Humko tumse pyar hai ~Rajveer Naina~ *completed* Last part on page 51 - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Comment for recent update:-

Oh god Raj and Naveen has serious mus between them. Naina ne agar Naveen ko mana nahi kia hota to aisa nahi hota kabhi. Raj was hurt that Naveen hide the truth from him 😔
😔 😔. Ab all of a sudden what was the need for Raj to go Delhi hiding his real emotions from Naina and Naveen but vo bhi kab tak? 😒 😒 😒 He was unable to hide it even with Aryan who caught him and now Veena and Vikram to knows about it.😉 😉 😉 Huda will take advantage of whole situation.😡 😡 😡 Naina hi chudail bhi hai aur Chandra mukhi bhi par Raj ko us chudail Naina se pyaar hua hai.😆 😆 😆 Nice update!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 I always hated Huda and he always prove that he deserves my hatred.😛 😛 😛 I wish Raj k saath kuch ulta seedha na kar paye vo.😕 😕 😕 Update soon.


thanks...keep smiling... keep reading...

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Posted: 10 years ago
***RN-Humko Tumse Pyar hai***
Part - 13

raj ki flight land karti hai aur fir wo local bus lekar ambala pahuchta hai...now he is standing on KMA's main gate...then raj bahut hi tej speed se apne room ki taraf ja raha hota hai ki huda use tokta hai...

huda:- are raj...aa gaye tum...to kaisi rahi chhuti...maza to bilkul nahin aaya hoga...akhir tera dhayan to kma raha hoga...

raj:- kya...tu kehna kya chahta hai huda...

huda:- raj itana bhola to tu hai nahin na...khair welcome back...

raj:- whatever...and thanks for ur fake concern...

huda:- fake...

raj:- huda i know tujhe main kuchh khash pasand nahi hun...and yakeen maan same with me...to bas yahin kehna hai ki i m tired kya main ja sakta hun...

huda:- as ur wish yar...chal phir mess me mileinge...(raj left without any expression...)

naina's room...

naina:- what...sach me kab aaya wo...

sam;- abhi thodi der pehle...maine dekha wo huda se kuchh baat kar raha tha...naina i dont know why...par mujhe huda ke irade kuchh sahi nahin lagte yar...specially raj ko lekar...aur wo jis tarah raj se bat kar raha tha...aur pehle bhi kai baar...aur tu to janti hi hai huda kaisa hai...he has his own fake ego...jiske liye wo kisi bhi had tak jaa sakta hai...aur raj ne usi ego ko hurt kiya hai...use thappad mara tha raj ne...(naina is thinking some thing...)...naina tu sunn rahi hai na...

naina:- ha sam...and u dont worry is huda ko handle karna mujhe ata hai...aur wo chah kar bhi raj ka kuchh nahi bigad payega...kyuki use pehle mera samna karna hoga...

sam:- are wah bhartiya naari sabpe bharii...

naina:- what...

sam:- are wo kya kehte hai tu bilkl ki serial ki heroine ki tarah baat kar rahi hai...agar tumne mere suhaag ka kuchh bigada to tumhe pehle mera saamna karna hoga...tmhe meri laash par se gujarana hoga(and sam is laughing and and is making faces )

naina:- ab chup kar main ready ho kar aati hun then humein class ke liye chalna hai...

sam:- class ya raj...?

naina:- tujhey kya lagta hai...

sam:- mujhe lagta hai ki...

naina:- kya lagta hai sam...

sam:- mujhe lagta hai ki ab tujhe washroom jana chahiye kyuki mujhe pata hai ki...tu raj ko dekhne ke liye mari ja rahi hai...( and she rans away)

naina:- teri toh...(naina smiles at herself then left to wash room...)

sabhi mess mein baithe hai par raj nahin hai tabhi naina daud kar aati hai...aur raj ko dekhne lagti hai...sam jahan uske dil ki halat par smile kar rahi hai wahi huda villian type ka face bana raha tha...

huda:- oye phoolan kya baat hai...kise dhundh rahi hai...?

naina:- tujhe to bilkul bhi nahi...

naveen:- aa naina...nasta kar le...

naina:- bhaiya wo...raj wapas aa gaya na...?

naveen:- ha aa gaya hai...aur main wash room me tha us waqt...wo aate hi so gaya...safar me thak gaya hoga isliye maine use jagaya bhi nahin...

suriji:- oye khoteyo... jaldi jaldi ...nasta karo class me nahin jana kya...aur naveen puttar raj puttar aa gaya na...jarur is baar bhi badiya badiya cheeje laya hoga khane waste maja hi aa jayega...

