies kitana achha khana banati hai...

raj:- oh naina...plzz tum to apna muh hi mat kholo...kyuki i know..u cant even boil water...(naina is shocked with such statement of raj...)

naina:- oh really...to ho jaye...dekhe kaun kitana achha khana bana sakta hai...

aalekh:- isme dekhna kya hai...obiously hum ladke tum sab se better khana bana sakte hai...

shalu:- theek hai...(to huda mom) aunty ji aaj rat ka dinner aap me se koi bhi nahi banayega...aaj rat ko ek competion hoga...girls v/s boys ka...tum sab apne tareeke se khana banaoge aur aur hum girls apne tareeke se...fir aunty aur baki ke jo guest hai wo taste kark batayeinge ki kiska khana best hai...

raj:- done...

naveen:- ha ha done dana done...done...

now its time for competetion...sabhi boys aur girls apne apne tareeke se khana abanae ki kosis kar rathe...

huda:- abe salo...meri sadi ko tum sab ne akhada bana diya...is competition ke chakkar me meri sameera mere pass tak nahi aati...meri baat tak nahi sunti...dekho plzzz kuchh aur jaldi se haro...

raj;- abe hum kyun hareinge...agar saamne naina jaise competetor ho to apni jeet to pakki hai...

armaan:- oye tu itana sure kyun hai...abe wo ladkiyaan hai...wo jeet jayeingi...

raj:- main sure isliye hun kyuki naina ko pani tak ubalana nahi ata...naveen sach me teri behen na ek no ki...(then raj looks naina who is giving him i will kill u look)...

naina:- armaan...aap apne is so called leader ko bata dijiye ki...maine ab khana banana sheekh liya hai samjhe...aur ab mqain hi jeetu gi...

girls to haste haste bade hi araam se khana bana rahi thi...but ladko ka haal bahut kharaab tha...ha they know abt cooking a little bit..but comptetion layak nahi...aalekh aur naveen rotiyon se lad rahe the to...armaan ali pulaav aur rayta bana rahe they...to sabse difficult kam raj ka tha sabji aur dal banana...aur huda ji yeh keh kar nikal liye ki unkli sadi hai aur we kuchh nahi kar sakte aage...aur achanak se kuchh mehmaan bhi aa gaye to in logon ne huda ko jane diya...naina bahut der se raj ko notice kar rahi thi...raj kosis kar k thak bhi gaya tha par usse ab aage nahi ho raha tha...naina gayi aur chori se raj ko apni banayi hui sabji aur dal dekar aa gayi...raj at first to nahi samajh paya...but then he sweetly looking at naina and admires her...aur naina ne phir se dusri sabji banai...but jaan bujh kar us me gadbadi kar di...

now all r set to taste the food...

ladkiyon ka banaya khana to dekhne layak bhi tha...par boys ne jo khana banaya tha...wo to dekhne layak tak nahi tha siwaay dal aur sabji ke...

huda's aunty:- oye aalekh puttar...yeh rotiyaan hai...ya alag-akag desho ka naksha...

aalekh:- ab aunty...apun ko ek baar saja bhi mili thi academy me ki apun ko mess me kaam karna padega...par na tab bhi sirf saaf safai ki saja mili thi aur sath me sirf sabjiyaan katna...aur kuchh nahi...to apun se aisa hi bana hai...ab jo bhi hai yahi hai...

huda's mom:- oye armaan...pulaav aise banate hai...itane kaale...aur yeh rayta hai...ya pani...isme bundi kahan hai...

ali:- are aunty...aap taste to kariye...bahut achha bana hai...

pooja;- ali...agar aisi baat hai na...to humari saadi ke baad tu hi khana banana ha...

ali:- nahi nahi...

naina:- ali sahi to keh rahi hai,,...ab its done...(to huda's mom)auntyji...jiska khana sabse best hoga..i mean taste wise in ladko me..wo apni shaadi ke baad apni biwi ke liye aisa hi achha khana banayeinge...(raj is shocked and winks at him...)

