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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: preya_radev

loved the cute manveer scene sorry for the late reply and please update soon cant wait and thanks for the pm


I am glad you liked it. It is ok no problem . awn it was my duty
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey.. Aneesha...
The chappy was fantastic..
Manyata likes Uday...
I think she should tell him..
Manyata's acting of sleeping was really cute..
But plan banake khudi usme phas gayi..
Rehna pada na bhooka..
Uday knew about it..
Kuch aisa hai jo use na pata ho..
Manyata is slowly slowly recalling her past..
Even I want to know..
Ki kya hua tha..
Update soon...
And thanx for the PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nityatandon

Hey.. Aneesha...

The chappy was fantastic..
Manyata likes Uday...
I think she should tell him..
Manyata's acting of sleeping was really cute..
But plan banake khudi usme phas gayi..
Rehna pada na bhooka..
Uday knew about it..
Kuch aisa hai jo use na pata ho..
Manyata is slowly slowly recalling her past..
Even I want to know..
Ki kya hua tha..
Update soon...
And thanx for the PM...


hey
thank you so much
yes she loves him a lot
should she well lest see
haah abh toh eii larki aisehii phass ti gayegii
yes and that is why he wants her by his side'
so that she cannot recall her memory
awn it was my duty

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Posted: 11 years ago
great update...loved the whole...uday and manyata are super cute...loved the bus scene...manyata remember her past...and thanks for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa

great update...loved the whole...uday and manyata are super cute...loved the bus scene...manyata remember her past...and thanks for pm...


thank you so much
I am glad that you liked it
not completely but partially
awn it was my duty

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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 6

It was extremely cold around me, the same dream again I felt myself drowning in the water again. No matter how hard I tried I went in the reverse direction. There was no way I could screech for help. Just as I was about to give up my eyes were opened and my eyelashes were wet. I could feel water droplets all over my face. I looked around, it was an unknown room but all my classmates and Prof Suraj was there looking at me. Just then I saw him, he was sitting beside me and rubbing my palm softly as Prof. Suraj asked me

SURAJ: Are you ok Manyata?

I could not utter a word but slowly I shook my head in a yes as Prof. Suraj gave an assuring look and announced

SURAJ: Ok I think she needs some rest now and Manyata I will send for the dinner in your room.

All the student left the room and the last one was Prof. Suraj but he did not leave he was sitting there by my side and as I opened my mouth he spoke

UDAY: Now before you speak like an anemia patient asking those when... Where... how? Let me say you fainted and then I carried you here this is your room. It had been more than an hour since you lay unconscious and the doctor also had to come and examine you he said it is the reason behind you being weak and nothing taking your meals properly I hope your unasked questions are answered

I continued to look at him, he saved my life each time I was troubled he always came to my rescue. But why was I not happy? An unknown anger towards him filled in my mind. I wanted to stop myself but I kept thinking how from the day I meet him trouble broke down in my life, my accident, then sandy and even zain. Why was it so? I did not even realize but when I said to him

MANYATA: Thanks a lot for helping me uday but now I am fine, so you can leave as I want to sleep for some time

UDAY: Sure manyata call me if you want any help I am in the room adjacent to yours

MANYATA: Sure

I watched him leaving as a peace resembled in my heart, I do not know why his presence made me so restless and so suffocated. I had no idea why my mind raged with anger when I am seeing his face now. Where is the love I had for him even just few hours away? Why this place does seem so known to me? How did I know about that Queen and temple? Thing turned burred as my eyes felt heavy and I went into a deep slumber sleep.

It was so boring I do not know why did Uday drag me to his dance practice? It had been only a day here and I am already bored. The contest was after three days and the dance troop was doing worse than ever. No matter how hard uday tried to coordinate them, the steps were all tangled and messed. I pitied him at this point and his dance partner, Samairaa seemed to be too thick headed as she could not even get one step proper. Normally I used to feel very jealous watching them close , but today I was not so bothered as something else took my attention, "BLEEDING HEART" , it was a book I picked from the library of the palace this morning well when everyone left dishearteningly that they could not find any Paulo or Nicholas book I felt that I just needed a book to distract uday presence. But I must admit this book is interesting it is based on some love story of the last king and queen on this place. Till now all that I know is there background I really hate this ruthless king he does not certainly deserve the fragile princess. This debate kept prevented me from reading further as I watched Uday dismissing the group for the day. He came towards me and pulled out the book from my hand. There was a rage in his eyes as he asked demanding

UDAY: It is better to spend time with me rather than reading this shit?