naveen:- oh ha suri ji...aunty kabhi bhi use khali hanth bhej sakti hai kya...( tabhi raj enters in mess all looks at him with sweet smile and huda with wicked one)

suriji:- oye raj puttar kaisa hai...

raj:- i m fine suri ji...

suriji:- oye puttar yeh kya leke aaya hai...

raj:- kuchh khash nahi suriji... (naveena ur aalekh ki taraf do bade bade box badhate hue...) yeh tum dono ke liye mom ne bheja hai...(aalekh aur naveen unn box pe aise lapakte hai jaise janmo ke bhookhe ho...)

naveen:- oh woww aunty ne tab to mera din bann gaya yar...i love u aunty...

aalekh:- main bhi...

shalu:- yeh kya sirf in dono ke liye...aur humare liye...

raj:- are laya hun bhai...yeh tum sab ke liye...huda tu bhi le...

huda:- kya baat hai raj...in dono ke liye alag dabba aur hum sab itane saro ke liye sirf ek...

raj:- wo kya hai na huda...aisa treatment tabhi milta hai jab aapki jagah special ho...ek bar mom mere liye kuchh na bheje...par naveen aur aalekh k liye na bheje...impossible hai...waise main tujhe yeh bata hi kyun raha hun tu nahi samjhega...(tabhi raj wahan se chala jata hai class k liye...aur sam naina ko kuchh ishara karti hai...aur naina raj ke peeche jati hai...)

aalekh:- huda apna dimaag jyada mat lagaya kar...jaha pyar hota hai na...wahan aise sawaal nahi puchhne chahiye...

near class roommm...

naina:- hey raj...(raj turns) kya baat hai raj...dekho raj i m sorry bhaiya ne yeh nahi bataya tha ki main unki behen hoon...kyuki maine hi unhe mana kiya tha...actually raj meri aur bhaiya ki ek bet lagi thi jisme main jeet gayi thi aur maine yeh demand ki thi ki main kma join kana chahti hoon...jaise bhaiya apni zindagi jeete hai main bhi usi zindagi ka experience lena chahti thi...aur agar sab ko pata chal jata ki main ek senior cadet ki sis hun to sab mujhse sympathy type behave karte yehi samajh kar dosti karte ki main naveen ki behen hoon...isme itana bada kya issue hai raj...jo tum itane naraz ho gaye ki ghar chale gaye...aur us din bhaiya se bhi jhagda kiya...plzzz raj i m sorry...keh rahi hun na... i promise aaj ke baad koi jhuth kabhi nahi bolungi...plzz raj...raj kuchh to bolo...aur humara rishta...

raj(in rude tone...):- dekho naina...mujhe is baat se kyun fark padega ki tumne mujhse jhuth bola...tumhari to fitrat hi hai...kyun...(dhamake on naina's face)mujhe bas is baat ka gussa tha ki naveen ne mujhse sach chhipaya...wo bhi ab gussa tha ab nahin hai...and for god sake...mere aur naveen ke beech mat aao...mera aur naveena ka alag rishta hai...aur jahan tak baat mere aur tumhare rishtey ki, to naina...humare beech koi rishta nahin hai...na tha... na kabhi ban sakta hai...dosti ka bhi nahin...(dhamake on naina's face)mere liye tum sirf naveen ki chhoti behen ho...bas...aur plzzz mujhse manfi mat mango...manfi we mangte hai jo apne hote hai...

aur raj class rooom me chala jata hai...jahan ek taraf raj ki ankhe moist thi wahin naina ki ankhon se anshun beh rahe hai...par koi tha jo in dono ko aise dekh kar bahut khush ho raha tha...wo koi aur nahin huda tha...tabhi baki sab bhi class ki taraf aane lagte hai...unhe dekhte hi naina apne anshun pochhti hai...aur fake smile k sath class room me chali jati hai...sabhi class me dhyaan de rahe hai par raj naina sirf ek dusre ke bare me hi soch rahe hai...wahi raj ko gussa aa raha hai ki usne jaan bujhkar naina ko hurt kiya hai kyunki usne naina ke anshun dekh liye the,,,, wahi naina bahut hurt hai raj ki baaton ko lekar ki jis insaan ko wo itana pyar karti hai...uski nazar me naina ki koi value nahi hai...