huda's mom:- ha naina puttar tu bilkul sahi keh rahi hai...are wah raj tera khana to bada achha lag raha hai dekhne me...in khotyo ka to dekhne layak tak nahi tha...

raj:- are aunty...aap chakhiye toh...khane me bada swaad hoga...akhir kar apna pyar jo mila kar banaya hai kisi se...

aalekh:- kya...

raj:-are nahi nahi...aunty aap taste karo...(huda ki mom...raj ki sabji aur dal taste karti hai...aur phir ladkiyon ka khana jo kam se kam dekhne layak tha...use bhi taste kati hai...)

huda's mom:- to rotiyaan sabse achhi banai hai...shalu aur neelu ne...(jahan shalu aur neelu khush the...wahi aalekh aur naveen ka chehra utar jata hai...)pulaav sabse achha hai...ishaani ka...(armaan winks at ishaani and she blushed) rayta sabse achha bana hai...pooja ka...(pooja is dancing...and ali is making faces)aur finaaly...sabji aur dal raj aur naina ne banaya tha...

aalekh:- aunty humein pata hai...naina hi winner hogi...ab sabhi cheez to in logon ne hi achhi banayi thi...to yeh bhi achhi hi banayi hogi...

huda's mom:- oye nahi...sabji aur dal to raj ka best the...(all are shocked)...sach yeme raj...tu kya khana banata hai...aaj to sab yahi dal aur sabji khayeinge...

raj:- thankyou aunty...par...(naina nods hin no...so raj stops)...kuchh nahi achha hai na...maine ladko ki naak bacha li...

after that sabhi wo delicious khana khate hai...aur raj naina ko bahar aane ka ishara karta hai...jisse naina bhi chhup kar uske peeche jati hai...

naina:- ha kyun bulaya...(raj hugs her) raj kya kar rahe ho...chhodo mujhe koi lega to...

raj:- dekhne do...

naina:-veeerr...

raj:- ok - ok...achha actually mujhe tumse kuchh puchhna tha...tumne meri help kyun ki...aur aisa kaise ki dono taraf se khana to tumne hi banaya...aunty ko mera wala pasand aaya aur tumhara nahi...but ha sach me...wakai...it was too good...tumne itana achha khana banana sheekhan kahan se...jahan tak mujhe yaad hai...jab hum drills ke time...jungle me the...to us waqt tumhe chai tak banani nahi aati thi...

naina:- yad karo veer...tumne us waqt mujhe ek comment pass kiya tha...ki bechara wo ladka jo mujhse sadi karega...mujhe us waqt bahut bura laga tha...kyuki us waqt i felt for u...aur jab yeh kaha to...maine dicide kar liya tha ki main khana banana jarur shikhungi...sirf tumhare liye...aur jab do saal tum kma me nahi the...to tumhare liye achha khana banane ki practice kiya karti thi...suri ji ke sath milkar...(raj smiles widen)aur jahan tak baat hai...ki maine tumhe kyun jitaya to...veer...tum sirf mujhse haro...mere saamne haro...main bas itana chahti hun...kisi aur ke saamne tum jhuko yeh mujhe manzoor nahi...kisi aur ke saamne tumhe harta hua main nahi dekh sakti...bas isliye kiya...aur khud apna khana bigad diya...taki mera veer jeet jaye...

raj:- oh...how sweet of u naina...tum sach me mujhe itana chahti ho...

naina:- abhi tumhe mere pyar ki gehraayi ka andaza nahi hai veer...(both hugs...and after sometimes retires to their rooms)

its day of sangeet aur kal mehandi hai aur parso sadi...
sabhi loge subah se hi busy the...aur sath me ab sabhi k parrents bhi aa gaye hai par vikash nahi aa paye hai par veena ke sath ayaan aaya tha...isliye sab aur bhi jyada busy...raj puri kosis kar raha hai ki suki mom dad ka khayal naina rakhe aur naina bhi har baat pe apne ma baba ke saamne raj ko hi bhej deti thi...ayaan ko kuchh gadbad lagi jab raj ne chori se naina ko flying kiss di aur ayaan ne dekh liya...ayaan ne dono ko bulaya...dono gaye aur ek side me khade ho gaye...

