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rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: ambersaleem
part 16
raj ki posting bhi same jagah sab ek sath hogaye itne arse bad intresting lakin ye raj k behavior ko kya hogaya hai isko bola na naina se thik se bat karle or naveen se bhi bat karke apni sari galat fehmiyan door karde ufff naina ko bhi galat fehmi k raj ishani se pyar karta hai allah aqal de in logo ko pyar karte hain magar kahenge nhi bus yar ab jaldi se milado in dono ko mjhe naina raj k cute si fight dekhni hai or romance bhi can,t w8 plzzz jaldi thik karo sub nice part👏👏

thanks amber...😊😊😊

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 10 years ago

#192

Awesome update!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 Sorry for reading and replying late. Actually I didn't know that you have updated it. Gud plan by Sam & Naina.👏 👏 👏 Both gals made Huda realised his mistake n now I think Huda can help to unite them but first of all ishani n Naina have got the same posting.😉 😉 😉 Let's see what happens next.😕 😕 😕 Gud work by u that u didn't show Naveen, Alekh n Raj's reunion at Bus stop and stretched it over years otherwise it would have been so easy.😛 😛 😛 Raj reached KMA at wrong timing.🤔 🤔 🤔 He misunderstood the situation that Naina loves Huda which is impossible.😳 😳 😳 But I love the way Naina gave a lesson to Huda and his mother supported Naina as well which is rare in India when it comes to boys.😉 😉 😉 It's better that Huda sudhar gaya.😆 😆 😆 Ishani was right that Naina loves him but I knew some where that Ishani would start loving him as well.😒 😒 😒 Huda ab Sam ko chahta hai oho this man.😛 😛 😛 I just don't want Ishani to do something bad with Naina.

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 10 years ago

#193

Nice one!!!!! Raj was shocked to know that he is now going to do a mission with Naveen, Naina. Naina n Raj both of them are miss understanding each other but I am sure saath kaam karne se un ki dooriyan khatam ho jayengi. Raj was rude with Naina but I didn't find it rude in case of Naveen as it was expected Naveen has hurt him a lot. Lo ab a great mu has created in Naina's mind about Raj and Ishani's relation. Raj was very professional about his mission when he explained it to his team members. Update soon

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yoginisahakari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#194

Hi chandni

Excellent storyline 🤣 d
Mindblowing writing
Aur kya kahu
Just finished reading the whole fix.
L juldi update Karo
Waiting to read what happens next
PM me when u update next
Love and prayer
Yogini

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Vishaka Sanjana

@Sanjana4Rajeev

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Posted: 10 years ago

#195

Loving how the story is progressing so far yaar..

It is really amazing..

The journey how Raj-Naina nok-jhok and their individual realization towards their feelings but sadly neither Naina knows that Raj loves her, same goes for Raj that Naina loves him..Kaash tum aisa kuch chamatkaar karo ki dono ek doosre ko apne dil ke baat bataye..aur jaldi yeh bhi hoga...

Please continue soon yaar..😳

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rkchandni

@rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha
Awesome update!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 Sorry for reading and replying late. Actually I didn't know that you have updated it. Gud plan by Sam & Naina.👏 👏 👏 Both gals made Huda realised his mistake n now I think Huda can help to unite them but first of all ishani n Naina have got the same posting.😉 😉 😉 Let's see what happens next.😕 😕 😕 Gud work by u that u didn't show Naveen, Alekh n Raj's reunion at Bus stop and stretched it over years otherwise it would have been so easy.😛 😛 😛 Raj reached KMA at wrong timing.🤔 🤔 🤔 He misunderstood the situation that Naina loves Huda which is impossible.😳 😳 😳 But I love the way Naina gave a lesson to Huda and his mother supported Naina as well which is rare in India when it comes to boys.😉 😉 😉 It's better that Huda sudhar gaya.😆 😆 😆 Ishani was right that Naina loves him but I knew some where that Ishani would start loving him as well.😒 😒 😒 Huda ab Sam ko chahta hai oho this man.😛 😛 😛 I just don't want Ishani to do something bad with Naina.