raj apne room me hai aur apni dairy me kuchh likh raha hai...i m sorry naina...aaj meri wajah se tumhari ankhon me aanshun the...i m really sorry...mujhe pata hai...tum to sirf mujhse normally as a freind baat karne aayi thi par maine tumhare sath achha nahi kiya...kya karu naina...mujhe dar hai ki kahin apne pyar ko pane ke raste me main apni dosti na kho du...jo main... main kisi bhi haal me nahin khona chahta...naveen meri zindagi ka bahut important hissa hai...naveen aur mera rishta tumhare meri zindagi me aane se bahut pehle hi judd gaya tha...isliye main ab kabhi bhi apni maryada par nahin karunga...kabhi bhi naveen ke vishwaas ko nahin tutne dunga...aalekh aur naveen ke bina rajveer... rajveer nahi hai...aur jahan tak sawaal tumhara hai to...main tumse pyar karta hun naina tum mujhse nahi...mujhe pata hai...main tumhare layak nahi hun...tum to sirf mujhe apna dost manti thi aur main...ab to sayad main tumhara dost bhi nahi hun...but I LOVE U NAINA... i love u always and forever...(trears flowing down to his dairy)...

dusri taraf naina bhi apne room me hai aur apni window ke pass khadi chand ko dekh rahi hai aur uski aankhon se anshun rukne ka naam hi nahin le rahe hai...(in her mind)kyun raj kyun...kya ek sach ne humare rishte ko itana badal diya ki tum...hmmm rishta sahi kaha tumne humare beech to kabhi koi rishta tha hi nahin... i m sorry raj par sayad tumhari nazar me na ho...par meri nazar me to hai...pyar ka rishta...yeh naina kabhi pyar par vishwaas tak nahi karti thi...tumne use pyar karna to sikha diya raj...par pyar karke use bhulna nahi shikha paye...tumhe kyun meri ankhon me pyar nazar nahin aata...ha nazar bhi kaise aayega...tumne kabhi meri aankhon me dekhna hi nahi chaha...tumhare liye to main sirf naveen ki behen hun aur kuchh nahi...par tum mere liye bahut kuchh ho...tum mujhe chaho ya na chaho...par naina ki chah...sirf aur sirf raj hai...(then she sadly smiles) naina ke pyar par sirf sif aur sirf uske veer ka haq hai...I LOVE U VEER...i love u alot...

aise hi lagbhag 4 mahine beet gaye...in do mahino me in sab ki dosti me bahut fark pad gaya hai...huda ne naveen ko bahut hi jyada apne confidence me le liya aur raj ke khilaf lagatar uske kaan bharta tha...pahle naveen ko bilkul bhi yakeen nahi tha...par ek din usne naina aur sam ki kuchh batein sunn li jisme use yeh patah chala ki raj puri raat naina ke room me tha jab wo naina ko nashe ki haalat me chhodne aaya tha...aur yeh bhi ki sayad naina raj ko pasand karti hai...jiske baad as usual kisi bhi bhai ko achha nahin lagega...naveen ko raj par gussa bhi tha ki usne baki har baat use batayi...par yeh kyun nahi bataya ki wo rat bhar naina ke room me hi tha...naveen raj se baat karna chahta tha, sab kuchh clear bhi karna chahta tha,par har bar huda use manupulate kar deta tha...aur naveen ke behaviour se raj aur aalekh dono hi hurt the,...ab haal yeh ho gaya tha ki aalekh aur raj room share kar rahe hai aur naveen ne aalekh se room switch kar liya hai...kisi ko bhi yakeen nahi ho raha tha ki naveen aur raj ke beech itani duriyaan kabhi aa sakti thi...par sach to yeh tha ki raj aur naveen dono hi khush nahi hai...aur aalekh wo puri kosis kar raha hai sab theek karne ki par huda kuchh seniors jo raj naveen ke rivals hai unke sath milkar bahut hi ganda game khel raha tha aur sabhi ki nazaro me bada sariff bana hua tha...yahan tak ki ab naveen ko aisa lagne laga hai ki huda sach much naina ke liye bahut achha insaan hai aur naina se bahut pyar karta hai...aur huda wo to saatve aasmaan me hai...wo sirf naina ko raj se chhennna aur raj se badla lene ke liye is had tak gir gaya tha...

jeet to huda ki ho rahi thi par haar...haar raha tha har taraf se raj...in 4 mahino me raj aur naina dono hi ek dusre ko aur jyada pyar karne lage hai par dono hi sirf ek dusre se aise pretend karte hai mano ek dusre ka hona ya na hona dono ke liye mayne hi nahi rakhta...naina raj ke saamne pehle jaise chulbuli aur frank banke rehti hai...huda ke sath bhi achhe se hi behave karti hai kyuki kisi ko nahi pata hai ki huda kya game khel raha hai...jaise use kisi bat se koi fark nahi padta...par sirf sam ko pata hai ki har rat naina ki ankhon se raj ke liye anshun nikalte hai...aisa ek bhi pal nahi jata jab naina raj ke liye fikarmand na ho...aur raj uski haalat bhi naina se kuchh kam kharab nahi thi...zindagi me pehli baar raj ko pyar hua tha...aur wo bhi itani siddat se pyar hua...par halaaton ne itna mazboor bana diya ki wo apne pyar ka izhaar tak nahi kar sakta...aur kahiin na kahiin major nair bhi raj ko is tarah dekh kar bahut khush hai...kyuki raj ab bahut hi shant rehne laga hai...isliye huda ki galtiyon ko bhi maj nair nazar andaaz kar dete hai...kyuki agar raj ki haar ho rahi hai to maj nair khush kyun nahi honge...overall sabhi dukhi hai siwaay huda ke...

