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Posted: 12 years ago
writer note: hey all i am back with the third chapter of bleeding heart , i am really very bery happy with the response i have been getting for this ss since this long thank you all so much .ok the next update is on 6th july and only after i get 20 likes😈


CHAPTER 3

" the glorious sun stays in his course

And plays the alchemist

Turning with the splendor of his precious eye

The meager cloddy earth into glittering gold''"

The bright orange sun brightened up a dark night , birds did their duty and flew up in the high sky , while the dew melted on the leaves as the winds rejoiced in happiness , the palace wall was crying their lungs out in joy , it was the most awaited moment of the decade , a feeling that had been locked in the old chest for century but now everything had changed the nature danced along , a bright smile plastered to each one face finally the king was in love . he nights were sleep derived , and with every statement he made he could just not hold back the sweet smile , to him all flowers looked beautiful and kids had become his interest no more girls innocence was ruined and each tears slowly melted his heart , the kingdom was bright and colorful a whole month had passed as he rested his head on the bed wondering about all those wonderful moment he would spend with her after marriage , he was so madly that he had pictured his future , even got his palace redecorated , all uday could think of was manyata and only manyata just as disturbing into her thought a soldier came he creased his eye brown for this sudden entry he fixed his gaze down to the ground and said in a low tone

SOLDIER:maharajasa the next day is Rajkumari Manyata

He was cut short by uday , his frostly glare made him shiver he realized his mistake and appolozised and said

SOLDIER:please forgive me I meant by Rajkumari of Devgarh , it is her birthday the next day and as you advised we are ready so when shall we leave maharajsa

UDAY:lets us leave tonight before the sun I want to be the first to wish my princess birthday and gift her my love

SOLDIER:so I shall alert all of them

He took his farewell and went out of the room , uday looked back into the portrait he had made of his princess and caressed his figure down her face as he said like a love sicken boy

UDAY:the time is near when we will be one forever

The path was flanked by tall pine trees that gave off sweet fragrance , the soft breeze carried the fragrance far and wide . the trail laid to slopes and terraced fields , they looked very picturesque and this all led to the most holy temple of Devgarh this temple too was born with manyata , it was Mahadev 's temple and manyata being a faithful to her god did not even miss one single puja and she offered a special puja each year on her birthday as even this year she was heading with guards , the ever independent brave princess needed guard now a hell lot had changed since the night avendra after being treated had promotion in his rank for bravery that he showed as for manyata she got a piece of mind from her family and now her safety was put on RESTRICTION, though she enjoyed it as avendra was directed to guide her every where and that would definitely mean that she could see him all day long, the chirping upon the birds filled the forest with peace , the temple chanced upon a small rivulet . the clear , sparkling water gurgled as it moved and lashed over rocks and pebbles . as finally the path ended in the mouth of the cave all soldier were to stay there as she entered the cave which led to an enourmous mahadev temple she offered her prayers and started off with the puja , after hours of chanting mantras and pleasing the god she folded her hands and said

MANYATA:oh almightly I have tried each possible way to please you as a loyal servant please reward me with the life partner I carve for , who has captured my heart my mind , I know there are several odds in our way of love but please do stay with us

She closed her eyes and opened it again with a smile she had trust that her god would certainly hear to her and she would get one she loved but poor princess she was too blind to know that her faith was already written by UDAY VEER.

The kingdom was decorated with flowers and dias were lighted in the night sky , a grand party was help specially for manyata all the princess and prince of the nation as bridgraaj and anwar greeted the guest while the ladies remained in the parlour with their share of party to enjoy , but the most awaited guest was still missing ,the princess herself was missing , it had been a long time ago that she had gone to dress herself in the most beautiful outfit but she had not returned yet , suddenly a lump was struck in each throat , silence prevailed over the hall , time had paused as every body had fear crept in each mind it was none but the Maharajsa of Jaigrah himself , it was true that they did send invite to him as they had no intention to hurt his pride and call trouble for themselves but not in their wildest dream did they imagine that he would actually come here , as he greeted them and said