thankyou so muchh vartika...😊

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rkchandni

@rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha
Nice one!!!!! Raj was shocked to know that he is now going to do a mission with Naveen, Naina. Naina n Raj both of them are miss understanding each other but I am sure saath kaam karne se un ki dooriyan khatam ho jayengi. Raj was rude with Naina but I didn't find it rude in case of Naveen as it was expected Naveen has hurt him a lot. Lo ab a great mu has created in Naina's mind about Raj and Ishani's relation. Raj was very professional about his mission when he explained it to his team members. Update soon

yes vartika aakhir he is rajveer the best...thankyou so muchh😊

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rkchandni

@rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari
Hi chandni

Excellent storyline 🤣 d
Mindblowing writing
Aur kya kahu
Just finished reading the whole fix.
L juldi update Karo
Waiting to read what happens next
PM me when u update next
Love and prayer
Yogini

oh great u read all parts in suchh a short time...

thanks for taking interest...

keep reading...

keep smiling...😊

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rkchandni

@rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: Sanjana4Rajeev
Loving how the story is progressing so far yaar..
It is really amazing..
The journey how Raj-Naina nok-jhok and their individual realization towards their feelings but sadly neither Naina knows that Raj loves her, same goes for Raj that Naina loves him..Kaash tum aisa kuch chamatkaar karo ki dono ek doosre ko apne dil ke baat bataye..aur jaldi yeh bhi hoga...
Please continue soon yaar..😳

thanks...vishakha...ya i will try my best to keep raj naina together...

thanks a ton... updating in a while😊😊😊

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rkchandni

@rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#200

***RN-Humko Tumse Pyar hai***

Part - 17

naina:- veerrr...

raj:- nainaa...

naveens' room...

naveen in his mind ;- aaj raj ne mujhse baat tak nahin ki...kya aaj bhi wo mujhse itana naraz hai ki...hoga hi akhir maine bahut badi galti ki thi...par nahin...mujhe ab raj aur anpe beech ki saari galat fehmiyaan door karni hi hogi...i have to do this...mujhe maf karde raj...i m really sorry...ha main ab jald se jald sab theek karunga...and i promise u naina main tujhe tera pyar lautaunga...mujhe nahi pata ki raj naina se pyar karta hai ya nahin...par main kosis jarur karunga naina...aur raj tu kitana badal gaya hai...abe saale tu to mushkurana hi bhool gaya yar...par ab main apne aap se wada karta hu...ki main tujhe mera purana raj bana kar hi rahunga...thankyou bhagwaan ji 2 saal baad hi sahi par ab yeh millan operartion bhi kamiyaab hoga aur wo operation bhi...kyuki ab main yeh karke rahunga...kyuki ab mera raj bhi mere sath hoga...(with smile he slept)...

raj's room...

aalekh:- tune mujhe bulaya tha...

raj:- maine tujhe 2 ghante pehle bulaya tha...kahan tha ab tak...

aalekh:- aisa hai...salo tum dono apun ko kat kar aadha-aadha baant lo...(raj looks at aalekh with pain)..dekh raj main janta hoon ki tu aur naveen...

raj:-mujhe uske bare me koi baat nahi karni...

aalekh:- achha sach mein... to kha meri kasam aur bol ki tu nahi chahta ki tu aur naveen ek ho jaye...bol ki tu nahin chahta ki humari dosti pehle jaise ho jaye...bol raj bol...dekh raj...mana ki naveen ki galti thi...par ab use uski galati ka ehsaas hai...wo tujhse baat karna chahta tha par...

raj;- par mujhe usse koi baat karni...wo ab mera dost nahin hai...wo sirf mera ek fellow officer hai thats it...

aalekh:- raj tu badal gaya hai...tu puri tarah badal gaya hai...tab usne galati ki thi aur aaj tu galti kar raha hai...mujhe pata hai uski aankhon se pata chalata hai ki wo tujhse sorry bolna chahta hai...

raj( shouts):- kya hoga..kya hoga uske sirf 1 sorry bolne se haan...mere wo 2 saal wapas aa jayeinge jo maine tum dono ke bagair guzare...meri kadvi yaadien mit payeingi jo naveen ki den hai...mujhe pyar mil payega...nahi kabhi nahi...tujhe pata aalekh ki kitani takleef hoti hai jab aap pane pyar ko kisi aur ki baahon me dekhte ho...