ab final exam hone ko kuchh hi din bache hai...wahi is exam ke baad rajveer, naveen,aalekh aur shalu...officers ban jayenge...to naina,sam aur huda 2 yr me honge...sabhi ab apni study me dhyan de rahe hai...raj ko best cadet banna hi hai isliye wo jam kar mehnat bhi kar raha hai...aur apne aap ko naina se door rakhne ke liye din raat books me ghusha rehta hai...aalekh se dekha nahi ja raha hai...kyuki aalekh ko ab acchi tarah se pata hai ki raj bhi naina se pyar karta hai...bhale hi raj ne kabhi kisi se kuchh na kaha ho...par aalekh to mann padh leta hai...aur is baar bhi aalekh sahi tha...wo raj naina aur naveen ke beech sab kuchh theek karna chahta tha...par usne socha hai ki wo ab exams khatam hone ke baad hi sab theek karke hi rahega...par huda uske dimaag me to ek aisa plan chal raha tha jo in sab ko humesha ke liye alag karne ke liya kafi tha...huda ne major nair ke sath milkar exam ke just 7 days pehle ek combo drill rakhwayi hai...jisme again 1 yr aur 3 yrs cadet ko as a jodi drill poori karni hai...

at ground... morning 7 am...

major nair:-so all cadets...specially 3 yr cadets aap sabke is academy me sirf 1 month hi bacha hai...aur isliye aap sab ke liye yeh akhiri special drill maine rakhwayi hai...yeh drill aap 1yr cadets ke sath kareinge...its again a jodi drill and trust drill as well its a drill about of 2 days...aap sabhi ko apne partner ke sath 2 din us ghane jungle me bitana hai...aur allocated task pure karne hai...aap me se har ek jodi ko ek tent provide kiya jayega jisme aap aaj ki puri rat gujareinge...yad rakhiyega cadets its trust drill aur sayad kisi girl cadet ko kisi boy cadet ke sath rehna padega...aap sab ko aapke maps aur jaruri samaan provide kar diye jayeinge...jisse aapko apna target point aur tent talaashna hai...any dobt cadets...

all cadets:- no sirrr...

major nair:- so the cadets or u can say jodies who are going to be paired for this drill are...

cadet huda with cadet alhuwalia...
cadet singhal with cadet sarfaraz...
cadet sharma with cadet rastogi...
and cadet alhuwalia oh sorry aap ko to short sir name pasand hai na...to cadet singh with cadet shekhawat...(naveen is not happy with raj naina being a pair...)

naveen:- ahh aaa sir i want to change my partner...main naina ke sath pair hona chahta hun...

major nair:- why cadet...oh ab samajh aaya bcz cadet singh tumhari behen hai aur tumhe cadet shekhawat pe trust nahi hai... m i right...(raj closed his eyes with pain even naina too...kyuki raj ko yakeen nahin ho raha hai ki ab naveen ko uspar istana bhi trust nahin hai...kabhi naveen raj par itana bharosha karta tha aur aaj naveen itana kaise badal gaya...)

naveen:- no sir actually...

major nair:- i have decided cadet...jo jiska partner hai wahi rahega...agar tumhe apne dost aur behen par vishwaas nahi hai then its ur problem not mine...now get back to ur drill and ur time start now and 36 hrs aap kal sam 7:00 pm me pe report kareinge...aur ek aur baat sabhi senior cadets apne juniors ko puri help kareinge...is that clear...any question...

all cadets:- no sirrr...


sabhi loge apna samaan uthate hai raj bas naveen ko dekh raha hai jo kahin na kahin raj se nazare nahi mila pa raha tha...aur sabhi ab ja chuke hai par raj aur naina wahi hai...naina raj ke pass jati hai...

naina:- raj chale...(raj apni soch se bahar aata hai aur apna samaan utha kar aage aage chalne lagta hai...)

ab sabhi log apne apne destination ki taraf ja rahe hai...raj aur naina bhi beech jungle me hai...aur map ke through aage badh rahe hai...

naina:- raj i think idhar side nahin udhar side hoga...

raj:- nahin naina agar hume sabse pehle apne target pe pahunchna hai to us route se jana chahiye...

naina:- nahin raj is taraf...

