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Posted: 12 years ago
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i m speechless i love this ss seriously wat a written aww manveer screan was awesome but yr ek bath gandi lagi ki tune majunu ki jgha mere rk ko daal diya 😭 but its really gud
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyash..

i m speechless i love this ss seriously wat a written aww manveer screan was awesome but yr ek bath gandi lagi ki tune majunu ki jgha mere rk ko daal diya 😭 but its really gud


thank you so much , i am sorry but avndra ke role mei woahii fit behetaa hai thank you
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Posted: 12 years ago
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witter note: i am back with the second chapter of bleeding heart , i am very greatefull to all my readers last update response made me very happy a very important note if anybody wants a pm do send me a buddy request or mention in your comment and next update 1st july and my second condition only after 20 likes😈

Chapter 2

In the kitchen avendra was extremely busy –saucepans, and frying pans were standing in the rows gigantic hearth the huge stockpot stood in a corner , and the jack turned with slow deliberation , and presented alternately to the glow every side of a noble sirloin meat . he was stirring the stockpot methodically over the fire as a voice screamed cutting it way down through the tree into his years , it could not be mistaken such honey cube was none but was of his dream lady the princess but why did she sound so helpless , he did not give a second thought , the last thing before moving out was he got hold of the royal fighter sword and rode in his horse into the wet grass of the jungle , the tree branches looking like witches hand ready to trap him and the winds howling by his side but he feared none as he had been grown up in the forest and he was an habituate to such phenomena of nature such brave solider feared nothing but today his face covered with sweat and his heart pounded as he rode towards the ravine the voice was clearer . his horse stopped near the ravine and he was struck by horrow an unknown man was caring his princess away and she looked so helpless struggling with her tiny body , for the very first time he saw her eyes filled with tears his heart felt being attacked by several arrows as he got down from his horse with all his mighty force he raced his legs toward them and on reaching he screamed his lungs out

AVENDRA:stop you traitor place Rajkumarisa down now or I will not regret cutting you down into thousand pieces

The blood –curdling yell stopped uday , he turned back as he saw avendra he was determined to claim the princess tonight and he really did not mind if it cost blood of someone too , so he carefully placed her on the ground as she composed herself , his hands still tightly around her wrist and each time with the struggle his grip got stronger his nails piercing into her skin , as avendra felt blood racing into his nerve , his eyes were redden with anger and he got hold of his sword even tighter as he spoke under his breath

AVENDRA:leave her she is not commoner but the princess of this land

He gave him on of the most coldest look and said sternly

UDAY:you too must know I lay my hands on no commoner and I am sure you are not aware of my identity and that must be the reason of your attitude towards me

At this statement avendra passed a smile as he concluded

AVENDRA:who in this world is aware of the devil you are Maharaja Uday Veer Pratbh Singh of Jaigrah but you must know you are now in Devgarh

UDAY:you force me to think weather you are stupid or just arrogant I mean being aware of my power still you think to challenge me your duty comes before your life so I would have not regrets to murder a patriot tonight

As uday loosen his grip , she raced and hide herself behind avendra she noticed uday giving her lustful looks as this was noticed by avendra too , both drawn their swords and then started the fight their sword battling each other , both had a hunger to kill the opponent and their anger spoke through their attack no one wanted defence both fought and attacked manyata heart came to her mouth as she noticed a cut on avendra bare shoulder , but he composed himself and with the wounded arm he fought , the sword clashed each other as the noise thundered in the jungle by now avendra was left with marks covering his body but uday fought with his smile not even a single attack dared to touch his body , manyata could see avendra loosing all his energy she could sence it was coming to an end she did not want to risk his life as she crossed all her barrier that night and she screamed coming in middle of the fight holding to uday 'arms and looking at him with pleading eyes and hot tears rolling down her cheek

MANYATA:please stop I say please do not attack him

Avendra holded his wounded arm in one and with other his sword due to the wounds he could not even stand blood covered his face still he did not want to give up as he said shivering with pain

AVENDRA:rajkumarisa you go I will fight him

This scene was witnessed by uday as he loosen his grip on the sword and put it back he looked at manyata whose eyes had peace now he touched her cheek softly and said