ayaan:- bhaiya...sach sach batana..yehi wo chudail hai na...??(naina and raj both are shocked)

raj;- abe kya bol raha hai??pagal hai kya...

ayaan:- bhaiya jo maine puchha...pehle uska jabaab do...

raj:- ha mere baap yahi hai...wo...naina...ab samajh gaya na...ab ja yahan se...

ayaan:- oh to yeh meri bhabhi...great...waise aap hi wo chandramukhi thi aur aap hi chudail...waise hey beautiful u r so hot ha...byee...(aur ayaan wahan se bhag gaya...raj yeh soch kar shocked tha ki ayaan ne naina ko hot kaha...to naina bhi iske sath yeh soch kar gussa thi ki ayaan aur raj use chudail kehte hai...she looks at raj for explaination...)

raj:- a...wo jaan...wo...kya hai na...humare ghar me jo bhi bahut sundar ladki hoti hai na...use hum chudail kehte hai...(naina folds her arm and looks at raj ki koi aur jhuth nahi mila...)ahhh...actually naina...jab mujhe is baat ka ehsaas hua ki main tumse pyar karta hu...tab main ghar gaya tha...aur main sirf tumahre khayalo me khoya rehta tha...to kya na...shanta tai ko laga ki mujh par kisi chudail saya lag gaya hai...aur maine apni feelings ayaan ko bata di to bus...tab se wo us ladki jise main pyar karta tha use chudail kehta tha...bus...but i swear maine kabhi tumhe chudail nahi kaha...(naina just looking at raj...)naina sach me...

naina:- veer...i love u...how sweet...(tabhi some one calls naina aur naina chali gayi...par in dono ko hi nahi pata tha ki ayaan ne jakar veena ji ko sab kuchh bata diya...aur ab veena ji bahut der se naina ko observe kar rahi hai aur muskura rahi hai...unhone yeh bhi mehsoos kiya ki raj kitana khush hai...isliye veena ji bhi apne bete ki khushi me khush thi... )

now its night time...sabhi ladkiyaan aur ladies sangeet ke function ke liye,,,,almost ready hai...aur yakeen mano..sab ki sab bala ki khubsurat lag rahi hai...naina ne pure red lehnga pehna hai to sam ne nevi blue...ishani ne browm salwar kameej to shalu ne black saree pooja ne green suit pehna hai to...neelu ne...pink lehnga...
wahi boys...me naveen,aalekh aur raj ne black sherwaani pehni hai...to huda ne brown sherwaani...ali ne blue kurta pehna hai to armaan ne cream...all are very exited to see the sangeet ki tabhi huda ki mo aati hai aur sabhi boys ko function hall se bahar bhej deti hai...

naveen:- yeh kya aunty humien bhi sangeet dekhna hai...

maya:- ji nahi...yeh ladies sangeet hai..isliye gents are nota allowed...

raj:-this is a cheating haan...humara bhi haq hai...

veena:- koi cheating weeting nahi hai...

maya:-naveen jao tum aur jahan tumhare baba aur uncle hai na wahi jakar baith jao...

aur veena sab ko bahar nikal kar darwaaja band kar deti hai...

huda's mother:-oh ladkiyon ab to munde bhi bahar chale gaye hai...suru ho jao...(all starts dancing...and singing...)

outside...

huda:- yeh kya...its not fair yar...mujhe mera hi sangeet nahi dekhne ko milega...kuchh karo na...mujhe meri sameera darling ko dekhna hai...

raj:- huda tu apni sameera ko bhi dejhega aur hum un sab ka dance bhi...

aalekh:- par kaise ??

raj;- chal naveen...

sabhi raj aur naveen ke peeche jate hai...aur we upar ke kitchen me jakar window se pura function dekhne lagte hai...ali chair ka intezaam bhi kar deta hai...sabhi boys araam se cold drinks peete hue sab kuchh dekh rahe hai(hey the same one like hum aapke hai kaun...)aur yahan sabhi girls nach ga rahi hai...aur obiously humare lover boys apni apni gfs ko dekhne me busy the...

