Humko tumse pyar hai ~Rajveer Naina~ *completed* Last part on page 51

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wowww nice part aalekh ne neelu ko purpose krdya <3 mr jasus ko samjh agaya k naina or raj ek dusre ko pasand krte hen amazing 😊😊 freshers ball excellent ong and raj,s dance was superb 👏 cont soon 😊

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thanks everyone for liking part 11 keep raeding keep smiling...

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***RN-Humko Tumse Pyar hai***
Part - 11

all were dancing like crazy and naina just looking at them... ya yeh kaha jaye sirf raj ko... now all are having drinks and chit chatting... tabhi huda naina k pass jata hai...

huda:- oye phoolan... kya baat hai... aj to bahut hi jyada soni lag rahi hai aur kya dance karti hai yaar tu... tu us raj k sath kya kar rahi hai tujhe to huda jaise dude ke sath hona chahiye... aur dekh use aaya tere sath hai... aur baat sirf neelu aur shalu se kar raha hai... sala... pata nahi samajhta kya hai khud...

naina;- just shut up huda... aur ha dusro pe ungli uthane se pehle khud ko dekh... aur raj ka comparison khud se mat kar... usme aur tujhme koi mail nahi... aur yeh faltu bakwaas agar tune mujhse dubara ki to i swear... us din raj se maar khaya tha aaj mujhse khayega... (naina turns to go but again turns towards huda) aur ek baat aur... main chahe jitana bhi raj ko bura bhala kahu par koi aur raj ko kuchh kahe yeh mujhey gawara nahi... ( naina gone and huda is shocked from naina's words par in dono ko hi nahin pata tha ki aalekh ne inaki saari baat sun li thi...)

aalekh to him self:- pyar to tujhe ho gaya hai naina... par tu maan nahi rahi hai... chal koi baat nahin... tujhe apni behen mana hai... tujhe aur tere pyar ko mila k hi dam lunga... (tabhi aalekh ki nazar wapas naina aur raj pe padi jo hall k do corners me khade hai) is raj ka kuchh nahi ho sakta... itani khubsurat date ko sath lekar aaya hai... par uske siwa sari duniyaan k liye time hai iske pass... iski to... ( alekh raj k pass jata hai... jo ab akela khada sab ko dekh raha hai...)

aalekh:- abe hatele... tu kab sudhrega...??

raj;- kya bol raha hai...

aalekh:- abe tu pagal hai... naina wahan akele khadi hai... ja na uske pass...

raj:- main kyun jaaun... aur maine to use nahin kaha na ki akeli khadi rahe.. uski marzi chahe jo kare...

aalekh:- kabhi kabhi apun ko lagta hai... jb bhagwan ladki se related baate hum sab k dimaag me daal raha tha tab tu ghash charne chala gaya tha... hai na...

raj:- kya?

aalekh:- kuchh nahi mere baap bus ja aur naina ko comapny de...aur agar tune kaha ki mujhe nahi jana to main abhi tujhe yahin phod dunga...

raj;- ja raha hu... jabse yeh naina aayi hai academy me...kabhi kabhi mujhe doubt hota hai...ki tu aur naveen mere dost ho ya uske...( but aalekh is making a face so raj left to naina... tabhi neelu aalekh k pass aati hai)...

neelu:- tu kar kya raha hai... tu jaan bujhkar raj naina ko...

aalekh:- apna khali dimag jayada mat chala...short circuit ho jayega...chal apun ke sath apun tere ko pyar karna sikhata hai...(aur aalekh neelu ko kheech kar bahar le jata hai...)

raj;- hey naina...wheres ur drink...?

naina:- raj main nahin peeti...u carry on...

raj:- naina tumhe pata hai ki main bhi nahin peeta...but us din to tumne...

naina:- wo galti se hua tha raj...

raj:- ha mujhe pata hai...so tell me aaj mr fresher aur miss fresher kaun ban sakta...

naina:- dont know...koi bhi...jo sabse jyada achha dikh raha hoga...

raj:- to us hisaab se to tum aur main...

naina:- kya...

raj:- ya dekho...we got highest marks 10/10 so it means ki hum hi sabse jyada achhe lag rahe hai...

naina:- but raj how it is possible...i mean u are not a fresher u are a 3yr cadet...

raj:- ya naina i know that...i cant be but tum to ban sakti ho na... and i m damn sure tum hi banogi...waise let me inform u mere fresher balls me main mr fresher tha...

naina:- sach... aur naveen aur aalekh...

raj:- ya they are my toughest competitor...ya after me they got highest marks...

naina:-oh...so tell me us waqt tumhe kitane marks mile the... i mean meter point...

raj:- 10...

naina:- not bad aur aaj bhi 10 chalo lets see dekhte hai...abhi kuchh hi der mein announce ho hi jayega...

raj:- u know aaj jo bhi mr fresher hoga use miss fresher ke sath dance karna hoga...

naina;- kya... but

raj:- ha naina... u r brilliant dancer and singer...