aalekh:- yeh tu kya keh raha hai...naina...dekh raj...apun ko pura yakeen hai ki tujhe koi galat fehmi hui hai...naina to...

raj:- nahin koi galat fehmi nahi hai mujhe...kano suni baat galat ho sakti hai par ankhon dekhi baat nahi aalekh...maine use khud use huda ke sath dekha...agar naveen yeh sab nahin karta to sayad maine naina ko apne dil ki baat keh di hoti...ha main manta hoon ki pehle main use naveen ki behen samajh kar door bhagta tha...par der saver main apne dil ki baat usse keh pata par nahin aisa kuchh nahi hua...just bcz of naveen...par mujhe naina se kois sikayat nahi hai...wo khush hai mere liye itana hi kafi hai...mere sath na sahi huda ke sath hii...par afsos is baat ka hai,...ki naveen ne mera yakeeen nahin kiya na sahi...par usne apni behen ka bhi yakeen nahi kiya...

aalekh:- aisa kya dekha tune...apun ko bata kya dekha tune aisa...

then raj told him about naina and huda's confrontation...

naina:- huda...achha yeh bata...ki tu mujhe kitana pyar karta hai...

huda:- oye phoolan...tu aise kyun pooch rahi hai...huda to tujhse is duniyaan me sabse jyada pyar karta hai...

naina:- are wo to main bas...ab jab tu mujhse saadi karega to...itana to main poochh hi sakti hun na...

huda:- oye hoye...ki bola tune...soniye...

naina:- ha huda...tu hi kuchh din pehle keh raha tha ki tu mujhe apni mummy ji milana chahata hai...unhe dikhana chahata hai ki...unke bete ne unke liye kitani achhi bahu pasand ki hai...

huda(hugs naina):- oye phoolan...main tujhse bahut pyaar karta hun yaar...sabse jayada...aur tune aaj yeh sab keh kar to meri life bana di...aur ha tu chinta mat kar...main tujhe palko pe bitha kar rakhunga...tere liye is huda ki jaan bhi haazir hai...i love you yaarrr...tune mujhse sadi ke liye haan kar diya...i m tooo happy...

...

aalekh:- kya par naina aisa kaise...

raj:- kyun nahi aakhir wo dono ek dusre ko chahte hai...

aalekh in his mind:- kuchh to gadbad hai...sala apun ko naina se is matter pe baat karni hi hogi...

aalekh:- dekh raj...apun bas itana chahta hai..ek baar kosis kar naveen se baat karne ke liye...plzzz yar...humari purani dosti ke khatir yar...(raj nods in yes and aalekh left)...

aise hi 3 - 4 din beet gaye we sab apne mission me bahut busy ho gaye...raj aur naveen dono ko hi ek dusre se baat karne ka mauka hi nahi mila...par ali aur armaan ne naveen se puchha ki problem kya hai unke beech to naveen ne unhe sirf itana bataya ki we sab kma me best frnds the par naveen ki hi galti se wo sab aaj alag ho gaye hai...isliye raj usse naraz hai to ali ne naveen ko raj ko manane ko kaha... in kuchh dino me ab ali aur armaan ki bhi bonding achhi ho gayi hai sabse now ali calls raj by his name i.e. rajveer bhai...in beete dino me bhi raj aur naina ki koi khas baat nahi hui...wo sirf ek dusre ko morning wish karte aur sirf mission ki baat hi karte the...

today was sunday..isliye sabhi bas unhi casual me mess me baithe hai...it was noon...and they all having their lunch...

armaan:- hey guys lets play a game...

ishaani:- woo great...(par naina jane lagti hai..)hey naina where are u going...common yar shit na...

naina:- nahin mujhe koi game nahi khelna hai...tum loge khelo...

ali:- kya naina...atleast baith to jaiye...

naina;- no ali actully...

ali:- rajveer bhai aap hi kuchh kahiye na..(raj and naina looks at each other)

rajveer:- sab itana keh rahe hai to baith jaao...(naina sits)

armaan:- hey common lets play...truth and dare...(and armaan winks at aalekh)

aalekh:- ha ha chalo...achha idea hai...