huda's mom:- oye kitana boring sa ho raha hai...oh naina tu hi kuchh achha sa dance kar de na...

naina:- main nahi nahi...

veena:- are naina beta kar do na sarma kyun rahi ho...yeh mat socho ki yahan hum jaise oldage loge bhi hai...just enjoy beta...

maya:- ha naina waise bhi tu to humesha yeh kehti thi na ki tujhe sadi hi nahi karni kyuki teri to lambi requirments thi na;...chal wahi sabko bata de ki tujhe kaisa sauraal chahiye...

naina:- maa aap yeh kya keh rahi ho...(actually naina wats to dance but...veena ke samne use sharma aa rahi thi ki achanak naina ki nazar upar padi aur usne raj ko dekha...par kuchh nahi kaha...

sam;- aye naina...plzz...

naina:- ok...(looks at raj...and starts...singing and dancing...and other ladies firstly starts with chorus...)

ahhh.hhh
sun sun...pyari pyari...meethi meethi boliyaan...
keh de keh de keh de soniyaannn...
kala doriyaan...
kala doriyaan...kudi naal atka hai...
kala doriyaan...
ohh kala doriyaan...kudi naal atka hai...
(all other ladies and girls starts singing in chorus..)

munda koi na...munda koi na...meri nazaro me chadta hai...
munda koi na...meri nazar me chadta hai...
(pooja singing and hits naina and winks at naina)

naina:-
listen...

saadi wahi karni...wahi karni...
saadi wahi karni...wahi karni...
jahan naukar chakar ho...credit card ho...
credit card ho...banko me locker ho...
credit card ho...
(naina is dancing and winks at her mother)

saasu wo chahiye...wo chaiye...
saasu wo chahiye...wo chaiye...
wo chaiye...jo seedhi shadhi ho...
saal me 6 mahine...6 mahine...
saal me 6 mahine...jo teerath jati ho...
saal me 6 mahine...6 mahine...
(naina is dancing and raj looking at naina with horor...raj thinks:- oh god yeh naina pagal ho gayi hai kya...mom wahin hai aur yeh...)

kala doriyaan...kudi naal atka hai...
kala doriyaan...
ohh kala doriyaan...kudi naal atka hai...
munda koi na...munda koi na...meri nazaro me chadta hai...
munda koi na...
(ishaani shalu neelu and pooja are dancing around sam and sam is smiling and claping)

hmmm...
sasura...wo chahiye...wo chahiye...
sasura...wo chahiye...wo chahiye...
sasura wo chaiye...jo unchaa suntaa ho...
club me saare din...
club me saare din...sataranj khleta ho...
sasura...wooo chahiye...
(now one girl act like her father in law and she is dancing with her...)

hieee...main sad ke jawaan kudiye...

nanadi badi mile...haan jo mile to nanadi badi mile...
haan jo mile to nanadi badi mile... gifte bhijwaati ho...
5 ek saal me...oh 5 ek saal me... jo mayke aati ho...
5 ek saal me...
(now naina is dancing with shalu and pooja...aur raj apne sir par apna hanth mar leta hai...aur baaki sabhi boys has rahe hai...specially aalekh aur naveen raj ke reaction ko dekh kar hansh rahe the...)

kala doriyaan...kudi naal atka hai...
kala doriyaan...
ohh kala doriyaan...kudi naal atka hai...
munda koi na...munda koi na...meri nazaro me chadta hai...
munda koi na...
(now maya, veena and huda's mom are also dancing with naina and all...jisse raj ki jaan me jaan aayi ki veena naina se naraj nahi hai)

naina:-
hey listen clearly...this is my finally requirement ok...