raj:- dekho naina main map reading expert hun plzzz meri baat mano us taraf nahi jana hai...

naina:- raj tum meri baat kyun nahin mante ho...theek hai tum us taraf jaao main is taraf jaungi...

raj:- naina pagal ho gayi ho kya...

but isse pehle raj kuchh kahe ya kare ki naina ek ped ki rob me fas kar gir jati hai aur raj use sambhalne jata hai par wo bhi uske upar girta hai...dono hi ek dusre ki ankhon me dekh rahe hai...dono ko hi jab se inke pyar ka ehsaas hua hai tab se pehli baar raj aur naina itane kareeb they...dono ko hi ek dusre ke liye dono ki aankhon me pyar dikh raha tha,,,,,,par kehte hai na ki... kabhi - kabhi ehsaas ko bhi alfazo ki shakht jarurat padti hai nahi to ehsaas kabhi izhaar nahi bann pata hai...yehi raj naina ke sath bhi ho raha tha...dono hi aise zameen par abhi bhi ek dusre me khoye hue hai aur dono ko hi ehsaas nahi tha ki koi hai jo bahut der se in par nazar rakhe hue hai aur in dono ki pics click kar raha hai...achanak se raj ko kuchh yad aata hai aur wo jhatke se uth jata hai...aur naina ko bhi uthata hai...

raj:- kaha tha na ki galat route hai...ab chup chap mere sath chalo samjhi...

ab naina bina kuchh kahe raj ke sath chal rahi thi...in kuchh palo ke kareeb aane ke karan raj aur naina dono ke hi mann ke chhipe hue jajbaat unki aankhon me dikhayi de rahe hai...ab dono hi apne purane palo ko yad kar rahe hai aur bas chal rahe hai...unhi chalte- chalte finally wo loge apne tent ki location me pahunch jate hai...is beech naina 2 se 3 baar girte - girte bachi kyuki raj ne use waqt par sambhal liya... raj aur naina dono ko hi bas yahi lag raha tha ki bas dono yunhi ek dusre ke sath chalte rahe aur zindagi kat jaye...par aisa nahi tha akhir kar we apni mamnzil par pahunche...subah se marks aur map ko indefy karte- karte unhe ab sham ke waqt unka destination point mila...aur dono ne hi apne bag se jaruri samaan nikala aur kuchh samaan jo already wahan maujud tha...unka use karke apna tent lagaya...aur baki sara samaan tent me rakha...aur andar ja kar baith gaye...raj aur naina aaj pehli bar itane akele the...aur ek dusre ke pyar me choor bhi, dono ko hi azeeb sa ehsaash bhi ho raha tha...dono hi ek dusre ke kareeb aane ke liye betaab the...par na yeh waqt sahi tha...na yeh halaat...raj tent ke bahar aakar lakdiyon ki madad se aag jalane ki kosis kar raha tha...

naina ne apne shoes utare, apne baal khol liye...tent ke bahar aayi aur apna chehra saaf kar rahi thi...ki achanak raj ki nazar naina pe gayi...naina behad khubsurat lag rahi thi...uske chand se chehre pe wo pani ki bunde motiyon ke samaan lag rahi thi to...wahi uski zulfe hawa me uddkar uske face par aa rahi thi jo ki uski khubsurati ko aur badha rahi thi...raj ka mann to bas yahi kar raha tha ki ek bar jakar naina ke face ko chhue aur uski zulfo ko uske chehpre pe aane se rok de...ki achanak naina wapas aayi aur raj ko awaz diya usne...jisse raj hosh me aaya...

naina:- raj wo mujhe bahut bhukh lagi hai pehle kuchh kha lete hai then phir aage ka kaam kare...(raj nods aur wo tent me gaya aur naina bhi uske peeche gayi...)

raj aur naina apne sath jo bhi khane ka samaan laaye the usse unhone apna dinner kiya...aur phir kal morning me sare clues ko kaise serach kareinge is baat ka plan bana rahe the...

naina:- raj hum agar west side se start kare to better hoga...ab dekho is map me triagle bana hua hai...aur hum abhi north side se aa rahe hai...to is hisaab se north west aur south ka combination hi sahi clues dega...

raj:- ha...wo to theek hai...par main to yeh soch raha hun ki yeh sare clues ka relation jarur kisi insaan ya kisi commodity se hoga...aur hume usi ki report karni hai...aur hume jo pehla clue milega hume usi se yeh andaza lagana padega ki next clue aur commodity ya naam kya ho sakta hai...

naina:- par hum pehle naam jaan kar kya kareinge...pehle to hume clues ko serach karna chahiye na...