sabhi game khelna start karte hai par raj aur naina dono ka hi mann nahi lag raha tha...tabhi aalekh naveen ko raj ki taraf kuchhh ishara karta hai...par bottle naina ki taraf aati hai...

armaan:- hey its naina's turn...telll me naina kya truth or dare...

naina thinks:- (naina looks at aalekh jiske chehre par ek badi si smile thi...)nahin naina kuchh gadabad hai aalekh aise kyun dekh raha hai...hmmm dare hi lele warna yeh aalekh mujhe fasayega...veer bhi yahi hai...kuchh gadabad ho gayi to...

naveen:- bol naina kya hua...(raj looks at naina)

naina:- dare...

aalekh:-kya dare apun ko laga tu truth legi...

naina:- kyun mere dare lene me ban hai...

aalekh:- achha kya karaya jaye tujhse...(now naveen looks at naina then raj...and with smile...)

naveen:- naina...kuchh suna de...koi sayari ya kuchh bhi...

naina:- kya...mujhe koi sayari thode aati hai...

armaan:- are tum picture nahi dekhti kya koi gana hi suna do...

naina:- no way...

ishaani:- plzzz naina...

naina:- ok...(naina looks at raj who was looking down...)

aahhhaahahaaa...aahhhaahhh

aahhhaahahaa...aaahhhaahhh

(raj is looking at naina with moist eyes..and naina is singing with her eyes down...)

yeh kaisa safar hai...yeh kaisi hai raahiennn...

ki manzil ki mujhko...khabar hi nahin hai...

(now raj is looking down...and naina is singing looking at him)

oh yeh kaisa safar hai...yeh kaisi hai raahiennn...

ki manzil ki mujhko...khabar hi nahin hai...

dundhun kahan main...sukoon apne dil ka...

idhar bhi nahin hai...udhar bhi nahin hai...

phir kisi dard ne...mujhey.. kiya bekarar hai...

humko tumsey pyaar hai...

(all were memrised by naina's voice and ishaani was just looking at naina...and she is sencing something about naina bcz the look in naina's eyes for raj is different...it was like naina sirf mano raj ke liye hi ga rahi hai...)

ali:- wow naina...ap to bahut achha gati hai...

naina:- thanks ali...

armaan:- chalo aage badhe...

ab aise hi game aage badhta hai ki bottle ka neck raj ki taraf aata hai par raj to kisi soch me gumm hai...jab armaan usse puchhta hai truth or dare raj bina kuchh soche truth bol deta hai...on which aalekh smiles at naveen and winks too...naina is also looks at raj for answer...

aalekh:- to bata raj kya tujhe koi fark nahi padta ki naveen tera dost rahe ya nahi rahe...to bata ki tujhe naveen aur naina ke yahan hone se koi fark nahi padta hai...(raj was shocked and all others too)

raj(angry tone):- aalekh yeh kya mazaak hai ha..yeh game hai ya...mujhe aise kisi faltu sawaal ka jawaab nahi dena...(raj uth kar jane lagta hai)

naveen:- kisse bhag raha hai raj...mujhse is sawaal se ya apne aap se...teri nazaro me tu to galat nahi tha na...to bata de na sach kya hai...darr mat yahan sab apne hai...bol kaya wakai tujhe is baat se koi fark nahi padta ki main ab tera wo dost nahin jo kma me tha...main manta hun...ki galti meri thi...jo kiya maine kiya...maine tujhpar galat ilzaam lagaya...par raj ek baar bata de ki tu mujhe apna dost manta hai ya nahi...wada karta hun phir kabhi tujhe kuchh nahi kahunga...bas ek baar bolde ki main aur naina mare ya jiye tujhe koi fark nahi padta hai(raj closed his eyes with pain)...bol de raj ki tere nazro me meri koi value nahi...

raj(shouts):- ha ha padta hai mujhe fark...bahut fark padta hai mujhe..kyuki sachhe dil tum logon ko apna mana tha ..par tune... tune kya kiya...ek baar bhi mujhse puchha ki kya sach me tune naina ke sath wo sab...par nahin tujhe mujhpar yakeen nahi tha...na sahi naveen...par sabse jyada takleef is baat kii thi tune naina ki baat ka bhi vishwaas nahi kiya...aur kya kaha tha us din tune mujhe..." ab se tera aur mera rasta alag hai...ab se meri zindagi me ya meri behen ki zindagi me...rajveer naam ke insaan ka koi wazood nahi hai...now u dont even exist for me mr Rajveer singh shekhawat..." yehi kahan tha tune mujhse...wahi to kiya maine...chala gaya tum logon ki zindagi se door...sab khatam kar diya tune naveen...teri ek galat fehmi ne...(raj turns to go...)