haannn dulha...wo lena...wo lena...
dulha...wo lena...wo lena...
wo lena...jo dikhta solid ho...
lafda proove ho...
lafda proove ho...asali unmarried ho...
dulha...wo lena...
dil aisa husband chahe...jo mere naaz uthaye...
kahi line aur na maare...bas mujhpe tann mann waare...
jo world ka tour karaye...
naye- naye gehene dilwaaye...
love me ek fire si ho...
thoda sayar wayar bhi ho...
ghar thoda bahut saza le...
khana sana bhi paka le...
kabhi saut nahi wo laaye...
ek do bachhe hi chahe...
(now neelu jaise raj as usual dress hota hai waise hi ready hokar naina ke saamne aati hai...aur aur naina ko wink karti hai,...aur naina ab neelu ke sath dance kar rahi hai...raj is also smiling...aur bar bar upar ki ore dekh rahi hai...)

husband...wo chahiye...wo chahiye...
husband...wo chahiye...wo chahiye...
husband wo chaiye...jo hasta rehta ho...
har din band saaa...
har din band saaa...jo bajta rehta ho...
husband wo chaiye...
(ki achanak raj wahan nahi hota hai...ali:- yeh raj bhai kaha gaye...)

kala doriyaan...kudi naal atka hai...
kala doriyaan...
ohh kala doriyaan...kudi naal atka hai...
munda koi na...munda koi na...meri nazaro me chadta hai...
munda koi na...
(all are again engorsed in dance...ki tabhi they all listen a male voice...)

raj;-
ohhh
ahhha...ahhaaa...hey...aha...aha...
oh kudiye bawari...kudiye bawari...
thoda dheeraj...tu dhar le...
dulha payegi...dulha payegi...
jaisa tujhko chahiye...
dulha payegi...
(raj apne face ,me white colour ka beared laga kar ata hai aur dance kar raha hai...naina use pehchan jati hai...aur darne ka pretend kar rahi hai)

main toh jogi hun...jogi hun...
toh jogi hun...
sansaar chhod baitha...
main toh jogi hun...jogi hun...
toh jogi hun...
sansaar chhod baitha...
nahin to main tujhe...
nahin to... main tujhe...faurshan shaadi karta...
(raj ki mom aur maya bhi raj ko pehchaan gayi par we sab yeh dekh khush hai...veena ko to sab pata hai...par maya unhe sirf dost samajhti hai)

huda's mom:-
oye oye baal safed hai tere kuchh te sharam kar dadaji...

raj:-
baal safed hai...baal safed hai par dil ka solid hun...
lafda proof hun...
lafda proof hun...ab tak unmarried hun...
lafda proof hun...
(now raj winks at huda's mom and holds naina...and make to dance her ab baki ke sabhi boys bhi wahan aa jate hai aur apni apni gf ya wifes ko lekar dance karne lagte hai...unhe chidha rahe hai... )

aho...aho...aho...aho...
thoda sayar wayar bhi main hu...
thoda disco visco bhi kar lun...
tere dil ka dunga band baja...
ab to mujhko... husband bana...
(raj apni dhadhi nikal deta hai...aur sabhi boys dance kar rahe hai)

humien dekh ke yaar jamaana...gayega...bas yeh gana...
humien dekh ke yaar jamaana...gayega...bas yeh gana...
(raj naina ke pass jata hai aur apne soulder se naina ko halka se push karta hai aur ankh marta hai...)

naina:---
kyaaa...
kyaaa...
kyaaa...

raj:-
ek haseena...ek diwaanaa...

naina:-
ek haseena...ek diwaanaa...

raj:-
ek haseena...ek diwaanaa...

naina:-
ek haseena...ek diwaanaa...

movie:- diwana main diwana

huda's mom:- kya baat hai...kudiyo...aur mundayo...tum logon ne to rang hi jama ditta...aur naina puttar fikar na kari...aisa hi sasuraal milega...(winks at raj) kyun raj...

raj:- aunty mujhe kya pata...

naina:- are nahin aunty...wo to bas just for fun u know...

veena:- to kya hua...itani bhi jyada koi demand nahi ki tumne...