UDAY:I will come back to make you fine not for a nightly pleasure but forever

For the first time he spoke of his heart as she saw him riding through the stones and rushing water of the river and there he was into the other part of the jungle , dawn had torn as birds crippled as he smiled to himself watching her on the side of ravine after a decade he heard his heart beat , he was aware he could finish the warrior with one stroke of his sword but her eyes were like a drug to him and her voice so pleading that he could not reject her , he was not coward or lier she did win this time but his love made her win even the thought of her being close to anyone made him boil in anger , finally he discovered his feeling he had fallen in love with the her not for her beauty but for her innocence and true to his words he decided to make her his life partner that dawn was not only for a new day but also for a new phrase of life as he rode back to his palace her thought captured his mind he was greeted by sujamal kakasabh on the way to his court that morning as he asked

SUJAMAL:I know I have mentioned about it earlier but I would inform you for the another time the jaigarh royal need an heir so did you decide anything or shall we arrange sayambhar

UDAY:kakasa sayambhar are for those helpless princess I am warrior king I do not ask I snatch and I have decided I will marry the youngest daughter of Devgrah Rajkumari Manyata and that is my final decision

SUJAMAL;but Maharajasa she has sister and will the king agree to marry the youngest before as this does not suit hindu samag

UDAY:are you doubting my capability kakasabh

SUJAMAL:no I was just..

UDAY:remember once you had said even a glance is enough for knowing the one you will spend your life with

SUJAMAL:yes that was magic of love

UDAY:then celebrate as your nephew is in love and make preparations for marriage

The old man face was lighted up with joy , he wanted to hug him and bless him , his position stopped him from doing so as he smiled suppressing his joy and concluded

SUJAMAL:I will make the arrangements for it as soon as possible

as a naughtly smiled played on his face and headed towards the court to announce the news of his marriage



done with this chappy
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Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
hiii baby sister


hw r u?


awsssmmm updateee


yippeee avendra save manyata



yippeee uday in love with manyata


uday is going to marry manyata



no thanks 4 pm




love u baby






Edited by huma12. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lol awesome dear..actually i was confused with words u used in beginning..I felt that iam reading a classic haha..and u know at a point i thought this is not the story i was reading b4...😆😆😆

But then the fi8 made me realise that ya its the same...

Manyata won the devil Uday hunh...😆😆😆...Poor she didn't even realised that her fate is already made up by Uday himself..

Poor Avendra he is a stone out in Uday's path and i hope he doesn't hurt himself in the process of guarding Manyata and now Uday will pressurise oh god but then i don't think Maharaj of Devgarh will allow Manyata-avendra relationship too..So in any cause she will be Uday's officially..

continue soon n thnks for pm

Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: snowdream

lol awesome dear..actually i was confused with words u used in beginning..I felt that iam reading a classic haha..and u know at a point i thought this is not the story i was reading b4...😆😆😆
hahaha i was watching a movie yesterday , and it popped me up with several idea and so with that help i added to make it a bit clasic type of story i am glad you found so but hope i did not strench it and make it boring


But then the fi8 made me realise that ya its the same...
told you your twino loves violence and this ss is filled with it since the very first chappy

Manyata won the devil Uday hunh...😆😆😆...Poor she didn't even realised that her fate is already made up by Uday himself..
yes she has no idea about her destiny but no matter what fate she has her destination is the jaigarh palace [ good lines i will use in my further updates lol]

Poor Avendra he is a stone out in Uday's path and i hope he doesn't hurt himself in the process of guarding Manyata and now Uday will pressurise oh god but then i don't think Maharaj of Devgarh will allow Manyata-avendra relationship too..So in any cause she will be Uday's officially..
depends on the nature weather it will loose him or not ,na he will never let a commoner be included in the royal family so it is always a win win case for maharaa uday veer pratabh singh [uff so long name need to keep a short form]

continue soon n thnks for pm
ahh no thanks for pm it was my duty

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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: huma12.

hiii baby sister

hey hunney bunney

hw r u?
i am fine what about you seems like your net if fine as i am getting my colourful comments but please do hit the like button


awsssmmm updateee
i am glad that you enjoyed it to this extend


yippeee avendra save manyata

yes he had to after all he is a knight


yippeee uday in love with manyata

they are destined to be together

uday is going to marry manyata

yes they are going to get married


no thanks 4 pm




love u baby







love you too and thanks for this comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thaaank god uday didnt hurt manyata,and manyata's plead softened uday also,dat was veyryy lovelyy too see,and uday's dialog wen he spoked frm his hr8,was very touching!!! loved it!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
LOVED IT ANN.

UDAY IS CHANGING.

HE HAS FALLEN IN LUV.

FELT BAD FOR AVENDRA.

MANVEER TO TIE D KNOT.

LUKING FORWARD FOR NEXT CHAPY.

CONTINUE SOON.

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