raj:- naina stratigy to padhi hi hogi...uske according agar hume humare goal ke bare pata ho to manzil aur rasta asaan ho jata hai...bcz hume us chain ki kadi milti jati hai isliye abhi so jao kyuki meri gut felling keh rahi hai ki humein humare clues subah se pahle nahin milne wale...aur hume jaldi uthna padega...kyuki kal sham 7 baje tak humein report bhi karna hai...

naina:- par raj mujhe nahin lagta ki hum kal shaam tak pahuch payeinge...

raj:- aur aisa kyun...??

naina:- kyuki...yahan tak pahuchne ke liye hum subah se chal rahe hai...aur almost sham ko pahunche hai...to socho kal to hume drill ka task bhi poora karna hai...hum itane kam period me wapas kaise ja payeinge...

raj:- naina...tum ek map reader ke sath ho dont worry... yeh dekho hidden route...yehi hai academy ki stratigy agar wapas kam samay me jana possible nahi hota to nair kabhi bhi hume 36hrs nahi deta...samjhi bas ab wo clues mil jayein...ok...now i m sleepy...gn...(aur raj uth kar jane lagta hai...)

naina:- raj kahan ja rahe ho...

raj:- bahar...

naina:- par tumhe to neend aa rahi thi na...

raj:- to tumhe kya lagta hai...main tumhare sath is camp me rahunga...no way waise bhi tumhare bhai ko kam saq nahi hai mujhpar...(dhamake on naina's face...)

naina:- raj tum...

raj:- gn naina...

raj bahar ja kar kuchh ghash bichha kar late jata hai aur yahan ander naina bhi...par dono ki hi aankhon me neend na thi...dono hi sirf ek dusre ke bare me soch rahe the ki kuchh samay baad raj ki aankh lag jati jati hai...aur yahan naina bhi so hi gayi thi ki...achanak bahut tej se naina cheekhi...jisse raj uth kar dauda...aur tent ke andar gaya...naina daud kar aayi aur raj ke gale lag gayii...

raj:- naina kya hua...tum cheekhi kyun...are u ok naina...naina kuchh bolo bhi...

naina:- raj wo...wo...waha...(pointing her finger towards a place where she was lying)

raj:- kya hai wahan...naina...bolo...

naina:- chuha...

raj:- kyaaa...naina tum ek soldier hokar chuhe se darti ho...(raj starts laughing...)

naina:- just shut up raj hasnaa band karo...

raj:- ok naina...but tum chuhe se...(still laughing...)achha chalo ab so jao...

naina:- no main yahan is chuhe ke sath nahin soungi...

raj:- naina just stopit yar...jo chuha tha wo ab ja chuka ha calm down and plzz ab so jao...

naina:- no raj plzzz tum bhi yahan raho na...(raj is shocked)...

raj:- no naina...main yahan nahi reh sakta...

naina:-plzz raj tum meri itani help nahi kar sakte chahe mujhe wo chuha kha jaye...

raj thinks:- tumhare liye to main apni jaan de sakta hun naina...par...

raj;- dekho naina plzzz stop being a child ab so jao...

raj bahar chala jata hai...aur ja kar late jata hai...yahan naina raj jaha se gaya wahi dekh rahi hai aur uski aankhon se aanshun bhi beh rahe hai...

naina thinks:- mujhe pata hai raj...tum kyun aisa kar rahe ho...yeh sab tum sirf bhaiya ki wajah se...kyuki bhaiya...kyun bhaiya kyun...aapko raj galat dikhta hai jabki...uski to koi galti hai hi nahin...galti to meri hai ki main raj se pyar karti hun...

now naina tent se raj ko dekh rahi hai...
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mujhse hui... bas yeh khata...
maine tujheee...chaha sanammm...

chhup chhup ke roti rahi...
tune diyeee...kaise yeh, gummm...

oh bekhabar...berahamm...
karle..chahe, jitane sitam...

na chahat kabhi hogi kammm...
mujhe in aanshuon ki kasammm...

maine kiya hai...tujhse sachha pyar...
maine kiya hai...tujhse sachha pyar...

(naina apne aur raj ke sath bitaye hue palo me kho jati hai...aur fir anshun pochh kar wapas jakar so jati hai...)

its next morning...

raj ki ankh khulti hai...to use bahut achha mehsoos hota hai kyuki koi soft si cheez uske pass me hi thi...usne pehle dhyan nahi diya par jab achhey se dekkha to to usne ek smile di fir kuchh yaad aaya raj ko aur raj ne dubara dekha to uske hosh hi udd gaye...naina uske bagal me so rahi thi...aur raj ne naina ke hanth ko pakda hua tha...raj ko 440 bolt ka jhatka laga...aur wo uth gaya jisse naina ki bhi ankh khul gayi...

naina:- a... wo raj...

