Humko tumse pyar hai ~Rajveer Naina~ *completed* Last part on page 51

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Misha (Sumitra)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Really good plot.

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rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

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thankyou every one for reading... liking... and commenting on my fic... sorry for not able to reply on every comment but i m thank full from bottom of my heart ... thanks once again

love chandni...

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Rajeev diwaani...

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***RN-Humko Tumse Pyar hai***
Part - 5

major:- so ur time starts now...

major nair apne sare instructions dekar chale gaye... aur ab yeh sare cadets major se finishing point par

mileinge... tabhi suri ji aate hai...

suri ji:- oye khoteyo khade khade dekh kya rahe ho... jao aur apni drill puri karo... aur raj puttar abhi thodi der

pehle wo us aafat teri jaan ka phone aaya tha... ( naina is looking at raj )

raj:- kya abhi?

suri ji:- ha shaam ko baat kar lio...

raj:- ok suri ji...

suri ji:- now cadets start ur drill now... warna maj band baja dega... ( suri ji left )

aalekh:- oye sunn be tu door hi rahiyo mujhse samjha...

huda:- huda ko bhi kisi ladke ke kareeb aane ka koi sauq nahi hai... par yeh to hai main apna ragging task pura

kark hi rahunga... khair pahele apne ghayal shipahi ko dhundhe... ( aalekh and huda left )

naveen:- sam chalo hume us direction me jana hai...

sam:- ok naveen... ( they too left )

shalu:- rakesh... hume bhi usi dircetion me jana hai chalo... ( to raj) raj naina tum dono bhi jao na... aur waise

bhi naina... raj is the best map reader tum logo ko koi problem nahi hogi... ( shalu and rakesh too left )

now raj apna bag utha kar chalne lagta hai... aur naina uske peeche hai...

naina:- suno... mujhe kuchh batao bhi to ki aise task me kya kya problems aa sakti hai kya nahi? ( but rakuchh

nahi bol raha hai chale ja raha hai) oh behre ho kya... mujhey bhi map reading shikhao na... hume yeh task mil

kar pura karna hai...

raj:- shut up kitana bolti ho... aur ha... yeh sirf mera task hai jise mujhe karna hai... samjhi... aur jahan tak baat

hai tumhare sath complete karni ki to tum jao apne raste main apne... aur jab wo hand pump mil jaye mujhe bata

dena... bcz i m ur guider not ur naukar... get it...

naina:- oh hellow what do u think of ur self ha... aur sayad tum bhool rahe ho... ki hum jodi hai... hume sath

me ye task poora karna hai... jodi todna rules k against hai...

raj wishpers:- wahi to main chahta hoon...

naina:- kya ??

raj:- nothing... jo kaha wahi karo apne raste jao aur hand pump ke pass milna...

naina:- no way...

raj:- then just follow me aur apna ye tape recorder band rakho...

naina thinks:- samajhta kya hai khud ko... agar ise fresherball me na le jana hota na to main ise abhi tak jaan se

maar deti... us major ko bhi mere liye yahi namoona mila tha... jab apni girl friend his so called jaan se baat karta

hai to itana has has kar pyar se baat karta hai... mano ki isse sweet to koi duniyaan me nahi... aur mujhse

hnnn... dekh lena raj ek din maine tujhe apne saamne na jhuka diya to mera naam bhi naina singh alhuwalia

nahi...( then looks at raj's direction) oh know yeh to aage chala gaya...

naina shouts :- oh ruko... ( naina is running after raj )

dusri taraf... huda alekh ko kabse manae ki kosis kar raha hai ki wo uski help karde... sabke saamne maan jaye

sirf ek kiss k liye aur aalekh hai ki usne huda ko usse 10 meter tak door rehne ki warning de rakhi hai... aur sara

kaam huda se karwa raha hai... aur peeche peeche aram se daru peete hue chal raha hai...

raj- naina...

naina:-itani lambi pahadi... ispe kaise chadeinge...

raj:- to kya tumhe yahan smooth sadak milegi... wo dall dekh rahi ho... use pakado aur chad jaao...

naina:- aur tum?

raj:- jitane time me tum ek bar chadogi... utane hi time me main 10 baar chad k utar bhi jaunga... isliye keh

raha hun... chado pehle...

naina:- ok...

naina wo dall pakad kar pahadi me chadna start karti hai use bahut problems bhi ho rahi hai... but she is trying...