huda's mom:- achha puttar logon ab sab jao aur jakar so jao kal bahut kaam hai...kal subah haldi sur rat me mehandi hai...phir parso bhi bahut kaam hai...

sabhi chale jate hai...aur so jate hai...next day subah mehandi ka function hota hai...jisme sabhi loge ek dusre ko haldi bhi laga rahe the...sabhi girls aur boys to apas me haldi se hi holi khel rahe the...par inn sab ko is tarah ek sath khush dekh kar inke mata pita bahut hi jyada khush the...kyuki inka kaam hi aisa hai ki kabhi kabhi to yeh sab aise enjoy kar pate hai...par veena ji ki nazar ab sirf apne raj aur naina pe hi tiki rehti hai...unhone raj me aaye hue badlaav ko bhi mehsoos kiya hai...aur wo bahut khush bhi hai...unhone raj se baat karne ka faysla bhi kiya hai...aur wo delhi wapas jane se pehle raj se baat karna chahti hai...kyukiraj yaha se sheedha apne dosto ke sath nainitaal jane wala hai aur fir wahan se mumbai..jahan par aalekh aur naveen dono ki sadi hogi...isi tarah masti aur mazak me rat ko mehandi ki rasam bhi puri ho jati hai...aur ab sabhi apne kamre me hai...naina apne kamre me khadi chand ko dekh rahi aur apne hanthon me lagi mehandi ko bhi kyuki uski mehandi ka rang bahut hi gehra chadha tha...aur veena ne to use yeh bhi keh diya ki uska hone pati use bahut pyar karega...jis par naina sarmate hue wahan se chali thi...aur yaha raj bhi aise hi apni dairy me kuchh likh raha tha ki veena ji aati hai...

veena:- raj...

raj(closed his dairy):- are mom...aap is waqt abhi tak soyi nahi...

veena:- raj...dekh main janti hun ki tu naina ko pasand karta hai(raj looks at veena with horor)are aise mat dekh mujhe naina pasand hai...bus itna bata kya shadi karega usse...??

raj:- mom...aap...

veena:- ha ya na raj?

raj:- yes mom...i love naina...aur main sirf usse hi sadi karunga...

veena:- aur naina?

raj:- she also loves me alot...mom ab plzz aap villian mat banna...

veena:- chup...kuchh bhi bolta hai...main to bahut khush hoon...

raj:- sach mom...iska matalab aap naina ke ma baba se...

veena:- ha main jane se pehle unse baat jarur karungi...(raj hugs her)

raj:- oh i love u mom..u are the best mother is this world...(raj kissed on her cheek)

veena;- pagal hai tu...achha ab chal so ja...gn

raj:- gn mom...(and veena ji left)...

next day...

aaj huda aur sam ki sadi pure rasmo aur riwaaz ke sath ho gayi aur in sabhi frnds ne apni taraf se huda ko paris ki tickets gift ki hai...for honey moon aur huda to itana exited hai ki aaj hi jana chahta tha but ab wo kal jayega...in sadi ke rasmo me sabhi ne bahut enjoy kiya aur ek dusre ke bahut kareeb bhi aa gaye hai...specially raj naina jine beech kuchh dibn pehle hi sab sahi hua hai...par ab sab thode udas se hai kyuki sirf raj hai jo inke sath rahega par baki sab apne apne ghar ja rahe hai...kyuki unhe wapas 8 din bad mumbai ana hai...aalekh aur naveen ki shadi ke liye...sabhi jane hi wale the ki veena ji ne maya aur harshad ji ko apne room me bulaya...

maya:- are maya ji aapne humein bulaya...kuchh kam tha kya...

veena(sweet smile):-pehle aaiye to...(they all sit...aur raj chhip kar inki bat sunn raha tha)...bhai saab mayaji..wo aapne naina ki saadi ke liye kuchh socha hai kya...

maya:- naina ki sadi...are abhi kahan...ha karni to hai..par abhi to bas 11 din bad naveen ki sadi hai...to hum to bas usi mein abhi..