naveen(crying):- manta hu (raj stops)manta hu bahut badi galti ki hai...par ek bar mujhe maf karde raj...aaj tak mera sir kisi ke saamne nahi jhuka par aaj tujhse sir jhuka kar mafi manta hoon mujhe mera dost lauta de...mujhe mera raj lauta de...tere jane ke baad aisa ek pal nahi tha jab maine tujhe yad na kiya ho...aur mujhe pata hai tune bhi mujhe utana hi yaad kiya...yakeen maan uss huda ne mere dimaag me sab kuchh bhara...aur main..kuchhh soch hi nahin paya...bhool gaya tha ki main tujh par sak kar raha hu,...us raj pe...jis par main aankh band kark bharosha karta tha...plzzz raj bas ek bar ek mauka dede...(all are having tears)...raj plzzz meri bat sunn le...tu kehta hai to main tere pair...(naveen raj ke pair chhune jata hai ki...raj uska hanth rok leta hai...)...

raj:- bas kar...(then raj naveen ko halka sa push karke waha se chala jata hai...all are shocked by this action of raj...specially naina and aalekh...raj itana shakht kaise ho gaya unhe yakeen nahi aa raha tha...)

armaan:- yeh raj ko itana ghamand kis baat ka hai...

ishaani:- mind ur language armaan...tum sab ko kya lagta hai...in 2 saalon me raj bahut khush tha,...main thi uske sath pal - pal marte dekha hai use apni dosti ke liye...jis tarah naveen raj aur aalekh ke bina adhura hai usi tarah raj bhi naveen aur aalekh k bina nahi reh sakta...naveen plzzz give him some time wo jarur aayega...mujhe poora yakeen hai wo zarur aayega...

naina:- ha bhaiya plzzz...

naveen:- nahin ishaani wo sahi hai...galti meri thi...to saza to mujhe milani chahiye...par mujhe jo saza dena hai aalekh wo de de bas mujhe mera dost wapas chahiye...(aalekh is crying and left...and naveen is also left...)

naina:- hey bhagwaan ji...huda ki kiye ki saza yeh teeno pichhle 2 saal se bhugat rahe hai...inhe ek kar do...inhe ek kar do...

apne ruthe...paraye ruthe...yaar ruthe..naa...

khwaab tute...wade tute...dil yeh tute naa...

(naveen apne room mein hai aur bas uske aanshun beh rahe hai ki woh raj ko mana nahi paya)

apne ruthe...paraye ruthe...yaar ruthe..naa...

khwaab tute...wade tute...dil yeh tute naa...

ruthe to khuda bhi ruthe...sath chhute naa...

(raj road par chal raha hai..uski aankhien nam hai aur use wo pal yaad aa raha hai jab naveen ne us par ilzaam lagaya tha)

oh allah wariyaan...oh main to haariyaan...

oh tuti yaariyaan...mila de oyee...

(aalekh base camp ke tarrace me baitha hai aur daru pee raha hai uski aankhon se anshun beh rahe hai)

oh allah wariyaan...ho main to haariyaan...

oh tuti yaariyaan...mila de oyee...

(naina apne room ki khidki me khadi ro rahi hai aur abhi thidi der pehle jo hua use wo sab yaad aa raha hai)

udate patango me...holi waale rango me...

jhumeinge...phir se dono yaar...

udate patango me...holi waale rango me...

jhumeinge...phir se dono yaar...

(naveen ko wo pal yaad aa rahe hai jo usne raj aur aalekh ke sath academy me guzare the...they were best moment of naveens life...)

wapas to aaja yaar...seene se laga ja yaar...

dil to hue hai jaar-jaar...