aur yahan raj peeche khada muskura raha hai... jab naina peek par pahuch jati hai aur mud kar dekhti hai to raj

wahan nahi hota...

naina:- oh no... yeh ab kaha gaya... ab main neeche kaise utru... nahin nahin... mujhey yeh task poora karna

hai bhad me jaye... hnnn

aur naina aage badh jati hai... dusri taraf major nair sab par nazar rakhe hue hai... unhone dekh liya hai ki

naina akeli hai... means usne apne sathi ka sath chhod diya hai... aur yahi to raj chahta tha... jab naina hand pump

ke pass pahunchi... to raj already wahan leta hua tha... aur kuchh gunguna raha tha... naina hairaan ho gayi...

naina:- tum mujhsey pehle kaise pahuch gaye...

raj:- raste se...

naina:- whattt... agar dusra rasta tha to mujhey pahadi kyun chadhayi... ?

raj:- meri marzi... aur waise bhi main tumhe dhhakka to nahi de raha tha... tum khud hi chadi...

naina:- teri to... ( holds his collor )

raj:- hold it... ab battamizi nahi warna bahut bhari padega...

naina:- achha kya kar lega tu ha...?

raj:-wo to jab tum yeh task complete kark kma pahuchogi... tab pata chalega...

naina:- go to hell...

raj:- filhal to u go to that handpump aur pani nikal kar laao... gooo...

naina apna pair patak kar jati hai aur pani nikalne ki bahut kosis kar rahi hai par pani aane ka naam hi nahi le

raha... aur raj aram se leta naina ko dekh raha hai...

raj thinks:- naina singh... tumney bhi jisse panga liya hai wo koi aisa waisa normal cadet nahi hai... apne dusman

ko harane k liye apna nuksaan bhi karna pade... chalega... abhi academy pahucho to sahi... tumhey andaza

lag jayega ki rajveer kya cheez hai... aur mujhey pata hai tum bhi mujhey sirf isliye bear kar rahi ho... bcz naveen

ka task jo tumhey poora karna hai... mujhey fresherball k liye manana hai... poor u

naina shouts:- oh... apne aap ko bahut trained samajhte ho na... waha baithe baithe muskura kyun rahe ho...

help karo na...

raj:- oh hellow... i m here only to guide u not to help u... khud nikalo...

naina:- dekho rajveer hum already bahut late ho chuke hai... humare marks cut jayeinge...

raj:- ohk... to pehle pyar se plzzz kaho...

naina:- kya main aur tumhe... no way...

raj:- ohk then... i m also not going to help u...

naina ( chhid kar ):- fine... plzzz

raj:- pyar se naina...

naina:- plzzz

raj:- ohk...

raj jata hai aur hand pump ke point par apne hanth se pressure deta hai aur... pipe ko upar neeche karta hai...

pressure k karan pani aa jat hai...

naina;- oh,... itana ashaan tha...

raj:- ji ha... kuchh cheeje bahut easy hoti hai... par loge jan bujh kar use complicated bana dete hai... ho gaya

to chale?

naina:- hmmm...

raj:- oh madam yeh balti kaun pakdega...??

naina:- kya... main balti lekar jaun?? be a gentle man ok...

raj:- oh hello... task tumhara hai samjhi... aur jahan tak baat hai... gentle man hone ki... to ek din tumhe main

jarur dikhunga ki main kitana bada gentle man hun... par yahan par tum chhuimui nahi ho... army training lene

aayi ho... major nair ki bakwaas ko sach mat banao...

naina:- ohk ok... do... ( aur naina bucket lekar aage aage chalti hai... aur phir dono jab finish point par pahuchte

hai to dekhte hai ki... already sab waha pahuch chuke hai aur raj naina last hai...)

naveen to aalekh:- yeh raj to humesh har drill me aage hi rehta hai aaj sabse aakhir me kaise aaya...

aalekh thinks:- naveen tu abhi tak nahin samajh paya ki... raj aur naina ek dusre ko bilkul nahin pasand... aur raj

apne dusman ko harane ke liye khud haar jayega...

naveen:- abe tujhe kya hua...

aalekh;- kuchh nahi abhi tujhe pata chal jayega...

maj. nair:- cadet shekhawat and cadet singh... aap dono last hai aur time out k baad bhi aaye hai... cadet singh yeh

baat aap janti hai na... ki aapke last aane se cadet shekhwat ke marks me koi effect nahi ayega... but yeh aapki main

drills me se ek thi...

