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annesha kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: humairaa1
Congo on your new ss
The concept n character sketch is very interesing
Do continue soon
Thanks for the pm 😊

THANK YOU SO MUCH

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Sonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Awesum concept... 👏

Nice Cs... 👍🏼

Do cont soon...
N do pm me plz...

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annesha kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: princessSonia
Awesum concept... 👏

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Do cont soon...
N do pm me plz...

thank you soo much

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annesha kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Edited by annabh - 12 years ago

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annesha kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

WRITTER NOTE:i am sorry to keep you all waiting here is the first chapter of bleeding heart i am very happy with the response of this ss so please keep liking and yes my next update for this ss will be on the 25th june and yes only if i get 20 above likes 😈

Chapter 1

It was night fall a night floated with stars and moon a pleasant winds blew over the kingdom of Jaigarh , as the palace glowed in the moonlight and peace prevailed over the palace but this was an unusual night as all night the walls of the palace have heard scream and cries of an innocent soul but tonight it was quite as the king himself choose to spend a night at the heart of the densely covered jungles of Jaigarh , to hunt for the man eater that had been the mostly heated issue among rajasthan the king was very fond of hunting but prefferred to go alone that to take any companion his subjects were aware of the fact that it would harm his life but they dared not questions his action tonight was a full moon night of spring as his black horse rode in the jungle crushing the grass below , as his eyes fell on a cave he rode as the hidden path led to a spectacular waterfall , now he stood marvelling at the water fall cascading down a ravine , clouds of silvery mist filled the air , he could hardly hear himselve above the roar of rushing water.as he rode further to a path that led down the side of the steep ravine , relieved to be out in the open again he rode near a tree and got down of his horse .he tied his horse to the tree as he spotted a castle ,it was then that he realized that he had crossed the river and have entered Devgarh but he being arrogant decided on taking a nap and starting the journey back only when sun welcomes him as he rested his head on the tree bark and closed his wide eyes fell asleep but not know to him his prey had turned into a hunter

Rajkumari manyata sat with simba on her lap , yes her most precious possession and her newly made friend a male tiger whom she named as simba so every night she sneeked in the forest to meet her best friend who never even scratched her as even his heart was melted by her warmness and beauty as it rested curdle near to her and she stoked his fur , the moon peeped up from the drifting cloudlets and frowned as it seemed envying their happiness and regretting her tedious and utterly superfluous virginity . the air still was heavy with the fragrance of lilac and wild cherry , she smiled at simba and said like a mother lovingly scolding its new born
MANYATA:simba why did you hurt sanika the other day ? i know he tend to hurt you bacha but at times you need to defend instead to fight back ok mumma really angry if this continued i won't talk to bhaisa and let you remain here only and won't even come to meet you
as she faked an angry face which was soon melted away by the softness of his eyes as she kissed his cheek and continued
MANYATA:then promise me i will talk to bhaisa tomorrow and then you can come along with me and then we will have lots of fun
a warm smiled plastered to his face as she continued to curdle him chocking out the air in him , it was really strange how a mighty brave king thought a lion to be man eater and a soft delicate princess made this man eater her best companion as she felt her throat going dry and she spoke in her honey tune
MANYATA:simba i am going to wet my throat near the ravine you stay here okay as avendra home is very close to the ravine if he sees you it will not be good ok
saying this she headed towards the ravine even the flower could not help but blush at her beauty she looked so heavenly , with a pink and white gaggra , a silver vail to cover her head and even help to sneak out of palace and a naughty waist band playing on her curvy waist as she stepped in the wet ground near the river bank unknown to her that she was stepping towards a fate changer that would destroy all her dreams