(naveen raj, apni aur aalekh ki pic nikalta hai aur bahut pyar se raj ke chehre ko chhuta hai..use pachhtawa hai aur wo chahta hai ki raj ab uski zindagi me waapas aa jaye)

oh apne ruthe...paraye ruthe...yaar ruthe..naa...

khwaab tute...wade tute...dil yeh tute naa...

ruthe to khuda bhi ruthe...sath chhute naa...

oh allah wariyaan...ho main to haariyaan...

oh tuti yaariyaan...mila de oyee...

(raj bas road me late jata hai aur use koi sharaab ki dukaan dikhti hai wo waha jakar peene lagta hai aur uske aankhon se aanshun lagatar beh rahe hai uski aankhon ke saamne jaise hi naveena aur naina ka chehra aata hai uska gussa badh raha hai to uska dil dukh raha hai)

oh allah wariyaan...ho main to haariyaan...

oh tuti yaariyaan...mila de oyee...

(aalekh ko kuchh yaad aata hai aur wo turant tarrece se utar jata hai)

reh bhi na paaye yaar...seh bhi na paaye yaar...

behti hi jaaye daastaan...

(naina bas blanck si aashmaan ko dekhe ja rahi hai)

reh bhi na paaye yaar...seh bhi na paaye yaar...

behti hi jaaye daastaan...

umra bhar ka intezaar...ek pal bhi na karaar

ungli pe nachaaye...daastaan...

(naveen puri tarah se toot gaya hai aur wo bas itana chahta hai ki bas ek baar raj use maanf kar de)

oh apne ruthe...paraye ruthe...yaar ruthe..naa...

khwaab tute...wade tute...dil yeh tute naa...

ruthe to khuda bhi ruthe...sath chhute naa...

(aalekh aakar naveen ki yeh haalat dekhta hai then wo camp ki bahar bahgta hai ki naina ki nazar us par padti hai wo bhi aalekh ke peeche jati hai)

oh allah wariyaan...ho main to haariyaan...

oh tuti yaariyaan...mila de oyee...

(raj wapas aa raha hai par uske kadam uska sath nahi de rahe hai)

oh allah wariyaan...ho main to haariyaan...

oh tuti yaariyaan...mila de oyee...

(naina jakar aalekh ko rokti hai aalekh use kuchh kehta hai aur naina ka haanth pakad kar le jata hai)

oh allah wariyaan...ho main to haariyaan...

oh tuti yaariyaan...mila de oyee...

(yahan raj wo yumhi road par late jata hai aur blanck nazro se aasmaan ko dekh raha hai...use bas naveen ka hastaa hua chehra nazar aa raha hai)

oh allah wariyaan...ho main to haariyaan...

oh tuti yaariyaan...mila deee oyeee...

(yahan naveen puri tarah se toot jata hai aur lights off karke bas baitha hai..wo bhi bas raj ke baare me soch raha hai)

movie:- yaariyaan...

naina:- aalekh aakhir hum ja kaha rahe hai...

aalekh:- aaj apun yeh sab khatam kark rahega naina...apun achhi tarah se janta hai ki dono hi khush nahi par raj ko samajhna hoga ki naveen ko apni galti ka ehsaas hai...tu chal apun ke sath (dono hi jeep mein baithte hai aur aalekh drive kark ja raha hai aur yahan wahan raj ko dekh raha hai)

aalekh then armaan aur ali ko phone karta hai...

aalekh:- ha armaan tujhe apun ka ek kaam karna hai tum dono jao aur naveen se kaho ki raj ka accident ho gaya hai...wo bahut serious hai aur hospital me admit hai...st marry hospital ok...(naina looks at aalekh with shock and armaan was also shocked)

armaan:- yeh tu kya keh raha hai... raj theek to hai na...

aalekh:- ha wo theek hai par apun jo keh raha hai wo kar...

armaan:- ok...

then armaan aur ali jakar naveen ko raj ke accident ke baare mein batate hai...jisse naveen bahut hi jyada ghabra jata hai...aur hospital ki ore bhagta hai...ishaani inki baat sunn leti hai aur is jhuth ko sach samajh kar bahut jayada ghabra jati hai aur wo bhi hospital ki taraf jati hai aur uske peeche armaan aur ali bhi...

naina:- aalekh yeh tumne bhaiya ko jhuth kyun bola...