naina:- ji sir...

major:- phir bhi aapne apne sathi ka sath chhoda...

naina:- no sir maine aisa kuchh nahi kiya...

major:- cadet shekhkawat... kya cadet singh poore waqt aapke sath thi...??

raj:- sir wo...

major:- cadet agar aapne jhuth bola to bahut bhari padega aapko bcz main binocolous se aap sabki activities pe

nazar rakh raha tha... maine khud dekha ki cadet singh akele hi pahadi pe thi aap nahi the... aur finish point pe bhi

wo akelee hi pahunchi thi...

raj:- yes sir...

naina:- sir sath maine nahi balki...

major:- cadet singh maine aapse kuchh nahi puchha... aapne rules tode hai... aur last bhi aayi hai... aur aapko saja

bhi milegi...

naina:- yes sir... ( raj is smiling... uska kam poora ho gaya tha..)

major:- cadet singh aapko sirf 10 me 5 mark diye jate hai... par bcz cadet shekhawat ne aapko dhundha.. aur apne

sath finish point tak lekar aaye... isliye 1 point bonus milta hai... par saja to aapko milegi.. aur aapko apne sathi ka

sath chhodne k liye ULTI DUNIYAAN ki saja di jati hai...

naveen & aalekh:- oh no

raj:- oh yesss... ( naina looks raj with damn haterd and i will kill u look... on which raj is smiling...)

major:- all others dismiss...

baki sabhi chale gaye aur major nair ne naina ko ulta paid par latka diya tabhi raj aaya...

raj:- to miss bak bak kaisi rahi... ( raj winks)

naina:- teri to... tumne jan bujh kar kiya tha na wo sab... plzz jakar nair se bolo ki meri galti nahi thi... aur mujhe

niche utarwao...

raj:- oh main tujhey pagal dikhta hun... jo upar chadwa kar niche utarunga... kaha tha na... mujhse panga mat

le... tu nahi mani ab bhugat... byee sweetheart...

naina:- ahhh... i hate u sadu...

raj:- ha ha ha... i hate u 2 3 4 miss bak bak... byeee... ( raj left )

in mess...

naveen:- yar major ne sahi nahi kiya... naina bardast nahi kar payegai... main abhi jakar...

aalekh:- pagal ho gaya hai... nair kabhi teri baat nahi manega...

naveen:- aalekh...naina jyada dhoop bardast nahi kar pati hai... use chakkar aane lagte hai... isliye main nahi

chahta tha ki wo kma join kare bcz meri behen bahut nazuk hai yar aur... yeh raj jhoot nahi bol sakta tha...

aalekh :- achha ruk apun kuchh karta hai... ( tabhi raj aaya ) hey raj ja na nair ko mana na ki naina ki punishment

ko band karde...

raj:- kyun...?

aalekh:- are yar wo teri partner hai...

raj:- oh hello... sirf task me partner thi life partner nahi... aur usne mera sath chhoda tha... main kya karun...

aalekh:- achha sach me usi ne tera sath chhoda tha... raj tu itana seedha bhi nahi hai...

raj:- aalekh tu mera dost hai uska...

naveen :-ok as ur wish... tujhe pata nahi... ho kya gaya hai raj... chal aalekh... apan major se baat karte hai... (

naveen & aalekh left)

raj:- are meri baat to... ( tabhi sam bhag ke aati hai)

sam;- guys... raj... naina faint ho gayi hai...

raj:- oh no... ( raj daud kar gaya aur dekha to naina faint thi aur latki hui thi ) sam jakar infirmary me inform

karo... main ise lekar aata hun...

raj naina ko tree se utarta hai... aur fir use bahon me utha kar infirmary ki ore lekar ja raha hota hai... tabhi major

nair aate hai...

major:- cadet shekhawat...

end of part 5
plzzz do comment...
with love chandni...
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Edited by rkchandni - 10 years ago

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nilusoni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

amazing part

raj and naina argument wow

thanx for pm

plz pm me for next

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Arti Gupta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

great part yr raj naina ki nok jhok toh kamal ki thi
alekh ne huda ko apne se 10 meter dur rahne ko kaha h ab kase pura kare ga task complete bechara huda
naina last aayi apne drill me raj ki wajah se or marks bhi kam mile h use
bechare naina nair ne toh ulti duniya ki saja de di naina ko raj toh kitna khuss ho raha h
naina toh bechare faint he ho gayi
wowww... raj naina ko apne baho me utha kr le ja raha h
how romantic...
plz update next part soon
n thanks for pm