veena:- ji ji wo main samajh sakti hoon...actually main aap dono se apne bete rajveer k liye naina ka hanth mangti hoon...agar aap dono ko koi aitraaz na ho to

raj thinks:-plz uncle...aunty ha kar do...plzz...

veena:- dekhiye koi jabardasti nahi hai...aap loge soch samajh kar faysla kijiye...main ti bas...wo mujhe mere raj ke liye naina bahut pasand aayi to socha ki kyun na aap se...

harshad:- dekhiye behen ji...humein raj aur naina ki sadi se koi aitraaz nahi hai..

raj thinks:- yes...

harshad:- par kya hai abhi to naveen ki hi saddi hai to...bas aap humien thoda waqt de de taki naveen ki sadi ke baad hum is baare me aap se achhe se baat kar sake...

veena;- are han han...take ur time...main to bas apne dil ki baat kehna chahti thi...

maya:- yeh to aapne bahut sahi kiya...waise aapse jhuth nahi kahungi...mujhe aapka raj bahut pasand hai...

veena:- aur mujhe aapki naina...

maya:- ji jarur...achha...ab hum chalte hai...raj to humare sath hi ja raha hai...apr aap aur bhai saab sadi me jarur aaiyega...

veena:- ha ha hum jarur aayeinge...namaste(then maya and harshad left and raj enters...he hugs veena )

raj:- oh mom...u r tooo good... i love u...aap nahi hoti to mera kya hota...

veena:- chup badmaas...

ayaan (entering in room):- kyun bhaiya...mom...ko maska laga rahe ho...

raj:- are nahi meri jaan...aaj tera bhaiya bahut khush hai...

ayaan:- hoge hi...ticket jo clear ho rahi hai...

raj:- uuu...(ayaan runs away...)

ab sabhi loge naini taal pahuch gaye hai jahan se yeh sab mumbai ke liye kal nikaleinge...aur raj ki mom aur ayaan bhi delhi ja chuke hai...veena ne vikash ko sab bata diya aur vikash aur shanta tai bhi raj aur naina ke liye khush hai...aur yahan dusri taraf naina raj se chhidi hai ki wo naveen se uska hanth kyun nahi mangta hai...
aur naveen bhi is baat ke liye naina ko foprce kar raha hai but raj hai ki usne toi seedhe naina k mom dad ko hi pata liya hai...ab wo jam kar naina ke mom dad ke sath hi rehta hai aur unki help karta hai...naina ki mom raj bahut jyada impress ho chuki hai...to uske dad bhi ab sure hai ki wo naina ki shadi raj se hi karayeige...aise hi dekhte dekhte kab yeh hafta guzar gaya inhe pata hi nahi chala...ab kal huda aur sam bhi apne honey moon se laut kar mumbai aa jayenge...aur yahan dusri taraf ishaani ne bhi armaan ko haan keh di hai...now they are couple...aur yeh bhi kal hi huda, sam, pooja, ali ke sath mumbai aa rahe hai...

next day..sabhi aalekh ke ghar me baithe hai...inki sadi aalekh ke ghar ke hi pass ke bahut bade hotel se ho rahi hai...us hotel me already shalu neelu aur unki family aa chuki hai...sare functions bhi usi hotel se hai...vikash ki ek bahut hi imp meeting yhai isliye veena vikash ji shanta tai aur ayaan shadi wale din hi ayeinge...

its a day before sangeet...

naveen:- raj bahut ho gaya ha...tu kehta kyun hai...

raj;- kya...

naveen:- dekh raj... mera dimag ka dahi mat kar...pichhle ek mahine main wait kar raha hu ki tu aayega mujhse naina ka hanth magega...par tu hai ki(naveen bites his lips)...

raj:- oh..to tu yeh chahta hai ki main naina se shadi karu...tu naina ke liye mera hanth mang raha hai naveen...

naveen:- ah...wo main to...

raj:- theek hai chal main officialy tujhe bata hi deta hun...

aalekh comes:- what do u mean bata hi deta hu...oye tujhe officially mujhse aur naveena se jhuk kar naina ka hanth mangna hoga...nahi to naina ko bhul ja...