He was deep into his sleep as it was broken by footsteps like a brave king he did not panick but composed himself and opened his eyes to see the most beautiful sight of nature there was a girl splashing water on her face from the ravine , she was a divine beauty so beautiful like an apsara desended from heaven for the first time uday lost control over himself as his heart skipped beats , he had never craved for any woman this badly , her tender milky skin was so tempting and her face so innocent and pure he stood up and walked towards her , here she too felt an unknown fragrance around her , she was alerted as she turned back to see HIM , yes his eyes hinted evil as she knew for a girl being caught in such a situation was really dangerous but fear did not shook her after all she was scared of nothing as she passed him , he realized that a girl had dared to avoid him , first her temptation was driving him insane and now she just insulted him his anger boiled as he grabbed her soft hands and pulled her roughly towards him there chest chasing each other as she struggled to leave while he deeply looked into her eyes and asked huskily
UDAY:who are you ? i mean a girl who can escape my charm are you doing on purpose or you really are naive to my identity
she was fumed in anger as she struggled and tried to bite him she placed her teeth his wrist and bite as hard as she could but it was of no use as he simply smirked she screamed at him
MANYATA:leave me don't you know my father is the king of this place and i am none commoner but Rajkumari Manyata
uday was speechless as after sometime he continued
UDAY:i heard a lot about your beauty but they all lied you are not that beautiful instead you are much more beautiful than they can even explain
manyata opened her mouth to protest but kept quite as she saw simba approaching from behind she knew what simba wanted as his eyes were redden with anger and all she could do was helplessly scream
MANYATA :simba no don't do this he is not hurting me back off NOW
as uday too turned behind and watched the man eater approaching towards him he loosen his grip and with a smile playing on his face he said firmly
UDAY:do not worry princess i will finish this animal before it even reaches your shadows
and before either manyata or simba could react the animal was attacked by his sword and within three stroke the animal tore apart and fell in the river dead as the river was covered with blood thick stream of tears flowed down her eyes as she turned to him and watched him giving a signature smirk of victory , as anger boiled in her blood her eyes redden with anger and pain she charged towards him and placed a tight slap on his face and said
MANYATA:how dare you do that to him ? you killed him and now its revenge time?
saying this she pulled the dragger from her waist and tried to attack him , but he was fast he trapped her , he pulled her hands back and twisted it while she struggled and cried in pain he brought his mouth near to her ears and said
UDAY:princess did 'nt your mother teach you to behave your self well no problem tonight i will teach you some manners which you will NEVER forget
saying this with a swift moment he flung her on his shoulder as the dragger fell on the ground , she screamed and struggled as he headed towards the horse to claim her body .

done with this chappy
please do forgive me for my mistakes
do hit the tiny like button
it won't burn your fingure
no res box

Edited by annabh - 12 years ago

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snowdream

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

OMG that was awesome anni...👏

The main thing that caught me was the way you described the nature...haha nature took over the hunter Prince Uday😆😆😆...

And then Manyata hayyy she has a pet lion😃..OMG such a brave yet innocent yet lovely princess she is👍🏼👍🏼.👍🏼.and Simba is a lovely cute name...😳...

Now whats this again evil took over Uday..He killed a harless animal...Infact simba would have attacked him if Manyata haven't stopped him but still he mercilessly killed Simba not even waiting for Manyata to react..😲😲😲

But this evil prince is perhaps gonna face the greatest challenge further in the form of Manyata. She would kill herself thn falling in front of him😕😕😕...Hope she manages to run away safeguarding her, but even then he is gonna hunt his newly found favourite prey

update soon

Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago

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huma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

hiii sis

itsss awsssmmm as usualll

uday killed simbaaa (u remind me of my childhood LION KING )

uday is sooo evill

hw can uday take manyata after knwing that she is a princess he had no fear

is he going to rape manyata

love the updateee

no thanks for PM as i said before its ur duty

updateee as soonn as possible cant wait for it

love u my puff pastry

u was right the LIKE button didn't burn my fingure trust me

Edited by huma12. - 12 years ago

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annesha kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: snowdream
reserved board lagane aayi thi ...vaise abhi iski zaroorat nahi...😆

it was nice 😊
Uday is really a devil in this😲
and waiting forward to see how this women hunter gets his prey Manyata😕

thank you
yea he is
i am so happy you liked it

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NAVINA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Superb update Anni , felt bad for Simba😭. Hope Manyata can save herself. Dying to read more , update soon, ... thanx 4 the PM😊.

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..FARIHA..

@..FARIHA..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

superb updates
thnxxx for the link yar
nice wrtten waiting for next chapter
lovely written uday manyata awsome
1st chapter was great
fast fast post next chapter kk
lovely written liked it...🤗

hugxx🤗

by...take care😃

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