aalekh:- bas ab tu dekhti ja naina...tu yehi chahti hai na ki yeh dono pehle jaise ho jaye ab yeh hoke rahega...pehle naveen ab yeh raj...main inhe ek kark rahunga...

aalekh aur naina phir raj ko dhundhte hi ki aalekh force ke sath gadi rokta hai...

naina:- kya hua?

aalekh:- wo saamne dekh(naina looks at raj who is lying on the road)

naina:- raj...

dono aalekh aur naina daud kar raj ke pass jate hai...both are shocked to see this state of raj...he was drunk...uske baal bikhre the...aankhein laal thi...naina jakar raj ke kandhe me apna hanth rakhti hai...

raj smiles thinking ki hi is imaging naina:- are naina tum yahan phir aa gayi...why...ha kyun aayi...

naina(tears flows down to her cheeks and she placed her hand on his cheeks with pure love):- raj yeh tummm...

aalekh:- raj tune yeh kya haalat bana rakhi hai apni...tu peene bhi laga...

aalekh ko dekhte hi raj uth jata hai aur naina se door hath jata hai...

raj:- kyun main kyun nahi pee sakta ha...kya sirf tu hi pee sakta hai...

aalekh:- ha pee sakta hai tu bhi par is waqt nahi jab tera dost zindagi aur maut se lad raha hai...

raj:- kya bakwaas kar raha hai...

aalekh:-ha naveen ka accident ho gaya hai... aur wo bahut serious hai..(dhamaake on raj's face)

raj(raj ka sara nasha utar gaya):- kya? kaise, kaha hai wo...

aalekh:- jaldi chal...wo st. marry hospital me hai...

raj daud kar gadi me baithta hai...aur yahan aalekh winks at naina on which naina sadly smiles

teeno jeep mein baith kar hospital ki ore nikal jate hai aur dusri taraf naveen ishaani armaan aur ali bhi hospital pahunch chuke hai...

naveen to receptionist:- capt rajveer singh shekhaawat kis room mein hai...

receptionist:- let me check...sorry sir is naam ka to koi patient nahi hai yahan...

naveen:- kya aisa kaise ho sakta hai achhe se check kijiye...accident hua hai thodi der pehle...

receptioninst:- yes sir is naam ka koi patient nahi hai...ven aaj to koi bhi accident ka case aaya hi nahi hai...

ishaani:- kya aisa kaise ho sakta hai...naveen ho sakta hai kisi aur hospital mein...

naveen:- armaan ali tum dono ne achhe se suna to tha na ki kaun sa hospital hai...

armaan:- ha naveen aalekh ne yehi kaha tha...

receptionist:- sir yahan se kuchh hi doorie pe st joseph hospital bhi hai may be unhe waha admit kiya ho aap logo ko sunne mein galti hui ho...

naveen:- ji thanks...chalo ishaani...(all left out side)

raj turant gadi rokta hai aur daud kar andar jane lagta hai...aur dusri taraf naveen bhi daud kar bahar aa raha hai st. joseph hospital jane ke liye ki tabhi raj and naveen both colide with each other...

naveen;- i m s...(naveen and raj both shocked)raj...

raj:- naveen tu...tu theek to hai na...kya hua hai tujhe...kaha chot lagi hai...aalekh to keh raha tha ki tu serious hai par...

naveen:- mujhe kya hoga...main bilkul theek hun...tera to accident hua tha to tu yahan..to theek thaak...

raj:- tu pagal hai kya...mera accident bhala kyun...(tabhi raj and naveen understand everything and looks aalekh with tu to gaya look )

aalekh:- ruk kyun gaye ha...abhi to bahut parwaah kar rahe the ek dusre ki...aise behave kar rahe the jaise jaan nikal rahi ho tum dono ki...aakhir kab tak...ek zidd chhodta hai to dusra zidd pakad leta hai...kyun ha...raj kyun kar raha hai tu aisa...mujhe pata hai tum dono hi ek dusre ke bina adhure ho plzzz band karo yeh sab...agar tum dono ko mujhse koi nata rakhna hai to ek dusre se patch up karlo...warna bhool jao ki koi aalekh naam ka dost bhi hai tum dono ki zindagi mein...(naveen and raj both are shocked)

raj:- aalekh yeh tu...