naina:- par tumse kam...

raj:- naaa...

tabhi suriji announced... so puttar ji... ab waqt aa gaya hai... mr fresher aur miss fresher ki announcement ka... aur aaj k mr fresher hai...cadet huda...(naina is muchh disaponted...while all other are clapping for huda...aur huda ka attitude 7ve aashmaan me tha...)aur miss fresher hai...

raj:-naina (naina looks at raj)

suri ji:- cadet naina...oye huda...naina puttar aaja stage pe...

raj naina ko stage pe jane ka ishara karta hai aur huda aur naina jate hai... suri ji un dono ko hi tag pehnate hai now huda and naina dancing...naina is not liking a bit wo bar bar sirf raj ko hi dekh rahi thi...use huda ka yun apne is tarah kareeb aana bilkul bhi achha nahin lag raha tha...huda use touch kare yeh use bilkul pasand nahi tha.. ki tabhi raj ki nazar gate par padi jahan par naveen khada tha...aur naina ki bhi aur wo dance chhod kar naveen ke pass chali gayi aur raj bhi..

huda:- is saale naveen ko bhi abhi hi aana tha... kya dance kar raha tha main phoolan ke sath aur yeh...

raj;- hey naveen welcome dude... ( they both hugs...)

naveen;- raj kaisa hai.. aur party to badi shaan daar chal rahi aur yeh kya naina u r miss fresher...aur huda mr fresher not bad...

naina:- thanks bh...(raj looks at naina...) a naveen... kya bat hai... waise hows ur maa and baba,...

naveen:- wo dono hi bilkul fit hai(naveen assures her) yeh aalekh kaha hai...

raj:- tu chal main sab batata hu... ( aur raj naveen ko lekar chala jata hai... and raj told him about every think jo jo naveen ki absesnce me hua... siwaay uske aur naina ke dance ke...)

naveen(panic):- kya itana sab kuchh ho gaya... aur naina ne pee thi...

raj:- nahin yar usne jaan bujhkar kuchh nahi kiya tha...wo to bas galti se...aur fir maine use uske room me pahucha diya tha...

naveen:- ya its goods... waise where is shalu yar itane din ho gaye use dekha hi nahin...

raj;- yar party to almost khatam hi ho chuki hai... aur waise bhi tu nahi tha to wo bore ho rahi thi isliye apne room me chali gayi hai bahut pehle hi kal mil liyo... aur apna sarabi laga hoga neelu k sath...( both are laughing...) waise ab main bhi bore ho raha hu... room me chale...

naveen:- ha tu ja main abhi aaya...

raj;- ok come soon... shalu k pass bas mat jana...( & raj left)

naina to sam:- sam main room me ja rahi hun... tu chal rahi hai...

sam:- bas 5 mints naina...

naina:- yar i m very tired tu aa jana main jaa rahi hu...

sam:- ok tu jaa... (naina left and naveen follows her)

at garden...
naveen:-naina...

naina;- a ha bhaiya...

naveen:- yeh main kya sun raha hun... tune saraab pee thi,... aur...

naina:- to chugli kar di raj ne...

naveen:- just shut up naina... raj ko kuchh mat bol... wo teri chugli mujhse kyun karega... use to pata bhi nahin hai ki tu meri behen hai... usne to just jo hua meri absence me wo bataya...

naina:- ok bhaiya... i m sorry par maine jaan bujh kar kuchh nahi kiya tha... wo to galti se...

naveen(in half hugging position with naina):- janta hun bachha... par thankgod tere sath raj tha... agar koi aur hota to... dekh naina... har insaan raj jaisa sachha aur achha nahi hota...jo ek nashe me dhut ladki ko sahi salamat uske ghar ya hostel pahuchaye... jo koi galat harkat sapne mein bhi na kare...aur wo bhi us ladki ko jo usse har waqt sirf jhagda karti hai... isliye sirf isiliye maine jaan bujhkar ragging ke bahane tujhe raj ka partner bana kar bheja... kyuki mujhe is duniyaan me sabse jyada bharosha raj pe hai... kyuki mujhe pata hai... ki woh tere sath to kya... kisi bhi ladki k sath koi galat harkat kar hi nahi sakta... tune dekha hi freshers balls me sab ladke kaise harkate karte hai... huda ko hi dekh le... mana ki tu badi ho gayi hai, par main teri parwaah karna nahin chhod sakta...aur mujhe is baat ka pura yakeen hai ki usne tere sath koi galat harkat karne ki kosis bhi nahi ki hogi... hai na?(naina nods in yes with tears) hey tu ro kyun rahi hai... kya kisi ne...

naina;- nahin bhaiya... bas yeh soch rahi hun ki aap raj par kitana vishwaas karte ho... aur yakeen maniye... raj sach me waisa hai jaisa aapne abhi kaha... aapne wakai...is duniyaan ke do sabse dost paaye hai... raj aur aalekh k roop me aur shalu jaisa pyar... u r very lucky bhaiya...