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ria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

hi
the up is really good
so naveen tries to make naina understand to not to take panga with raj and major nair
naina being naina she dont listen to him
alekh gets to know the relation btw naveen and naina
raj plans to rag the freshers
the punishment which he gave to huda is really apt for him
i liked it
naveen wan raj and naina to go for fresher's ball
plz cont soon and pm me

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rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

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***RN-Humko Tumse Pyar hai***
Part - 6

major:- cadet shekhawat... kiski permission se aap cadet singh ko utar kar laye...

raj:- sir naina behosh ho gayi thi... isliye...

major:- maine poochha kiski permission se... ( tabhi baki sabhi bhi aa jate hai)

raj:- sir naina ki koi galti nahi thi... maine uska sath chhoda tha na ki usne mera aapko punishment deni hai to mujhe dijiye... par abhi yeh faint hai mujhey ise infermery le jana hai... theek hai... le jaiye... par aapko jhuth bolne aur rules todne ki saja to jarur milegi... inhe infirmiry chhodne k baad aap ko 24 hrs k liye soliatary confinment me bheja jata hai... dismiss... (dhamake on all others faces )

raj turant naina ko infirmary le jata hai jaha dr uska checkup karte hai... aur sabhi ko kehte hai ki naina ko aadat nahi hai dhoop sehne ki aur weakness ki wajah se wo faint ho gayi hai... thodi der me wo theek ho jayegi... fir raj bina kisi ko kuchh kahe... khud hi confinement me chala jata hai... jab naina ko hose aata hai to sam use sab batati hai... ek taraf naina khush hai ki raj ko uske kiye ki saja mili par dusri taraf use bikul achha nahi lag raha tha... bcz raj uski wajah se saja bhugat raha hai...

raj & naveen's room...

aalekh:- naveen ab naina theek hai dont worry...

naveen:- hmm... par raj ne aisa kyun kiya... usne naina ka sath kyun chhoda... aur fir qubool bhi kar liya...

aalekh:- abe dhakkan... tujhe samajh me nahi aa raha...

naveen:- kya...??

aalekh:- abe naina aur raj ka 36 ka aakda chal raha hai... dono hi ek dusre ko bilkul pasand nahi karte... jab bhi milte hai sirf jhagda karte hai... par raj dil ka bura nahi hai... isliye jab naina behose hui to usne sab qubool bhi kar liya...

naveen:- ha wo to hai... par raj to... oh no... maine to socha tha ki naina raj k sath rahegi to safe rahegi... par yahan to...

aalekh:- dekh bhai hone k naate tune bilkul sahi socha... aur waise bhi apna raj itana bura bhi nahi hai... dekha na... aakhirkar naina k liye hi sahi confinement me hai... isliye chill mar... aur waise bhi mujhey huda k irade achhey nahi alagte naina ki taraf... isliye tune sahi kaha raj apne gusse me khud naina ke sath bura karega par ek limit tak... par kisi aur ko galat nahi karne dega... dont worry naina is in safe hands... ( naveen nods in yes) waise 1 baat kahu... tu raj ko bata de ki naina teri behen hai,...

naveen:- yar naina mujhey maar dalegi...

aalekh;- yar tu naina se itana darta kyun hai...

naveena:- nahin yaar darta nahin hun... pyar karta hu... main nahin chahta ki naina jo chahe wo na ho... isliye humesha uski zayaz nazayaz maange poori karta hu... aur plzz abhi tu bhi kisi ko mat batana... chal aaj yahin soja raj to hai nahi...

aalekh:- ok...

naina's room...

naina apani khidki k pass khadi hai and thinking:- kyun kiya usne aisa... wo chahta to major nair se bach sakta tha... phir kyun... nahin nahin wo isi layak hai... par... oh god main... yeh rajveer k baare me itana kyun soch rahi hun... khair jo bhi ho... mujhe abhi use fresher ball k liye bhi manana hai... bhaiya i hate u for this aapko koi aur nahi mila tha... raj hi mila... is maamle me to wo chipku huda hi better tha... oh god... raj ko manana to pahaad khodne jaisa hai... khair kal baat karti hun... aur oh no main yeh kaise bhul gayi... mana raj veer ki tumney meri help ki but i m not going to spare u... tumhara aur tumhari GF ka breakup na karaya to mera naam bhi naina nahi...