aalekh:- ha apun sach keh raha hai...baukhla gaya tha tu...naveen ke accident ke baare mein sunn kar aur kehta hai ki...apun yahan se jaa raha hai...base camp aana to dost ban kar aana warna mujhe bhool jana...(aalekh left from there in anger)

naina:- aalekhk sunn to...(tabhi ishaani hugs raj)

ishaani:- thank god veer tum bilkul theek ho meri to jaan hi nikal gayi thi...and yes aalekh is right come soon...(she also left with armaan and ali...now there are only raj naina and naveen)

naveen:- ek baar nahin...bar- bar manfi mang raha hu...plzzz manf karde...tune khud kaha hai ki main tere liye bahut important hu...plzz

naina:- raj mana bhaiya se galti hui hai...par kehte hai...agar kisi ko uski galti ka ehsaas hai..to isse bada paschataap koi aur nahi plzzz raj...main tumhe aur bhaiya ko aise nahi dekh sakti...aaj pehli baar tumse kuchh mang rahi hun...muijhe apni aur bhaiya ki dosti lauta do...itana kar do plzz(raj looks naina with teary eye then looks at naveen and with full presure he hugs him and naveen happly hugs him...)

raj(crying):- aaj ke baad agar tune mujhse kaha ki mera hona ya na hona tere liye koi mayne nahi rakhta to dekhna tujhe jaan se maar dunga...( naina smiles and wipes her tears)

naveen(happyily crying):- pakka...jo karna hai kar lena...par mujhe chhod ke mat jana...i cant live with out ur frnship raj

raj:- me too...

naveen:- hey naina wahan kya kar rahi hai idhar aa...(noe both raj and naina hugs naveen with tears of happiness..they crying from their heart out)is aalekh ko main nahi chhodunga...koi aur bahana ise nahi mila..sala...aur yeh kya raj tune pee hai...(all seperates)

raj:- ha wo...thodi si...

naina:- thodi si...sach mein jise sarab se nafarat thi wo ab sarab peene laga hai...

raj:- ab kya sab badal gaye hai to main bhi thoda sa...

naveen:- chalo its ok...ab chale...(naina nods aur jeep me jake baithti hai...naveen to follow her)

raj in his mind:- theek usi tarah naina jaise tum...jise kabhi huda se nafarat thi aaj wo usi huda se bahut pyar karti hai...for the first time in life i m jealous of some one...wo bhi huda jaise insaan se...tujhse buri kismat kisi ki nahi hogi raj

naveen:- raj kya soch raha hai aa na...

base camp...

aalekh wapas tarrace me hai aur yunhi baitha hai..ki uske kandhe pe koi hanth rakhta hai...aur jab aalekh palat kar dekhta hai to raj aur naveen khade hai...dono ki hi ankhon me gussa hai...aalekh ko kuchh samajh nahi aaya phir both rqaj and naveen punched aalekh ver hard...

aalekh:- abe maar kyun rahe ho...

par raj aur naveen dono hi aalekh ko dho rahe the...finaly jab we thak jate hai to 3no hi terrace ki railing me baioth jate hai apne pair latka kar...

aalekh:- ab bologe apun ko dhoya kyun...

raj:- saale tujhe koi aur bahana nahi mila...mera accident kara diya aur hospital pahucha diya...

naveen;- aur mera bhi...

aalekh:- oh...iska matalab idea kaam kar gaya...

naveen:- tujhe kaise pata...

aalekh:- simple...agar patch up nahi hota to tum dono yun mujhe dhone saath me nahi aate...aur dusri baat...mere saamne hi nahi aate...

raj:- ha dimaag hai...bas use nahi karta hai...

aalekh:- kya bola be...ahhh(his back is paining)

raj:- oye defective peaice ab teri nautanki khatam ho gayi ho to kamre me chal...tera nut bolt theek kar de...

aalekh hugs both of them they have tears...naina and ishaani both were watching them with tears...aaj barso baad yeh 3no dost fir ek sath the...ek dusre ke pass the...3no ko hi bahut sukoon tha...

next day...at meeting room...

end of part 17

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with love chandni...

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Edited by rkchandni - 10 years ago