naveen:- i know ab jaa... aur take care ha... ( naina nods and left to her hostel while naveen to his hostel... but dono ko hi nahin pata tha ki kisi ne inn dono ki baatein sunn li thi... wo koi aur nahi raj tha... jo sam ko uska mobile lautane aa raha tha... jo galti se raj ke pass reh gaya tha...)

raj in his mind:- naina naveen ki behen hai... ab samajh me aaya ki yeh naveen aise kyun behave karta tha... aur naveen mujhpe itana trust karta hai... usne apni absence me apni behen ko mere sahare chhod diya... thanks naveen mujhpar itana bharosha karne ke liye... par sayad... no naveen i promise u ki main tera yeh bharosha kabhi nahi todunga... mere dil me agar naina ke liye kuch hai bhi to aaj se wo khatam... ab se naina mere liye sirf teri behen hai...par in dono ne sabse chhipaya kyun ki yeh dono bhai behen hai... pata karna padega...

aur raj apne room me jakar inhi sab baaton ko sochhta hua so jata hai...

naina apne room me khidki pe khadi hai... aur sam so chuki hai... naina ko naveen ki sari baatein yaad aa rahi hai... jo abhi abhi usne raj ke bare kahi thi...

naina in her mind:-kya ho tum raj...mujhe samajh hi nahi aata... kabhi kabhi to tumhari har ada bahut achhi lagti hai... aur kabhi kabhi tumhari harkato par bahut hi jyada gussa aata hai...bhaiya kehte hai ki tumse sachha aur achha insaan unhone nahi dekha...aur mera dil kehta hai ki bhaiya sahi kehte hai... par kyun raj tum sab se achhey se behave karte ho siwaay mere... jab se is academy me aayi hun tumse sirf jhagda kiya hai...aur aaj sabne meri khubsurati ki taarif ki par tumne... tumne ek sabd nahi kaha ki main kaisi lag rag rahi hoon...jabki sirf tumhare compliment ke liye hi to ready hui thi...par nahin tum kyun meri taarif karoge... tumhara ego hurt nahi ho jayega...nahin- nahin aisa raj ne isliye nahi kaha bcz... use to kisi ki theek se taarif karni aati hi nahi...

tabhi naina remembers, to huda:- just shut up huda... aur ha dusro pe ungli uthane se pehle khud ko dekh... aur raj ka comparison khud se mat kar... usme aur tujhme koi mail nahi... aur yeh faltu bakwaas agar tune mujhse dubara ki to i swear... us din raj se maar khaya tha aaj mujhse khayega... (naina turns to go but again turns towards huda) aur ek baat aur...main chahe jitana bhi raj ko bura bhala kahu par koi aur raj ko kuchh kahe yeh mujhey gawara nahi...

naina in her mind:- maine huda ko yeh sab kyun... kyun mujhe itana bura laga tha... jab usne raj ko wo sab kaha to... kahiin aalekh sach to nahi keh raha tha...

again she remembers aalkhe words:-
aalekh:- ha ha pata hai... par tune mujhe to itana bada lecture de diya par tu kab keh rahi hai raj ko...

naina:- kya?

aalekh:- ab natak mat kar... yahi ki tu usse pyar karti hai...

naina:- what... tu pagal ho gaya hai... main aur raj se never... wo to bas... ( but aalekh is smiling..).. what muskura kya raha hai...

aalekh:- chal apun chalta hai neelu k pass... par tu maan ya naa maan... but tere ko wo raj se i love u ho raha hai... ya yeh kahu ho chuka hai...

naina in her mind:- ha mujhe raj achha to lagta hai... kyuki wo sabse alag hai... mujhe bilkul bhi achha nahi lagta jab wo kisi aur ladki k sath hota hai...even jab wo neelu aur sam se bhi baat kar raha tha party me mujhey achha nahi lag raha tha... to kya iska matalab mujhe raj se... oh nooo main pagal ho jaungi... ( tabhi naina ki nazar sam pe padi jo aaram se so rahi thi...wo gayi aur usne sam ko jagaya...)

naina;- sam uth( saking her) sam...( sam hadbada kar uth jati hai...)

sam( rubbing her eyes);- kya hua naina tu abhi tak soyi nahi...

naina:- ha wo mujhse kuchh puchhna hai...

sam:- naina subah ke char baj rahi hai aur tu hai ki tujhe question puchhna hai... tujhe ho kya gaya hai...

naina;- sam plzz sunn na...

sam:- theek hai bol...

naina;- wo kab pata chalta hai ki... ki aap kisi ko pyar karne lage ho...

sam:- kyaaa...

naina;- jab aap kisi k bare me hi sochte raho... usko jitana chahe bura keh lo... par agar koi aur use kuchh kahe to aap se bardast na ho... jab wo sabki tarif kare siwway aapke to aapko achha na lage...jab uske sath rehna aapko achha lage... aur jab aapka...

sam:- aur jab aapka mann kare ki bas aap use dekhte raho...aur aapki zindagi yunhi bas uski baahon me kat jaye...