raj;- oh reallly...ok as wish u wish...

naina:- raj tum pagal ho gaye ho...tumne mujhse promise kiya tha ki tum baiiya ko humari sadi ke liye manaoge...

raj;- haan naina maine promise jarur kiya tha...but tumhare us bahi ko manane ke liye jise humare pyar ke bare me kuchh na pata ho...to theek hai koi aisa bhai dhundh k le aao main use mana lunga ok...aur jaha tak sawaal raha mere in do ghochu salo ka to inke saamne main kya meri juti bhi na jhuke...

naveen:- kya bola be...

raj:- jo tune suna...so mr naveen alhuwalia...main apko yeh inform kar raha hu...just inform ki main apki behen naina se pyar karta hu...aur naina bhi mujhse bahut pyar karti hai...plzzz ab villian banne ka natak mat karna...bcz i know ki tujhe is baare mein bahut pehle se pata hai(now naina bites her lips)aur ha main naina se bahut jald shadi bhi karne wala hun...so u both are invited...wo kya hai mere sasur ji ko bahut kam hai main unki help karta hun...ab kya karu mere do gadhe saalo ki saadi jo hai...oh god sara kaam mujhe hi karna padta hai...koi yahan kisi kaam ka nahi hai...(and left from there with full of attitude...aur naina, naveen aur alekh muh khulla kar ke use dekh rahe hai...aur raj jakar harshad ji ki help kar raha hai...aur wahi shalu aur neelu aate hai aur in teeno ko aise dekh kar hans rahe hai...)

shalu:- oh god naveen...kahan tum teeno uski haalat bigadna chahte the...yahan to usi ne...

naveen:- par ise pata kaise chala ki mujhe sab pata tha...(looks at naina suspiciouly)

naina:- i swear maine kuchh nahi bataya...

aalekh:- chhod na yaar...wo bhi raj hai...koi huda nahi jise hum asaani se bewakoof bana le...

huda aate hue:- kya bola be...saalo kuchh to kadra karo meri...

neelu:- ofcrs...kam se kam ab uski sadi ho gayi hai...ab to jyada pareshaan karo use...(All are laughing...ki tabhi wahan maya aur harshad aate hai)

harshad:- are naveen beta...shalu achha hua tum sab yahin mil gaye...actully humien tum sab se ek bahut hi important bat karni hai...naina ki sadi ko lekar...(dhamake on all's face)

naina:- maa...baba...

maya:- ha beta...actually jab hum huda ke ghar the na...to tere liye ek bahut achha rishta aaya tha...aur humien ladka bahut pasand bhi hai...

naveen:- kaun hai wo...maa dekho..plzz ,main aapko kuchh...

harshad:- nahin naveen humne faysla kar liya hai...naina ki shadi raj se hi hogi...humne veena ji ko haan bhi keh di thi...(all are happily shocked)beta naina plzz mana mat karna...rajveer bahut achha ladka hai...aur in dino to wo humare aur bhi kareeb aa gaya hai...

maya:- ha...mujhe wo bahut pasand hai naina...

naveen:- are maa...aapne bilkul sach kaha...raj is best for naina mujhe koi aitraaz nahi aur naina ko bhi nahi hoga...hai na naina...

naina(blushing):- jaisa aap theek samjho...

maya:- main tere liye bahut khush hu...(naina hugs maya...ant looks at raj who is standing behind them and winks at naina and naina is blushing...)achha chalo sab bahut kaam hai...(maya and harshad left with smile for their daughter)...

aalekh:- saale to tune seedhe high command ko fasaya ha...

raj(with fulll of attitude):- aur nahi to kya...main bhi tum jaise chhote mote logon se baat nahi karta...

naveen & aalekh(run after him to hit him):- teri toh...(and raj runs away)...

end of part 21
plzzz do comment...
with love chandni...
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Edited by rkchandni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb part. loved this side of rajveer. awsome. thank u for such a long part and pm. update soon.
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thanks dear
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Thanks alot dear

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