naina chhip kar mess k phone k pass jati hai... waha ki dairy jisme almost sabhi k no... we no likhe hai... jime wo constantly baat karte hai... use dekhti hai...

naina:- oh no yahan to raj ka 2 no likha hai... kya yeh uske ghar ka no. hai... nahin nahin... ghar ka kaise ho sakta hai... ( tabhi orderly aata hai)

orderly:- cadet singh aap yahan...

naina:- wo actually cadet rajveer ko punishment mili hai na... to actually unke ghar se phone aaya tha... par main time nahi aa payi to aap bata sakte hai in do no. me se kaun sa no unke ghar ka hai...

orderly:- what...

naina:- actually us din rajveer isi no par baat kar raha tha kya... actually mujhe unhe kuchh inform karna hai... maj. nair k orders hai...

orderly:- oh... yeh dusra no. hai jisme wo aksar baat karte hai...

naina:-ok thankyou

orderly:- hmm... jaldi baat kark jaiye light outs hone wali hai...

naina:- ji ji... ( orderly left from there )

orderly ke jate hi naina usi no pe call karti hai jo orderly ne bataya... but bad luck to naina wo no. raj ke ghar ka hi tha... aur uski mumma yani mrs veena shekhawat ne phone uthaya tha... sath hi ayaan, vikash aur santa tai bhi baithe the...

veena ;- hello...

naina ( oh yeh to ladki ki awaaz hai means main sahi thi):- oye kalmuhi...

veena:- kya... yeh kya bol rahi hai aap... raj ki academy se bol rahi hai na aap...??

naina:- ha ha main raj ki academy se hi bol rahi hoon... pehli aur akhiri baar bol rahi hoon... mere raj se door reh samjhi... wo sirf mera hai... wo sirf mujhse pyar karta hai... even we... even we have physical relation ship... aur main uske bachhe ki maa banne wali hoon.. ( dhamake on veena's face ) aaj k baad use phone kiya to tera muh tod dungi...

veena:- kya bakwaas laga rakha hai... mera raj aisa nahin hai... naam kya hai tumhara...

naina:- raj tera nahin... mera hai... aur ha mera naam hai chandramukhi... ( and naina cuts the call) beta raj tu to gaya tera breakup to pakka... bada jaan jaan kar raha tha... ha ha ha... ( and she left )

shekhawat house...

veena shocked khadi hai...

vikash:- kya hua veena... raj ki academy se phone tha... kya kaha unhone...

sata tai:- ha veena ji... kya hua... mera raj theek to hai na...

ayaan:- mom kuchh bolo bhi ki aise hi statue ban kar khadi rahogi... kya kaha bhaiya ne...

veena:- chandramukhi ka phone tha... mujhey yakeen nahin ho raha ki mera beta...

vikash..:- kya chandramukhi... par kaha kya usne...

veena:- usne kaha ki wo raj k bachhe ki maa banne wali hai...

vikash, ayaan, santa tai:- kyaaa...

ayaan:- woowww matalab... baby ayega...

veena:- chup apne kamre me jaa... aane do raj ab to wo gaya...

dusri taraf huda chori chhipe aalekh k room me ghusta hai... par dekhta hai ki aalekh room me nahi hai... to wo aalekh k roomie ko uthata hai...

kamran:- oye... huda tu idhar kya kar rah hai...

huda:- chup aalekh kaha hai... ?

kamran:- wo to aaj naveen ke room me so raha hai...

huda :- oh thanks... ab so jaa...

aur huda phir khidki ke through bagal wale room me jata hai... jahan raj ke bed me aalekh soya tha... huda ne apna cell on kiya aur vedio mode me daala aur use ek table me rakha... aur chupke se jakar... aalekh par hamla bole diya... aalekh hairan ho gaya aur huda ne use kiss kar diya wo bhi uske lips me... naveen utha aur has has kar pagal ho gaya...

aalekh:- abe saale... haram khor... teri to...

huda:- dekh aalekh... task tha yaar... samjha kar...

aalekh :- abhi samjhata hoon...