naina;- haan... tujhey kaise pata...?

sam;- kyuki madam aap jo keh rahi hai... wo tab hota hai jab aapko kisi se pyar ho jaye... aur naina tu maan ya na maan par teri ankhon me dikhta hai ki tu raj se pyar karne lagi hai... main kayi dino se tujhe notice kar rahi hu... tujhe uska sath pasand hai uski har baat pasand hai phir bhi usse ladti rehti hai... ise pyar hi kehte hai naina... aur sach kahu to raj jaisa insaan nahi dekha maine... janti hai pehle main yeh na kehti par.. us din jab wo tujhe yahan chhodne aaya tha na... teri halat bilkul theek nahi thi... uski jagah koi aur hota to sirf tera fayda uthane ka sochta kyuki teri aur uski kuchh khash nahi banti... janti hai us din usne mujhsey kya kaha tha...

raj (smiles and places 1 of his hand on sam's cheek):- u know what sam... main thoda different hun... aur ha who said this i hate naina... ya i dont like her that much just bcz of her bak bak... but main wo koi kaam kabhi nahi kar sakta... jise karne ki gawahi mera zameer mujhe na de... aur ha i m not that kind of guy... jo sirf ladkiyon ko usi nazar se hi dekh sakte hai... aur fayda uthate hai... aur mere liye kisi ladki bahari khubsurati se jyada uske man ki khubsurati mayne rakhti hai... agar naina meri sabse badi dushman bhi hoti na tab bhi main aisa kuchh karne ka uske baare me to kya kisi ke bhi bare me sapne me bhi nahi soch sakta... aur ha tell this dumbo( pointing towards naina)... &keep this in ur stupid mind... i m not a gay... i m only interested in girls... specially my dream girl...

sam;- soch naina koi bhi insaan itana achha nahi ho sakta...isliye apne is dil ki baat maan tujhe usse pyar to ho hi gaya hai... hai na...?(naina is blushing hard and nods in yes) oh my god naina... u r blushing... not bad...ab humare raj jeeju hai hi aise...

naina;- jeeju...

sam;- aur nahi to kya ab tu meri behen jaisi hai... to hue na wo mere jeeju...( winks at naina... aur naina use pillow uthakar use marne lagti hai...) ok ok... ab raj ko bata de ki u love him...

naina;- nahi yar... abhi nahi... mujhe pehle yeh janna hai ki raj mere bare me kya sochta hai...

sam;- yeh bhi sahi hai... take ur time yar abhi to hum sirf 1 year mein hi hai... aur abhi hum raj ko sirf 6 months se hi jante hai to aur jaan le use..(naina nods in yes)... ab agar aapki agya ho to main so jaun... ?

naina;- ha so ja...

sam;- thankgod bc ne suriji ke kehne par aaj ki leave de di... nahi to party ki thakan aur drills apni to band baj jati... good night naina... tu bhi so ja raj ke bare me kal soch lena... ( sam slept... aur naina wapas window ke pass ja kar khadi ho jati hai...)

naina to herself:- nahin sam main to raj ko sirf 6 mahine se janti hun... par bhaiya... wo to raj ko dhai saalon se jante hai... aur unhe raj par apne aap se jyada bharosha hai... tabhi to unhone fresherballs k liye bhi mere liye raj ko chuna...

then she remembers naveen's words(in half hugging position with naina):- janta hun bachha... par thankgod tere sath raj tha... agar koi aur hota to... dekh naina... har insaan raj jaisa sachha aur achha nahi hota...jo ek nashe me dhut ladki ko sahi salamat uske ghar ya hostel pahuchaye... jo koi galat harkat sapne mein bhi na kare...aur wo bhi us ladki ko jo usse har waqt sirf jhagda karti hai... isliye sirf isiliye maine jaan bujhkar ragging ke bahane tujhe raj ka partner bana kar bheja... kyuki mujhe is duniyaan me sabse jyada bharosha raj pe hai... kyuki mujhe pata hai... ki woh tere sath to kya... kisi bhi ladki k sath koi galat harkat kar hi nahi sakta... tune dekha hi freshers balls me sab ladke kaise harkate karte hai... huda ko hi dekh le... mana ki tu badi ho gayi hai, par main teri parwaah karna nahin chhod sakta...aur mujhe is baat ka pura yakeen hai ki usne tere sath koi galat harkat karne ki kosis bhi nahi ki hogi... hai na?

naina to herself:- bhaiya raj se milne se pehle main pyar par vishwaas tak nahin karti thi... par ab main pyar karne lagi hu rajse...se oh god i m in love with rajveer... no no not rajveer...and not raj for me... he is veer for me...only for me i love u veer...aur ab main tumhari dream girl ban kar dikhaungi... ( naina smiles herself aur jakar so jati hai...)

