Humko tumse pyar hai ~Rajveer Naina~ *completed* Last part on page 51 - Page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: meenuraj97

fantastic part
raj ne naina ko danta
bechare dono ek dosre se apne feeling chupa rhi h
par kab tak
naveen or raj ke beech bhi misunderstanding creat kr de is huda ne i just hate him
alekh bhi kuch nhi kr pa raha h ab bas 1 month bacha h raj ka academy se jane ka
ye huda nhi shudhrega camp ka plan banaya h taki naina naveen or raj ko humesha ke liye alag kr de how mean yr
camp me raj naina ek dosre ke kareb aa gayi h
par ye pic's kon le raha h jaorur huda he hoga
ye map chori ho gaya raj naina ab kya kare gay
how cheap naina or raj ki pic's kisne laga de
huda huda huda ise ne kiya h sab maan toh kr raha h ki jaan se mar du ise
naveen ne raj ko punch kiya yr ye galat h
bechara raj
par naveen bhi kya kare huda ne uska dimak kharab jo kr diya h uper se wo pic's dekh kr toh koi bhi bhai asa he karega na
i hope jaldi sab thik ho jaye in sab ke bich me
thanks for pm
n very well written
chandni






Thanks a lot naina don't worry all will b fine
Par naveen KO b trust Karna chahiye tha

Age sayad achha ho
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Darkchocolate

This is the first time m commenting on your fic...😊

Read all the parts...its great...loved reading your story...

Phir se lrl ke din ki yaad dila di😊

Bechara Rajveer apne feeling ok daba raha hai tasking naveen aur uske friendship affect na

ho...Bhale hi uses kitni bhi taklif ho and udhar naina bhi apne feeling show nhi kar rahi...

Naveen ab pata nahi kya karega...hope so unki beech ki misunderstanding jaldi dur ho..can't see Rajveer suffering..😭
M sure jungle me joh pics le raha tha woh huda hi hoga...how can he stoop so low😡

Please aalekh kuch kar...samjha naveen ko..aisle kaise woh raj par se trust hata sakta hai

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon..😊



Oh thank you so much dear
For reading and commenting on my fix
And plzz do comment further too
I m happy that u r liking my fic
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rinku95

Fantastic
Thanks for pm
Continue soon



Thank you so much dear keep reading
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi
th up is really good
so raj is avoiding naina which hurts naina
she tries to give him the reasson behind her hiding the truth but raj hurts her
huda who is jealous and wan to win over him creates rift btw naveen and raj
now naveen is against raj and he tries to keep naina away from him
but thew dsrill brings raj and naina closer
rewally feeling bad for raj
naveen should at least talk to him
plz cont soon and pm me



Thanx a tom ria
Love ur comments
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

<font color="#0066FF" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Superb
update!!!!👏👏👏 Tum ne mujhe one of my fav movie yaad dila di which is Ishk Vishk, I love each and every thing of that movie!!!!!! </font><font color="#0066FF" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"><font color="#0066FF" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"> </font></font><font color="#0066FF" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"><font color="#0066FF" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"><font color="#0066FF" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"></font></font> Alekh is sensible he tries to sort out Raj and Naveen's mus but it's getting out of his hands!!!!!!!! Huda is frustrating and I always wanted to kill him for his behavior n manipulation!!!!!😡😡😡 Poor Raj jaan se bhi gaya and jahan se
bhi!!!!😭😭😭 Raj ko na apna luv mil pa rha hai na hi apna frnd ab trust karta
hai us ko.😔 </font><font color="#0066FF" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"><font color="#0066FF" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">😔 </font></font><font color="#0066FF" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"><font color="#0066FF" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"><font color="#0066FF" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">😔</font></font> I luvd d combined drill
plan by Huda is se ye hua ki RN shared some romantic moments!!!!!😳😳😳 But
the cheapest is Huda how can he do it with Naina and Raj?😲😲😲 Now Naveen is
going to almost kill Raj.🤔 </font><font color="#0066FF" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"><font color="#0066FF" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">🤔 </font></font><font color="#0066FF" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"><font color="#0066FF" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2"><font color="#0066FF" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">🤔</font></font> Update soon n try to clear their mus!!!!!!</font>



Thanks a lot vartika keep reading
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg gr8 part
Lots of sadness and evil planning
Raj and navneen misunderstanding
Just hate huda
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Omg gr8 part

Lots of sadness and evil planning
Raj and navneen misunderstanding
Just hate huda
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon



Thanx nilu
Keep reading
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey good updates.👏 But I am getting angry over Raj.😡 Raj should not have done that over respond. It's fine if he was feeling that way for Naina he should have shared it with someone instead of andar hi andar ghtuna.🤔 Now see Huda took advantage of the situation n feed Naveen's mind against Raj 😔 and now see the result Naveen is misunderstanding Raj and now after jungle trip these pics mess the whole thing more.😕 Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arpita25

<font color="#9900CC"><font size="2">Hey good updates.👏 But I am getting angry over Raj.😡 Raj should not have done that over respond. It's fine if he was feeling that way for Naina he should have shared it with someone instead of andar hi andar ghtuna.🤔 Now see Huda took advantage of the situation n feed Naveen's mind against Raj😔 and now see the result Naveen is misunderstanding Raj and now after jungle trip these pics mess the whole thing more.😕 Update soon</font></font>



Yes arpita u r rite raj ne galat kiya
But bechara bahut achha insaan kisi k trust KO todna nhi chahta tha
Sab khud rahe uski policy h 😆

Anyways thanks alot
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Posted: 10 years ago
I hate Huda and I hate Naveen. How can Naveen even imagine to be a good soldier when he is so easily tricked. Please yaar...make Raj Naina one. Eagerly wating for next update.

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