raj(gusse se):-tum yahan kya kar rahi ho...tumhey kaha tha na ander sone ko par tum ho ki...

naina(crying):- kya karti main ha...kitani baar kal kaha...ki mujhe chuhe se darr lagta hai...aur tum ho ki mujhe use chuhe ke pass chhod aye...main kuchh der thi wahan sone ki kosis bhi kar rahi thi par wo chuha wapas aa gaya...to main wahan se bhag aayi...yahan aayi to dekha...tum araam se so rahe the...pehle zameen par yahan so rahi thi main...par rat ko yahan thand lag rahi thi tumhare bagal me jagah khali thi to main so gayi...maine aisa bhi kya kar diya jo tum itana gussa ho rahe ho...

raj:- aa...naina plzz stop crying naina...ok i m sorry...i cant see u in tears...plzzz(now naina looks at raj eyes...)

naina;- kyun raj...kyun nahi dekh sakte tum mere anshun...(now both are looking at eachother eyes...)

raj:- a... wo...wo...kya hai...tum bahut kharab lagti ho rote hue...

naina:- raj u...(starts beating him)

raj;- ok naina... i m sorry achha...ab chale...drill bhi pura karna hai... lekin pehle kuchh kha le...

naina:- ha chalo chalo...

raj:- achha naina...tumhey kya pakana aata hai...(naina bites her lips)kya hua...

naina:-wo...mujhe kuchh pakana nahi aata(embarrased)...

raj;- ohk...its ok tum chai bana lo main phir wo jo hum noodles ke packets laye hai wo paka sakte hai...(now naina is looking down and more embarrased...raj looks at her..)dont tell me ki tumhe chai banana bhi nahi ata...

naina:- chai kya...mujhe to pani bhi ubalna nahi aata( raj is shocked)...

raj:- what...oh god...bechara...

naina:- what do u mean kaun bechara?

raj:- wahi...

naina:- who...?

raj:- wahi miss naina singh jisse tumhari sadi hogi...chalo main hi karta hun...

aur raj naina ko side karke khud pehle aag jala kar chai banata hai then noodles ubalta hai aur naina bade gaur se use dekhti hai aur raj sab kuchh naina ko sikha bhi raha hai...phir dono hi nasta karke kareeb 6:30 am pe apne task ke liye nikal jate hai...beech beech me naina aur raj bhul hi gaye the ki pichhle 4 mahine se jyada time se unke beech kma me kuchh bhi theek nahi chal raha tha...aise hi dono ne milkar apna task bhi pura kiya par they both lost their map...kisi ne unka map chori kar liya...ab problem yeh thi ki wapas rat hone ko aayi thi...aur raj naina bina map ke us short cut raste se nahi ja sakte the...isliye unhone...wahi jis raste se aaye the usi raste se jane ka plan banaya...aur jald se jald wapas we kma pahuchna chahte the...par sayad luck inke sath nahi tha...inko km pahuchne me subah ke 3 baj gaye jo ki unki time limit se bahut late tha...

jab yeh kma pahunche to sab inhe bahut hi cheap nigaho se dekh rahe the...pahle raj ne ignore kiya but bad me jab wo loge major nair se mile...

major nair:- so cadet sekhawat and cadet singh aap dono ka romance agar khatam ho gaya ho to hum drill ki baat kare...(dhamake on raj naina face...)

raj;- sir yeh aap...

major nair:- hold it cadet meri baat abhi khatam nahi hui hai...so aap dono ko jo time limit di gayi thi ap usse pure 7 hrs late pahuche hai...ha aapne apna drill jarur pura kiya...par diye gaye samay se bahut late...main pooch sakta hun kyun...jab aap logon ke pass lautne ke liye short cut raste ka map tha to aap wahi long route lekar kyun aaye...puri rat jungle me kya kar rahe the aap dono...(now its out of limit for raj)

raj:- sir...mind ur languange...humara map kho gaya tha...humare pass wapas aane ke liye aur koi bhi rasta nahi tha ...

major nair:- tum bhul rahe ho cadet ki tumhari is harkat ke liye main abhi tumhe punish kar sakta hun par main aisa nahi karunga...kyuki...(nair smiles with nigativity all over his face...raj ko kuchh saq hua to but wo bahut hi gusse me bhi tha...)aur ha brig sir yahan nahi hai so just go...