UDAY: a very good evening Maharaja Bridgraaj and Rajkumar Anwar

BRIDGRAAJ:it is a pleasure to see you here Maharajasa

ANWAR:we did not accept you here

That was a stern reply from anwar as a smile was plastered in uday face , anwar felt his blood boiling and even after knowing the mis behavior he dared to do with his sister he got even more madder how badly he wanted to smack his face right their but a frosty look from bridgraaj shut his mouth as he excused himself and went to a soldier and asked him to inform all the ladies to be alert of his presence , most prince and king maintained safe distance as the ruthless tale of his dynasty was famous among all , every one feared his power and so did bridgraaj and so it always better to sacrifice one to protect all this party held a secret that could shook the pillar of manyata life , nave to all the princess was dressed in a beautiful red gaggra with heavy golden boarder , her vail covering her face , and her body was covered with jewels she indeed looked like an angle while she headed down the steps with other maids helping her as the veil made her blind , she stood at a corner while bridgraaj headed for the ANNOUNCEMENT

BRIDGRAAJ; I am thankful to all the royal present here today is indeed a very auspicious day not only as for it is my daughter birthday but there are two good news firstly I am going to announce the King Of Devgarh and secondly the most importantly I am going to announce the marriage of my daughter so after myself this kingdom will be looked after by my son Rajkumar Anwar and my daughter Rajkumari Manyata will be getting married by the end of this month to the king of Jaigarh , Mahraja Uday Veer Pratabh Singh

Time stood still as she could feel his gaze burning her up , and that signature smirk still plastered on his face as all she looked at avendra helplessly he walked out of the palace anger , revenge and dejection took over him , that evil king took his love away and he would at no condition forgive him for doing so revenge was building in his heart as love and peace was replaced by hatred and arms the history was to unfold the most romantic incomplete story



done with this chappy
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Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lol awesome lovely super duper and i love u twino🤗
OMG OMG Maharaj Brijraaj really did that..He accepted Uday as his future son-in-law...
He too bowed down in front of Uday's pride..
Poor Manyata and Avendra😆😆😆..
But iam sure Anwar will protest the whole thing in his way and invite hatred from Uday...😕😕😕
Hunh but iam happpy as a reader lol most awaited moment but then will Uday crush the flower in Manyata, in the desire of making her his...
Continue soon..
waiting for a protestful madly romantic love story ahead😳
Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: snowdream

Lol awesome lovely super duper and i love u twino🤗
OMG OMG Maharaj Brijraaj really did that..He accepted Uday as his future son-in-law...
He too bowed down in front of Uday's pride..
Poor Manyata and Avendra😆😆😆..
But iam sure Anwar will protest the whole thing in his way and invite hatred from Uday...😕😕😕
Hunh but iam happpy as a reader lol most awaited moment but then will Uday crush the flower in Manyata, in the desire of making her his...
Continue soon..
waiting for a protestful madly romantic love story ahead😳


awn i am glad you liked it now only happy updates
aha but evil minds are playing games
yes he had to all the rulers have to after all uday is the most powerful king
yes they are apart but avendra is going to take revenge
yup but will he succeed
yes he did ok hahah you will get lots of those


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Posted: 12 years ago
awwewww that was so awesome annesha
loved it loads...
so cruel Uday has started melting just by sight of his princess how evily sweet!!!!
poor avendra!!!
update sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome...
Sorry for short comment...
Do continue soon
Thanx for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago

wondeful update ann.

loved it loads.amazingly written.

guess its time for manveer marriage.

is avendra going to b d villlian in manveer story.

luking forward how d story progresses.

try to continue soon,

danxs for pm dear.



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Posted: 12 years ago
omg so much drama going on right now i am so happy for it
wondering if manyata going to expect the marriage proposal
AND CANT BELIEVE BRIRAJ BOWED IN FRONT OF UDAY'S PRIDE
BUT I HAD A QUESTION DOES UDAY REALLY LOVES MANYATA OR JUST WANT HER
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsm...😉 LOVED IT
thanku for the PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hiii baby sister


hw r u


awsssmmm update as usual


uday come for manyata's birthday it is sooo romantic


yipppeee manveer are going to marryy


i think avendra is going to be in negitive role


love the updateee as usual CANT HELP IT



love u baby

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Posted: 12 years ago
aww,pity on manyata,she prayed so much,bt uday ne mana hi liya sabko to get married to her,so dis love hate reltnshp,kya turn legi,will be eager to watch!!!!!!😊😊
Edited by pia.raha - 12 years ago

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