Humko tumse pyar hai ~Rajveer Naina~ *completed* Last part on page 51

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Arti Gupta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

wow superb yr
kya start h 1 post me he dil khuss ho gaya
naveen or alekh mast h bechara naveen kise ko bta bhi nhi sakta ki naina bahen h uski
or toh or ab sab ragging kare gay tb naveen kya karega...
raj ki dream girl abhi toh sapne me aayi h par kl jab sach me milegi toh kya hoga...
waiting for next update...

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ria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

hi
the up is really good
the cadets are getting promoted to next yr whereas new cadets are arriving
lets see what will with the freshers
plz cont soon and pm me

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nilusoni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Awesome part

Thanks for pm

Plz pm me for next part

Continue soon

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Vishaka Sanjana

@Sanjana4Rajeev

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

So all of the cadets are promoted, and new cadets are joining!!

Naveen is so funny🤣..kya laath diya hai Raj ko..

Aur yeh Raj..bechara..he is dreaming about his dream girl🤣😆..

Loved his description..dekhte hai..Raj ko uski sapno ki malika milte hai ki nahin!!😉

So looking forward to see the first interaction of RN!!..

Awesome start!!

Please do continue soon😳

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nimu

@vishu10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

nice start

lovely update...

raj naveen n aalekh r friends

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rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

***RN-Humko Tumse Pyar hai***
Part - 2

naveen :- meri behen ... meri gudiyaaa... pagal hai puri ek no. ki ziddi... jo kehti hai kar k dikhati hai... hamesha use best chahiye chahe wo koi bhi cheez ho... humesha mujhse compete karti rehti hai... school aur college me na jane kitane ladko ko mar- mar k hospital pahuchaya hai... waise hai to bahut khubsurat... par jo qualities abhi raj ne apni dream girl ke bare me batayi thi... unme se ek bhi nahi hai... ma kehti hai ki ek din uska pati aakar use sudhar dega ya keh sakte hai apne pyar se badal dega... par wo use pyar par yakeen hi nahi hai... ( now naveen turns towards alekh and raj... who were listening him open mouthed) ab bata agar aisi ladki teri life me aa gayi jo teri dream girl ka D bhi nahi to tera kya hoga kaliya...

aalekh:- tab to apne raj ki band bajegi har taraf se... ( alekh and naveen give high five each other )

raj:- oye chup karo ... pehli baat... naveen ki aaj tune apni behen ke bare me detail me bataya... wo bhi yeh sab... dusri baat main aisi ladki ko apni zindagi me aane nahi dunga... teesri baat... naveen agar teri behen is puri duniyaan ki aakhiri ladki bhi hui na tab bhi... main usse pyar to nahi karunga... kyuki agar bhai aisa hai... to behen na jane kya hogi... ( alekh is laughing with raj... and naveen looks at raj with confused expression... then he understood the meaning of raj's last sentence... he picked up a pillow and through it to raj... but raj ran away to wash room...)

naveen:- abe saale... nikal bahar...

alekh:- abe chhod na... ( tabhi hostel ka morning alarm bajta hai... )dekh alalrm bhi baj gaya apun jata hai nahane... tum dono bhi naha kar jaldi aa jao... agar aaj apun teeno ground pe late pahuche... to muchhad apnileft right left kara dega... ( naveen nods and alekh left )

drill ground... 12.00 pm...
major nair aaj drill kara rahe hai... aur apni hi mahanta ka bakhaan kar rahe hai...aur alekh raj and naveen 3no hi mahabore ho rahe hai... nair ke lecture se aur yawning bhi kar rahe hai... ki tabhi nair ki nazar raj pe padi... ( note:- major nair aur cadet rajveer ka 36 ka aakda hai... dono ki bilkul bhi nahi banti... waise nair 3no ko hi nahi pasand karta par raj uski hit list pe grade k sath top par hai...)

nair:- cadet shekhawat... ( raj looks at nair )

naveen:- raj tu to gaya... ( now raj steped frwrd towards nair... and both looks eachother with hatered)

nair:- lagta hai cadet ki aap puri raat soye nahi...

alekh wisper to naveen :- ha tu jo sapne me uske aaya tha... kaise soyega bechara...

raj:- no sir actually i m not feeling well...

nair:- aaj apke 3rd year me aapka pehla din hai aaur aaj hi... maine to pehle hi kaha tha ki... yeh army tumhare liye nahi hai...bcz u r a looser... ( ab naveen aur alekh ko major par bahut gussa aa raha hai...)

raj( with sweetest smile ):- aur maine bhi kaha tha ki main kma ka best cadet pass out aur sabse achha soilder ban kar dikhaunga... SIR...