end of part 11
plzzz do comment...
with love chandni...
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nilusoni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

awesome part loved it

raj and naina in fresher's ball wow

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nilusoni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

amazing part

naina realisation and raj's feelings

excited for next part

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Arti Gupta

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Posted: 10 years ago

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nice part
naina ko realised ho gaya ki wo raj se pyaar krti h or ab wo use dil he dil me veer bula rhi h
naina or sam ka conversation wala part bohat acha h
raj ne naina ko ek bhi compliment nhi diya jabki naina sirf raj ke liye he ready hue thi
finally raj ko pta chal gaya ki naina naveen ki bahen h or wo ye jana chahra h ki ye bt kyu nhi btayi naveen ne usse
ab raj ne decide kiya h ki wo apne jo bhi feeling h naina ki liye usse bhul jayega ye toh kahani me twist aa gaya ab kya hoga naina pyaar me pad gayi raj ke
or raj h ki dur bhagne ki souch raha h
lets see aa gay kya hota h
waiting for next update
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rinku95

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Superb
Finally naina realize
Hope raj does it soon
Thanks for pm
Continue soon

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rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

thankyou so muchh every reader for liking and commenting on my fic...keep reading...and keep smiling always...

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rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

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***RN-Humko Tumse Pyar hai***

Part - 12

naina to herself:- bhaiya raj se milne se pehle main pyar par vishwaas tak nahin karti thi... par ab main pyar karne lagi hu rajse...se oh god i m in love with rajveer... no no not rajveer...and not raj for me... he is veer for me...only for me i love u veer...aur ab main tumhari dream girl ban kar dikhaungi... ( naina smiles herself aur jakar so jati hai...)

next day at mess...

sabhi loge baithe hue hai aur kal ki party aur masti k bare me discuss kar rahe hai... shalu naveen ko dekhkar bahut khush hai... but raj apne hi khayalo me khoya hua coffee pee raha tha...tabhi naina aati hai aur unn sab k sath baith kar baatein karne lagti hai...raj ne ek nazar naina ko dekha fir wapas apne khayalo me kho gaya naina ne notice bhi kiya aur sam ko elbow se hit kiya to sam ne puchha...

sam:- hey raj kya hua tum kaha khoye hue ho...

raj:- no sam nothing...

shalu:- kya baat hai raj main subah se notice kar rahi hun tera dhyaan kahin aur hai...

raj:- nahin shalu aisa kuchh nahi hai...i m fine bas apne future ke bare me soch raha hu...

aalekh:- future...?

raj:- ha yar ab bas 6 months ke baad hum sab officers ban jayeinge...sab alag alag ho jayeinge pata nahi kaha posted homge... (naina ka face utar jata hai)

naveen:- ha yar yeh to hai i wish main tu aur aalekh sab sath me hi kahin posted ho...(raj looks at naveen and then turns his face...)...

raj:-aalekh wo main ja raha hun...

aalekh:- kaha?

raj:-wo kuchh din baad main delhi ja raha hun...mom ne bulaya hai kuchh kam hai sayad...

shalu:- oh bc ne permission dedi?

raj:- ha aaj subah hi bat ki thi aur unhone 3 din ki leave di hai...

naveen:- achha tu ja kab raha hai..?

raj( rudely):- 2 din baad...(naveen naina, & aalekh all sence that some thing is wrong with him...)

huda :- achha hai... i mean tu ja raha hai to wapas aate waqt kuchh khane ko lana yar...i mean ghar ka maa kre hanthon ka...

sam:- tujhe khane k siwa kuchh sujhta hai...abhi naveen lekar to aya hai...

huda:- to jyada aa jayega to kya problem hai tujhe...

sam;- mujhe koi peoblem nahi hai par tu kha - kha kar mota ho raha hai huda...

shalu;- are bas karo jab dekho ladte rehte ho...main to chali sone...kal se fir left right left suru ho jayega...

sam:- main bhi...

huda:- main bhi,...

sam:- tu kyun?

huda:- agar tu ja sakti hai to huda kyun nahi aur waise bhi sona to apna janmsidh adhikar hai...main to chala...

aalekh:- nautanki...( all are left there are only raj naina naveen and aalekh... raj bhi uth kar jane lagta hai tabhi naveen held his hand)

naveen:- kya baat hai kya chhipa raha hai...(raj firstly looks at naina then naveen)...

raj:- main kaun hota hun tujhse kuchh chhipane wala...

naveen:- dekh raj natak mat kar... tere chehre pe saaf saaf likha hai ki tujhe kuchh problm hai...

raj( apna hanth jhatakte hue):- ha hain... par tujhe kyun bataun ha...

aalekh;- raj tera dimaag khisak gaya hai kya...

raj:- kuchh aisa hi samajh...( raj wahan se jane lagta hai ki naveen again uska hanth pakad kar rokta hai...)

naveen:- dekh raj... main tujhse sorry to kabhi nahi kahunga agar maine koi galati ki hai to...bcz tu hi kehta hai na jahan pyar ho wahan thankyou aur sorry nahi hota...bata na raj kya baat hai...