I restrain myself from showing annoyance as I said

MANYATA: How do you know it is shit? You did not even read it and anyway I am almost going to finish it off so give it back to me

UDAY: You know whom I am giving this book to, I am giving it back to the library of this palace as it deserve to rot in the book shelf

I still kept quite as followed him through the corridor asking him repeatedly for the book, but he was not yet ready to give it back to me. As he complained

UDAY: You are fighting with your friend for just a book

MANYATA: Yes and now give it back to me now

UDAY: No way can't I let you ruin your trip in middle of the book

I stood there boiling in anger as I saw the corridor empty and I said to him scornfully

MANYATA; I do not understand what problem do you have from this book?

He turned towards me and came closer to me as I backed off, the chase was finally stopped as I found myself pinned to the wall he lifted my face with his figure and said to me

UDAY: You need to know that you are NOT supposed to read this book PRINCESS

I was taken away by his charm and his deep brown eyes. But I saw something else in his eyes. I saw a glint of evil in his face. My mind wandered elsewhere, many pictures hazed into my mind, many sound reached me. I saw my life almost reversing but it paused with a picture of me. I have no idea why but I said to him harshly

MANYATA: You think you can stop me, control me and fool me like you did before

He looked at me startled and his face was filled with question, as I looked into his eyes and took the book away and marched away from him. It was only as I entered the room that I felt what I had done to him. I felt sorry for him but somewhere I knew I needed to protect this book I felt he would come and take it away from me. I did not know why I felt this way as I tossed the pages and got myself drowned in the book. But I did not read it instead I kept it aside, I felt really bad for behaving in that way with him. My heart ached and now all that I wanted was an apology from him. I sneaked out of my room and went into his. I thanked my stars that his door was unlocked but as I watched him sitting near the window I guess he heard my footsteps as he turned back our eyes meet as he asked me warmly

UDAY: What happened manyata? Since the time we came here you have turned so different towards me? Did I do something wrong to you please say me as I really cannot take this cold behavior of your anymore please

I went and sat beside him as I said with a weak voice and my eyes struck on the ground

MANYATA: I am sorry I am just going through a bad phrase

UDAY: And you blame me for it don't you


I very dissapointed by the response I am getting, I was continuing this ss as I thought my readers liked it but it proved to be wrong I am just asking for 30 likes still it is almost taking a whole week . Is it too much that I am asking for , anyway a big thanks to my loyal reader and I am ending this ss to some people delight who think this ss as complete nonsense I will end it in more two or one chapter and I am going to make it the most tragic end I might end it in this week
Edited by annabh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey anni!
How r u?
It was an awesome update.
Loved it loads!!
Manyata's behavior towards uday was not good.
Poor uday he has to bear her cold behavior.
Feeling sorry that Uday's dance practice isn't going well.
Hope everything gets well between manveer.
I hope they don't fight again.
Beautifully written.
Plzz don't end this ss because its the best.
I really love it the way it is going so don't end it.
Do continue asap.
Thanks for the pm.
Edited by sanah12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Anni pls dont do this injustice to ur loyal readers, pls dont end it abruptly...
This time of d year is really a busy one due to mid sem exams in sept for students... Probably thats d reason 4 u getting late response...
Pls cont it for atleast 4-5 chapters n give it a proper ending as there is soo much to this ff...
Pls its a humble request frm my side...
Thanks for d pm anni...
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Posted: 11 years ago
In d shock by the news of this ff ending, i forgot to tell u abt d update...
The update was awesome, uday is really soo innocent or its just a facade which he is putting up in front of manyata????
As in this update i cud see lil of old uday (d fearless n control freak one n liked it actually 😆 )
Manyata is sooo stubborn in this new birth of her, uday needs to b cautious 😉
Cont soon... Really want to knw what went wrong n pls i want a happy ending pls 😊

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