nair:- shut up cadet u r punished... bahut neend aa rahi hai na... drill k time active na hona bhi academy k rules k khilaf hai... jaao aur jakar is pure ground k 10 round lagao...

aalekh:- sala muchhad...

raj( with smile ):- thankyou sir ( salutes him aur apni rifle lekar daudne lagta hai... nair raj se jitna chidta hai... raj janbujhkar nair ko irritate bhi karta hai)

yahan aalekh bhi yawning karta hai to... major nair use bhi same punishment de deta hai... aur phir naveena jaan bujh kar gana gunguna deta hai... jis karan nair use bhi punish kar deta hai... major nair ki 3no se nahi banti thi... par par mmajor nair ka sabse bada dusman raj hai...

raj k pass dono daud rahe hai...

raj:- aa gaye tum dono bhi...

naveen:- ha... jana tu wahan hum dono...

now drills k bad aalekh raj aur naveen bhi apna last round laga rahe hai... wo bhi khushi- khushi kyuki yeh to inke roz ka hai... ki nair se panga lete hai aur nair inhe punish karta hai... tabhi inki nazar kma k enterence par padi jaha se ek ladki bahut hi teji se ander aayi aur BC k cabin ki taraf gayi...

naveens:- abe yeh kaun hai...?

raj:- lagta hai 1 year cadet hai... ( par alekh abhi bhi usi direction me dekh rahi thi jahan se wo ladki ander aayi thi... ) oye pasand aa gayi kya...

aalekh:- pagal hai kya... par apun ko yeh ladki kuchh ajeeb lagi...

raj, & naveen:- kyaaa...

aalekh:- kuchh nahi... chalo mess me chalte hai... apun ko bahut bhukh lagi hai... ( aur 3no mess ki taraf chale jate hai...)

im mess...

naveen apna khana achhe se nahi kha raha hai... jabki raj , shalini aur aalekh khane me busy hai...

naveen ( in his mind ):- yeh naina ... abhi tak kyun nahi aayi... uski bus to ab tak aa jani chahiye thi... hmmm sayad bus late rahi ho... par use ek call to karna chahiye tha... oh god yeh ladki bhi na...

raj:- naveen... tu kha kyun nahi raha... ( tabhi raj looks at mess enterence... waha par wahi ladki khadi thi jo abhi thodi der pehle in logo ne dekhi thi...

salini:- kya hua raj...? ( then looks at the girl)

us ladki ne apne liye khana liya aur mess me dekha to sari chairs full thi ki tabhi uski nazar naveen k bagal ki chair par gayi wo in sab k pass aayi...

girl:- excuse me yahan koi bhi chair khali nahi hai... if u dont mind kya main yahan baith kar apna lunch kar sakti hu...?

aalekh:- tu kaun...?

girl:- mera nam... cadet sameera rastogi hai hai... 1 year cadet aaj hi aayi hu...

naveen ( with smile ):- sure u can sit here... i m cadet naveen singh alhuwalia... 3 year...

aalekh:- cadet aaloekh sharma... 3 year...

shalini:- i m cadet shalini singhal... 3 year...

sam smiles and sits with them... tabhi uski nazar raj par padi jo apna khana khane me busy tha... she asked to raj... :- aur aap... ( raj looks at her with full attitude... which she likes the most..)

raj:- cadet Rajveer singh sekhawat... 3year..( raj again got busy with his food )

shalini in aalekh's ear:- yeh aaj aise khana kyun kha raha hai... jaise barso se bhukha ho... usse achhe se baat tak nahi ki...

shalini:- waise sameera...

sam:- call me sam...

shalini:- ohk... sam kaha se belong karti ho tum... aur yahan kaise..?

sam:- i m from chandigarh... i wnat proof my self to my dad that i can do any thing isliye yahan...

raj;- matalab ki aapko apne desh se koi lena dena nahi... bas apne aapko bada batane k liye aap yahan ho...

sam:- no sir aisa kuchh nahi hai...

naveen;- oye yeh sir kya hota hai... mana ki hum sab tumse seniors hai... but only 2 year not 10 year humein humare naam se bulao... call me naveen or navs... jo tumhe pasand ho... ise salini ya saalu... ise aalekh ya aalu..(hi five with shalu) aur ise rajveer...

sam ( looking at raj):- how about raj?...

aalekh:- jo teri marzi...

sam:- okay guys byee...

aalekh:- kahiin pyar na ho jaye... ( singing looking at raj...)

shalu:- tu gana kyun ga raha hai...

aalekh ( palces his hand on raj's soilder ):- ladki ko apna paththa pasand aa gaya hai ( raj nods his head like inka kuchh nahi ho sakta )

its about 6 pm...

