Bleeding heart: DISCONTINUED

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PROLOGUE
a gust of cold wind blows through an open window in the Jaigarh palace , caught in the current is a golden butterfly ;the delicate insect flutters dangerously near some candles, brightly burning in a row as a hard hand fell on its wing and then the insect found itself thrown in the mouth of fire as the insect burned he gave his smirk and went back to his bed , this was none but the Emperor of Jaigarh and many other parts of Rajasthan , Maharaja Uday Veer Pratabh Singh , he is the most hated figure in the nation . For generation his ancestor have been rulling over Jaigarh , his ancestor were cruel , mean , though there was never any kind of crisis , but still the people suffered a lot , the tax collector were harsh and ruthless , as every year the ruler would introduce a new tax the people suffered but had no choice one who was unable to pay the tax were either imprisoned or the female member was send to the king for his pleasure and when he is over the females would return but did not survive for long as the king was harsh and ruthless with his own entertainment he made her a toy for his subjects at the court too well but this was just the story of his ancestor because this ruler was worse than his ancestor too , maybe one of the reasons is that his father died when he was about 5 and his mother too followed her culture and got herself burned alive in her husband 's fire ie sati , so that made him into a more cruel heart less ruler as he went to his bed like a hungry tiger just to prey on a new just 13 year old girl who cried helplessly but the king was not in a mood to listen to her pleeds and fulfilled his lust on that innocent soul .

a gust of cold wind blows through an open window in the Devgarh palace , caught in the current is a golden butterfly ;the delicate insect flutters dangerously near some candles, brightly burning in a row
" oh " gasps the youngest princess Rajkumari Manyata Chauhan , rushing to save it from the flickering flames . gently she cups the fragile butterfly in her hands then explains with delight
"spider web and butterfly - hidden strength in small things that lie"
she said the butterfly as sensing it has found a safe place to rest the exhausted butterfly settles and look closely at the intricate beauty of the princess , even an insect could not resist her beauty , she was the most beautiful princess among her three sisters , every body drolled over her but with beauty she had a golden heart she beleived that evil did not even existed in the world , and she always stood up for justice just like her ancestors , Devgarh inspite of being a small kingdom had no crisis the people were happy and worshipped the royals like god and this era under the rule of Maharaja Bridgraaj Chauhan every thing went smoothly the tax was reasonable and at times even forgiven , and help as fund was provided to the poor and helpless , the king and queen lived happily with there childrens and they did not beleive in old culture and gave their daughter full freedom among all manyata was one of the most loved figures , the apple of every body eyes , she won heart by her small tricks and caring nature she was innocent and naive . all boys wanted to claim their rights on her because of her beauty but her heart belonged to only one person the knight at their court , Avendra as she headed back to the bed and slept peacefully her mind filled with the dreams of Avendra



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maharaja Uday Veer Pratabh Singh:26
the only heir of the Pratabh dynasty , success touches his feets , he envy every sweet and innocent thing , and won't stop till he have destroyed it , people tears brings smile to his face , he loves war and hunting is his favourite hobby , he is ruthless and merciless and he does have never fallen in love for him girls are only a toy with which he can play each night but now as because he needs an heir to complete the cycle of the dynasty he is looking forward to marry .
Rajkumar Sujamal
his cousin uncle and his advisor and general of his army , he is very good from heart as he never married and has no family he considers uday as his son and wants him to stop all political games and serve his people sincerly like a good ruler but uday is loyal to his blood and does what his heart feels right
Raja Khulbhusan Bharmal
the king of Mewar which was captured by uday , he hates uday and lost his wives and daughter in the hand of the devil and now he is familess leaving in under his slavery and he making plans to destroy uday
Maharaja Bridgraaj Chauhan
the king of Devgarh , a good , kind hearted king , loves his family a lot specially his youngest daughter manyata he is very helpfull towards his subjects and he loves his queen dearly unlike other rulers he married only onces , he is against all the cruel laws towards woman and does not follow any such custom
Maharani Komal Chauhan
the queen of Devgarh , a clean headed woman with a heart full of love for her evil does not exits she loves her husband and her children dearly she too is against all the cruel law of nature


Rajkumar Anwar Chauhan ;29
the eldest son of bridgraaj and the crown prince of devgarh he like his dad always does justice , he is loved by all but if one dares to hust his family the angry tiger in him burn them , he is over protective about all his sister especially manyata he is a brave , rajput prince afraid of nothing except for manyata 's anger


Rajkumari Dabyanti Chauhan 24
the eldest among all the daughter s she is sweet and soft spoken and respect elders , she is soon going to tie the knot with the prince of Raigarh she is peace loving girl and never raised her voice she protects her sister manyata and she is sensible and intelligent


rajkumari Madhuxi Chauhan :22
the second eldest sister a very fun loving girl patner of manyata in all tricks she loves to enjoy her life and loves her sister very much , she loves sword fighting and she is a slow at understang many things that makes her more adorable

rajkumari avantika chahan:20
the third eldest among the sister she is quite and peace loving and gives her life to her books , she loves reading book and discovering new things very sweet rarely speaks and loves manyata a lot


Rajkumari Manyata Chauhan :18
the youngest daughter , she is the most beautiful girl over the globe but she is firy and more intrested in hunting than to gloom herself , she is a prankstar and every body loves her a lot ,she is kind hearted too and loves her family a lot , she will go to any extend to save her family , she is madly indensely in love with the knight in her father army avendra


Avendra Pratabh Rathore: 20
a fearless warrior and an orphan by birth he was brought up by his uncle , he serves his country and will do anything for his motherland , he is the king favourite and he is love with rajkumari manyata so he wants to prove himself to the king and fulfill his dreams of getting married to her thought a part of him knows it is not possible but he will fight till the end




Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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FIRST OF ALL CONGO FOR NEW SS ANNI

READ D PROLOGUE.AWESOME

NICE CS.SO MANY CHARACTERS.
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LOVED D TITTLE SO MUCH.

MAHARAJ UDAYVEER PRATAP SINGH(name is so long dear) IS A DEVIL.

MAYATA IN LUV WID KINGHT AVENDRA.

ITS SEEMS DAT GOING TO BREAK MANYATAS HEART.

LUKING FORWARD FOR C 1
Edited by ...anju... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey shona congo on ur new ss...

Now cuming to the prologue it was awesome...

Uday and manyata are just opposites..

And who is this avendra ..??

Well we will see to it..

Continue soon haan...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...anju...

FIRST OF ALL CONGO FOR NEW SS ANNI

READ D PROLOGUE.AWESOME.

LOVED D TITTLE SO MUCH.

MAHARAJ UDAYVEER PRATAP SINGH(name is so long dear) IS A DEVIL.

MAYATA IN LUV WID KINGHT AVENDRA.

ITS SEEMS DAT GOING TO BREAK MANYATAS HEART.

LUKING FORWARD FOR CS.


thank you so much
i am glad you found it
thankss
sorry yes he is
yuup
it will break indeed
i have updated

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: htgcute

Hey shona congo on ur new ss...


Now cuming to the prologue it was awesome...

Uday and manyata are just opposites..

And who is this avendra ..??

Well we will see to it..

Continue soon haan...


thank you
yes opposite attracts
it is mentioned in cs
ok

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey thaanks for the pm!!!!! nicee prologueee,lets see wat happens next!!!!😊😊
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Originally posted by: pia.raha

hey thaanks for the pm!!!!! nicee prologueee,lets see wat happens next!!!!😊😊


thank you so much

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