raj aur naina main hall ke pass se hote hue wahan se apne room ki taraf badh rahe the kuchh students ab raj naina ko dekhne aa rahe the aur major nair rokne ki wajay tamasha dekh raha tha...tabhi raj ki nazar notice board par lagi kuchh pics pe gayi jise dekhte hi raj ke hosh udd gaye aur jab naina ne wo pics dekhi she was shocked to the core...raj aur naina dono hi wo pics dekh rahe the ki yeh wahi pics thi jo us jungle me kheechi gayi thi...sath me wo pics bhi thi jisme naina raj ke bagal me so rahi hai...jise kuchh had tak morph bhi kiya gaya tha...tabhi raj ke face par kisi ne bahut teji se punch mara...wo koi aur nahin naveen tha jo bahut gusse me tha...

naina;- bhaiyaaa...


end of part 13
plzzz do comment...
with love chandni...
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Edited by rkchandni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi
th up is really good
so raj is avoiding naina which hurts naina
she tries to give him the reasson behind her hiding the truth but raj hurts her
huda who is jealous and wan to win over him creates rift btw naveen and raj
now naveen is against raj and he tries to keep naina away from him
but thew dsrill brings raj and naina closer
rewally feeling bad for raj
naveen should at least talk to him
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update!!!! 👏 👏 👏 Tum ne mujhe one of my fav movie yaad dila di which is Ishk Vishk, I love each and every thing of that movie!!!!!! Alekh is sensible he tries to sort out Raj and Naveen's mus but it's getting out of his hands!!!!!!!! Huda is frustrating and I always wanted to kill him for his behavior n manipulation!!!!! 😡 😡 😡 Poor Raj jaan se bhi gaya and jahan se bhi!!!! 😭 😭 😭 Raj ko na apna luv mil pa rha hai na hi apna frnd ab trust karta hai us ko.😔 😔 😔 I luvd d combined drill plan by Huda is se ye hua ki RN shared some romantic moments!!!!! 😳 😳 😳 But the cheapest is Huda how can he do it with Naina and Raj? 😲 😲 😲 Now Naveen is going to almost kill Raj.🤔 🤔 🤔 Update soon n try to clear their mus!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
fantastic part
raj ne naina ko danta
bechare dono ek dosre se apne feeling chupa rhi h
par kab tak
naveen or raj ke beech bhi misunderstanding creat kr de is huda ne i just hate him
alekh bhi kuch nhi kr pa raha h ab bas 1 month bacha h raj ka academy se jane ka
ye huda nhi shudhrega camp ka plan banaya h taki naina naveen or raj ko humesha ke liye alag kr de how mean yr
camp me raj naina ek dosre ke kareb aa gayi h
par ye pic's kon le raha h jaorur huda he hoga
ye map chori ho gaya raj naina ab kya kare gay
how cheap naina or raj ki pic's kisne laga de
huda huda huda ise ne kiya h sab maan toh kr raha h ki jaan se mar du ise
naveen ne raj ko punch kiya yr ye galat h
bechara raj
par naveen bhi kya kare huda ne uska dimak kharab jo kr diya h uper se wo pic's dekh kr toh koi bhi bhai asa he karega na
i hope jaldi sab thik ho jaye in sab ke bich me
thanks for pm
n very well written
chandni
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is the first time m commenting on your fic...😊
Read all the parts...its great...loved reading your story...

Phir se lrl ke din ki yaad dila di😊

Bechara Rajveer apne feeling ok daba raha hai tasking naveen aur uske friendship affect na

ho...Bhale hi uses kitni bhi taklif ho and udhar naina bhi apne feeling show nhi kar rahi...

Naveen ab pata nahi kya karega...hope so unki beech ki misunderstanding jaldi dur ho..can't see Rajveer suffering..😭
M sure jungle me joh pics le raha tha woh huda hi hoga...how can he stoop so low😡

Please aalekh kuch kar...samjha naveen ko..aisle kaise woh raj par se trust hata sakta hai

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
yar words h nhi is part kelye to kitna kuch nhogaya oh god ye huda na bara hi desh hai me ise chorungi nhi but jungle me raj naina k bich to sb thik hua thats realy good :)naina ko pani bhi ubalna nhi aata 😛😛 bechara raj 😛😛 sb krna parega shadi k bad use 😆😆😆 but ye kya hogaya wapisi me ye maj nair sudhrega nhi ab naveen or raj ki dosti tut jayegi 😭 nice update👏 cont soon😊😊😊
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Thanks alot dear
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Originally posted by: ambersaleem

<font size="6" color="#9933cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">yar words h nhi is part kelye to kitna kuch nhogaya oh god ye huda na bara hi desh hai me ise chorungi nhi but jungle me raj naina k bich to sb thik hua thats realy good :)naina ko pani bhi ubalna nhi aata😛😛bechara raj😛😛sb krna parega shadi k bad use😆😆😆but ye kya hogaya wapisi me ye maj nair sudhrega nhi ab naveen or raj ki dosti tut jayegi😭nice update👏 cont soon😊😊😊</font>




Thank you so.much amber dear

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