raj( with red eyes looking at naveen's ):- agar tu mujhse bate chhipa sakta hai to main kyun nahi...

naveen:- maine tujhse kya chhipaya raj...?main tujhse kabhi kuchh chhipa sakta hun kya...?

raj:- dont do this to me naveen...ha...agar aisi hi bat thi naveen...to tu sabse pehle mujhe batata ki naina teri behen hai...(naveen naina and aalekh were shocked)...

naina:- raj isme bhaiya...

raj:- plzz cadet singh...aap is maamle se door hi rahiye...kahin main kuchh aisa na keh doon ki apke bhai ko bura lag jaye...( tears appears in naian's eyes but she controlled)

aalekh:- raj...plzz aise kyun behave kar raha hai...mana ki naveen ne hume nahin bataya tha par...

raj:- its ok aalekh...main kisi ka lagta hi kya hoon...(to naveen) tune sahi nahin kiya naveen...agar tu mujhe yeh bata deta to aaj wo nahi hota jo...khair..main chalta hun mujhse kuchh kam hai...(raj left)

aalekh:- naveen...

naveen:- dekha aalekh tune... mujhe pata tha aisa kuchh jarur hoga...isliye maine naina tujhse kaha tha mat kar aisa...baki sab tak to theek tha yahan tak ki brig tak bhi mujhe koi problem nahi thi but raj...ab main kya karu aalekh...he hurts...

aalekh:- abe saale janta to hai use...jab use gussa ata hai to wo kisi ki bhi nahi sunta...aur abhi tu usse baat na hi kar to behtar hoga...even abhi kya jab wo apne ghar se wapas aa jaye tab baat karna...uska gussa bahut dangerous hai...isliye...samajh raha hai na...(naveen nods in yes)...aur apun ko pura yakeen hai...ek baar uska gussa utar jaye wo khud tere bina nahi reh payega...sala tere bina shopping to kar nahi sakta...yahan tak ki ladki tak pata nahi sakta...door kya rahega,...(naveen smiles)...aur waise bhi(now looking at naina with naughty smile)uske pyar aur saadi ki gadi teri manzuri ke bina thode na aage badhegi...(naina is muchh shocked with statement of aalekh...)...

naveen:- matalab...

aalekh:- are mere kehne ka matalab yeh hai ki wo humehsa teri hi rai lega...akhir u have a special place in his heart na...to...

naveen:- ha wo to hai...achha main room me ja raha hun...dekhun to sala kar kya raha hai...(and naveen left)

naina:- a ah main bhi ja rahi hun...

aalekh:- ruk...apun ko pata hai... abhi apun ne jo kaha uska matalab tu samajh gayi hai...naina naveen ki tarah tu meri bhi behen hai...aur yakeen maan...tune is duniyaan ke sabse achhe ladke se pyar kiya hai...aur ha agar yeh ullu naveen diya lekar bhi dhundega na,to raj jaisa nahin dhundh payega tere liye...

naina:- thanks aalekh for supporting me...par yeh raj ko kya hua yar...itani chhoti si baat pe aise kyun react kar raha hai...

aalekh thinks:- apun ko sayad pata hai naina ki raj aise kyun react kar raha tha...par abhi apun ko khud raj se clear karna hoga...tab tak apun kuchh nahi kar sakta...

aalekh to naina:- are chhod na hota hai...ab naveen raj ke itana kareeb hai aur usne usse itani badi baat chhipayi to bas chhid gaya hai...dont worry do char din me theek ho jayega...chal ab apun bhi chalta hai..

aur naina aur aalekh bhi chale jaate hai par in dono ko hi nahin pata tha ki koi inaki baat sun raha tha...aur uski ankh me sirf nafarat thi ya yeh kaha jaye jalan ki aag thi...wo koi aur nahi huda tha jo bahut der se in sab ki baat sunn raha tha...

huda thinks:- iska matalab phoolan us raj se pyar...nahi kabhi nahi raj...huda tujhe jeetne nahi dunga...phoolan sirf huda ki hogi...aur ab huda ko uska mohra bhi mil gaya hai jo huda ke bahut kaam aayega...wo koi aur nahi phoolan tera bhai naveen hoga...raj tu to ab gaya...tune huda se dusmani kark bahut galat kiya...ab dekh main kya karta hun tere sath...

aur yahan naveena raj se bat karne ki kosis kar raha tha par raj nahin maan raha tha...thak haar ke naveen bhi chup chap apne kaam me lag gaya...wahan ab aur koi confusion create na ho isliye naina ne sam aur shalu ko khud hi bata diya ki wo naveen ki behen hai jahan sam shocked thi wahi shalu bas mushkura rahi thi...aise hi din beet gaya agle do din bahut hi hectic the...after long 4 days of holidays aur masti ke major nair ne sabhi ki jamk left right left karayi...sab ki drills almost double thi... aur in do dino me raj ki baat na naina se hui aur na hi naveen se... dono ko hi pata tha ki raj ab bhi naraz hai unse...