aur aalekh ne huda ki maar maar kar halat kharab kar di... aure phir huda apna phone lekar bhag khada hua... aur naveen abhi bhi has raha hai...

aalekh:- isaki to yuckkk... main brush kark aata hoon...

naveen:- ha ha ha... mujhey to yeh samajh nahi aa raha hai... ki raj ne uski ragging ki ya teri... ha ha ha

aalekh;- chup be ab to raj bhi gaya... ( & aalekh left to wash room )

next day evening...

raj ki punishment puri hoti hai aur wo mess me aata hai...

naveen:- hey raj... tu theek to hai na...

raj;- naveen tu to aise bol raha hai... jaise mujhe 1 time punisment mila ho... suri ji kuchh khane ko milega 24 ghante se kuchh nahi khaya...

suri ji:- oh yelo ji puttar... aapke favourite gobi ke parathe...

raj:- oh thankyou suri ji tussi great ho... ( raj starts eating )

sam:- hey raj tum theek to ho na...

raj;- ya i m fine... ( par raj dekhta hai ki naina kuchh nahi bol rahi hai...) par zamana to dekho zinko puchhna chahiye unhe kuchh fark hi nahi padta ( naina samajh jati hai ki raj use tana maar raha hai)

naina:- galti ki hai to saja to milegi hi...

raj;- maine tumhe kuchh kaha kya... apna gyaan mat baato...

naveen ;- hold it... bas karo yar...

huda:- raj bhai... maine apna kaam poora kiya...

raj:- kya... aur tujhe kisne mara... yeh haalat kya bana rakhi hai...

huda :-wo sab choodiye aur ha aapne jo mujhey task diya tha... aalekh bhai ko kiss karne ka... maine poora kiya hai...
naina, raj, sam;- kyaaa...

huda:- ha...

raj:- par wo to sabke saamne tha...

aalekh:- ha sabke saamne...

huda:- ha to hai na... suri ji kya main aapka tab bas 2 minute kar sakta hu... in sabko 1 vedio dikhna hai... kya hai mere phone ki screen chhoti hai... maza nahin aayega,...

suriji:- haji ye lo ji puttar...

naveen to aalekh:- abe isne to tujhe item bana diya... sale ne... pehli baar koi takkar ka mila hai... yeh bhi kuchh kam nahi hai

aalekh :- yeh mere hanthon marega...

raj:- 1 minute aalekh... main bhi to dekhun ki kya kamaal kiya hai aapne huda ji...

huda wo vedio sabko dikhata hai... aur sab has has k pagal ho rahe hai siway... raj, naveen aalekh, shalu aur naina k... raj apni chair se uthta hai yahan wahan dekhta hai... na koi orderly tha... na hi suri ji... aur kheech ke huda ko ek thappad marta hai... every one was taken a back...

end of part 6
plzzz do comment...
with love chandni...
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Edited by rkchandni - 10 years ago

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

hi
the up is really good
so all cadets along with their partners left for their drill task
raj really made situation tough for naina
poor she got punishment for him
now what major nair will do
plz cont soon and pm me

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naujoker

@naujoker

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Wow double dhamaka!!!
Two updates!!!!
And alekh and huda's scene were amazing!!
Naina and raj were awesome.
Loved the way jab raj pareshaan hua aur usne sazaa bhi bhukti and sab qabool bhi kiya that was nicely portrayed.
Raj ne aur baki sab hairan the aur raj ne use jhoor daar thappad bhi mara.
Naina ne kyaa kar diya ab agar raj ko pata chala toh woh kya karega?
The up was fabulous!!
Thanks for the pm!!!

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Arti Gupta

@RNforever

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

how sweet of raj
jase he naina faint hue usni uski help ki or saja bhi jhel li
naina ne toh raj ki lanka laga di iske ghr phone kr ke ye kah diya ki wo uske bache ki maa bane wali h o.m.g
ab raj ka kya hoga
alekh bechara huda ka shikar ban gaya kiss bhi kiya toh lip pe hehehe...
naveen ne toh liye telecast ke pure maze liye hass hass kr pagal ho gaya
bechara raj saja pure kr ke aaya toh naina ne halchal tak nhi pucha very bad naina
huda ne video sabko show kr di alekh ki izzat Ki toh vhat laga di
raj ne huda ko kas kr ek thapa mara par kyu mara ye abhi suspense h
very bad chandni itne achi time pe break laga diya tumne
anyways very gud part
update next part soon