tabhi ek ladka apni byke pe KMA me entry karta hai... aur dusri taraf ek ladki taxi se utarti hai with her bagage wo ladka apni bike rokta hai aur us ladki ko dekh raha hai... us ladki ne taxi wale ko paise diye aur kma k gate ki taraf badhi...

boy:- oye hoye... kya janani hai yaar... ek dum karari... mummy ji ki kasam aaj to ankhein khush ho gayi...

that boy souts:- oye hoye beauty yahan to dekh... ( she looks at him aur wo bhi gate k pass pahuncha...)

watch man:- aap loge andar nahi ja sakte arrival time khatam ho gaya hai kal aana...

boy:- oye tu amardeep huda ko andar jane se rokega( girl roles her eye bcz she hates those type of boys who are every thing for him self )

girl:- dekhiye... main 1 year cadet hu... nainital se aayi hu... meri bus hi late ho gayi to isme main kya kar sakti hun...

watchman:- rules are rules aap andar nahi ja sakte...

wo ladki apne pair zameen par jor se marti hai... aur wahan se chali jati hai... aur huda bhi uske peeche jata hai...

huda ( shouts ):- oye janani... ruk... oye ruk ruk... oye kahan ja rahi hai...

tabhi wo ladki...kma k gate k peeche ki wall ki taraf jati hai aur ruk jati hai aur kuchh der tak sochne k baad huda se kehti hai...

huda:- oye kya soch rahi hai...

girl:- tu bahut takatwar hai na...?

huda:- oye ha... pakka hariyanvi... hindustani hun...

girl:- mera wajan utha payega...?

huda in his mind:- oye hoye huda teri to lottery lag gayi yaar...

girl;- soch kya raha hai bata na...

huda:- ha ha ... tu bol na...

girl:- chal jhuk ja...

huda:- kyaa...

girl:- jhuk na...

huda jameen me jhuk jata hai aur wo ladki uski back par chad kar deewar kud kar kma k dusri side chali jati hai... aur andar jane lagti hai...

huda:- ohh... mujhe bhi to ander le...

girl( smile):- tu apne aap ko bahut hosiyaar samajhta hai na... to khud hi ander aa jaa...

huda:- oh teri... huda se chaalaki...achha theek hai apna naam to batati ja...

girl:- tujhe kya lagta hai...

huda:- mujhe... jhasi ki rani... na na na... daku haseena phoolan devi...

girl:- tere liye yahi sahi...

aur wo ladki ander chali jati hai... phir huda bhi kisi bhi tarah deewar kud kar ander jata hai... aur boys hostel ki taraf chala jata hai...

yahan dusri tarf wo ladki kisi bhi tarah sabse bach kar chori chhipe ander ja rahi hai aur dusri taraf... naveen shalu k room hai aur romance kar raha hai... aur raj bahar khada pehra de raha hai... ki tabhi raj ki nazar saamne k boys hostel me chori chhipe ghus rahe huda pe padi wo use dekhne k liye badha ki ek ladki se takra gaya...aur dono zameen par gire... wo ladki neeche hai aur raj uske upar... raj bas us ladki ko dekhe ja raha hai aur uski aankhon me kho gaya hai aur wo ladki bhi raj ko dekhe ja rahi hai.. ki tabhi naveen inki awaaj ko sunn kar bahar aaya aur raj ko us ladki k sath is haalat me dekh kar shocked ho gaya...

naveen:- raj... ( no response..) raj...

raj aur wo ladki... hose me aaye aur raj hadbad kar utha... aur phir wo ladki bhi... wo ladki naveen ko ek smile k sath dekh rahi...

naveen:- kya kar raha tha...?

raj:- main kya kar raha tha... tu to ander romance me busy tha...( naveen and that girl looked at each other ) main bahar bore ho raha tha... aur achanak is ladki se takra gaya... by the way...

raj to girl:- tum kaun...

girl:- cadet naina ah singh first year...

end of part 2
plzzz do comment...
with love chandni...
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rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

thanks every one all my lovely readers for liking part 1 hope so will llive upto to all of urs expectations

love chandni

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Rajeev diwani

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nilusoni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Very nice part

Thanks for pm

Plz pm me for next part

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rkchandni

@rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Very nice part
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part

THanx neelu for following and liking my fic

Edited by rkchandni - 10 years ago

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Arti Gupta

@RNforever

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

very nice part
kya describe kiya h naina ko naveen ne
or raj ne toh sunn kr he reject kr diya usse
sam full to lattu on raj n raj h ki kise ko bhav he nhi deta
huda or naina ka conversation is gud
n raj or naina ki mulakat is just superb
ran tkh naina ke nano me kho gya
bechara naveen bahen me samne romance krte hue pakda gaya
or ye kya naina sabse chupa rhi h ki wo naveen ki bahen h
naina ah singh gud tabhi toh story me maja aaye ga
plz cont. soon