aaj raj delhi aa gaya hai aur apne ghar me hai...wahi naveen, aalekh aur naina 3no hi raj ke karan udaas hai...raj ki haalat bhi kuchh kam kharab nahi hai yeh baat sabhi ne ghar pe notice ki hai...wo bahut bujha bujha sa tha...aur bina kisi wajah k uska yun ghar aana veena ko kuchh sahi nahi lag raha tha...

rat ka waqt hai aur raj apni window ke pass khada hai...aur chand ko dekh raha hai...

raj thinks:- kyun...kyun main aise behave kar raha hun...kyun main usse door bhag raha hun...bina kisi wajah ghar aa gaya...taki un dono ka samna na karna pade...uss din maine naveen pe itana gussa kiya...jabki asli gunhegaar to main tha...kyun, kyun raj kyun...yeh kya ho raha hai mujhe...kyun bas uska chehra meri aankhon ke saamne ghumta rehta hai...(tabhi ayaan aata hai..)

ayaan:- bhaiya...(but raj is not responding)...bhaiya...bhaiya...(now ayaan shakes him hard)...bahiyaaa...

raj( hadbada kar);- ha kya hua...kya hua...

ayaan;- wahi to main aapse kab se puchh raha hun...ki aapko kya hua hai...

raj;- mujhe kya hona hai ayaan...( aur raj jakar apne bed par baith jata hai...aur phir ayaan bhi...)aja mere sath soja...

ayaan:- wo to main sounga hi...par agar use problem hui to...

raj;- use kise...?

ayaan:- are wahi...

raj:- ayaan...bhala kise problem hogi agar mera bachha mere sath soyega to...( hugs ayaan by 1 side and both are now lying on the bed in sitting position)...

ayaan.:- usi ko jiske baare me aap tab se soch rahe ho jabse yahan aaye ho...

raj;- kya...kya bakwaas kar raha hai...

ayaan:- bhaiya aap mujhe bachha mat samjho...sab samajhta hun main...apko aaye hue 2 din hone ko aaye hai...aur aap parso jaa bhi rahe ho...lekin almost in 2 dino me aapne kisi se bhi pehle jaise baat nahi ki...tai to yeh bhi keh rahi thi ki aap par kisi chudail ka saya bas gaya hai aapki nazar utarni chahiye...( now raj remembers abt naina bcz ek waqt tha jab wo khud naina ko chudail kehta tha...)bhaiya...lo phir kho gaye...

raj:- ha kya hai...aur aisa kuchh nahi hai... main naina k bare me bilkul nahi soch raha.. tu bhi na...

ayaan(smiling):- bhaiya yeh naina kaun hai?(raj bites his lips)...

raj:- are koi nahi...

ayaan:- chalo manoge to nahi...par aapko us chudail se pyar ho gaya hai(dhamake on raj's face )...aur ha chudail ka naam to bahut achha hai...naina...the chudail...

raj;- chup mere baap aisa kuchh nahi hai...mujhe us chudail se pyar kabhi nahi ho sakta...aur sahi kaha tune wo 1 no ki chudail hai...ab soja...aur khabardaar jo kisi ko bhi kaha to uske bare me...

ayaan(with naughty smile):- kiske baare me?(now raj give a deadly look to ayaan)...oh ok main ab chudail ka naam bhi nahi lunga...

raj;- good boy...(and both slept in each other arms)...

veena muskurate hue apne kamre me jati hai tabhi vikash puchhta hai...

vikash:- kya baat hai veena...itana mushkura kyun rahi ho...

veena;- baat hi kuchh aisi hai...

vikash:- are hume bhi to bataiye ki humari itani khubsurat biwi itana mushkura kyun rahi hai...kahin koikhush khabri to nahi...(vikash winks at veena)

veena:- kya aap bhi is umara me kaisi baatein karte hai...aur aap sayad bhul rahe hai ki ab humare dada dadi banne ki umra ho gayi hai...apka beta 24 baras ka ho raha hai...

vikash:- ha wo to hai...par tum itana mushkura kyun rahi ho...

veena;- are wo main na jab raj aur ayaan ko dudh dene gayi na tab...(then veena told him was she heard at the door of raj's room..)

vikash:- yeh to bahut galat baat hai...tum chhip kar apne bete ki love story sunti ho...

veena;- are maine jaan bujhkar thodi na suna...par jo ayaan ne kaha...mere mann mein bhi wo baat aayi thi...but raj ne hadbadi me khud keh diya ki wo kisi naina ke bare me nahi soch raha tha...iska matalab...uski zindagi mein koi naina naam ki ladki hai...jiske baare me wo sochta hai...main to bas yahi dua kar rahi hun...ki wo ladki bhi mere raj ko chahti ho aur mera raj jald se jald use yahan meri bahu bana kar le aaye...

vikash:- ohhh...control veena...abhi waqt hai...abhi sabra karo...mujhe humare bete aur tumhare diye hue sanskaro pe poora yakeen hai ki raj koi bhi galat kaam nahi karega...aur waqt aane pe wo khud hume uss ladki ke bare me batayega...

veena:- par...

vikash:- kya par...

veena:- us chandra mukhi ka kya...raj ne abhi tak uske bare me kuchh nahi bataya...chudail ke bare me na sahi par is chandra mukhi ke bare me main raj se jarur puchhungi...

vikash:- chudail...ab yeh chudail kaun hai...(now she bites her lips)...

veena:- wo raj naina ko chudail keh raha tha...

vikash:- hey bhagwaan is ladke ka kya hoga...jis ladki ko pyar karta hai use chudail kehta hai...kitna pyara naam diya hai...veena kahin yeh naina sach much chudail jaise to nahin dikhti...

veena:- kya aap bhi...mera raj inaa sona hai...wo apne liye koi soni kudi hi dundega...chaliye ab so jaiye...

dusri taraf naina ki restlessness badhti hi jaa rahi hai...use kuchh bhi achha nahi lag raha hai raj ke bina...aur isliye sam use khub tease bhi karti hai par naina hai ki wo bas ab raj se milna chahti hai...ab naina ko do hi dino me ehsaas ho gaya hai ki wo raj ko kitana chahne lagi hai...aur huda uske dimaag me bas raj ko sabak sikhane ka plan chal raha hai...aur naveen yeh soch raha hai ki wo raj ko kaise manaye...

next day...afternoon...

sabhi cadets ki drill chal rahi hai...aur huda ki nazar bas naina par hai...aur dusri taraf aalekh yeh notice bhi kar raha hai...uska mann huda ko 2 4 dene ko kar raha hai...sam ne bhi notice kiya hai ki huda ka behaviour pichhle 3 dino se kuchh azeeb sa ho gaya tha...but she ignored...naina ka mann to nahin lag raha tha par aalekh ne use bata diya hai ki raj kal subah tak aa jayega...isliye naina bahut khush hai...

yahan raj apni family ke sath lunch kar raha tha...aur yunhi kuchh batein chal rahi thi...

santa tai:- le raj puttar yeh palak paneer to le...maine tere liye khas ghee dal kar banai hai...kha na...kitana dubla ho gaya hai... wo khasmanukhaniye...kma wale tujhe khane ko nahi dete kya...

raj;- aisa nahi hai tai...main bilkul fit hun...aur kma me bhi khane ko milta hai...

vikash:- to raj...ab to bas 6 mahine aur ha...then u will be my proud soldier...

raj:- yes dad and its just bcz of u and mom...

vikash:- nahi bete jo kiya hai...apne apni mehnat se kiya hai...aur humein us din bahut garv hoga jab aap bahut bade sipahi baneing...

raj;- ya ofcrs dad...

ayaan;- dad main bhi...kma jaunga bada hokar...aur raj bhaiya jaise uniform pehnunga...

raj;- yeh hui na baat meri jaan...( he kissed on his forhead)...mom aapko kya hua?

veena:- raj us chandramukhi ka kya hua...kahin wo jo keh rahi thi...( raj choks his food) are sambhal ke beta...

santa tai:- ha ha bol kahin tu sachmuch to baap...

raj:- kya tai aap bhi... aur mom maine kaha tha kisi ne mujhse badla lene k liye mazak kiya tha...aur ab aap loge bhul jao yar...koi chandramukhi nahi hai...

ayaan wishpers in raj's ears:- aur chudail?

raj:- chup be...

veena:- kya...

raj:- kuchh nahi mom...ah mom wo main kal early morning 4 baje ki flight se hi chal jaunga...bcz mujhe subah report karna hai...to aap meri packing kar dena...

veena;- ok beta...aur ha maine bahut sara nasta banwaya hai specially aalekh aur naveen ke liye ha...unko achhe se khilanaa...

raj:- ji mom...

now its next day...raj on flight...

raj thinks:- kash - kash naveen ne mujhe naina ke baare mein bata diya hota to...why naveen...ab main kya karu...kaise kahu main naveen ko ki... naveen maine tera bharosha tod diya...apni jis behen ko tu mere sahare chhod kar gaya tha...mujhe usi se pyar ho gaya hai...ha sahi kaha ayaan ne i m in love with naina...bahut pyar karta hun tumse... par kaise aur kyun hua mujhe naina se pyar...kyuki wo bilkul bhi waisi nahin hai jaisi ladki ke sapne maine dekhe the...ha she is beautiful par...par ab kya ho to gaya hai...par kya naina bhi...nahin kya fark padta hai...main apne aap se wada karta hun kabhi kisi ko pata nahi chalega ki main naina se pyar karta hu...main tera bharosha kabhi nahi todunga naveen...mujhe manf karde yar us din apna gussa maine tujh par nikal diya tha...par now i m sure mujhe kya karna...mujhe bas ab naina se door rehna hai...

raj ki flight land karti hai aur fir wo local bus lekar ambala pahuchta hai...now he is standing on KMA's main gate...

end of part 12

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with love chandni...

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